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Bruce Wayne Pilot (WB property)
This script is based on the outline that was released a couple of years ago at Kryptonsite about the show Bruce Wayne. I just decided to sit down and write out the script, using the outline as the guide, to see how it would turn out or how close it possibly could turn out to the script that most of us will never see.
I'd like to hear what Kryptonsite thinks. Since he actually got the pleasure of reading the ACTUAL Pilot Script. TEASER FADE IN: We open to a pitch black screen. MAN (V.O.) How did it all come… to this? The music starts building up into the hero theme as we PAN ACROSS to see a small side cavern at night, full of mementos from the past. This is the Batcave. INT. BATCAVE And the voice belongs to ALFRED PENNYWORTH, sitting alone in the cave. ALFRED I knew him since he was a boy. (beat) I saw him grow into the man he is today. He holds a photo, a family picture. Faces full of promise. ALFRED What happened? Alfred closes his eyes and breathes out. We zoom in towards the picture as we… FADE TO: EXT. LONDON- POLICE STATION- NIGHT ESTABLISHING SHOT from above, looking down towards the streets below. INT. POLICE STATION Alfred is guided through a police station by a Police SUPERINTENDANT. His eyes catch a newspaper headline as they walk past- GOTHAM BILLIONAIRE BEHIND BARS. Alfred breathes out and shakes his head no. Not again. SUPERINTENDANT How often does this sort of thing happen? Alfred rolls his eyes, ashamed but caring. ALFRED Master Bruce has ‘issues’ The Superintendent snickers. Alfred notices. INT. POLICE STATION- PRISON BRUCE WAYNE, 17 years old and weeks away from his 18th birthday, leans his back against the dusty brick walls of the prison. We see that he’s been in a fight recently. A police GUARD reluctantly approaches his cell. Bruce looks up. The prisoners are more than angry- rich people, always get out the easy way. GUARD You’re free to go. Bruce cracks a grin and stands up. BRUCE You hear that? My ride’s here. Bruce casually walks out of the jail cell. BRUCE See you guys later. The guard guides Bruce to the exit. FADE TO: INT. POLICE STATION- MAIN FOYER Bruce and Alfred walk through the foyer. Eyes follow them. Bruce ignores it. Alfred is wary. ALFRED The trustees called. Bruce shrugs. Alfred notices, but continues. ALFRED You’re presence in Gotham is required as soon as possible. Bruce nods, reluctant. BRUCE I’d rather stay here. Alfred frowns as he hands Bruce his coat. ALFRED We have no choice. Now it is Bruce’s turn to frown. He grabs the coat and puts it on. Bruce looks towards Alfred and nods. ACT I EXT. GOTHAM CITY- DOWNTOWN- NIGHT- FLASHBACK CLOSE UP on the barrel of a gun pointed at the screen. SWERVE BACK to see the gun is aimed at THOMAS WAYNE, mid 40s, gentleman. MARTHA WAYNE and their son YOUNG BRUCE stand to his side, trembling. The MAN c.ocked the gun. MAN Money. Now. Thomas nods as he reaches into his pocket and pulls out his wallet and calmly hands it over. The Man takes the wallet and notices a pearl necklace around Martha’s neck. The man turns the gun towards her. MAN Come on lady… hand it over. Martha holds the necklace, frightened. Thomas jumps in the way of the gun. THOMAS Now hold on a… BAM! We hear the sound of a deafening BANG! As the man fires the gun… POV. BRUCE Young Bruce looks at the gun and then towards his father. Everything seemed to be moving so fast. Martha screams. BANG! CLOSE UP on Bruce. Terrified. Tears run down his face. He kneels down beside his father. Thomas blinks his eyes and looks over towards his son. THOMAS Be strong Br… Thomas closes his eyes. Bruce is overwhelmed with tears. He looks up to see the man running off into the alleyway, covered by a thick fog. ZOOM BACK. Neon signs, they were at a movie theater. His parents were there because of him. “The mark of Zorro.” His fault. INT. WAYNE PRIVATE JET- AFTERNOON CLOSE UP on Bruce’s eyes. Closed. As we pan back his eyes SNAP open. Sweat pours down his face. My fault. Alfred watches him, concerned. Another nightmare. Bruce looks away and breathes out, he was finally safe. Safe from the past. Alfred turns his attention back towards a book. Bruce glances over towards him and spots the title- Troubled Teens. Bruce rolls his eyes as Alfred tsk-tsks as he highlights passages. Bruce turns on the TV. Every channel had the same news. Bruce was coming back… DR. PHIL Now if you ask me, Mr. Wayne needs to definitely sharpen up his act and pull himself together before… Bruce changes the channel. CNN REPORTER Bruce Wayne is on his way to Gotham as we speak. Bruce flips through the channels, unable to avoid a news story about either his return or his bail from the London authorities. Ranging from Wall Street to MTV, Bruce was everywhere. He turns the channel to the hit gossip show Gotcha! hosted by none other than the young and very beautiful, VICKY VALE. Bruce smiles, he was far more interested in her than on what she had to say. VICKY VALE And in recent news, Bruce Wayne, voted the number one hottie by Cosmo magazine, will be returning to Gotham for the first time in 12 years!!!… Bruce grins. Alfred clears his throat and puts the book down. ALFRED Master Bruce, I should warn you that the U.S. media is a lot more offensive than their counterparts in Europe. Bruce shrugs. Alfred looks out the window. Gotham City. Bruce looks, disgusted. The city was ravaged, torn apart, decaying. BRUCE Who in their right mind would want to live there? ALFRED Five generations of Waynes, sir. Not counting you, of course. Bruce shakes his head, still angry. This was definitely the last place he wanted to go. Bruce looks at Alfred. BRUCE I just want to sign the papers, giving the Waynecorp trustees the right to continue running my father’s company and leave. (looks out the window) I was meant to do something with my life… not run some stupid company. EXT. AIRPORT LANDING STRIP The private jet descends and begins to skid along the runway as it comes to a stop. INT. WAYNE PRIVATE JET Bruce looks towards Alfred. Begging not to get off. EXT. AIRPORT LANDING STRIP Almost as fast as the plane landed, swarms of reporters surrounded the jet. A limo pulls up beside the plane. INT. WAYNE PRIVATE JET Alfred glances out the window seeing the limo arrive. ALFRED It is time to leave, Master Bruce. Bruce nods and reluctantly follows Alfred off of the private jet. EXT. AIRPORT LANDING STRIP Where they are greeted by badgering reporters. Cameras FLASH. REPORTERS (ADD-LIB) So, what does it feel like in prison Bruce?