Bluedevilfire
08-26-2008, 07:11 PM
2008 © Jeremiah Paul Song
STAR
WARS
PILOT
“A New Legacy”
PG-13
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song
PART ONE
Prologue
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away…
A young Jedi, Anakin Skywalker, turned to the dark side. His wife Padme’, gave birth to two children…Luke and Leia. Together, Luke, Leia and their friends C-3PO, R2-D2, Chewbacca and Han Solo, overthrew the Emperor. Luke defeated his father, Darth Vader. Luke restored the Jedi order and married Mara Jade, a young Jedi knight. Thru out the years, they gave birth to many children. Some became Jedi’s and others Sith’s.
Han Solo and Leia married and also have children. Like Luke, some of their children turned Jedi or Sith.
Many years pass and the children have children, and then…you get the picture! The Sith have been killed until now. The old Jedi Temple has been rebuilt on Coruscant by the Sith. Now the Sith train there.
The Jedi Temple has also been rebuilt as the “Skywalker Temple.” The new empire has all new guards. They hold the lightsabers, but are not Jedi or Sith. They call themselves Imperial Knights!
Many generations have passed.
Now, one hundred years later…
An ancestor will have to awake on a journey. A new Sith Lord has awoken! Now, Cade Skywalker, an ancestor of Luke Skywalker, will have to defeat the Sith and embark on a journey of becoming a Jedi Knight and rescuing a princess from exile!
So now, on Ossus, a terrible battle has begun against Jedi vs. Sith in the Skywalker Temple. Young Cade Skywalker and his father are fighting it now…
Chapter One
PLANET OSSUS:
Planet Ossus was like Earth and was very popular for its three suns. It is blue and green with oceans and forests. Ossus was also the home of the Skywalker Temple.
The three moons were tan like our moon, but creatures lived on them. There was also a red sun by the moons.
Ossus had tons of wildlife and was also a peaceful planet for the Jedi to train in their Temple.
The Jedi Temple, which is called the “Skywalker Temple,” is a memorial of Luke Skywalker who brought back the Jedi. The Temple itself is located on a tall mountain called Morth and is as tall as 12 stories!
Everything, the sky…the noise……was quiet! Too quiet!! Not a sound! The stars stood still…not even a shooting star! Then something loud and terrible popped out of the sky…it was a tie fighter!! No, there was only one! This can’t be right! Tie fighters travel in groups, not by themselves. Then the tie fighter made a “screech” sound and started to fire at the Jedi Temple!
The Temple was located on the top of the biggest mountain on the planet and it overlooked the whole planet.
The tie fighter got closer and closer. The wind stood still…then another tie fighter followed…and then another…then hundreds of tie fighter ships followed, shooting at the Jedi Temple.
The ships continued to get closer and closer! Then, red skinned Sith Lords dropped out of the tie fighters! They had black tattoos all over their red skin, with yellow eyes. Some were shirtless. The girls wore a brown low cut top that was cut off at the belly button. They had red lightsabers. They all jumped into the air and then onto the ground. The Sith hit the pure concrete ground, getting up and then standing aside. They made way for a Sith getting up from his knees…
He was the most terrible, horrible, worst Sith known!! His name was Darth Nihl! His face was painted like a “skeleton face!” He had black hair and yellow eyes. He wore a gray long sleeved t-shirt with brown armor over it, long brown baggy pants and held a red lightsaber! He smiled! His teeth were all vampire! He pushed the button on the lightsaber to turn it on. Slowly, it turned on.
There were one hundred Jedi’s standing there ready for battle! One of the young Jedi’s dropped his lightsaber.
The Darth Nihl wore brown gloves. He held his saber up high!
“Attack!” he yelled, jumping into the air and putting his saber down over his head and bringing it down landing by the young Jedi that dropped his saber, and cutting him in half!
The Sith army ran to the Jedi!
“YAHHH!” they screamed.
The Jedi’s looked scared but held their heads up high, ready to fight!
“Where’s Master Wolf?” a Jedi girl with red/blue skin who was a twi’lek, asked another Jedi who looked like he had the head of a wolf.
“I don’t know, but until he gets here, ATTACK!!” he said yelling!
(Blackout)
INSIDE THE TEMPLE WITH THE JEDI COUNCIL:
Young Cade Skywalker, his father Kol Skywalker and his Jedi master Wolf Stazen are there…
Wolf Stazen had hands coming out of his face, long black hair to his chest, wore a long sleeved tan t-shirt, long brown robe and had a green lightsaber.
Kol Skywalker had short blonde hair, blue eyes, wore a long sleeved tan t-shirt and a long brown robe.
Cade had short blonde hair, blue eyes, a tan long-sleeved t-shirt, long brown baggy pants, black boots and a blue lightsaber. He was 10 years old.
“Stay here and look after the younglings!” Kol, his father told him.
“But I want to be with you!” Cade told Kol.
“Stay here!” Kol said opening the entrance door to the outside.
“NO!” Kol said seeing the Jedi fight the Sith.
“Are you ready?” Wolf asked him.
“May the force be with you master!” Kol told Wolf.
“May the force be with you too!” Wolf replied.
“I’m fighting too!” Cade said.
“Cade, I told you to protect the younglings! You’re disobeying direct orders!” Kol told him.
“Now or never!” Wolf told him.
“Yahhh!” Kol jumped in the air and cut two Sith in half!
Wolf ran up and flipped in the air slashing five Sith with his lightsaber!
A white spaceship shaped like a square with brown guns at the end of the front of the ship, appears. There were white double doors on each side of the ship. Suddenly, the doors opened and out came twelve clone troopers from each side!
Then, another ship follows…and then another…
“Dad, we have company,” Cade told Kol.
The clone troopers jumped out of the ships at the same time. The clone’s land on there knees and get up all at the same time. Eight clone troopers land right in front of Cade. Cade looks them in the eyes, turns his lightsaber on blue and smiles!
“Yahhh!!” Cade yells jumping in the air and cutting each clone’s head off!! He lands and smiles!
AT THE SAME TIME ON THE OTHER SIDE OF HIM:
Kol and Wolf partner up…
“Ready?” Kol asked Wolf.
“Ready!” Wolf replied.
The Sith soldiers smiled and attacked! Kol swung his lightsaber, slicing Sith soldiers like crazy! Wolf smiled! He lifted his hand up and pushed the Sith back, causing them to fall! Then Wolf attacked, jumping in the air! Wolf attacked Darth Nihl! They were lightsaber to lightsaber!
“Go get the younglings Cade, NOW!” Kol told Cade.
Cade jumped over one of Sith to his father. Wolf and Darth Nihl were still saber-to-saber!
Nihl raised his hand up and smiled! Electricity of lightening came from Nihl’s hand and he shot it at Wolf, but Wolf held his lightsaber and blocked it! Then Nihl stabbed Wolf right in the heart and Wolf’s saber came down! Nihl continued to shoot lightening out of his hands at Wolf! Wolf fell to the ground!
“A-H-H-H!!” Wolf screamed!
“NO!!” Kol cried!
“Save Wolf! Save the younglings on the top floor! Use the X-Wing Ship! Do it! Go NOW!!” Kol said to Cade.
“Where are you going father?” Cade asked Kol.
“Bringing this to an end!” Kol replied.
Darth Nihl ran to the temple doors and opened them. Kol followed.
Cade took Wolf and told him, “Follow me!” Wolf leaned on Cade and they also went into the Temple.
Kol ran up the wooden stairs. There were two sets of stairs, one on the right side and the other on the left. The stairs cut off and there was a big drop.
Kol looks Nihl in the eye, both standing on the end of the stairs.
