Three Minutes PG-13

[freak24]

That is definately how Labyrinth should have happened. It's great how Clark's finally realised that he's in love with Chloe. It makes my Chlark heart happy! PPMS!!!!!!!!

[13ReporterGirl13]

I'm Glad you Enjoyed the Last Part! :-) I'll be Posting the first part of Chapter 9 tonight!

[RedKRules]

Wowwwww LOVED it!! Can´t wait For Crimson PPMS !

[D.M.A.]

definitely how Lab should have ended,nice twist...I luv how clark jus fesses up,he makes sure he has the time to tell her everythin before sumthin bad happens.Cause like chloe said its always sumthin there around clark lol...Nice update,cant wait for ur twist on crimson...Ur season views r definitely better than what we actually saw lol

[Chlarkislove]

That was a great part. I'm glad Clark told Chloe he loved her and realized that it was just a dream and that she wasn't dead. I can't wait to read more.

[SnarkyGirl91]

I Have been following this from the beginning but I never post, but its getting so good that I Just had to tell U how much I loved it!!

Leven

[13ReporterGirl13]

Ok guys Here is the first part of Chapter 9...Thanks again for the Great Comments! I'm so Excited about this Chapter...In the Last Part of this Chapter...there is going to be a twist and i think some of you will Like it LoL...Ok here it is.


Chapter 9 Part A

(Chloe POV)

It was two days before Valentine’s Day and since things have been crazy for the last week or so I’m not even sure Clark remembered. Hopefully he did because this would be our first Valentine’s Day as a couple…yes I did just get all mushy…it’s the hormones…really. So anyway if he didn’t remember I had a wonderful way of jogging his memory. The Talon Valentine’s Day Bash, which was tonight. We were out at dinner earlier and when we had left I insisted I needed a cup of coffee. And so here we are walking into the Talon. I saw his face scrunch up and he looked around at all the decorations. He looked down at me and I smiled.

“Chloe, what the heck is this? I thought we were coming in here to get a coffee”

I shrugged and fanned innocence.

“I didn't know. I swear. I'm sorry, Clark.”

He gave me a playful glare.

“You did to know and you’re not sorry. What am I gonna do with you Chlo?”

I raised an eyebrow.

“Was that a rhetorical question? Or do you want an answer because I have several ideas.”

I winked at him and waggled my eyebrows. He chuckled and shook his head. His voice held amusement when he spoke.

“What is it you always say about Valentine's Day? Oh, yeah. Our annual sneak peek at hell”

I glared at him. He was not going to be this cynical I wouldn’t let him…not while he’s with me at least.

“That was always because I was never spending Valentine’s Day with the person I wanted to spend it with…”

His face softened and he leaned down and kissed me gently. When he moved back up I grinned.

“Besides don't you think after being trapped in a front seat to the Clark/Lana operetta I deserve a good v-day?”

The expression on his face looked hurt and he made a move to put his arm around me as we walked over to the counter.

“You're the only person who can make me feel guilty, relieved, and a little sad all in one sentence.”

I smiled.

“Why are you feeling guilty?”

He shrugged and didn’t look at me as he spoke.

“For all the years I ignored what was right in front of me…for…hurting you the way I did.”

I rubbed his arm. Clark Kent had way too much guilt for my liking…it was unacceptable.

“Well no worries the past is the past and this year things are good…I finally have what I’ve been asking for and you…well you have me…”

He chuckled. We were standing there leaning in for a kiss when Lois interrupted us.

“Ok guys…seriously get a room that’s just gross…no one wants to see you macking on Smallville.”

I smiled and Clark glared at her. He moved an arm around me and turned to Lois who was standing next to Lana…what is Lana doing with Lois? I didn’t know they hung out. I mean I haven’t seen Lana in a couple pf weeks now so this was an interesting development. Clark sighed and spoke.

“Hey Lana…Lois. What brings you guys here?”

Lana smiled and patted Lois’s arm.

“I thought I’d get her out. I figured this would be a great place for her to meet someone.”

I looked and Lois’s face and it was pained. I could tell she’d rather be anywhere but here right now. She was still having a hard time dealing with Oliver’s departure even though she wouldn’t admit it. I saw Lois looked around at the decorations and she winced.

“Whoa... Is it really wrong that I want these chubby cherubs to burst into flames?”

Clark chuckled and I gave her a small smile. Lana shook her head and looked at Lois. Her voice was soft and amused when she spoke.