… Why are you back in Gotham?… Bruce, quick question, Bruce- Bruce! Alfred shields Bruce as they jump into the limo. The limo drives off. ANGLE DOWN as the limo drives off… FADE TO: EXT. WAYNE MANOR- NIGHT ANGLE DOWN as the limo drives through a thicket of trees and approaches the rich and magnificent Wayne Manor. The gates to the manor open and they drive through. INT. LIMO Bruce stares out the window. The past rushing into his memory… the well… the bats… the gun shot… Bruce closes his eyes. Alfred notices. Bruce breathes out. The limo stops. Bruce gets out and enters the Manor, Alfred following close behind. INT. WAYNE MANOR- MAIN HALL Bruce looks around. He struggles to hide the past. But, he can’t. He continues to hear his mother and father’s voice beckoning to him beyond the graves. Alfred enters and closes the door behind him. ALFRED I’m very sorry about the mess. There was just not enough time to find anyone to clean… Bruce ignores him as he approaches a family portrait further down the hall. He stops in front of it. Tears well up inside his eyes and he looks down. THOMAS (O.S.) Be strong Br… A tear runs down Bruce’s eyes. Why did Alfred make him come back to this place? Alfred approaches him. Bruce is startled, he faces Alfred, quickly hiding his emotions. BRUCE Make some… can you please just make some noise the next time you approach? ALFRED Habits of a lifetime, not easily broken. Bruce nods as Alfred walks away. Bruce stands alone. FADE TO: INT. WAYNE MANOR- KITCHEN Alfred is in the kitchen in fancy whites, preparing a soufflé. Bruce leans in. BRUCE I’m heading out. (beat) Alone. Alfred looks alarmed. INT. WAYNE MANOR- MAIN HALLS Bruce grabs his black bomber jacket from the closet and puts it on. He hurries out into the night. EXT. WAYNE MANOR Bruce looks around. Rain pours down from the sky above, soaking through his hair. The Rolls Royce is already pulled up and waiting. Alfred stands beside the open passenger door, in a chauffeur's uniform. Bruce breathes out, that beat his going alone plan. BRUCE That was quick. ALFRED That’s because I was a tenor in a Footlights Club in Cambridge. I played many parts, you know. Bruce looks at Alfred, curious BRUCE I thought you were a medic, in the British Commandos. Alfred’s lips part into a sly grin. ALFRED Indeed I was. Bruce enters the Rolls Royce. Alfred shuts the door and enters the driver’s side. INT. ROLLS ROYCE ALFRED Where to tonight, Master Bruce? Bruce glances towards Alfred with a look of loss in his eyes. BRUCE Criminal Alley. Alfred nods. FADE TO: EXT. GOTHAM CITY- CRIMINAL ALLEY- NIGHT Criminal Alley is the worst part of Gotham. Everything was falling apart. The homeless were everywhere. Crime ran rampant. On the sides of streets prostitutes, male, female, and everything in between wandered the streets picking up buyers. Bruce glances out the window at an old abandoned movie theater. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Bruce looks at Alfred BRUCE Stop. Alfred stops the Rolls Royce. Bruce gets out. EXT. GOTHAM CITY- CRIMINAL ALLEY- NIGHT And slowly approaches the abandoned movie theater. Bruce walks, almost in a trance, towards the place where it all happened. Rain pours down from the dark gray sky above. Alfred gets out of the Rolls Royce holding up an umbrella and begins to follow Bruce. Bruce drops to his knees. We see several flashbacks from the night his parents died. Tears run down his eyes. Alfred stands beside him. Bruce looks up towards Alfred. BRUCE This is where it happened. This is where my parents died. It’s all my fault, Alfred. I was the one who wanted to go see “The Mark of Zorro.” I… I wouldn’t take no for an answer. I had to see Zorro. (beat) A silly movie about a ‘hero’ who wears a costume and fights crime. Alfred looks down towards Bruce, pitying him. Bruce notices a gang of thugs approaching them. ALFRED We should go. Bruce shakes his head no. Determined. He stands up. BRUCE No. I can handle this. The leader of the pack, LEADER, approaches him. LEADER Who do you think you are? Think ya own this street or what? Bruce stares the leader in the eyes. Everything is quiet and then they launch into a very violent fight, both gaining the upper hand. ALFRED Actually, Master Bruce, taking into account all the subsidiary of WayneCorp signs on the buildings in development. You do own the street. Bruce whacks the leader with his left elbow back and knocks him to the ground. GANGSTA approaches Bruce, awkwardly holding out his gun. GANGSTA Wallet now! Bruce frowns, pure hatred shows through his eyes. In a quick flashback we see the Man cocking the gun. Using martial arts moves, Bruce knocks the gun out of the gangsta’s hands with ease. Bruce picks it up and aims it at the gansta. Holding the gun firmly. BRUCE Now this is how you hold a gun! Not like… (mocks the gangsta’s gun stance) this. Like this! Bruce holds the gun firmly. The gangsta trembles… afraid. Alfred also didn’t know how to react. We can see that Bruce likes this. Tormenting criminals. Putting the fear into them. GANGSTA Give me back my gun. Bruce shrugs BRUCE Sure. Bruce quickly dismantles the gun into several parts and hands it back. BRUCE Here you go. Good as new. The gangsta attempts to run off. Bruce tackles him to the ground. Alfred looks down towards Bruce, dignified. ALFRED May I point out that engaging ignorant hoodlums in violence is no substitute… Bruce starts to take on the other thugs. Quick, fast, he definitely had training… using all types of fighting styles to his advantage. ALFRED (CONT’D) For qualified, professional therapy. Bruce shrugs as he quickly knocks two thugs out in one swift blur of movement. BRUCE Therapy takes years. ALFRED I appreciate your need to never feel weak and helpless again, but you’re rich! Hire a bodyguard! Bruce looks over the thugs, sprawled against the ground unconscious. Another thug rushes towards him. BRUCE I like fighting. Bruce quickly, without trouble, knocks the thug out cold. BRUCE I’m good at it. ALFRED Then perhaps you should open up a karate school. The leader begins to stand back up. Bruce knocks him back against the pavement. That’s all of them. Bruce readjusts his clothes. ALFRED Where to now? BRUCE The police station. FADE TO: EXT. GOTHAM STREETS We track the Rolls Royce approaching the police station. Alfred and Bruce are in the front. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Bruce looks out the window. ALFRED Might I suggest, Master Bruce, that next time you decide to take on the role of citizen vigilante you cover up your martial arts abilities. Otherwise, we might not be so lucky. There could be more of them, or they could shoot first. Not to mention the potential lawsuits. Bruce shrugs. All that mattered was that people, like his family, would be safe tonight and that the bad guys would be behind bars. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- MAIN DESK Bruce and Alfred watch as the last thug is taken through a door and out of sight. The DESK SEARGENT clears his throat. Bruce looks back towards him. DESK SERGENT Can I have the gun? Bruce nods and places the parts of the gun on the desk. The desk sergeant looks annoyed, but impressed. BRUCE Isn’t there someone we can file a report to? DESK SERGENT Yeah. Talk to one of the detectives. Bruce looks around. There’s no one here besides the three of them and a 13 year old girl with spunky young red-hair sitting off to the side. BRUCE Yeah, but no one’s here. Now what are we supposed to do? The desk sergeant shrugs. Not his problem. The spunky red head continues to read Cosmo, this is BARBARA GORDON. BARBARA My dad’s still working. The desk sergeant frowns, annoyed. BARBARA My dad’s a detective. He’s gonna be commissioner someday. Barbara looks up from her magazine. Her eyes bulge. She is REALLY excited. BARBARA Oh my god, you’re him! The desk sergeant looks confused. Bruce nods and grins. BARBARA You’re Bruce Wayne! Bruce nods. The desk sergeant immediately sits back up straight. DESK SERGEANT Mr. Wayne, I’m sorry I didn’t know. If you want I can call Lieutenant Flass to come and take your statement personally. Bruce shakes his head no BRUCE No, that’s quite alright. I’m sure you’ve done enough for today. Barbara smiles, Bruce looks towards her. BRUCE If you could just show me the way, miss. Barbara stands and nods, smitten with Bruce. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- STAIRWAY The three (Bruce, Alfred, and Barbara) ascend the staircase, Barbara talking all the way. BARBARA My mother died last year, so now it’s just the two of us. He’s having a very hard time. Some nights he won’t even eat dinner unless I bring it up to him. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- MAIN DESK The Desk Sergeant leans forward, talking secretly on the phone. Quietly. DESK SERGEANT Bruce Wayne is here talking to “you-know-who.” Silence. The desk sergeant nods. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- SECOND FLOOR Barbara motions towards her father, JIM GORDON, sitting behind a desk staring down towards a pad of notes. BARBARA That’s him. EXT. GOTHAM CITY- MOVIE THEATER- FLASHBACK Young Bruce kneels beside his father’s body. Crying. A man approaches him and bends down to his level. We see the name tag. J.W. Gordon. GORDON (O.S.) Everything will be ok. Bruce reluctantly nods. How can anything ever be ok? Especially now. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- SECOND FLOOR Bruce recognized the man behind the desk immediately. BARBARA Dad. Gordon looks up, he didn’t remember Bruce. It’s been a long time. BARBARA Bruce Wayne is here to see you. Gordon stands up. Acknowledging. GORDON Bruce. Gordon immediately stands up and moves towards a chalkboard that had a diagram with a lot of lines and arrows leading to WayneCorp. Bruce notices. Gordon smiles, acting as though nothing is going on. GORDON What can I do for you? BRUCE You were there. When my parents were murdered. Gordon nods BRUCE So. Who killed them? TO BE CONTINUED TOMORROW... |
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ACT II
LATER. The chalkboard has been turned the other way. Gordon searches through files and finally finds the one he was looking for. GORDON Here we go. This is everything I had on your family and that night. Gordon hands Bruce the file. Alfred watches from afar. Barbara sits on the window sill looking out towards the city lights below. Bruce browses through the file. By Bruce’s expression, we can see that he felt a deep loss and regret. GORDON We looked for a long time Bruce. But, we never were able to find the man that killed your parents. Bruce looks up and nods. GORDON Are you going to be testifying against those thugs you brought in? Bruce shakes his head no BRUCE I’m leaving town. GORDON But, you just got here. Bruce nods and shrugs. BRUCE Only for family business GORDON You know, there’s been rumors spreading that WayneCorp isn’t what it used to be. That it’s moving in the opposite direction than your father originally planned when he first started the company. BRUCE It’s just rumors. GORDON You’ve been gone for how long? BRUCE 12 years. Gordon shrugs GORDON Well, an awful lot can change in 12 years. BRUCE I’m going to sign over the papers to let the trustees run things. I don’t want anything to do with this city. Gordon looks skeptical. Bruce knew there was something he wasn’t saying. That much was obvious. GORDON Are you sure you can still trust them? Bruce nods BRUCE I see no reason not to. (beat) Listen, I really have to get going. Barbara jumps up. BARBARA No… you can’t leave. Why… why don’t you have dinner with us? Bruce grins BRUCE I’d like to. But, I have important business that needs to get done. Bruce walks towards the exit. Gordon calls after him. GORDON You wouldn’t happen to be meeting Charles Palantine by any chance, would you? Bruce nods. Gordon breathes out and nods. GORDON Hope I see you around sometime Bruce. This city isn’t half as bad as you think. Bruce and Alfred leave. FADE TO: INT. WAYNECORP- PALANTINE’S OFFICE- MORNING CHARLES PALANTINE stares out the double glass windows unto the city itself. He wears a gray suit coat and business-like dark blue tie, hair combed back and small thick round glasses. Bruce enters the room. Palantine grins and turns around to meet him. PALANTINE Agh, Bruce pleasure you could make it. Palantine extends his hand, Bruce takes it. PALANTINE My look at you, how you’ve grown… I remember you when you were wee high. You look just like your father. Bruce nods. BRUCE By any chance would you happen to know why the police is investigating WayneCorp? Palantine laughs, calm as ever. PALANTINE What ever gave you that idea? The police commissioner is a close personal friend of mine. Bruce, please