Nihl smiles! Kol smiles!
Kol jumps off the stairs yelling!
“Yahhh!!” Kol yelled!
Nihl jumps off the stairs at the same time also yelling!
“A-H-H!!” Nihl yelled.
Nihl had his hands above his head holding his lightsaber, and so did Kol. They hit one another’s lightsabers in mid-air! Kol’s green saber rubbed against Nihl’s red saber and they both flipped while their lightsabers still made contact! Then, dropping faster and faster, they jumped from each other and landed in the opposite side of one another on the ground! Kol smiled, landing on his knees getting up very slowly. Nihl also got up off his knees and smiled!
“Yahhh!” Kol yelled jumping into the air attacking Nihl with his hand above his head holding his lightsaber.
“Yahhh!” Nihl also had the same stance as Kol, jumping into the air with his hand above his head holding his red lightsaber.
By this time, a few minutes have passed. Cade was walking up the real stairs that went to the top of the Temple and overlooked the whole Temple. Cade watched his father fight while Wolf grew weaker and weaker. He still leaned on Cade.
BACK DOWN AT THE GROUND FLOOR:
Kol and Nihl still fight…
Nihl continues to flip and charges his lightsaber at Kol in the heart! Nihl lands and Kol falls! Nihl puts his hand in the air and shoots lightening at Kol! Kol blocks it with his saber, but growing weaker and weaker. Then Kol drops his lightsaber!
“A---HH!!” Kol screams as lightening hits him!
“Avenge my death!” Kol says.
“NO!! NO!!” Cade says crying!
“He was a good man,” Wolf told Cade trying to comfort him.
“We’re going to the get-a-way ship, follow me!” Cade told Wolf.
Cade walked upstairs to the flat roof where the Jedi X-Wing was. R2-D2 was on top of the X-Wing ready to pilot.
“R2, ready to pilot? Master Wolf has been hurt very bad!” Cade told R2-D2.
“The Sith didn’t come here for killing the Jedi, they came for the Emperor!” Wolf explained.
“The Emperor?” Cade asked him.
“The Emperor was hidden here and still is somewhere,” Wolf says.
“Sit back and relax,” Cade told him.
“I can’t…goodbye Cade…” Wolf told him lying down on a table, shutting his eyes and dying.
“NO! NO!” Cade said.
The X-Wing flew off!
ON THE GROUND AT THE JEDI TEMPLE:
All the Jedi and Sith lay dead in pools of blood, cut in half…
“I will not forget this Skywalker! I will kill you!!” Darth Nihl cries out!
INSIDE THE X-WING:
Cade closes his eyes wishing that Master Wolf could come back from the dead. His hands touch Master Wolf’s head. Cade’s hands turned blue…his eyes opened and also turned pitch blue! Suddenly, Master Wolf was lifted off the table into the air! Master Wolf was outlined with blue energy and then put down slowly! Cade blinked and then opens his eyes…Wolf woke up…
“I’m alive…and no, I sense the Sith!” Wolf said.
“The Sith?” Cade questioned him.
Outside the X-Wing, a tie fighter shoots the X-Wing down!
“NOOO!!” Wolf says.
The X-Wing blows up! Just as it blows up, Wolf jumps out leaving Cade for dead! Wolf lands in the tall grass and bushes! Ducking down, he sees Clone troopers on bikes flying by. But Wolf senses something…
“He’s not dead!” Wolf said fleeing away!
Chapter Two
AT THE SAME TIME ON A SMALL PLANET CALLED CORUSCANT:
The Planet Coruscant was like Earth, but more! When you looked at it from a spaceship, it looked like dozens of stars…like a star city! It was the most shiniest, prettiest planet you’ve ever put your eyes on! The old Jedi Temple was on Coruscant.
About one hundred and thirty years ago, a young Jedi Padawane by the name of Anakin Skywalker, trained there with his master Obi-Wan Kenobi. But one frightful day, Anakin turned to the dark side! The Jedi Temple was destroyed along with everyone in it!
Now, throughout the years, the Temple has been restored as the Sith Temple. In the Sith Temple is also the Empire, which is ran by Emperor Roan Fel. Now, as we speak, Emperor Fel is having a meeting with his ‘moff’ or his men, on the third floor. The Sith Temple had twelve floors and overlooked the whole city!
INSIDE THE TEMPLE:
Emperor Roan Fel talked to his men…
“We must make peace!” Roan said sitting at a long table, with him sitting in the middle and his men at the sides. Roan had gray hair; his nose was shaped like a beak; had blue eyes and wore a red robe with a military sign pin on it in the shape of an eagle, but chipped where one wing was.
“I agree!” his advisor said. He sat on the side of Roan. He also wore a red robe, brown pants, had gray hair and brown eyes.
“We kill our alliance with the Sith!” his other advisor said.
The golden doors open…
Three Sith walked in. All three masters…one Darth Maladi, Darth Nihl and the other…the Sith Lord himself!
“Is there a problem?” Roan asked them.
“You’re under arrest for the murders of the Sith and not upholding your alliance!” Darth Maladi told him. Darth Maladi had red skin, yellow eyes and her hair was in a ponytail. It was black. She wore a brown long sleeved shirt, brown pants, a black robe over them and held a red lightsaber.
“You dare arrest your own Emperor? You’re insane!” Roan told Krayt.
Roan smiled, still sitting at his table in his chair.
“Come with us!” Darth Maladi told him.
“Never!” he replied.
“Yahhh!” he jumped onto the table and used the force to launch himself like a missile to Darth Maladi and the others.
Darth Maladi blocked his attack with her red lightsaber. She hit Roan in the shoulder. Roan fell to the ground!
“AHH!! I will not let my people fall to you!” Roan said trying to get up.
“Then die!” Darth Nihl says slashing him in the heart! Roan falls to the ground!
“Kneel before your new Emperor! Your Emperor Krayt!” Maladi tells.
“Hail Krayt!!” the advisors bowed down to him! Krayt smiled!
A FEW MINUTES LATER IN THE LIBRARY HALL:
Darth Krayt and Darth Maladi…
“You wanted to see me?” Maladi asked Krayt.
“You fool! You failed me! It wasn’t him!” Krayt replied.
“But that’s impossible!” Maladi replied.
“Impossible? No! Roan is somewhere in the galaxy! The Roan you killed was his double! If we don’t find him, he will make allies with the Jedi! And our Temple…our Sith, will have been for nothing!” Krayt explains.
“You’re not a failure! I don’t like failures! You’ve been given a second chance! Maladi, fail me again and I will kill you!” Krayt told her.
“So, I’m your apprentice?” Maladi asked him.
“No, but I have found someone with the power to raise the dead! I can feel it!” Krayt said.
“He will be our most powerful ally!” Krayt said.
“What about Roan?” Maladi asked him.
“Search the galaxy! Kill him!!” he replied. Krayt smiled!
“Kill all the Jedi if he is with them!!” Krayt said.
(Blackout)
Chapter Three
It has been seven years since the great battle of the Jedi Temple on Ossus. Emperor Krayt has hunted down the real Roan Fel but failed. The empire has been taken over by the darkside.
Now as we speak, the five surviving Jedi go to the planet Daluuj, and have heard that a young bounty hunter by the name of Cade has been there. Master Wolf has told the other surviving four Jedi that Cade is alive. So they search for him. Little do they know what lurks for them!
PLANET DALUUJ:
The Planet Deluuj was a swampy planet. It had swamps, swamps and more swamps!
