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Old 08-10-2007, 10:50 PM   #451
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Old 08-10-2007, 10:53 PM   #452
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*sniff sniff* Absolutely.

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Old 08-10-2007, 11:00 PM   #453
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Tears of healing finally coming into play???? I hope so!!!

I want Clark to get baby Jonathan back and somehow for Lana/Lex to get a taste of their own medicine (i'm vindictive like that) though I don't want their baby to be hurt - so it's sort of a catch 22 situation.
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Old 08-10-2007, 11:06 PM   #454
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Yeah, get baby Johnny back!!

Evil Lana..I hate her more than I hate Lex >.< She was good, she had a chance to stay that way. She chose the dark side, she chose to kill and experiment on people and horrible things like that. How would she like it if her baby was cut out of her? When she woke up it was gone, she was dying, and she knew her son would live a life of horror? Just, how could she, that b!tch. She is by far the most evil person in this fic. Lex may have drawn her into the life of evil, but Lana chose it. She gave up willingly. She chose her evilness. Lex tried for years to fight it, but it was in his veins and was his destiny to be cruel and to be the exact opposite of Superman and all things good. But Lana, she wanted that...And although she isn't the mastermind of all the malicious schemes, the fact that she willingly went brainwashed herself into the evil life makes her worse than Lex in my eye.
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Old 08-10-2007, 11:40 PM   #455
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I'm hopin when clark saw chloe's tear that her meteor power comes into play.Clark is feedin off anger but at sum point he'll get ahold to lexana and has to remind hisself that chloe wouldnt be happy wit him to take lex life.Tho she may want 2 herself she never would and knows clark cant,so hopefully his anger doesnt get the best of him.I luv their emotional scene,clark seem torn cause he cant jus leave chloe but duty calls,like chloe said dont let her death/dyin be in vain.Their son is the most important thing o them now,and lex havin it is a prob.Lex underestimates how fast clark is,I expect clark to get to them pretty quick and when he does...I feel for lexana lol...I'm hopin clark comes back to find out chloe's tears healed herself,funny I hated her power on the show but would luv for that to be her power now lol.Lois and the JL breakin up over chloe dyin,over chlark's moment was jus great...They r a family now and I doubt anyone wants lex to win.Lex not carin about chloe dyin jus gettin lana out was expected,he never cared for chloe and for lana to let him do that was even worse.Instead of lettin lex and a few docs stay behind to finish up she says she needs him wit her wtf...I'm hopin that clark atleast beats the s**t out of lex and even let bart handle lana lol,but dont kill em jus put enough fear into lexana that they'll never try anythin again.Nice update,cant wait for the last 2 parts...
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Old 08-10-2007, 11:45 PM   #456
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OH my dear lord! i can't beleive i missed these last two updates! AHHH! they are soooo great...I almost cried at that last one...darn you my mouth dropped open when lex told the doctor to leave her..i mean come on man! have a least a little humanity on the girl....and stupid lana..she just HAD to go into labor right then ....this is great...i can't wait for the next chapter i absolutley loveee this story
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Old 08-11-2007, 12:21 AM   #457
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Loved the updates....hate what Lexana did to chloe...have my fingers crossed that everything will work out I have faith in you!!!!

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Old 08-11-2007, 01:13 AM   #458
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Tear awwww I cannot wait for more! And I sure hope Clark gives those evil people war. Chloe cant die? right? PPMS!
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Old 08-11-2007, 04:15 AM   #459
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that was awsomeness!!

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Old 08-11-2007, 04:30 AM   #460
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Yay! I'm Glad you Like the Last Part...

Hopefully I caught the Emotion ok...LoL Here is the Last Part to Chapter 17...

The Epiloge of this Story will be up later today...After I sleep! LoL


Thanks again for the Great Feedback!

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Chapter 17 Part C

(Lex POV)

One of my arms was carrying Clark’s newborn son and the other was moving Lana along through the tunnels. We didn’t have much time but we’d make it... I took another step and then all of a sudden the ceiling above us came down…the tunnel caved in right in front of us…out of nowhere.

I turned around and saw someone in the distance. Crap! I knew who that was…and now there was only one way out of here…I needed to get Lana out…now. Right as I was moving her behind me Clark appeared out of thin air…with that Bart Allen next to him. He stood there and something in his face was different.

