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Bluedevilfire
09-12-2008, 12:59 AM
2008 © Jeremiah Paul Song

STAR WARS:
CLONE WARS

Episode 1.1
“Ambush”

PG

Written by Jeremiah Paul Song

NARRATION:
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away…
The Clone Wars have begun and in the middle of the war, crime lord Jabba the Hutt’s son has been kidnapped! The Jedi responded to Jabba’s aid and rescued the Hutt…only to find out that Dooku kidnapped the Hutt in the first place! Dooku set out a trap to frame the Jedi, but Anakin and Ahsoka, his padawan, saved the Huttlet and brought him back to Jabba. But Dooku gets to Anakin first and fought him.
At the same time, Dooku sent his assassin, Ventress, to kill Obi-Wan. But in the end, the Jedi won. The Hutt was safe! Now the Republic must go to the planets and make new allies before Dooku takes the whole galaxy over! The Jedi and clones fight a never-ending battle against Dooku and his droid army right now…

ON A DESERT PLANET:
Everything is quiet and still. Then Yoda appears…
“ATTACK!” Yoda cries out!
“You heard him! ATTACK!” Rex told his troops.
“So, what’s the plan Master?” Ahsoka asked Anakin.
“Wait! Don’t tell me…follow my Lord! Right?” she asked again.
“You catch on quick, snips!” Anakin replied.
“Thank you! Thank you! I try to!” Ahsoka smirked.
“Yahhh!!” Mace Windo cried attacking a bunch of droids.
“Here they come!” Rex said.
“And here we go!” another clone trooper replied while looking in the sky and seeing a ship land and battle droids coming out of it.
Fifty or sixty Jedi were fighting the battle droids.
Yoda jumped to a battle droid and cut his head off with his green saber.
Anakin jumped to another battle droid with Ahsoka and cut him in half with his saber.
“There’s too many of them!” Mace tells Yoda.
“Underestimate the force you do?” Yoda replied. He closes his eyes and lifts up his hand.
The droids were all in a line…thousands…one behind another!
“Did you feel that?” a battle droid asked another.
“Ut oh?” the droid replied.
The battle droids began to lift up in the air one by one!
“Whoa!” a battle droid with a low voice cried! The battle droids formed a funnel blowing the Jedi’s away.
“No way!” Ahsoka said watching.
“RUN!” Anakin replied running away.
“Jedi don’t run!” Ahsoka said.
“I said RUN!” Anakin replied grabbing Ahsoka’s hand and running as fast as he could! The funnel of droids got closer and closer! Then all the droids fell down!
“Doubt me you do?” Yoda told Mace.
“I’m sorry Master! I just…” Mace replied.
“Underestimate my size you do? Size is not everything! Your mind is everything!” Yoda said.
“This day has been victorious for the Republic! It has!” Yoda said.

LATER AT THE JEDI TEMPLE ON THE ROOF:
Yoda boards a Republic gunship. Ahsoka, Anakin and Mace watch…
“Where are you going?” Mace asked Yoda.
“To negotiate and make a base on the hidden planet Rugosa!” Yoda replied.
“I will not let you go alone! I will send Anakin and Ahsoka with you,” Mace told Yoda.
“No! This is only a job that I must do alone!” Yoda replied.
“Then I will send Clone Troopers…our best!” Mace said.
“Very well,” Yoda replied.
“General Skywalker, Plo Koon is in trouble! We have to go!” Rex told Anakin.
“That’s our cue Ahsoka! Let’s go!” Anakin told Ahsoka grabbing her hand and running.
“May the ‘force’ be with you Master!” Mace told Yoda.
“And you,” Yoda replied. His gunship took off.

ON THE SWAMPY PLANET RUGOSA:
A strange ship lands. The King of Rugosa, King Katuunko, watches his green twi’lek dancers when someone blasts a shot at a dancer. The King speaks…
“Who fired that?” Katuunko questioned. He was bluish with a blue, royal robe; a pig snouted nose and wings. The King sat in his golden chair and then flew up!
“I did, oh mighty Katuunko!” Ventress replied.
“Who are you?” Katuunko demanded her.
“Ventress. I bring a humble gift, Ventress replied.
“What do you want?” Katuunko asked her with an accent. He also had a black beard.
“The Jedi have sent Master Yoda here to build a base,” Ventress said.
“So?” Katuunko asked her.
“I propose a bet! If Master Yoda can kill all my troops, then he is worthy! But if I kill all of his, we build a base here!” Ventress said.
“I like it! Now you’re talking!” Katuunko replied holding his beard and beaver teeth while looking at a hologram of a ship.

AT THE SAME TIME:
Master Yoda and his troops enter the planet Rugosa in their Republic Gunship…
“Here we are…Rugosa! It’s beautiful!” Commander Gree said. Gree was a clone trooper
“I sense the dark side, I do. But who? Ventress!! Get down!” Yoda told Gree and his troops. A cannon hit the engine of the Gunship.
“Master Yoda, we’ve been hit! We’re gong to crash!” Gree said.
“Jump! We will jump! We must!!” Yoda replied. The Republic Gunship blew up!
Ventress and some battle droids watch the Gunship blow up!
“Yoda won’t be a problem anymore!” Ventress said.
“And what about Katuunko?” the battle droid asked her.
“Kill him!” Ventress replied smiling in an evil way.