take a seat. Bruce sits down opposite Palantine. PALANTINE Now let’s get down to brass tacks here. We all know that big business is the last thing that you want to do. Am I right? Bruce lets out a quick smirk. Palantine nods. PALANTINE Now, I believe the best way to go about this is to sign the company over to the trustees. It’s the right thing to do Bruce. It is what your father would have wanted. Bruce nods. Palantine was very convincing. Palantine grabs the contract and hands it to Bruce. Bruce looks it over. PALANTINE Just sign right on that line there… Bruce takes out a pen and is about to sign the contract when… Alfred clears his throat. Bruce stops and puts the pen away. BRUCE Actually, if you wouldn’t mind I’d like to take this home with me. Look everything through before I make my decision. Palantine frowns, but keeps his feelings of anger hidden. PALANTINE Of course, this is your family’s company after all Bruce. Bruce looks through the crack in the doorway to see LUCIUS FOX, an old friend. PALANTINE (CONT’D) WayneCorp has lawyers that can help you with whatever you need. BRUCE Would you excuse me… for just a moment? Before Palantine has a chance to answer, Bruce is on the move. INT. WAYNECORP- FIFTH FLOOR HALLS Bruce sneaks up behind Lucius and wraps his arm around his neck. Just like when they were boys. Lucius jumps, but it’s only one person it could have been. LUCIUS Bruce?! Bruce lets go and Lucius turns around. They both embrace and exchange the secret handshake they came up with when they were kids. LUCIUS It’s been a long time. BRUCE I know. Last place I thought I’d see you. Lucius nods LUCIUS Yeah. Bruce notices the name tag. BRUCE You’re an intern? Lucius nods. BRUCE And your father; how’s he? Lucius backs out of the question LUCIUS I’d rather not talk about it. Bruce nods. LUCIUS Well, it was good seeing you again Bruce. BRUCE Yeah. LUCIUS Maybe we can grab some… beers… one night? Huh? Bruce shakes his head no BRUCE I’m not going to be in Gotham for long. Just here to sign over the contracts. Lucius nods LUCIUS Well, I have to get going. Call me next time you’re in Gotham. Bruce nods. If there will be a next time. Lucius walks away. Alfred sneaks up behind him. ALFRED Catching up on old times? Are we? Master Bruce. Bruce nods. Palantine steps out of his office and approaches Bruce. PALANTINE Remember I need those contracts signed by tomorrow morning. Bruce nods. Alfred escorts Bruce towards the closest elevator. INT. WAYNECORP- ELEVATOR Bruce looks towards Alfred, staring ahead at the metallic elevator doors. ALFRED Master Bruce, I’m worried about what might happen if you were to sign those papers. (beat) And I’m worried about what might happen to you if you don’t. Do you know who inherits your estate if you are killed before you turn 18? Your guardians, the board… Palantine. Bruce nods. BRUCE We need to find a trustworthy lawyer. Someone who can help read the papers. ALFRED It’s a good thing Harvey just finished first year law. And that earlier he had invited us to a party over at his place. BRUCE Why wasn’t I made aware of this? ALFRED Because, you were too busy fighting off the devils of your past. Bruce nods. FADE TO: INT. HARVEY'S APARTMENT- MAIN Bruce and Alfred arrive. HARVEY DENT answers the door dressed in a costume. Harvey is a few years older than Bruce, a party guy whose been thrown out of the best prep schools with Bruce. HARVEY Bruce glad you could make. I know how you hate costumes. I knew you wouldn’t come if you knew. Bruce nods and shows Harvey the contracts BRUCE Actually, I need your help with something. Harvey looks at the contracts. HARVEY Business later, right now- it’s party time. An attractive young woman approaches them. Harvey wraps his arm around her and walks off. Bruce looks around. BRUCE We’re the only ones not in costume. Alfred puts on his chauffer hat. ALFRED Speak for yourself sir. Bruce begins to awkwardly walk around. A door opens behind him and out of the darkness emerges two arms with long claws reaching out of the shadows. A stunning woman in a tiger costume walks out. It's an exotic 20-year-old by the name of SELENA KYLE. Bruce and Selena share a mischievous grin. SELENA (flirtatious) Sorry about coming out of the dark, but my claws wouldn’t let me turn on the lights. But, luckily I can see in the dark. BRUCE I’m Bruce Wayne… and you are? SELENA Selena, Selena Kyle… but my friends call me Kat. Bruce nods, more enthused every second. BRUCE Nice to meet you… Kat. Selena notices Harvey in the back waving Bruce to come over. SELENA I think Harvey is trying to get your attention. BRUCE Hm? (notices) Oh. It’s probably Harvey trying to introduce me to his sister again. Harvey approaches them. SELENA If I see Susan, I’ll rescue you. Bruce grins. BRUCE It’s a date. Harvey arrives. HARVEY Come on, Bruce. There’s just someone I’m dieing for you to meet. Bruce breathes out, yep he was right. Harvey leads Bruce to the balcony overlooking the city night. EXT. HARVEY'S APARTMENT- BALCONY Harvey and Bruce look out over the city. HARVEY I’ll look over those papers. Are you going to be in Gotham for long? Bruce shakes his head no. BRUCE Just here for business. HARVEY Oh… I see. By the way, happy 18th. BRUCE Thanks, but that’s not for another two days. HARVEY Two days, today… what’s the big difference these days huh? (pats Bruce on the back) Stay here. I’m going to go find Susan. Harvey leaves. Bruce nods, looking out over the city. Bruce glances behind… Harvey was gone. Bruce turns towards the door… now was the time to escape… locked. Bruce breathes out, that didn’t work out as planned. He turns to look back out over the city. WOMAN (O.S.) From up here, it looks… peaceful. Bruce turns around and to come face to face with an ANGEL… literally. Bruce is speechless. ANGEL Enjoying the view? BRUCE Yeah. ANGEL So how long have you been in Gotham? BRUCE Not long, actually. ANGEL Just moved here? Bruce shakes his head no. BRUCE Just passing through. Angel nods and walks over to the balcony. ANGEL It’s not as bad as you think. Sure, Gotham is old and there is crime on the streets. But, that’s everywhere. And every city, no matter how desperate- still has a chance to become something… BRUCE Peaceful? Angel laughs and shakes her head yes. BRUCE So, how long have you been here? ANGEL All my life, practically. Jeez… to think of what this city used to be. I wouldn’t even think it would come to this. BRUCE