His eyes bore through mine…and there was no emotion in them…He took a step closer to me and glanced at the bundle in my arms…His voice was like steel when he spoke slowly.

“I want my son Lex…Now.”

I grasped the baby closer to me. If he thought I was going to give up the find of a lifetime because he asked nicely…he was sadly mistaken. I shook my head.

“You’ve been misinformed Clark. This isn’t your son…it’s Chloe’s…now if you don’t mind I need to get my wife to the hospital.”

Lana was panting slightly and I moved slowly with her next to me, but Clark didn’t move. He stood directly in front of me and when I glared up at him he smirked at me. His voice was different…he almost sounded a bit…mad. He chuckled lightly.

“You’re not going anywhere Lex…not if I have anything to say about it.”

I was about to say something when Lana practically fell down next to me. I almost didn’t get my arm around her in time. Doctor Rhinehouse moved next to us and checked her over. His voice was concerned.

“She needs to get to the hospital as soon as possible. Her heart rate is a bit fast. There could be complications.”

She was sitting on the floor breathing in and out with large puffs of air. I glanced from her to Clark and his friend. My face softened and I tried to reason with Clark.

“Please Clark…I need to get Lana to the hospital…she could have complications with the birth…she’s my wife…it’s my job to protect her. This is between us…let’s leave her out of it…”

I saw his face shift and grow red. I glanced down and his hands were balled into fists. He was barely keeping control of his temper…I’ve never seen him like this before…maybe taking his child wasn’t exactly the brightest idea I could have had…but it was done and I couldn’t take it back…even if I could I wouldn’t.

His voice came out with a disbelieving edge to it.

“This is about us…is it?”

I nodded and he shook his head.

“If this was just about us my wife wouldn’t be lying dead four hundred feet away. So tell me Lex…why shouldn’t I let the same fate happen to yours?”

Ah…and it all makes sense now. I could understand why Clark was so mad. Chloe had died…Dr. Rhinehouse said she would…no wonder Clark is so angry…his moral compass is gone and I’m not exactly sure that’s a good thing. I heard Lana make another noise and I faced her. Her voice came out strained.

“Lex…please…I need a hospital…”

I nodded. I glared at Clark with hatred.

“I’m sorry for your loss…but just because your wife has died today doesn’t mean that mine should join her.”

I pulled out my gun and pointed it at Clark.

“Let us pass…or I will shoot you Clark.”

I saw him laugh and shake his head. He took another step closer and I took off the safety. He just kept on smiling. When he spoke there was humor in his voice.

“Go ahead Lex…shoot me. You’ve always wanted to find out what I was made of…well here’s your chance…give it your best shot.”

He was pissing me off…I didn’t have time to mess around with him. Lana was hurt…ok well not technically hurt she was having the baby…but that hurt so it’s kind of the same thing…

“I’m serious Clark.”

His smile left him and his eyes grew cold.

“So am I. You’re not leaving. You have a doctor here he can deliver your anti Christ child.”

I shook my head. I wouldn’t take the chance that what happened in my hallucination would happen here so I shook my head. It was time to make a decision…what was more important to me? This project or Lana and my son…

“What do you want Clark? I’ll give you anything you want if you let Lana walk out of here…”

I glanced at Lana and she was full of sweat. She looked like she was in a lot of pain. Clark was quiet for a few seconds before speaking up. His voice was strong and confident.

“I want Chloe back Lex…can you give me that?”

His voice was sarcastic and he shook his head at me.

“No I don’t suppose you can…can you…”

I sighed and shook my head. His voice came out stern with the next sentence.

“My son Lex…Now…and I’ll let Lana go to the hospital…but not you…you stay here with me…”

I frowned.

“I don’t think—“

He cut me off.

“That’s the first and last time I will offer you that deal. Take it now or leave it and then you’ll be able to see what I’m going to do to both of you…”

I sighed and shook my head.

“Fine. I want you’re word you’ll get Lana to a hospital safe…”

I heard Lana gasp.

“No! I’m not leaving you here Lex…besides we’ve…worked so hard for this…. project.”

Clark’s voice boomed angrily.