“The way I see it, Valentine's Day is the one day a year where it’s ok to be all sentimental about everything…it’s a day you get to share with the one person in the world who gets you.”

The three of us raised our eyebrows at her and she laughed. Lois snarked at Lana good-naturedly.

“Even your definition’s of thing’s are picture perfect…is there anything you’re not good at Lana?”

I smiled and Lana looked thoughtful.

“I’m really bad at chess.”

She sounded so serious that all three of us cracked up and she shrugged. Clark had his hand on the small of my back and he was moving his hand in rhythmic circles. I leaned into him and he smiled down on me. He leaned down and kissed my neck and I grinned. I heard Lana’s voice and Clark must have to because he pulled away from my neck. Her voice was playful and at the same time irritated.

“Welcome to the love fest.”

Lois nodded.

“Yeah, and me without my uzi.”

She was worse then Clark…I didn’t think that was possible. Lana looked over at me and smiled.

“Why don’t you and I go get a coffee and catch up Chloe. I haven’t seen you in a while. We can compare pregnancy notes.”

The minute I stepped away from Clark I felt an uneasiness sweep through my body…Clark must have noticed because his hand touched my arm.

“You ok?”

I nodded and gave him half a smile. I whispered for him to keep Lois company while Lana and I went to go talk. He nodded and I left with Lana and a strange feeling in the pit of my stomach. It’s probably me just worrying too much. It’s been quiet the last few days and I’m not used to the lack of activity…I’m sure that was it….I mean what could possibly go wrong at a stupid Valentine’s Day party?


(Lois POV)

I thought Chloe loved me…why would she leave me alone with everyone’s favorite farmer. I shook my head. Well that wasn’t as bad as what Lana had suggested earlier to me. I shivered. The girl is sweet but seriously crazy if she thought Smallville and I would ever make a good couple. Clark glanced in my direction and spoke softly to me.

“So…I didn’t know you and Lana were friends…”

I shrugged.

“There’s a lot of things you don’t know Smallville.”

He nodded but didn’t snark back. He spoke again but didn’t face me he was looking off to his right. I followed his gaze and it was on Chloe in a booth in the far right of the Talon with Lana.

“When did that happen?”

I sighed.

“We got somewhat close when we attended a lot of the same functions. Lex and…Oliver would make their rounds so Lana and I would hang out. She’s pretty cool.”

He nodded.

“Yeah…so..are you..”

I cut him off. I didn’t want anyone asking about Oliver. I was over it. We were together now we’re not. No big deal. So I changed the subject to something that would distract him.

“She actually made a really disgusting suggestion to me earlier today…she implied that if you and Chloe weren’t seeing each other that you and I would make a great couple.”

I saw him practically choke on himself and I laughed.

“Oh god…what did you say to her?”

I chuckled at his horrified look.

“I told her that you and I…”Us” That would be like hot fudge and halibut.”

He glared at me.

“I take it I'm the halibut.”

I smiled.

“Naturally.”

He shook his head.

“Well, I've had my fill of fat babies with arrows. I’m gonna see if I can get Chloe to take off with me. Knock yourself out, Lois.”

He walked away and I shook my head. At least I wasn’t the only one alone tonight. Lana was here alone…who was I kidding though…Lex was most likely home waiting for her. I sighed. I heard a voice behind me so I turned to face a lady sitting at a booth. I raised an eyebrow at her and she spoke again.

“Little down on love?”

I snorted.

“After my breakup, cupid could use me for target practice, and I still wouldn't feel anything.”

She smiled and her eyes sparkled.

“Then maybe you need a little euphoria elixir or romance remedy. Just a nudge in order to move on.”

I Took a deep breath…I love Oliver and unfortunately it’s not going away anytime soon.

“Move on?”

I scoffed.

“Honey, you're talking to somebody who's still waiting for acid-wash to come back in style.”

She smiled at me and took out a small tube of lipstick.

“Try this. It's made with jasmine and a mixture of aphrodisiac oils. I get the brilliant hue from red meteor rocks.”

I raised an eyebrow. This lady couldn’t be for real. She thought lipstick was going to make me move on…fall in love with someone new…some people put way to much confidence in cosmetics.

“This is gonna make me fall in love with someone new?”

She smiled at me and I saw a look I didn’t recognize on her face.

“The first man you set eyes on.”