Master Wolf takes four surviving Jedi: a blue Twi’lek by the name of Shado Vao; a lion, crossed from a wookie and lion; a young green Twi’lek and her sister, a blue Twi’lek, to look for Cade Skywalker. They step on a bridge with droid heads stuck on spears. The bridge was made of rock and crossed the ocean swamp. There was about a three hundred foot jump down. There was another bridge across from it. It was quite a jump!
Shado looked at the droid heads on the spears. They were mostly Android heads.
“I bet that hurt!” Shado said touching one of the droid heads that looked like C-3PO’s head.
“I beg your pardon!” the droid head replied.
“Whoa?” Shado asked him.
“I am C-3PO and …” the droid head said.
“You’re C-3PO?” he asked again.
“Yes, and would you please hand me my body?” C-3PO asked him.
“Here!” Shado set it on the ground. The droid body got up. His hands yanked the droid’s head off and put it back on, but it was on backwards!
“Um…it’s backwards!” Shado told C-3PO.
“Well don’t just stand there, put it on right!” C-3PO told him.
“Quiet! I sense the Sith!!” Master Wolf told Shado.
“The Sith, they’re here?” the lion one said.
“Oh no! The Sith?” C-3PO questioned concerned.
A tie fighter flew in the gray foggy sky.
“Screech!” the tie fighter made that sound.
Red Sith dropped down with their lightsabers over there head.
“Not again!” Master Wolf said.
Then Darth Nihl flipped out of the sky onto the ground, landing on his knee with his right hand pushing himself off the ground slowly. He smiled!
“Attack!” Nihl said jumping to one of the Jedi. His hands were over his head, holding the red lightsaber jumping to the lion Jedi.
On the left side to him, was the blue Twi’lek girl with her sister and Master Wolf.
“Stay together,” Wolf told them.
“Oh my!” C-3PO said as a Sith landed in front of him.
“Yahhh!!” Shado yelled attacking the Sith by C-3PO and slashing them in half!
“Oh dear! Thank you!” C-3PO told Shado.
“You’re welcome!” Shado replied.
“Yahh!!” Wolf jumped in the air, turned his green lightsaber on and slashed a Sith in the chest! The Sith fell down!
“Shado, there are too many!” Wolf told him.
Just then, another tie fighter flew by.
“Stay near me!” Wolf told Shado.
The lion Jedi continued to fight Nihl. Nihl had his red lightsaber locked to the lion’s blue lightsaber.
“Goodbye Jedi!” Nihl told the lion one smiling! Nihl’s hand lifted and lightening came out of it striking the lion one.
“Master, NO!” one of the Twi’lek sisters cried!
“A-H-H!!” the lion one screamed!
Darth Nihl took his lightsaber and stabbed the lion one right in the heart! The lion one fell to the ground!
“A-H-H!” the Twi’lek sister said with a lightsaber in her stomach! A Sith pulled it out!
The other Twi’lek sister fights two Sith. The two Sith swing there lightsabers at her, but she blocks them with her lightsaber!
“Theirs only three of us and fifty of them! We can’t win!” Wolf told Shado.
“Agreed!” Shado said.
More tie fighters showed up and dropped Sith out. The Sith landed.
Shado lifted his hands!
“You’ve lost Jedi!” Nihl tells him.
Wolf points up. Nihl looks up. There is a clone trooper bike in the air.
“Uh oh!” Nihl says.
“Fall back!” Nihl yells!
Shado continues to lift his hand and close his eyes. The rock bridge begins to vibrate…rocks start to split on the bridge!
Shado continues to raise his hand! Half of the army is pushed by the Force and lifted off the bridge and some die! Some held on to the edge of a cliff.
Nihl lifts his hand up and takes a Sith lightsaber and attacks Wolf with two lightsabers!
“Yahhh!!” Nihl attacks Wolf.
Wolf blocks with his lightsaber.
“Oh dear!” C-3PO says as the bridge continues to drop.
Brick by brick, piece by piece…the bridge cracks in the middle where Nihl is on one side and Wolf is on the other! Finally the bridge cracked!!
“NOO!!” Nihl screamed!!
Master Wolf smiles, jumping up using the Force to the clone trooper bike onto the bottom. A clone trooper is driving the bike and Wolf flips on the back of the bike.
“Mind if I cut in?” Wolf asked the clone trooper cutting his head off and pushing him off with his green lightsaber. Then Master Wolf took control of the hover bike and flew away.
Nihl stood on another bridge across from the one that had collapsed.
“Curse you Jedi!” Nihl yelled!
The bridge continued to fall and flipped backward still falling. The Sith still fought the one Twi’lek Jedi and then the bridge fell into the swamp!
(Blackout)
Chapter Four
PLANET LOK:
The planet Lok was a desert planet. It was like Tatooine’s double. On the corner of the planet were small cities. This one in particular had a safe house to shelter bounty hunters, homeless wrecks among others. This shelter was called the “Cantina.”
A bounty hunter by the name of Naxy Screeger was hiding there and someone is trying to hunt him down. The “Cantina” consists of three parts: As you open the entrance door, which is made out of gold, you see a bar. However, there is a downstairs hidden behind the bar counter beneath the floor. The downstairs houses about a hundred and ten aliens, if not more! Downstairs is like a sewer with little huts around it beneath the surface. That way people will never know it exist.
This particular bounty hunter, Naxy Screeger, had almost every bounty on him. There was one crime Lord that he stole from, Hubba the Hutt. For five long months, Hubba has hired bounty hunter after bounty hunter, but they all have failed! Now Hubba has had it! He will give one hundred sheckles for the life of Naxy Screeger…dead or alive! A bounty hunter who the galaxy calls “the main man,” is hunting Naxy down as we speak.
Now, inside the Cantina Bar, Naxy begs his way into the downstairs shelter.
Naxy had pure gray skin, black eyes, vampire like teeth and a nose like a woodpecker. He also had two chipped earrings on each side of his ear in the shape of a promise ring. His head was looking all over the bar, seeing if any bounty hunter was there tracking him.
The bartender, whose name was Broger, had yellow skin; brown eyes; brown beard; a green cloak that covers his head, shoulders and whole body; and had slight gray hair.
“What did you get yourself into this time Naxy?” Broger asked him.
Broger knows his very well. Naxy comes here almost every month hiding from bounty hunters.
“I need shelter, please?” Naxy asked him.
Last time Naxy came here, he didn’t pay his credits or money. You see, staying the night here isn’t free!
“You didn’t pay last time! So NO!!” Broger replied.
“They’re after me!” Naxy said begging.
“That’s not my problem, is it?” Broger asked him.
On the other side of the room, a mysterious person drank “Forbeck,” a type of alien drink, but much worse than ours!
The mysterious person had a green, dark hood on; with a brown beard; a lion like brown nose; blue eyes; a lion like head; long blue hair; a tan robe that covered his body; and he was barefoot. In his hand, he had a pink cup that had “Forbeck” in it. He was talking to a yellow skinned alien. His name was Nako. He had long black hair to his shoulders, a blue bandana and red glasses over his head. The red glasses weren’t sunglasses; they were much bigger than sunglasses! He also had a black robe on.
“You’ve been meditating for months! Are you okay?” Nako asked the mysterious one.
The mysterious one has been at the Cantina for months drinking and meditating.
A target screen from a gun appeared outside with someone holding it ready to fire. The door entrance opens and the gun begins to fire at each drink on the bar table, breaking every glass cup…shattering!
“BOOM!” the bun fired!
A pink skinned woman appears with blue hair; brown eyes; blue lipstick; a low cut yellow t-shirt with a blue long sleeved shirt torn right in the middle; and a brown jacket on top of that; blue pants with yellow shorts on top of that; purple boots; black gloves; a silver necklace and a brown blaster in her hand. She stepped aside.