“My son is not a project Lana…keep it up and your son is gonna be mine…”

I moved over to him a couple minutes later and held out the baby.

“Here…your son.”

I handed the baby to Clark who immediately handed him to Bart Allen. He spoke quietly in his ear and then Bart was gone…When Clark faced me again I saw anger in his eyes.

I saw his eyes stray to Lana. He walked over to her and I went to block his way but he flicked his wrist and I went flying into the wall. Maybe this…all this was a mistake…

(Clark POV)

When Lex went flying I smirked. I made my way over to Lana and she looked up at me. I could see the extreme pain on her face. I bent down so I was eye level with her. My voice was cold when I spoke.

“Are you in a lot of pain?”

She hesitated for a minute before speaking.

“Yes…I need to get to a hospital Clark…please help me…”

My facial expression softened and she smiled slightly. I smiled back. My voice came out low.

“Did you watch?”

She got a confused look on her face. She flinched and then spoke.

“What do you mean?”

I was getting impatient with her.

“Did you watch…what they did to Chloe? Hmm?”

She looked away and I saw her flinch again. I got my answer. I stood up and looked down on her.

“I’m glad you’re in pain…I wish it was more…Lana…”

I shook my head as Lex got up. Bart appeared near him empty handed. I turned back to Lana. I sneered at her. I raised my voice.

“You’re ten times worse then him!”

I pointed towards Lex as I yelled at her. I heard Lex’s voice in the background.

“Leave her alone…Dammit Clark!”

I ignored him.

“Chloe trusted you…She’s been there for you since the day you moved into her house years ago…and after everything she did for you…this is how you repay her? Experimenting on her, tricking her, Letting Lex CUT HER OPEN…STEALING OUR BABY!!!”

I screamed in her face and she started to cry. That only made me angrier.

“Don’t! Don’t you dare cry! You deserve whatever you get…your selfish, you destroyed the people who loved you Lana, you got into bed with a Luthor…you deserve whatever happens to you now…I should take your baby…so you can see how it feels to have it ripped from you…I thought I couldn’t hate you any more than I did before…I was wrong. If I ever…come after my family again Lana…let me make this crystal clear…I’ll come after yours and I wont stop until I’ve hurt every last one of them…. do you hear me? ANSWER ME!!!”

I could see the pain on her face, she was breathing hard and she nodded. Her voice was weak.

“I...hear you.”

I nodded.

“Good.”

I turned to Bart.

“Impulse…get her out of here…take her to the nearest hospital.”

He nodded.

“I’m on it Boy Scout.”

He came over helped Lana up and made his way out with her and the doctor. I glanced over at Lex who was standing there watching them leave. When he faced me his eyes were glassy.

“Thank you.”

I glared at him.

“Don’t thank me Lex…if there wasn’t an innocent child inside of her she would have been down here with you still…I have no sympathy for her…she made her choices…”

I saw him get up and start walking around. I followed him with my eyes.

“What is it you want Clark? Revenge? It won’t bring Chloe back.”

My eyes blazed and I was in front of him grabbing him by his throat in seconds.

“You don’t have the right to say her name…”

I squeezed a little tighter and it was then I felt something stab at me. I glanced down and saw a metal rod that Lex had picked up from the rubble. It was bent. His face was only half shocked.

I lowered my head to his and I spoke to him softly.

“Now you know…you want to take me on Lex…lets go then.”

I threw him across the room. When he finally got up he threw a few punches at me. None really making their mark. I was about to throw him again when I felt the building shake. I let him go and another half of the ceiling collapsed. When the dust settled I saw he was trapped under a pile of rubble.

He was struggling to get up and I stood there. I was about to go over there and start hitting him when something stopped me…I could hear something…a voice…I strained to hear. I concentrated all my senses on it.

Clark…come back to me…if you can hear me…come back to me…

My eyes snapped open. I’d know that voice anywhere…that was Chloe…I had to go. I started walking out when I heard Lex call out to me.

“CLARK! Help me…you can’t just leave me here…”

I shook my head and faced him.

“I won’t kill you Lex…that’s not the person I am…even after everything you put me and Chloe through I still won’t do it…but I don’t have to save you either…”

I shook my head.