Might as well try it…even if this lady is a kook the color might look nice on me.

“Hmm... who knows? Maybe this color will look good on me, huh?”

I looked into the mirror on the stand and put the lipstick on. For a minute it looked like my lips glowed and then the red settled and left an unnatural red sheen. I blotted my lips and saw Clark walk by in the mirror I was looking in. I stood up and looked over at him. Has he always looked so incredibly sexy? Mmm look at those arms. I smiled and sighed his name.

“Clark.”

I knew exactly how I was going to spend my Valentine’s Day…and it wasn’t mooning over Oliver Queen…


(Clark POV)

I walked down the stairs to the kitchen and thought back to last night. I knew why Chloe brought me there I wasn’t as dense as everyone liked to believe…but I didn’t forget about Valentine’s Day. Actually it’s the only thing I’ve been thinking about for a while. I wasn’t sure what to get Chloe and I didn’t want to have to ask her what she wanted I wanted to just know. I sighed as I reached the kitchen. I saw my mom and she smiled at me as she dialed a number. She looked around as she waited for someone to answer.

“Where’s Chloe?”

I opened the refrigerator to get a drink.

“She had an early morning at The Planet.”

My mom nodded and I heard her start talking to whoever was on the phone.

“Yes, I'm calling to RSVP for the engagement party. Martha Kent. Thank you.”

She turned her attention back to me.

“Hi! How was the Valentine's party?”

I chuckled.

“So Chloe did know…I knew it…she’s a little sneak.”

I had a smile on my face and my mom laughed.

“I haven’t seen you this happy in a long time Clark…it’s nice.”

I turned to her and my smile widened.

“I haven’t been this happy in a while…and thanks mom.”

There was a knock at the door and my mom went to go answer it. A minute later she came back in the room with Lois. I was looking down at the drink I was pouring as I spoke.

“Hey, Lois, listen, I'm sorry that Lana pulled you to that party last night. I mean, after Oliver and...”

I lifted my head up and saw a very Playboy bunny looking Lois…My mom’s eyes were a bit wide and I couldn’t help but stare. Oh my…what in the world is she wearing? Her eyes were fixed on me and she walked closer. Warning bells were going off in my head. Something was very wrong. I had no clue what to say to her…I was speechless. When she spoke her voice was low.

“Oliver's history. Actually, Mrs. K, can you give us a couple minutes?”

I whipped my head over to my mom and gave her a look that clearly said don’t leave me alone with Lois…she obviously didn’t take the hint.

“Yeah. Um, I-I'll be upstairs.”

She left and Lois closed the distance between us.

She is way to close for comfort…I am in a very bad position at the moment…this is really not good.

She sighed and leaned closer to me. Crap!

“Here we find ourselves -- all alone.”

She picked up one of my hands in hers and I gave her a confused look.

“Wow. How did I never notice what big, strong hands you have?”

Lois has gone mad…I’m officially convinced. I gave her a semi nervous chuckled and pulled my hand away from her.

“What's going on, Lois?”

She shrugged and took a step away from me. Thank god.

“Well, you know me. I'm not very good with words, so... “

She pulled out a CD case and smiled as she handed it to me.

“People don't think Whitesnake sings power ballads, but they do.”

She made me a mix? That’s…nice??? Odd??? Weird??? Take your pick of adjectives.

I spoke to her with amusement in my voice.

“You made me a mix CD.”

She smiled broadly and spoke happily.

“Yeah. I will kill you if you tell anyone this, but... there is nothing that I love more than slow-dancing with some big, strong arms around me... just like yours, Smallville.”

As she said each word her body got closer and closer to mine until she was wrapping my arms around her.

Holy crap Lois was hitting on me…but…but I’m with Chloe…Lois…wouldn’t do that…right?

I pried her out of my arms and moved her away.

“Lois…you do realize that I am with Chloe…right?”

She tossed her hair over her shoulder and gave me a sexy smirk as she walked back over to me.

“What Chloe doesn’t know won’t hurt her Clark…I can do thing’s to you that Chloe would never dream of doing…”

Breathe Clark. I need to get the hell out of here. Lois was out of her mind and she was propositioning me! I had to go talk to Chloe…maybe she’d know what the hell got into Lois…but how was I gonna get out of here? I looked around and then realize the CD was still in my hand.

“L-Lois, why -- why don't you go put this on?”

She sighed but moved away from me. Thank god.

“Okay.”