A dark, black man came in. He had long black hair and brown eyes. He had a black sleeveless shirt on with a gold half jacket, about a little kid’s size; a red tattoo on his right shoulder in the shape of a ‘V’; brown jeans; a belt; pair of black boots to his knees and a gray blaster in his hands with black gloves. He stepped aside.
The door went wide, opening and a slight windy breeze with dust came in.
An alien that was trying to get into the Cantina was thrown inside the Cantina. The alien was brown; furry; had a brown robe; two tan horns coming from his head; brown beard; dark brown furry skin; barefoot and had black gloves on his furry little hands!
The fog was in the air and dust. People were coughing. There were about 20 or 30 aliens at the tables drinking their drinks when they all looked up…the fog and smoke began to clear. A mysterious person walked a step and stopped!
The person was a “he!” He had long blonde hair to his shoulders; blue eyes; a slight goatee’; a black raincoat jacket on; black long sleeved shirt with golden armor from the neck down to the waist cutting off at the shoulder with a symbol carved in the middle of two “C’s” crossing each other, making an ‘O’ almost, but backwards; a red sleeveless shirt beneath the armor; black gloves; black long pants; a pair of brown boots and a golden blaster in each hand! This is the kind of guy you don’t want to mess with!! Everyone in the bar still looked up in fear and trembled!!
The mysterious long blonde haired man’s name was Cade! Cade looked around. The black man’s name was Jariah Syn.
“He’s here! I can smell him!” Syn told Cade.
“Spread out!” Cade told him.
The pink skinned girl, who was a type of Twi’lek, name was Deliah Blue.
“What about me?” Deliah asked Cade.
“You too! Spread out!” Cade replied.
Cade walked up to the bartender Brogar.
“I’m looking for Naxy Screeger, seen him?” Cade asked Brogar.
“Um?” Brogar replied.
“I’m not playing games! Now tell me where Naxy is Brogar, or I’ll blow your head to kingdom come!” Cade said pointing a gun to Brogar’s neck.
”He’s hiding over by the counter, honest!” Brogar replied, hoping Cade would spare his life.
Cade smiled, walking away from Brogar, aiming his gun at the bar table.
The mysterious lion creature covered his face with his hands as much as he could.
Cade pointed the gun at a table with glass cups and bottles and started firing at it!
“BOOM!!” Cade fired.
All the bottles and cups smashed into little tiny pieces! He fired again at a bottle near the mysterious lion like creature.
“I will not be taken!” the lion one said, getting up out of his chair and raising his hand up, force throwing chairs at Syn and Deliah.
“Duck!” Syn told Deliah.
“Get him! He’s a Jedi!” Brogar yelled telling everyone! Suddenly, the whole bar of alien people attacks the lion Jedi!
“I’m Hosk Trey’lis and I will not be taken!” the lion one Hosk said. He raised his hand and began to throw the aliens off of him.
“Catch that Jedi!” Deliah told Syn hiding under a table, ducking the chairs.
“Yeah, think of how many creds he’ll be worth!” Syn asked Deliah.
Hosk grabbed a lightsaber from his belt. There was a crowd over him. He turned his lightsaber on and sliced right thru the crowd!
“Syn, get the Jedi, I’m going after Naxy!” Cade yelled.
Naxy was running out to a back door. Cade followed. Cade ran up to Naxy and kicked him in the back of his back! Naxy fell down!
“You under estimate me Cade!” Naxy told him in an accent.
“Yeah?” Cade asked him.
“I have a blaster and I’m not afraid to use it!” Naxy said pulling a blaster out and pointing it at Cade.
BACK WITH SYN AND DELIAH:
Hosk runs pushing the doors open with the force.
Deliah had a bracelet that had a dart on it, and like a dart, she aimed it!
BACK WITH CADE AND NAXY:
“Now, you’re ‘gonna let me go!” Naxy told Cade.
“Fine Naxy! Fine!” Cade replied.
Naxy ran into Hosk. Hosk fell for a brief moment. Deliah fired her bracelet dart at Hosk! Cade lifted his hand and used the force to push Hosk to the dart! Hosk uses the force with his hands and pushes the dart into Deliah!
“A-H-H!!” Deliah falls to the ground.
“Not missing this time Jedi!” Syn said throwing a silver thud bug at Hosk, which bites him. Hosk falls down.
”NO!!” Naxy says.
“Oh yes! Oh yes! You’re coming with me!” Cade told Naxy.
The head of the bar, Brogar, walked up to Cade. Brogar had three red droids behind him.
“What is the meaning of this?” Brogar asked Cade.
“I can arrest you for assault and murder!” Brogar told Cade.
“And I can arrest you for hiding a Jedi! You know, that’s like the worst law you can break!” Cade replied.
“You can go, but only this once!” Brogar told him.
“Rav and the Hutt say hello!” Cade told Brogar. Cade walked out.
“As you were!” Cade told the aliens while walking out of the bar. Music began to play in the bar.
OUTSIDE THE BAR:
Cade had his speedster ready. Everyone got in.
“Where do we go now?” Deliah asked Cade.
“Home!” Cade replied.
“Home?” Syn asked him confused.
“To Rav and the Hutt!” Cade said.
“It seems your furry Jedi friend is still asleep!” Naxy said.
“Save it Naxy! Save it!” Cade told Naxy smiling.
The red speedster took off and flew away.
(Blackout)
BACK ON CORUSCANT IN THE SITH TEMPLE:
Emperor Krayt has asked for Darth Nihl in the Temple of Records room. As we speak, he is there waiting for Nihl. Nihl walks in…
“You have failed me!” Krayt told Nihl.
“I am sorry my Lord!” Nihl replied.
“You do not deserve to have the name---! Nihl’s, you are stripped from your title, and as for your punishment… Yahhh!!!” Krayt yells using his lightsaber and cutting off Nihl’s right hand!
“A-H-H-H!!” Nihl’s screams!
“Who will replace me?” Nihl asked Krayt.
Krayt looks at a hologram of the Sith training room as he watches the fight.
“My new apprentice is passing her test right now!” Krayt replies smiling.
IN THE SITH TRAINING ROOM:
Darth Ruyn trains his apprentice, Talon. Ruyn is a twi’lek with red skin; black tattoos all over his skin; orange eyes; in a black robe and with a red lightsaber. Talon, his apprentice, is also a red twi’lek. Twi’lek’s are a rare species that have one or two horns dropping down their ears to their chest. Talon is a red twi’lek with black tattoos like her Master, and like Darth Maul, her red face is covered in black tattoos. She has a low cut black cut-off armor bodysuit on which cuts off at the belly button; and long black pants with armor over them. She also had green eyes.
She and her master, Darth Ruyn trains. Talon is on the floor standing with her red lightsaber on.
“This is most Jedi’s fear! But I sense a great fear in you, but not about you…about me!” Ruyn told her.
“I’m sorry master. Yahhh!!!” Talon attacks Ruyn holding her red lightsaber over her head. Ruyn attacks! Their sabers lock!
“Why are you doing this?” Ruyn asked her.
Talon flips in the air and Ruyn flips and fights her with their sabers also locking together again.
“Because I have to!” she replied slicing Master Ruyn’s right hand off! Ruyn drops his red lightsaber. Master Ruyn falls to the ground! He bows to his knees.
Talon grabs her Master’s saber on the ground. She puts it right against his throat! Both of her sabers are in her right hand and her Master’s saber is in her left hand, crossing each other like an “X” on his throat.
“You would betray everything?” Ruyn asked her.
“Thank you Master for everything!” Talon tells him. She slices Ruyn’s throat and he dies.