“We could have been friends…you could have traveled a different path…but you didn’t…and I’m tired of saving you Lex…You killed my wife…even if it wasn’t by your own hand…I won’t ever forget that…but if I kill you I won’t be the man Chloe fell in love with anymore…and I won’t let that happen.”

As I walked away I called over my shoulder.

“Have a nice life Lex…hopefully you can get yourself out of the mess you created.”

And I left.


(Lois POV)

Oliver called about ten minutes ago and said they’d be home in fifteen minutes. I was pacing nervously across the room. I heard what sounded like a Jet on the fields out back.

I rubbed my hands together. This was it…the moment of truth…I heard what happened with Chloe…but…I couldn’t bring myself to believe it…not yet anyway.

I heard the kitchen door open and I ran forward. Clark came walking in with a blue bundle in his hands. I stopped and tears came to my eyes. My voice was soft.

“Is that Jonathan?”

I saw a smile on his face and he nodded. I came over and he handed him to me. He was absolutely gorgeous…he had Chloe’s eyes. I felt the tears come and I tried to swipe them away with one hand. I looked up and saw the guys all-pouring into the house. They all had a mixture of expressions on there face.

I could feel the sadness in the room…but also the calmness...the peace. Everything would be different for us now…I could see the loss in Clark’s eyes the pain. The news was on this morning…it said Lex Luthor was still not found…the facility had crashed in on it’s self not long after Oliver’s jet took off. I don’t know how Lana was doing and to be honest I really don’t care…She was…. oh my god.

(Clark POV)

I was watching Lois carefully and I saw her stop moving Jonathan around. She was glancing in my direction but past me. Her face paled and she looked like she was going to faint. I moved closer to her just as Oliver did. I took the baby and Oliver caught her when she fell.

Oh god…what the hell is going on…? I can’t lose someone else…she’s all I have left of Chloe… I placed Jonathan in a small rocker while I helped the guys tend to Lois. While we were all around her I heard a voice that I’d never thought I’d hear again.

“Lois always was an attention hog…”

I stood up but didn’t turn around. No…it was impossible…she was…I mean…oh god…I know that voice its one of a kind…but Chloe…she died…or at least I thought she did…

I heard a huff. I could here the amusement in her voice when she spoke next.

“Jeez what’s a girl gotta do to get a hug around here?”

I turned around and I saw her standing in the doorway. The sun hit her blonde hair and made it glisten in the light. Her eyes held mirth and she leaned against the doorframe carelessly.

There was dry blood caked to her clothes but I’ve never seen her look more beautiful. Oh god…it is her…I was in front of her in seconds holding her.

I heard her chuckle and it lit up my heart. I leaned in and kissed her. Everyone was standing there in shock. I pulled back and looked into her eyes. There was wonder on my face as I spoke.

“How?”

I saw her eyes cloud over with confusion as she stood there. After a minute or so she shrugged and spoke.

“Does it matter?”

I shook my head. No…it didn’t matter. All that mattered was that I had my family right in front of me…all the people I cared about were ok…and Chloe was alive.

I glanced around the room and saw Oliver helping Lois up. Bart came over, pushed me out of the way and hugged Chloe. Victor was next then A.C. finally Lois ran over.

I’ve never seen someone look that happy…well except for me right now of course. Nothing was ok…and it wouldn’t be for a long time…We’ve all been through too much to just go back…

There were so many holes in all of us…but that’s ok…because we’d rebuild…and even though everything won’t be the same…it’s possible that just maybe…it could be better…
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Old 08-11-2007, 04:49 AM   #461
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Old 08-11-2007, 08:31 AM   #462
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Old 08-11-2007, 08:45 AM   #463
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SQEEEEEEEEE!!! Thankyou so much for not killing her!

Honestly, you're messing with my emotions. One update, I'm nearly crying, the next, I'm happy

What I want to know is, how the hell did she survive? What happened?

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Old 08-11-2007, 08:59 AM   #464
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omg chloe didn't die ! alright she did but she is alive now her meteor power kicked in ! hope that lexs rots down there and something bad happens to lana the cow , anyway awesome updates and well done can't wait for the last update
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Old 08-11-2007, 10:54 AM   #465
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I Loved it !!!!!! PPMS so sweet the way Bart treats Chloe as always
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