As she went into the living room I super sped out of the kitchen and straight to Chloe. This was somehow going to come back and bite me in the ass…I just know it. I sighed.

(Chloe POV)

I was sitting at my desk at The Planet when Lana in. I smiled at her and she sat down across from me. She placed her hand on her stomach, which wasn’t to far behind mine in size and smiled back at me. I broke the silence first.

“Lana. I'm kind of surprised to see you here. We haven’t really spoken much in the last few weeks.”

She nodded and her expression became more serious.

“Yeah, I know that we left things in a weird place.”

Weird isn’t the word for it. Lana had been mad at me after the whole Linda Lake thing and it had just gotten worse since then. She’s been on some kind of mission to find out Clark’s secret and I’m not going to be the one to point her in the right direction. She continued with her thought before I could speak.

“Chloe, I know that all the fight’s we’ve been getting in are either because of Lex or Clark…and some of it is my fault. I won’t ask you about Clark anymore…I know that whatever he is…hiding…if he wants me to know then he’ll tell me…and if not…I won’t dwell on it. I also know that you don’t like Lex and when you tell me all these thing’s about him and what he does that you're just looking out for me, and you've done your Maid-of-Honor duty and asked the tough questions, but I was hoping that we could just get past this.”

I was startled. Did she just say what I thought she did?

“Okay. Case closed. Did I, uh, did I miss something? Maid of Honor?”

She smiled at me.

“Yeah. I hope that you're not allergic to taffeta. That's actually why I came by. Will you stand up with me?”

I didn’t want to…I do not like Lex and I don’t want him marrying Lana…but what kind of friend would I be if I didn’t stand by her during this? She needs me and I wasn’t going to let her down…I need her to know that she has people outside of Lex who love her…because maybe if she knew that when things got bad and it was time for her to pick her side she’d choose us instead of him.

“Of course.”

We stood up at the same time and I hugged her. She squeezed me back and our stomachs touched. I chuckled and she shook her head with a smile firmly planted on her face. When we pulled apart I sat back down. We talked for a little bit and then she had to go. Her and Lex had a doctor’s appointment today where they were going to find out the sex of the baby.

I shook my head and started working on my article. I just passed the fifth month mark on my pregnancy and I could tell Clark was starting to get anxious. He was always hovering…but it was nice to know he was there if I needed anything. The last time I saw Jimmy was two weeks ago. He was sent on assignment and I just found out from a friend on the second floor that he was promoted to a field reporter. He wouldn’t be coming back to The Planet and you know what…I was fine with that. I had Clark I didn’t need anyone else.

Speaking of Clark he sent me the sweetest arrangement of flowers this morning with an adorable card and everything. I don’t think I mentioned today how grateful I am to him…He’s…My thought’s were interrupted by the object of my desire. He seemed slightly miffed. I leaned over and kissed him. He was looking around then his eyes landed on me and he spoke.

“We were supposed to meet 20 minutes ago at the coffee house across the street. Where have you been?”

Crap that’s what I had forgotten. I gave him a sheepish smile.

“Sorry Clark…I got distracted…anyway I did some digging into our favorite Martian Manhunter, but it's just coming up empty.”

He waved it off and his voice was serious and I saw his arms cross over his chest.

“We have another Manhunter to worry about...Lois.”

I laughed at him…what in the world was he talking about?

“Why does that make me picture her wielding an ax at every man in Metropolis?”

I saw him duck his head and shake it slightly. His voice came out mumbled.

“She's only after one man. Lois is... into me.”

I left the house for exactly five hours and Clark was on crack…what was I going to do with him. I laughed for a couple of seconds and then tried talking.

“She's into you? What, like... “

He handed me a CD and I looked it over. OH.MY.GOD…She made him a CD. I giggled. This was too funny. It had to be some kind of joke…Lois wouldn’t do that to me.

“Wow. She really pulled out all the stops.”

Clark sighed and moved off the desk. He walked in front of me and spoke.

“She's not herself, all right? It's like she overdosed on Love Potion # 9 or something... “

I laughed even louder…Clark knows what love potion #9 is. When I read the back of the case I laughed harder and Clark started to get frustrated.

“This isn't funny!”

I nodded.

“Your right.”

“Chloe, we have to find out what happened before she strikes again.”

I glanced over to the door and saw Lois heading this way. What was she wearing? I grinned at Clark…

“Too late.”

Her voice sounded kind of weird when I heard her speak.