Krayt walks in.
“ Very good! You are now my apprentice…my right hand! You are Darth Talon! Do not fail me!” Krayt told her.
“I will not fail you! I am honored Master! I am honored!” Talon replied.
“If the Emperor will not come to us, we’ll make him come to us with his daughter! She has a personal guard. Her name is Elke Vetter. She is an Imperial Knight. She is on our side! Kill her!!” Krayt says as Talon and Elke Vetter battle. Elke has a blue lightsaber with red armor on her neck down to her waist. Under it, a long sleeved black shirt. She is wearing a brown cape, black pants, black boots and has short blonde hair.
“You must die!” Talon tells her.
“The Princess has already left, Sith. She is safe!” Elke tells Talon.
“You have no further purpose anymore!” Talon says with lightening coming out of her hand. She slices Elke with her red saber and walks away.
Krayt watches a hologram of it and smiles!
NOT FAR, A MYSTERIOUS PRINCESS RUNS WITH A TWI’LEK GIRL IN THE MOUNTAINS CLIMBING:
“Are you alright?” the mysterious twi’lek girl asked the mysterious Princess.
“Hurry before the Sith find us…and daddy!” the mysterious Princess said.
The End??
Stay tuned for Part Two…
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song
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STAR
WARS
PILOT
“A New Legacy”
PG-13
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song
PART ONE
Prologue
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away…
A young Jedi, Anakin Skywalker, turned to the dark side. His wife Padme’, gave birth to two children…Luke and Leia. Together, Luke, Leia and their friends C-3PO, R2-D2, Chewbacca and Han Solo, overthrew the Emperor. Luke defeated his father, Darth Vader. Luke restored the Jedi order and married Mara Jade, a young Jedi knight. Thru out the years, they gave birth to many children. Some became Jedi’s and others Sith’s.
Han Solo and Leia married and also have children. Like Luke, some of their children turned Jedi or Sith.
Many years pass and the children have children, and then…you get the picture! The Sith have been killed until now. The old Jedi Temple has been rebuilt on Coruscant by the Sith. Now the Sith train there.
The Jedi Temple has also been rebuilt as the “Skywalker Temple.” The new empire has all new guards. They hold the lightsabers, but are not Jedi or Sith. They call themselves Imperial Knights!
Many generations have passed.
Now, one hundred years later…
An ancestor will have to awake on a journey. A new Sith Lord has awoken! Now, Cade Skywalker, an ancestor of Luke Skywalker, will have to defeat the Sith and embark on a journey of becoming a Jedi Knight and rescuing a princess from exile!
So now, on Ossus, a terrible battle has begun against Jedi vs. Sith in the Skywalker Temple. Young Cade Skywalker and his father are fighting it now…
Chapter One
PLANET OSSUS:
Planet Ossus was like Earth and was very popular for its three suns. It is blue and green with oceans and forests. Ossus was also the home of the Skywalker Temple.
The three moons were tan like our moon, but creatures lived on them. There was also a red sun by the moons.
Ossus had tons of wildlife and was also a peaceful planet for the Jedi to train in their Temple.
The Jedi Temple, which is called the “Skywalker Temple,” is a memorial of Luke Skywalker who brought back the Jedi. The Temple itself is located on a tall mountain called Morth and is as tall as 12 stories!
Everything, the sky…the noise……was quiet! Too quiet!! Not a sound! The stars stood still…not even a shooting star! Then something loud and terrible popped out of the sky…it was a tie fighter!! No, there was only one! This can’t be right! Tie fighters travel in groups, not by themselves. Then the tie fighter made a “screech” sound and started to fire at the Jedi Temple!
The Temple was located on the top of the biggest mountain on the planet and it overlooked the whole planet.
The tie fighter got closer and closer. The wind stood still…then another tie fighter followed…and then another…then hundreds of tie fighter ships followed, shooting at the Jedi Temple.
The ships continued to get closer and closer! Then, red skinned Sith Lords dropped out of the tie fighters! They had black tattoos all over their red skin, with yellow eyes. Some were shirtless. The girls wore a brown low cut top that was cut off at the belly button. They had red lightsabers. They all jumped into the air and then onto the ground. The Sith hit the pure concrete ground, getting up and then standing aside. They made way for a Sith getting up from his knees…
He was the most terrible, horrible, worst Sith known!! His name was Darth Nihl! His face was painted like a “skeleton face!” He had black hair and yellow eyes. He wore a gray long sleeved t-shirt with brown armor over it, long brown baggy pants and held a red lightsaber! He smiled! His teeth were all vampire! He pushed the button on the lightsaber to turn it on. Slowly, it turned on.
There were one hundred Jedi’s standing there ready for battle! One of the young Jedi’s dropped his lightsaber.
The Darth Nihl wore brown gloves. He held his saber up high!
“Attack!” he yelled, jumping into the air and putting his saber down over his head and bringing it down landing by the young Jedi that dropped his saber, and cutting him in half!
The Sith army ran to the Jedi!
“YAHHH!” they screamed.
The Jedi’s looked scared but held their heads up high, ready to fight!
“Where’s Master Wolf?” a Jedi girl with red/blue skin who was a twi’lek, asked another Jedi who looked like he had the head of a wolf.
“I don’t know, but until he gets here, ATTACK!!” he said yelling!
(Blackout)
INSIDE THE TEMPLE WITH THE JEDI COUNCIL:
Young Cade Skywalker, his father Kol Skywalker and his Jedi master Wolf Stazen are there…
Wolf Stazen had hands coming out of his face, long black hair to his chest, wore a long sleeved tan t-shirt, long brown robe and had a green lightsaber.
Kol Skywalker had short blonde hair, blue eyes, wore a long sleeved tan t-shirt and a long brown robe.
Cade had short blonde hair, blue eyes, a tan long-sleeved t-shirt, long brown baggy pants, black boots and a blue lightsaber. He was 10 years old.
“Stay here and look after the younglings!” Kol, his father told him.
“But I want to be with you!” Cade told Kol.
“Stay here!” Kol said opening the entrance door to the outside.
“NO!” Kol said seeing the Jedi fight the Sith.
“Are you ready?” Wolf asked him.
“May the force be with you master!” Kol told Wolf.
“May the force be with you too!” Wolf replied.
“I’m fighting too!” Cade said.
“Cade, I told you to protect the younglings! You’re disobeying direct orders!” Kol told him.
“Now or never!” Wolf told him.
“Yahhh!” Kol jumped in the air and cut two Sith in half!
Wolf ran up and flipped in the air slashing five Sith with his lightsaber!
A white spaceship shaped like a square with brown guns at the end of the front of the ship, appears. There were white double doors on each side of the ship. Suddenly, the doors opened and out came twelve clone troopers from each side!
Then, another ship follows…and then another…
“Dad, we have company,” Cade told Kol.
The clone troopers jumped out of the ships at the same time. The clone’s land on there knees and get up all at the same time. Eight clone troopers land right in front of Cade. Cade looks them in the eyes, turns his lightsaber on blue and smiles!
“Yahhh!!” Cade yells jumping in the air and cutting each clone’s head off!! He lands and smiles!
AT THE SAME TIME ON THE OTHER SIDE OF HIM:
Kol and Wolf partner up…
“Ready?” Kol asked Wolf.
“Ready!” Wolf replied.
The Sith soldiers smiled and attacked! Kol swung his lightsaber, slicing Sith soldiers like crazy! Wolf smiled! He lifted his hand up and pushed the Sith back, causing them to fall! Then Wolf attacked, jumping in the air! Wolf attacked Darth Nihl! They were lightsaber to lightsaber!