How the city used to be? Angel nods. ANGEL My brother remembers it more than I do. But, when Thomas Wayne was running WayneCorp. I don’t know. There was just something different in the air. Something pure, something that gave the city hope. Gotham isn’t dead, it’s just in purgatory. BRUCE That’s an interesting way of looking at it. ANGEL You think? So… you said you’re here on business? Bruce nods ANGEL What kind of business? BRUCE Oh, well… Bruce feels a clawed hand rest on top of his shoulder. Bruce turns around. It was Selena. During the conversation she must have snuck up on them. Bruce gives Angel a nervous smirk. SELENA I missed you. (purs) I’m bored. Show me Wayne Manor! Bruce shrugs. Angel frowns. Not impressed. ANGEL Bruce? Bruce turns around to Selena, furious. BRUCE What are you doing? SELENA Rescuing you, idiot! Harvey walks in on them. Unknowing. And a wide grin on his face. HARVEY Susan! So, you finally met Bruce! This is SUSAN! Susan frowns. SUSAN (to Bruce) You know what? You’re even more like my brother than I thought! (beat) All you care about is money, fame and getting laid. Susan walks away. Harvey is confused- what just happened? Bruce gives Harvey an apologetic shrug. SELENA That’s the last time I do you a favor. Selena walks away. Thanks a lot. Bruce turns towards Harvey. BRUCE You didn’t tell me Susan was beautiful! (beat) I’ve got to find her and explain. Bruce moves towards the door. Alfred appears and stops him. ALFRED Sir, there was an urgent message at home from Sgt. Gordon. He wants you to meet him at Wayne Chemical. Now! Bruce thrusts the contracts into Harvey’s hands. Harvey takes the contracts. BRUCE I need you to look these over. It’s of life and death importance. Harvey nods. Bruce and Alfred hurry off. EXT. WAYNE CHEMICAL- NIGHT The Rolls Royce is parked next to a chemical plant. Alone. Isolated. Eerie. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Bruce looks over towards Alfred. BRUCE I’m going alone. ALFRED Sir, I don’t think that is a very… BRUCE I’m going. Stay here. Alfred hesitantly remains as Bruce gets out of the car. EXT. WAYNE CHEMICAL Bruce looks around. He breathes out, shivering… cold. CRREAK! Bruce hears the sound of an access hatch opening from inside. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Alfred watches as Bruce runs into the building. ALFRED I have a bad feeling about this. INT. WAYNE CHEMICAL Bruce rushes in and looks around. Gordon was nowhere in sight. CLANK! Bruce follows the noise towards an open hatch. He looks down. Gordon has reached the alcove looking down into the wastes below. Bruce descends down the ladder. INT. WAYNE CHEMICAL- HATCH Gordon jumps, startled. And turns around to face Bruce. GORDON You see the green pool of chemical hazardous waste? Bruce nods. GORDON The dumping was made illegal years ago. So, my question is… what’s going on? BRUCE This is why you called me to come here? Bruce looks down into the pool as a body floats to the surface. Gordon looks at Bruce, concerned. GORDON I didn’t call you. CRREAK! Bruce and Gordon both look up just in time to see the hatch slamming shut and locking. Next they hear the sound of the large valves CREAKING open. WHSSH! The roar of water rushing towards them. GORDON We’re trapped! Bruce looks around. No where to go. Last edited by Luthor5339; 05-21-2006 at 08:10 PM. |
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Thanks, I'm trying to keep it as true to the information we know as possible. With some dramatic licenses taken here and there...
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ACT III
Gordon and Bruce run down the tunnel away from the ROARING WATER. Bruce glances back to see the water of green toxic chemicals rushing towards them, think Indiana Joes and the Temple of Doom. Only this time, it’s not a boulder. BRUCE Don’t look back! Bruce and Gordon come against a wall. BRUCE It’s a dead end. The water comes CLOSER and CLOSER. Gordon turns on his flashlight and looks around. He finds another tunnel. Above. GORDON There. Bruce nods. He looks back. Not much time. Using quick acrobatics, Bruce ascends to the tunnel above. The water is coming towards Gordon, faster than ever. Bruce kneels and reaches his hand down for Gordon. BRUCE Grab my hand! Gordon GRABS his hand and Bruce pulls him up. The water SPLASHES up against the wall. Bruce grins. BRUCE That should by us some time. Gordon breathes out and nods. GORDON Yeah. Bruce and Gordon run off. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Alfred checks his watch. It’s been a long time. He checks the entrance one more time. Bruce and Gordon run out and approach the Rolls Royce. They enter the car. Alfred looks at Bruce, soaking wet. ALFRED You’re wet. Bruce nods and wipes his hand through his hair. BRUCE It’s a long story Alfred. Gordon gets in. BRUCE Drive. EXT. WAYNE CHEMICAL The Rolls Royce SPEEDS off. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Gordon leans forward. GORDON You said that you got a call saying that I wanted to meet you at Wayne Chemical? Bruce nods BRUCE Yeah, why? GORDON Because. I got a call saying that you wanted to meet me. Bruce caught on. BRUCE Someone obviously wanted us dead. The image hit Bruce. The man. Dead. Floating in the toxic wastes. LUCIUS (O.S.) I’d rather not talk about it. ALFRED Where to, Master Bruce? BRUCE Someplace where we can find some answers and a good breakfast. Alfred nods EXT. GOTHAM CITY- MORNING ANGLE DOWN towards the Rolls Royce driving through Gotham. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Gordon looks out his window. The Rolls Royce passes a limo. INT. LIMO Palantine spots Gordon, causing him to frown. PALANTINE It can’t be… EXT. GOTHAM CITY- MORNING The Rolls Royce pulls up beside an apartment complex. Gordon steps out and looks towards Bruce. GORDON Where are we? BRUCE Home of Lucius Fox, one of my childhood friends, his father used to work at Wayne Chemicals… FADE TO: INT. FOX APARTMENT CLOSE UP on a stack of pancakes and waffles. The plate is placed on the kitchen table. Sitting around the table is Alfred, Bruce, Gordon, and Lucius. BILLIE, Lucius’ mother, is an ample charming woman and obviously a good chef, by Alfred’s expression as he took the first bite. They were already in the middle of a conversation. Lucius nod. LUCIUS He was real nervous, his last few days. I think he saw something. ALFRED I must say, this is some of the best food I’ve had in a while. BILLIE Glad you like it. ALFRED Like it? I love it. GORDON Is there anything else you can think of? Something that perhaps your father found out about? Something high up in the level of command. Lucius shakes his head no. LUCIUS I’ll dig around. See what I can find out inside the WayneCorp chemical files. BRUCE Whatever it is, it’s something someone’s willing to kill over. FADE TO: INT. HARVEY’S APARTMENT- MAIN Harvey sits on the sofa holding the contracts. HARVEY Do not dare sign these papers. Bruce looks at Harvey, taken off guard. HARVEY (CONT’D) They get everything, you get nothing but a monthly check… you have no rights or protections, completely at their mercy. Don’t sign this. A phone rings. Harvey answers it. It’s MRS. DENT. MRS. DENT (O.C.) Harvey, you need to talk to your father he’s being unreasonable. HARVEY (to Bruce) I’m sorry about this. Another phone rings. HARVEY That’ll by Dad. Harvey picks up the other phone sir enough… MR. DENT (O.C.) She’s on the phone right now isn’t she son? Your mother never learns to… Harvey breathes out and rolls his eyes. Bruce laughs. HARVEY So, what is this about? … Oh, yes, yes indeed. You’re right mom, dad should have cleaned up the garage after he got home. (beat) Dad, you’re right. You’re back was hurting you. That is perfectly understandable. Mom’s just over reacting. (beat) Alright mom, maybe you weren’t over reacting. But, dad thinks that you are. (beat) You’re right dad. Mom should have given you more time to… (to Bruce) Now if you sign this, they might try to kill you. That’s why as your legal advisor. I suggest you wait until you turn eighteen. (beat) Mom, calm down. Yes, dad is on the phone with me. Yes, mom he’s upset that you called. (beat) I now Dad, you have every right to be upset. This is your and mom’s problem. Not mine. (to Bruce) Now after you turn eighteen, they won’t dare to kill you. BRUCE Why? HARVEY Once you fully inherit WayneCorp, if you die without a will, your estate goes into probate for years. So, my legal consol is: stay alive until tomorrow. (beat) I’m sorry. Just give me a moment Bruce. Bruce nods. Harvey continues the two-faced debate over the phone. ALFRED You know, Master Bruce, this reminds me of the story of Henry VII who was crowned king at 18. His advisors tried to force him aside, saying that he was far too young. BRUCE What did he do? ALFRED He had every one of them beheaded. BRUCE Good story Alfred: NOT useful here. Harvey hangs up the phones. HARVEY I’m sorry about that. BRUCE No problem. Harvey laughs HARVEY It’s like playing mediator between my two halves… Harvey restacks the contracts and hands them over to Bruce. HARVEY But, actually you should sign the papers. BRUCE Hmm? HARVEY You said it yourself Bruce, you want nothing to do with this city. WayneCorp is capable of only bad things. They own everything, including the cops. Take the money and run! You’ll still be plenty rich… and alive. Bruce is offended. BRUCE I am going to do something. Harvey mockingly laughs, as though Bruce said that countless times before. HARVEY What? Stay in Gotham? Go up against Palpatine and the board? Bruce frowns, trying to change the subject. BRUCE How’s Susan? HARVEY She’s doing good, but after the other night… BRUCE Does she, uh, work somewhere? Harvey grins and nods. HARVEY She’s over at the Gotham Youth Center. Bruce stands up and puts back on his black jacket. BRUCE Harvey, thanks. For everything. HARVEY Any time. Bruce grabs the papers and leaves. EXT. GOTHAM STREETS The Rolls Royce drives through Gotham. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Alfred looks towards Bruce ALFRED So, I’ll take it that we’re going to the Youth Center? Bruce nods. EXT. GOTHAM STREETS Two dark sedans pull out and begin to follow them. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Bruce checks the rear view mirror. BRUCE Alfred. We’re being followed. Alfred looks to see gunners leaning out of the Sedans. ALFRED This is a Rolls Royce! They wouldn’t dare. Bruce glances behind his back. EXT. GOTHAM STREETS Close up as a gun fires off a bullet. TRACK the bullet as it SMASHES into the side window. CRACK! 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EXT. GOTHAM STREETS The Sedan RAMS into the back of the Royce. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Bruce looks towards Alfred. BRUCE Try to lose them. ALFRED What do you think I’m trying to do sir? BRUCE You still keep that gun on you? ALFRED Bottom left hand. Why? Bruce takes out the gun. ALFRED Oh, don’t say you’re going to do what I think you’re going to do. BRUCE Not quite. BANG! A bullet shoots through the glass of the Royce. Jolting the car. BRUCE Alfred, did you ever think of getting bullet proof glass? ALFRED Master Bruce, may I remind you that this doesn’t happen very often. Bruce wasn’t listening, he was already leaning out the window. EXT. GOTHAM STREETS Bruce aims the gun towards the first Sedan. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Alfred continues to speed the Royce through traffic. Red light. ALFRED No time to stop now. HONK! EXT. GOTHAM STREETS Bruce aims and… A truck moves out, Alfred has to swerve the Royce to narrowly miss it. BANG! The bullet soars against a store front window. People run franticly. Bruce aims again. BRUCE Keep her steady Alfred!!! BANG! Bruce fires. The bullet hits its intended mark. The right tire of the right Sedan. The right Sedan’s tire deflates and RAMS into the other Sedan. Bruce leans back into the Royce. INT. ROLLS ROYCE Bruce notices Alfred’s calmness. BRUCE Well, that wasn’t bad. Just have to know where to aim. Bruce looks back. Well, that was that. ALFRED Lucky for us that you’ve got a good shot. EXT. GOTHAM YOUTH CENTER The Rolls Royce arrives at the Youth Center, a little worse than wear, but just enough to keep moving and fix it up later. Bruce steps out and enters. INT. GOTHAM YOUTH CENTER- MAIN Bruce walks through looking for Susan. A young BOY, around 10 years old, stops him. BOY You are you? BRUCE Bruce Wayne BOY I never saw you before. BRUCE I’m new. BOY Why are you here? Bruce looks around and spots Barbara he approaches her. BRUCE Barbara. Barbara turns back towards him. BARBARA The name is Barb. And I don’t know you! (whisper) I’m working undercover. Don’t tell my Dad! He doesn’t know my ‘secret identity’! Bruce cracks a grin and nods. Susan approaches him. SUSAN Bruce? Bruce spins around and smiles. BRUCE Susan. (beat) About