“There you are. I have been searching all over for you. Look what I got.”

She pulled her shirt back a bit and revealed a large tattoo with “Lois and Clark Forever” written on it. My mouth dropped open. She then moved over and rubbed herself against him.

“Maybe you could get one to match.”

Family or not I was going to kill her! She needs to back off Clark and if Clark didn’t rectify this situation quickly he’d be sleeping on the couch for a while. He must have seen my face because he pushed Lois away from him and I stuttered a bit when I spoke. I was still a little shocked seeing Lois like that.

“I-I think you're right about that story. I'm gonna look into it.”

I started to walk out when I heard Clark.

“Uh, Chloe –“

I rolled my eyes.

“Hey Lois why don’t you come with me?

She shook her head.

“I’d rather stay here with him.”

She ran her hands up and down his arms. I was really starting to get mad at her…I gave Clark a look saying he was on his own but as I walked out I whispered to him with a stern voice.

“You better make sure she keeps her hands where everyone can see them Clark Kent…same goes for you…or you’ll be sleeping with Shelby.”

And I walked out. Time to find out what body snatcher has Lois and fix it…fast before she molests my boyfriend.

(Clark POV)

I looked down at Lois and she grinned at me.

“Hi, you.”

I gave her half a smile.

“Hi. Lois. Now, Lois –“

She was practically groping me.

“You can pour on the modesty all you want, Smallville. It only makes you that much more adorable.”

I moved us to a corner of the office and she took that opportunity to pull me into a secluded room.
Wonderful…I keep getting myself deeper and deeper. I moved her away fro my body trying to keep the distance between us.

“Lois, what happened to you when I left last night?”

I saw her thinking back as she tried to rub herself against me.

“Went home... alone. But you know where I wanted to be.”

She cornered me and pushed me against the wall. Her head came out and planted a passionate kiss on my lips…I grimaced and then I started to feel warm…my body tingled and I felt sparks fly through me. My eyes glowed red and I pulled away from Lois and smirked. I pushed her away from me and she looked startled. I shrugged.

“Sorry I have someplace to be…I enjoyed it while it lasted though…maybe next time a little less tongue…see ya later Lo”

I winked at her and super sped away. Time to go find Chloe…

After checking five million places I finally came back to the farm and lo and behold Chloe was in the loft. I appeared next to her and she looked up. She smiled.

“How’d you lose Lois?”

I shrugged.

“I super sped away.”

Chloe looked up at me to see if I was serious. She stood up and frowned.

“What’s going on?”

“Nothing…have I told you that you look amazing today?”

She smiled and I moved closer and started kissing her. As my kisses got more intense she moved away a little bit and chuckled.

“Nothing screams romance like a dusty old barn.”

I raised a brow at her.

“You want better?”

I lifted her up and super sped her into the house and to my bedroom.

She looked slightly taken aback and I started kissing her again. She kissed me back. I started moving us to the bed and I gently tossed her on it. She gave me a weird look and I climbed up and on top of her. She felt so good…so soft. She smelt like lavender and ink…absolutely perfect. I started sucking on her neck and as I went further south she stopped my head. Her breathe was quick and her face was flushed. Her voice was out of breathe when she spoke.

“Not that I'm complaining, but isn't this a little…random Clark? I mean, shouldn’t we be trying to figure out what’s going on with Lois?”

I started kissing her again and in between kisses I spoke.

“Forget Lois….I have.”

She stopped me again and looked into my eyes. Her voice was hesitant.

“Is this for real, Clark?”

I smirked. It was gonna be for real if she could just shut up long enough for me to..

“Oh, yeah, this couldn't be more real.”

God she was perfect. I could feel her body under me and I couldn’t wait to see all of it. I was done waiting…

(Chloe POV)

Clark was kissing me an I felt so good…but something was off. He’s never this forward not that I mind it’s just not him. I could feel his hand traveling up and I stopped it. I felt him sigh against me. When he spoke I could hear he was trying to control his voice.

“What now Chloe?”

I didn’t know what to say…

“Clark I just…we’ve never…can’t we just take this slow?”

He kissed me again and then looked down on me.

“We’ve been taking this slow for five years. It’s time to speed thing’s up..”

“But..”

He cut me off abruptly.

“But what? Do you want me?…Answer me..”