“Go get the younglings Cade, NOW!” Kol told Cade.
Cade jumped over one of Sith to his father. Wolf and Darth Nihl were still saber-to-saber!
Nihl raised his hand up and smiled! Electricity of lightening came from Nihl’s hand and he shot it at Wolf, but Wolf held his lightsaber and blocked it! Then Nihl stabbed Wolf right in the heart and Wolf’s saber came down! Nihl continued to shoot lightening out of his hands at Wolf! Wolf fell to the ground!
“A-H-H-H!!” Wolf screamed!
“NO!!” Kol cried!
“Save Wolf! Save the younglings on the top floor! Use the X-Wing Ship! Do it! Go NOW!!” Kol said to Cade.
“Where are you going father?” Cade asked Kol.
“Bringing this to an end!” Kol replied.
Darth Nihl ran to the temple doors and opened them. Kol followed.
Cade took Wolf and told him, “Follow me!” Wolf leaned on Cade and they also went into the Temple.
Kol ran up the wooden stairs. There were two sets of stairs, one on the right side and the other on the left. The stairs cut off and there was a big drop.
Kol looks Nihl in the eye, both standing on the end of the stairs.
Nihl smiles! Kol smiles!
Kol jumps off the stairs yelling!
“Yahhh!!” Kol yelled!
Nihl jumps off the stairs at the same time also yelling!
“A-H-H!!” Nihl yelled.
Nihl had his hands above his head holding his lightsaber, and so did Kol. They hit one another’s lightsabers in mid-air! Kol’s green saber rubbed against Nihl’s red saber and they both flipped while their lightsabers still made contact! Then, dropping faster and faster, they jumped from each other and landed in the opposite side of one another on the ground! Kol smiled, landing on his knees getting up very slowly. Nihl also got up off his knees and smiled!
“Yahhh!” Kol yelled jumping into the air attacking Nihl with his hand above his head holding his lightsaber.
“Yahhh!” Nihl also had the same stance as Kol, jumping into the air with his hand above his head holding his red lightsaber.
By this time, a few minutes have passed. Cade was walking up the real stairs that went to the top of the Temple and overlooked the whole Temple. Cade watched his father fight while Wolf grew weaker and weaker. He still leaned on Cade.
BACK DOWN AT THE GROUND FLOOR:
Kol and Nihl still fight…
Nihl continues to flip and charges his lightsaber at Kol in the heart! Nihl lands and Kol falls! Nihl puts his hand in the air and shoots lightening at Kol! Kol blocks it with his saber, but growing weaker and weaker. Then Kol drops his lightsaber!
“A---HH!!” Kol screams as lightening hits him!
“Avenge my death!” Kol says.
“NO!! NO!!” Cade says crying!
“He was a good man,” Wolf told Cade trying to comfort him.
“We’re going to the get-a-way ship, follow me!” Cade told Wolf.
Cade walked upstairs to the flat roof where the Jedi X-Wing was. R2-D2 was on top of the X-Wing ready to pilot.
“R2, ready to pilot? Master Wolf has been hurt very bad!” Cade told R2-D2.
“The Sith didn’t come here for killing the Jedi, they came for the Emperor!” Wolf explained.
“The Emperor?” Cade asked him.
“The Emperor was hidden here and still is somewhere,” Wolf says.
“Sit back and relax,” Cade told him.
“I can’t…goodbye Cade…” Wolf told him lying down on a table, shutting his eyes and dying.
“NO! NO!” Cade said.
The X-Wing flew off!
ON THE GROUND AT THE JEDI TEMPLE:
All the Jedi and Sith lay dead in pools of blood, cut in half…
“I will not forget this Skywalker! I will kill you!!” Darth Nihl cries out!
INSIDE THE X-WING:
Cade closes his eyes wishing that Master Wolf could come back from the dead. His hands touch Master Wolf’s head. Cade’s hands turned blue…his eyes opened and also turned pitch blue! Suddenly, Master Wolf was lifted off the table into the air! Master Wolf was outlined with blue energy and then put down slowly! Cade blinked and then opens his eyes…Wolf woke up…
“I’m alive…and no, I sense the Sith!” Wolf said.
“The Sith?” Cade questioned him.
Outside the X-Wing, a tie fighter shoots the X-Wing down!
“NOOO!!” Wolf says.
The X-Wing blows up! Just as it blows up, Wolf jumps out leaving Cade for dead! Wolf lands in the tall grass and bushes! Ducking down, he sees Clone troopers on bikes flying by. But Wolf senses something…
“He’s not dead!” Wolf said fleeing away!
Chapter Two
AT THE SAME TIME ON A SMALL PLANET CALLED CORUSCANT:
The Planet Coruscant was like Earth, but more! When you looked at it from a spaceship, it looked like dozens of stars…like a star city! It was the most shiniest, prettiest planet you’ve ever put your eyes on! The old Jedi Temple was on Coruscant.
About one hundred and thirty years ago, a young Jedi Padawane by the name of Anakin Skywalker, trained there with his master Obi-Wan Kenobi. But one frightful day, Anakin turned to the dark side! The Jedi Temple was destroyed along with everyone in it!
Now, throughout the years, the Temple has been restored as the Sith Temple. In the Sith Temple is also the Empire, which is ran by Emperor Roan Fel. Now, as we speak, Emperor Fel is having a meeting with his ‘moff’ or his men, on the third floor. The Sith Temple had twelve floors and overlooked the whole city!
INSIDE THE TEMPLE:
Emperor Roan Fel talked to his men…
“We must make peace!” Roan said sitting at a long table, with him sitting in the middle and his men at the sides. Roan had gray hair; his nose was shaped like a beak; had blue eyes and wore a red robe with a military sign pin on it in the shape of an eagle, but chipped where one wing was.
“I agree!” his advisor said. He sat on the side of Roan. He also wore a red robe, brown pants, had gray hair and brown eyes.
“We kill our alliance with the Sith!” his other advisor said.
The golden doors open…
Three Sith walked in. All three masters…one Darth Maladi, Darth Nihl and the other…the Sith Lord himself!
“Is there a problem?” Roan asked them.
“You’re under arrest for the murders of the Sith and not upholding your alliance!” Darth Maladi told him. Darth Maladi had red skin, yellow eyes and her hair was in a ponytail. It was black. She wore a brown long sleeved shirt, brown pants, a black robe over them and held a red lightsaber.
“You dare arrest your own Emperor? You’re insane!” Roan told Krayt.
Roan smiled, still sitting at his table in his chair.
“Come with us!” Darth Maladi told him.
“Never!” he replied.
“Yahhh!” he jumped onto the table and used the force to launch himself like a missile to Darth Maladi and the others.
Darth Maladi blocked his attack with her red lightsaber. She hit Roan in the shoulder. Roan fell to the ground!
“AHH!! I will not let my people fall to you!” Roan said trying to get up.
“Then die!” Darth Nihl says slashing him in the heart! Roan falls to the ground!
“Kneel before your new Emperor! Your Emperor Krayt!” Maladi tells.
“Hail Krayt!!” the advisors bowed down to him! Krayt smiled!
A FEW MINUTES LATER IN THE LIBRARY HALL:
Darth Krayt and Darth Maladi…
“You wanted to see me?” Maladi asked Krayt.
“You fool! You failed me! It wasn’t him!” Krayt replied.
“But that’s impossible!” Maladi replied.
“Impossible? No! Roan is somewhere in the galaxy! The Roan you killed was his double! If we don’t find him, he will make allies with the Jedi! And our Temple…our Sith, will have been for nothing!” Krayt explains.