the other night… I’m sorry. SUSAN You should be. BRUCE That, that wasn’t me… I don’t even know her. SUSAN By her, you mean the gal in the Tiger costume? Bruce shrugs and nods BRUCE You’ve got to believe me. Susan breathes out and nods ok. SUSAN Ok, what do you want? BRUCE To take you out sometime. SUSAN I thought you were leaving town? BRUCE I thought I was too. Something came up. Susan nods SUSAN I know. Harvey told me. He’s worried about you. BRUCE I’m surprised. It’s not like Harvey to be worried about anyone, but himself. (beat) So, you work here often? Susan nods, she looks around. SUSAN I find it my way giving back to the community. Every hour I spend in here, is another criminal off the streets. Bruce looks at Susan, curiously. SUSAN One of the root causes of criminal behavior is having a difficult and traumatic childhood. Some able to get past it, but others are tormented for their entire life. Leading them into a separate life, often it’s a life of crime. Bruce nods. Pan back to see Barbara crushing on Bruce, another GIRL approaches her. GIRL He’s too old. Way too old! Barbara watches as Bruce waves goodbye to Susan and walks away. Susan wipes her hair out of her eyes and smiles. INT. WAYNE MANOR- MAIN ENTRANCE Bruce arrives. BRUCE Alfred? No answer. Bruce shrugs, must be out. Bruce approaches a phone with a blinking red light. Three messages. Bruce presses the play button. PALANTINE (O.C.) Bruce this is Palantine, I need those papers signed… Bruce this is… Bruce presses delete. PALANTINE (O.C.) Bruce. Delete. Bruce picks up the phone and dials Palantine’s number. He got the message machine. BRUCE Sorry, I was out… you know- the whole billionaire playboy thing. Alfred enters. BRUCE (CONT’D) I must have forgotten to send you the papers. Bruce hangs up. ALFRED So, I’ll take it you made your decision? Bruce nods. They sit down. ALFRED I remember the day that your father first came to me, asking for my help. Your father knew something was going on at WayneCorp. He wanted to make sure you were safe, in case anything was to ever happen to him. BRUCE Safe? Alfred nods ALFRED The night your father was murdered was not an accident nor is it your fault. BRUCE What do you mean? ALFRED What I’m trying to say is… RING… RING… RING… Bruce glances over towards the phone. He answers it. BRUCE Hello? GORDON (O.C.) Bruce, I heard about the shooting. Are you ok? Bruce nods BRUCE I’ll be fine. GORDON (O.C.) Lucius called to tip me off about a weekly shipment of hazardous wastes that is going out tonight. BRUCE I’ll meet you there. GORDON (O.C.) No. It’s too dangerous. Gordon hangs up. Bruce glances to Alfred. Alfred notices Bruce’s wicked grin. ALFRED You’re not thinking… Bruce nods. FADE TO: INT. WAYNE MANOR- GARAGE Bruce is dressed in all black; he holds a mask in his hand. Alfred stands by. ALFRED If you reveal yourself, you can never take that back. Trust no one. BRUCE Why? Gordon’s… ALFRED Your father trusted people… and now he is dead! Bruce grips the mask in his hand BRUCE What are you saying? You’re saying, someone he trusted… someone at WayneCorp killed my father? ALFRED Why not? They’re trying to kill YOU! (beat) You shouldn’t go. Especially not tonight, if they find you they’ll kill you. Bruce puts on the mask and walks towards a sleek black motorcycle. BRUCE No. Gordon needs my help. Bruce gets on the motorcycle and revs the engine. BRUCE I just won’t let them see me! Bruce peels off, leaving Alfred behind. EXT. WAYNE CHEMICAL- NIGHT We spot a police car off in the distance. Gordon, and two of his best officers RUPERT MONTOYA and HARVEY BULLOCK, walk alongside a dark alley. Bullock stuffs his mouth with donuts. GORDON You know, with all the donuts you eat… sooner or later you’re going to get fat. Bullock shrugs and they enter through the back door. Bruce drops down from above and follows them in. INT. WAYNE CHEMICAL Bruce tails them, cloaked in the shadows. Gordon and his two officers walk through. Guns out. BANG! A shot is fired towards them. They jump out of the way. GORDON Find them. Do whatever it takes. We can’t let that shipment get out. They disperse. Bruce continues to sneak along the pipes. He notices a thug aiming a gun at Gordon’s back. Bruce looks around and notices a chain with a hook. He grins. Bruce picks up the chain and lassos it around the thug’s foot and drags him towards him. THUMP! Gordon turns around. Nothing there. Bruce ties the thug up. BRUCE Now stay here. Bruce runs off. DING! An elevator door opens. Bruce and Gordon both notice it. Bruce gets there first and quickly disarms and neutralizes the thug. He hears Gordon’s footsteps approaching. He has to do something, Bruce notices valves above. Gordon approaches. The thug lays on the ground, unconscious. He bends down and inspects the floor. The thug slipped on the wet floor? He shrugs and moves off. Bruce watches from the shadows and grins. Bullock is trapped by two guards tracking his every move. He backs up against a corner… dead end. A thick fog covers both of halls as the thugs approach blocking him in. Bullock aims at one of thugs and fires. From the other side we see thug2 walking towards Bullock, gun drawn. All of a sudden he is GRABBED from the shadows and disappears out of sight. Bullock notices… what the? A massive gun fight ensues. Bruce doing everything he can to help out along the way. Never getting caught, Bruce notices a man in a suit trying to escape. He’s the one in charge of the shipment! Bruce approaches him, rattling the walls as he approaches. The man in a suit stops and turns around. No one in sight, TAP… TAP… TAP… the man in a suit follows the noise. Gun drawn. Bruce sneaks up from behind and quickly takes him out. Gun shots fire up in the air. Bruce looks around. Gordon and the officers are approaching… got to get out of here. Gordon and the officers arrive and look around. No one in sight. Bullock looks up. BULLOCK Um, Gordon… maybe you should look up. Gordon looks up. Hanging upside down, tied to the steel bars of the next level up is the man in the suit. RUPERT Should we tell Flass? Gordon shakes his head no GORDON Who would believe us? Gordon looks around. No one else was there. EXT. WAYNE CHEMICAL Bruce jumps onto his motorcycle and drives off. FADE TO: EXT. GOTHAM CITY Bruce is now in casual clothes. He approaches the nearest pay phone and dials. BRUCE I’m on my way home Alfred. ALFRED (O.C.) Am I to assume everything went