“I.. yes. You know I do. It’s just maybe now isn’t the right time. Maybe we should wait until I have the baby…that way it’s not weird or anything…”

I saw his face soften but the dark look was still in his eyes.

“Your gorgeous Chloe…I’ve never wanted someone more…you drive me crazy…I need you.”

Oh god…how do you say no to that? But the things he was doing they just weren’t him…how I was thinking clearly I’ll never know…but I know Clark and if I said I wanted to wait he wouldn’t push…

“Clark….Clark…STOP.”

And he did. He lifted himself up and stood there looking at me. Then his voice broke the silence. His tone was calculated and he paced he room.

“What do you need?”

I was so confused.

“Huh?”

He stopped pacing and face me.

“What do you need to know I’m serious…about you about us…our relationship…”

I didn’t know what to say. He came over by the bed and titled his head to the side.

“I don’t know…I mean..”

He cut me off and A sly grin made it’s way to his face as he spoke.

“Pack a bag Chloe…”

He stood up and started throwing some clothes in a bag. I furrowed my brows in confusion.

“Clark what’s going on?”

He started putting my stuff in a bag and I grabbed his arm. He faced me with a raised eyebrow. I asked him again.

“What is going on?”

His eyes glinted and sparkled in the dark light. His lips curled up into a feral smile.

“Feel like getting married Chlo?”

I started at him like he had six heads…he couldn’t be serious. He chuckled.

“Good to know I can still make you speechless. Here take your bag. We have to make a stop at Lois’s before we go.”

He was walking toward the door but I hadn’t moved from my spot. I was shocked. He turned and walked back over to me. I glanced at him.

“Are you high?”

He smiled and answered.

“On life.”

“Clark we can’t get married.”

He frowned.

“Say’s who? I love you…you love me…we can do whatever we want Chloe…and for Valentine’s Day I want you to be my wife.”

What if he was serious? He sounded serious…was I really going to run off with Clark and get married? Maybe when we stopped at Lois’s I could talk him out of this because it didn’t look like that was going to happen right this second.

He snapped me out of my thoughts by grabbing me kissing me hard and taking off in super speed to the Talon. When we got there Lois was out. I felt a little queasy from the quick run so I leaned against the wall as I watched Clark frantically search for something. A few minutes later he walked out of her room and back to me holding a small tube in his hand with a large grin on his face. I raised a brow.

“Lipstick? Is there something you’re not telling me Clark?”

He shook his head and came closer to me. He handed it to me and I took it.

“Something borrowed…I already have your something blue.”

He waggled his eyebrows and I rolled my eyes. He nudged my hand.

“Put it on Chloe I want to see how it looks on you.”

I stared at him. Something was so wrong with him…but on the bright side if we were here talking then that meant he wasn’t dragging me off to get married. So I opened the lipstick and looked at it. The red hue was amazing a it looked like it glistening in every direction.

I lifted it to my lips and gently put it on. I blotted my lips and looked up at Clark. He was grinning and my own grin soon joined his. He kissed me and I kissed him back just as hard. He leaned his head against mine and I giggled.

“We got everything we need to get this show on the road?”

I nodded.

“Oh yea…let’s go get hitched Mr. Kent…and make it snappy!”

I heard a deep chuckle from him as he lifted me in his arms and we were gone…I was on my way to become Mrs. Kent…and there wasn’t a damn thing anyone could do to stop it…

[star999]

oooh...love your take on Crimson.

And I'm very excited for Rush part deux!

[Chlarkislove]

I love it! I can't wait for more. LOL if Chloe would only think about who he was acting like. I love it that he automatically went to Chloe after Lois kissed him. Plus I loved Lois comments on Valentine's Day.

[GabbieW]

OMG OMG I loved your take on labyrinth and now Crimson is not the exception... can't wait to know if they get married! PPMS!!!

[Baily007]

Oh what a wonderful update. But how am I supposed to get any work done? I have to come back and check for more at least every 30 minutes ;o)

[Kira]

I loved Labyrinth version and now Crimson had made me speechless!!! That was very awesome update. Can't wait what's going to happen next.

[QueenC]

I spent most of yesterday reading up on this fic (a new find for me) and I must say how much I'm enjoying it.

Very well done. Your character voices are spot on!

That being said, bring on the Crimson-y hotness.

[TomsLove101]

O--M-G More Please!

[RedKRules]

Ohhhhhh YESSSSS!! RUSH !!!!! Yeahhhhhh PPMS !! I love RUSH!!