“You’re not a failure! I don’t like failures! You’ve been given a second chance! Maladi, fail me again and I will kill you!” Krayt told her.
“So, I’m your apprentice?” Maladi asked him.
“No, but I have found someone with the power to raise the dead! I can feel it!” Krayt said.
“He will be our most powerful ally!” Krayt said.
“What about Roan?” Maladi asked him.
“Search the galaxy! Kill him!!” he replied. Krayt smiled!
“Kill all the Jedi if he is with them!!” Krayt said.
(Blackout)
Chapter Three
It has been seven years since the great battle of the Jedi Temple on Ossus. Emperor Krayt has hunted down the real Roan Fel but failed. The empire has been taken over by the darkside.
Now as we speak, the five surviving Jedi go to the planet Daluuj, and have heard that a young bounty hunter by the name of Cade has been there. Master Wolf has told the other surviving four Jedi that Cade is alive. So they search for him. Little do they know what lurks for them!
PLANET DALUUJ:
The Planet Deluuj was a swampy planet. It had swamps, swamps and more swamps!
Master Wolf takes four surviving Jedi: a blue Twi’lek by the name of Shado Vao; a lion, crossed from a wookie and lion; a young green Twi’lek and her sister, a blue Twi’lek, to look for Cade Skywalker. They step on a bridge with droid heads stuck on spears. The bridge was made of rock and crossed the ocean swamp. There was about a three hundred foot jump down. There was another bridge across from it. It was quite a jump!
Shado looked at the droid heads on the spears. They were mostly Android heads.
“I bet that hurt!” Shado said touching one of the droid heads that looked like C-3PO’s head.
“I beg your pardon!” the droid head replied.
“Whoa?” Shado asked him.
“I am C-3PO and …” the droid head said.
“You’re C-3PO?” he asked again.
“Yes, and would you please hand me my body?” C-3PO asked him.
“Here!” Shado set it on the ground. The droid body got up. His hands yanked the droid’s head off and put it back on, but it was on backwards!
“Um…it’s backwards!” Shado told C-3PO.
“Well don’t just stand there, put it on right!” C-3PO told him.
“Quiet! I sense the Sith!!” Master Wolf told Shado.
“The Sith, they’re here?” the lion one said.
“Oh no! The Sith?” C-3PO questioned concerned.
A tie fighter flew in the gray foggy sky.
“Screech!” the tie fighter made that sound.
Red Sith dropped down with their lightsabers over there head.
“Not again!” Master Wolf said.
Then Darth Nihl flipped out of the sky onto the ground, landing on his knee with his right hand pushing himself off the ground slowly. He smiled!
“Attack!” Nihl said jumping to one of the Jedi. His hands were over his head, holding the red lightsaber jumping to the lion Jedi.
On the left side to him, was the blue Twi’lek girl with her sister and Master Wolf.
“Stay together,” Wolf told them.
“Oh my!” C-3PO said as a Sith landed in front of him.
“Yahhh!!” Shado yelled attacking the Sith by C-3PO and slashing them in half!
“Oh dear! Thank you!” C-3PO told Shado.
“You’re welcome!” Shado replied.
“Yahh!!” Wolf jumped in the air, turned his green lightsaber on and slashed a Sith in the chest! The Sith fell down!
“Shado, there are too many!” Wolf told him.
Just then, another tie fighter flew by.
“Stay near me!” Wolf told Shado.
The lion Jedi continued to fight Nihl. Nihl had his red lightsaber locked to the lion’s blue lightsaber.
“Goodbye Jedi!” Nihl told the lion one smiling! Nihl’s hand lifted and lightening came out of it striking the lion one.
“Master, NO!” one of the Twi’lek sisters cried!
“A-H-H!!” the lion one screamed!
Darth Nihl took his lightsaber and stabbed the lion one right in the heart! The lion one fell to the ground!
“A-H-H!” the Twi’lek sister said with a lightsaber in her stomach! A Sith pulled it out!
The other Twi’lek sister fights two Sith. The two Sith swing there lightsabers at her, but she blocks them with her lightsaber!
“Theirs only three of us and fifty of them! We can’t win!” Wolf told Shado.
“Agreed!” Shado said.
More tie fighters showed up and dropped Sith out. The Sith landed.
Shado lifted his hands!
“You’ve lost Jedi!” Nihl tells him.
Wolf points up. Nihl looks up. There is a clone trooper bike in the air.
“Uh oh!” Nihl says.
“Fall back!” Nihl yells!
Shado continues to lift his hand and close his eyes. The rock bridge begins to vibrate…rocks start to split on the bridge!
Shado continues to raise his hand! Half of the army is pushed by the Force and lifted off the bridge and some die! Some held on to the edge of a cliff.
Nihl lifts his hand up and takes a Sith lightsaber and attacks Wolf with two lightsabers!
“Yahhh!!” Nihl attacks Wolf.
Wolf blocks with his lightsaber.
“Oh dear!” C-3PO says as the bridge continues to drop.
Brick by brick, piece by piece…the bridge cracks in the middle where Nihl is on one side and Wolf is on the other! Finally the bridge cracked!!
“NOO!!” Nihl screamed!!
Master Wolf smiles, jumping up using the Force to the clone trooper bike onto the bottom. A clone trooper is driving the bike and Wolf flips on the back of the bike.
“Mind if I cut in?” Wolf asked the clone trooper cutting his head off and pushing him off with his green lightsaber. Then Master Wolf took control of the hover bike and flew away.
Nihl stood on another bridge across from the one that had collapsed.
“Curse you Jedi!” Nihl yelled!
The bridge continued to fall and flipped backward still falling. The Sith still fought the one Twi’lek Jedi and then the bridge fell into the swamp!
(Blackout)
Chapter Four
PLANET LOK:
The planet Lok was a desert planet. It was like Tatooine’s double. On the corner of the planet were small cities. This one in particular had a safe house to shelter bounty hunters, homeless wrecks among others. This shelter was called the “Cantina.”
A bounty hunter by the name of Naxy Screeger was hiding there and someone is trying to hunt him down. The “Cantina” consists of three parts: As you open the entrance door, which is made out of gold, you see a bar. However, there is a downstairs hidden behind the bar counter beneath the floor. The downstairs houses about a hundred and ten aliens, if not more! Downstairs is like a sewer with little huts around it beneath the surface. That way people will never know it exist.
This particular bounty hunter, Naxy Screeger, had almost every bounty on him. There was one crime Lord that he stole from, Hubba the Hutt. For five long months, Hubba has hired bounty hunter after bounty hunter, but they all have failed! Now Hubba has had it! He will give one hundred sheckles for the life of Naxy Screeger…dead or alive! A bounty hunter who the galaxy calls “the main man,” is hunting Naxy down as we speak.
Now, inside the Cantina Bar, Naxy begs his way into the downstairs shelter.
Naxy had pure gray skin, black eyes, vampire like teeth and a nose like a woodpecker. He also had two chipped earrings on each side of his ear in the shape of a promise ring. His head was looking all over the bar, seeing if any bounty hunter was there tracking him.
The bartender, whose name was Broger, had yellow skin; brown eyes; brown beard; a green cloak that covers his head, shoulders and whole body; and had slight gray hair.
“What did you get yourself into this time Naxy?” Broger asked him.
Broger knows his very well. Naxy comes here almost every month hiding from bounty hunters.
“I need shelter, please?” Naxy asked him.
Last time Naxy came here, he didn’t pay his credits or money. You see, staying the night here isn’t free!
“You didn’t pay last time! So NO!!” Broger replied.
“They’re after me!” Naxy said begging.
“That’s not my problem, is it?” Broger asked him.