alright? Bruce nods BRUCE I might have found something I’m really good at. Alfred moans. Bruce hangs up and walks back into an alley. We hear the sound of a motorcycle engine revving up and fading into the distance. FADE TO: INT. WAYNE MANSION- ENTRANCE KNOCK… Alfred answers the door. It’s Gordon. GORDON Alfred. Is Bruce around? Alfred nods ALFRED Yes, come in. Gordon enters. ALFRED Master Bruce, Lt. James Gordon is here. (to Gordon) Make yourself at home. Gordon nods. Bruce walks down the stairs. BRUCE Hey, so how did it go last night? GORDON Turns out that the trucks that were supposed to be used to export chemicals were actually being used to traffic drugs… the head bad guy is now in custody and is willing to cooperate. Dropping hints about the higher-ups at WayneCorp. He’s hoping to make a deal. Bruce nods. BRUCE Thanks for dropping by. Gordon nods and gets up to leave. GORDON Oh, and by the way… where we you last night? Alfred clears his throat ALFRED Master Bruce was here all night. Came down with quite a cold, I’m afraid. Gordon nods, but still suspicious. GORDON Hope you feel better. Gordon leaves. Alfred closes the door behind him. Bruce shrugs. BRUCE I had a cold. EXT. WAYNE MANOR- MORNING Gordon walks back to his car. Wind blows the leaves towards the mansion. Gordon’s cell phone rings, he answers it. GORDON Gordon. FLASS (O.C.) Gordon, I’m sorry to tell you this. But, you’re going to have to cut the prisoners loose due to illegal search and seizure. GORDON Actually, Flass, I’m sure that if you called the EPA. They can tell you that the prisoners are still under my watch. Nothing we did was “illegal.” INT. POLICE DEPARTMENT- FLASS’S OFFICE FLASS frowns. FLASS You know what, you’re right. Flass hangs up. EXT. WAYNE MANOR Gordon puts the cell phone away. Things were definitely looking like they are going to get better. He stops at his car and looks back towards Wayne Manor, gets in and drives away. INT. WAYNE CORP- PALANTINE’S OFFICE Palantine looks out the window. Bruce enters. PALANTINE So, you’re staying in Gotham City now, I take it? Bruce nods BRUCE I think it’s time that I step up and take on my family’s name. PALANTINE Agh, well I thought so… (beat) I have to tell you though, that some rather bad news about WayneCorp has come up… turns out that some rather unpleasant, illegal things were discovered at WayneCorp chemicals last night. Once word gets out, our stocks might take a beating. Palantine walks back over to his desk. PALANTINE Oh, I almost forgot… I bought you a little something. Palantine picks up a book, Business for Beginners, and hands it to Bruce. Bruce flips through it and nods. PALANTINE If you want I can show you the ins and outs of managing big business. Advise you along the way. Bruce closes the book and nods. BRUCE Thanks for the offer, but… I don’t think that will be necessary. Palantine nods, hiding his frown. Bruce walks out, not looking back. In Palantine’s face we can see absolute hatred and anger. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- HALLS Gordon and Bullock walk through the narrow halls of the police department. They stop at a door reading ‘Interrogation Room.’ They enter. INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- INTERROGATION ROOM The lights are off. All we can see is the look of horror and disgust on Gordon’s face. Pan around to see the man in the suit, hung by the neck from the light above. JUMP CUT: INT. GOTHAM POLICE DEPARTMENT- MAIN DESK Gordon runs towards the desk sergeant. GORDON Did anyone come in or out of the interrogation room? The desk sergeant shakes his head no. DESK SERGEANT Why? Gordon walks away. Maybe things weren’t coming to a close as fast as he had originally hoped. INT. WAYNE MANOR- MAIN Bruce enters. The lights are off. VOICES Surprise!!! The lights turn on. Harvey, Susan, Selena, Lucius Fox, Billie Fox, James Gordon, Barbara Gordon and Alfred all stand under a huge banner reading ‘Happy 18th.’ Bruce smiles. FADE TO: INT. WAYNE MANOR- LIVING ROOM LATER Harvey and Bruce stand in front of the fire place. Harvey holds onto the papers. HARVEY So, I see you made your decision? Bruce nods. Harvey grins. HARVEY Smart move. Guess, you won’t be needing these anymore. Harvey throws the paper into the fireplace. CLOSE UP on the contracts burning; the end of something old and the beginning of something new. Harvey picks up a wine glass. BRUCE You, really don’t need… Harvey clinks the wine glass. HARVEY I’d like to make a speech. Everyone turns their attention towards Harvey. HARVEY Congratulations to my best friend. The one person I could always count on, no matter what. Bruce Wayne, the newfound owner of WayneCorp. Applause. Harvey hands the wine glass to Bruce. Bruce takes it. BRUCE Thank you, Harvey. But, you’re exaggerating. (beat) I’m going to be staying in Gotham. I’ve got much to learn. I’m not sure if I can make a difference, but I’m willing to stick around and find out. Bruce looks over towards the family photo on the wall, the photo from the beginning of the story. The past. Bruce nods and tips the wine glass. BRUCE This is for you dad. Bruce drinks the wine. Applause FADE TO: INT. BATCAVE The sound of bats fluttering their wings. Alfred puts the picture down and walks away. ALFRED (O.S.) And so it begins. [FADE TO BLACK] Note: Throughout the script I took a couple of dramatic licenses. Sometimes the description wasn't exactly clear or gaps needed to be filled in. The final fight scene was also unclear, which left the ending up to getting the information out, but in a different way. Parts of the original fight scene also needed some work, because it just wasn't Bruce Wayne- such as the usage of a bannana peel and Alfred someone going throughout the whole fight following Bruce without getting caught and having to fight. Thus, I found a way to keep Alfred back at the mansion. |
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Great job oh and check out my fic Shadow about my masterwork for my own hero and yeah I know it's like SV but bare with me it is different.
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Glad you liked it. Most of the credit, however, goes to the actual writer- forgot his name- but he came up with the actual story, alot of the dialouge and so on.
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Really. Still this wa great hope you'll check out Shadow though
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