ON TOP OF A ROCKY MPUNTAIN ON RUGOSA:
Yoda climbs with his troops…
“Master, we just passed another battle droid,” Gree told Yoda while climbing. Gree spotted droids hiding in the bushes.
“There’s another!” Gree said.
“I know,” Yoda replied.
“I’ll blast them! I’ll show them what metal they’re made of!” Gree said.
“Keep moving! We must keep moving, we will,” Yoda said.
“I smell a trap!” Gree said.
“A trap it is. A trap we will go. Go we must. Go we will!” Yoda replied.

A battle droid reports to Ventress…
“It’s Master Yoda…he’s alive” the droid told Ventress.
“What? NO!! That’s impossible! I killed him!!” Ventress said.
“Do I send all the droids to kill him or let him come to us?” the battle droid asked her.
“No, let him come to us,” Ventress replied.
“Uh, I’m confused!” the droid said.
“This is why they let me watch and you fight!” Ventress replied.
“Oh?” the droid said.
Ventress looked at her hand and saw a hologram of Yoda and his troops climbing down the hill. Ventress smiled!

AT THE SAME TIME:
Yoda takes a rest at the bottom of the hill and meditates…
Yoda meditates floating in the air.
“What was that?” Gree asked Yoda.
Yoda smiled! He raised his hand. A super-blue droid sneaks behind Yoda. Yoda’s arm goes down and the super-blue battle droid falls right in front of Yoda!
“Whoa!” the droid says!
Two more regular battle droids come in. They also fall right in front of Yoda to the ground! And piece-by-piece they lose their pieces and fall apart!
“What was that?” Gree asked Yoda.
“There’s more!” Yoda replied smiling.
A strange vibration started on the ground…
“Here they come!” a trooper said.
“And here we go!” Gree replied.
Three droid tanks appeared with one hundred battle droids pointing blasters at Yoda right in front of him! Yoda stood up.
“Surrender Jedi scum!” Ventress told Yoda.
“Ventress,” Yoda replied.
“I have a little wager Jedi! If you can beat my troops, Katuunko sides with the Republic and you get your base. But, if I win, Katuunko sides with the Separatist!” Ventress said.
“Agreed!” Yoda replied.
“Master, there are too many of them! There are four of us…and a hundred of them…we’re hopeless!” Gree said.
“You may have the same face but not the same heart! Use it!” Yoda told him.
“Size matters not. Your mind does! Yahhh!!” Yoda jumped to one of the tanks.
“Fire!” Ventress told the droid inside the tank.
Yoda smiled! He jumped in the air, turned his small green saber on and launched himself like a cannon ball to each tank! The tanks fire and Yoda hits the cannons and they back fire on each tank! Yoda flips to the ground and smiles!
“BOOOOM!!” the tanks explode!
“That was impressive!” a battle droid told Ventress.
“Yahhh!!” Ventress pushed the droid to Yoda.
“Ut oh!” the droid said.
Yoda cut the droid’s head off!
“ATTACK!!” Ventress yelled to the droids!
The battle droids attacked!
“Our orders are to attack!” a clone trooper told Gree.
“Well, I’m not you! I’m a Separatist! I’m Commander Gree of the troops! I have a wife and one child! I am a man! I’m not some clone! You listen to me; we’re sneaking to the droids and then attacking! Understood?” Gree asked his man.
“Understood!” the trooper replied.
“Yahhh!” Yoda charges one by one to the droids and cuts them in half!
But there are still too many! In back of the droids, Gree throws a bomb on the ground…
“BOOOOM!!” the bomb blew up…droids fell down!!
“Keep it up Gree…I mean Commander!” a trooper told Gree.
Yoda runs to Ventress by King Katuunko.
“You’ve lost! There’s no need to fight anymore,” Yoda told her.
“NO!! NO!!” Ventress replied attacking Yoda with her two sabers!
“Dooku has clouded your mind with anger…hate,” Yoda told her flipping in the air with his saber locked with hers.
“Lies!! Lies!!” she yelled!
“You’ve lost! The Republic has won! Give it up Ventress!” Yoda told her.
“I will not fall!” Ventress said jumping to King Katuunko. She pointed her twin sabers to the King’s throat!
“Stop! Ventress NOW!” Yoda told her.
“NOOO!!” a clone trooper cried pushing Ventress to the ground!
“I will not fail my Master! I will not!!” Ventress replied.
“Join us or die!” Yoda told her.
“NOO!!” Ventress told Yoda cutting a clone trooper on the shoulder and then running away.
“We won! We won!” Gree said.
“The Republic is victorious!” the trooper said.
“You were a hero! What’s your name soldier?” Gree asked him.
“Rick, Commander!” he replied.
“You have my alliance and gratitude of the Republic! What is your request?” Katuunko asked them with all the droids lying on the ground!

Yoda smiles!

The end…or just the beginning?

Written by Jeremiah Paul Song

BadaBingBadaBoomsday
12-11-2008, 10:34 AM
This is good, it has a quick pace to it. I love the bit where yoda says underestimate my size you do:lol:

and 'Jedi dont run' very good.

You must love writing, as you've good quite a big collection of stories here.:)