On the other side of the room, a mysterious person drank “Forbeck,” a type of alien drink, but much worse than ours!
The mysterious person had a green, dark hood on; with a brown beard; a lion like brown nose; blue eyes; a lion like head; long blue hair; a tan robe that covered his body; and he was barefoot. In his hand, he had a pink cup that had “Forbeck” in it. He was talking to a yellow skinned alien. His name was Nako. He had long black hair to his shoulders, a blue bandana and red glasses over his head. The red glasses weren’t sunglasses; they were much bigger than sunglasses! He also had a black robe on.
“You’ve been meditating for months! Are you okay?” Nako asked the mysterious one.
The mysterious one has been at the Cantina for months drinking and meditating.
A target screen from a gun appeared outside with someone holding it ready to fire. The door entrance opens and the gun begins to fire at each drink on the bar table, breaking every glass cup…shattering!
“BOOM!” the bun fired!
A pink skinned woman appears with blue hair; brown eyes; blue lipstick; a low cut yellow t-shirt with a blue long sleeved shirt torn right in the middle; and a brown jacket on top of that; blue pants with yellow shorts on top of that; purple boots; black gloves; a silver necklace and a brown blaster in her hand. She stepped aside.
A dark, black man came in. He had long black hair and brown eyes. He had a black sleeveless shirt on with a gold half jacket, about a little kid’s size; a red tattoo on his right shoulder in the shape of a ‘V’; brown jeans; a belt; pair of black boots to his knees and a gray blaster in his hands with black gloves. He stepped aside.
The door went wide, opening and a slight windy breeze with dust came in.
An alien that was trying to get into the Cantina was thrown inside the Cantina. The alien was brown; furry; had a brown robe; two tan horns coming from his head; brown beard; dark brown furry skin; barefoot and had black gloves on his furry little hands!
The fog was in the air and dust. People were coughing. There were about 20 or 30 aliens at the tables drinking their drinks when they all looked up…the fog and smoke began to clear. A mysterious person walked a step and stopped!
The person was a “he!” He had long blonde hair to his shoulders; blue eyes; a slight goatee’; a black raincoat jacket on; black long sleeved shirt with golden armor from the neck down to the waist cutting off at the shoulder with a symbol carved in the middle of two “C’s” crossing each other, making an ‘O’ almost, but backwards; a red sleeveless shirt beneath the armor; black gloves; black long pants; a pair of brown boots and a golden blaster in each hand! This is the kind of guy you don’t want to mess with!! Everyone in the bar still looked up in fear and trembled!!
The mysterious long blonde haired man’s name was Cade! Cade looked around. The black man’s name was Jariah Syn.
“He’s here! I can smell him!” Syn told Cade.
“Spread out!” Cade told him.
The pink skinned girl, who was a type of Twi’lek, name was Deliah Blue.
“What about me?” Deliah asked Cade.
“You too! Spread out!” Cade replied.
Cade walked up to the bartender Brogar.
“I’m looking for Naxy Screeger, seen him?” Cade asked Brogar.
“Um?” Brogar replied.
“I’m not playing games! Now tell me where Naxy is Brogar, or I’ll blow your head to kingdom come!” Cade said pointing a gun to Brogar’s neck.
”He’s hiding over by the counter, honest!” Brogar replied, hoping Cade would spare his life.
Cade smiled, walking away from Brogar, aiming his gun at the bar table.
The mysterious lion creature covered his face with his hands as much as he could.
Cade pointed the gun at a table with glass cups and bottles and started firing at it!
“BOOM!!” Cade fired.
All the bottles and cups smashed into little tiny pieces! He fired again at a bottle near the mysterious lion like creature.
“I will not be taken!” the lion one said, getting up out of his chair and raising his hand up, force throwing chairs at Syn and Deliah.
“Duck!” Syn told Deliah.
“Get him! He’s a Jedi!” Brogar yelled telling everyone! Suddenly, the whole bar of alien people attacks the lion Jedi!
“I’m Hosk Trey’lis and I will not be taken!” the lion one Hosk said. He raised his hand and began to throw the aliens off of him.
“Catch that Jedi!” Deliah told Syn hiding under a table, ducking the chairs.
“Yeah, think of how many creds he’ll be worth!” Syn asked Deliah.
Hosk grabbed a lightsaber from his belt. There was a crowd over him. He turned his lightsaber on and sliced right thru the crowd!
“Syn, get the Jedi, I’m going after Naxy!” Cade yelled.
Naxy was running out to a back door. Cade followed. Cade ran up to Naxy and kicked him in the back of his back! Naxy fell down!
“You under estimate me Cade!” Naxy told him in an accent.
“Yeah?” Cade asked him.
“I have a blaster and I’m not afraid to use it!” Naxy said pulling a blaster out and pointing it at Cade.
BACK WITH SYN AND DELIAH:
Hosk runs pushing the doors open with the force.
Deliah had a bracelet that had a dart on it, and like a dart, she aimed it!
BACK WITH CADE AND NAXY:
“Now, you’re ‘gonna let me go!” Naxy told Cade.
“Fine Naxy! Fine!” Cade replied.
Naxy ran into Hosk. Hosk fell for a brief moment. Deliah fired her bracelet dart at Hosk! Cade lifted his hand and used the force to push Hosk to the dart! Hosk uses the force with his hands and pushes the dart into Deliah!
“A-H-H!!” Deliah falls to the ground.
“Not missing this time Jedi!” Syn said throwing a silver thud bug at Hosk, which bites him. Hosk falls down.
”NO!!” Naxy says.
“Oh yes! Oh yes! You’re coming with me!” Cade told Naxy.
The head of the bar, Brogar, walked up to Cade. Brogar had three red droids behind him.
“What is the meaning of this?” Brogar asked Cade.
“I can arrest you for assault and murder!” Brogar told Cade.
“And I can arrest you for hiding a Jedi! You know, that’s like the worst law you can break!” Cade replied.
“You can go, but only this once!” Brogar told him.
“Rav and the Hutt say hello!” Cade told Brogar. Cade walked out.
“As you were!” Cade told the aliens while walking out of the bar. Music began to play in the bar.
OUTSIDE THE BAR:
Cade had his speedster ready. Everyone got in.
“Where do we go now?” Deliah asked Cade.
“Home!” Cade replied.
“Home?” Syn asked him confused.
“To Rav and the Hutt!” Cade said.
“It seems your furry Jedi friend is still asleep!” Naxy said.
“Save it Naxy! Save it!” Cade told Naxy smiling.
The red speedster took off and flew away.
(Blackout)
BACK ON CORUSCANT IN THE SITH TEMPLE:
Emperor Krayt has asked for Darth Nihl in the Temple of Records room. As we speak, he is there waiting for Nihl. Nihl walks in…
“You have failed me!” Krayt told Nihl.
“I am sorry my Lord!” Nihl replied.
“You do not deserve to have the name---! Nihl’s, you are stripped from your title, and as for your punishment… Yahhh!!!” Krayt yells using his lightsaber and cutting off Nihl’s right hand!
“A-H-H-H!!” Nihl’s screams!
“Who will replace me?” Nihl asked Krayt.
Krayt looks at a hologram of the Sith training room as he watches the fight.
“My new apprentice is passing her test right now!” Krayt replies smiling.
IN THE SITH TRAINING ROOM:
Darth Ruyn trains his apprentice, Talon. Ruyn is a twi’lek with red skin; black tattoos all over his skin; orange eyes; in a black robe and with a red lightsaber. Talon, his apprentice, is also a red twi’lek. Twi’lek’s are a rare species that have one or two horns dropping down their ears to their chest. Talon is a red twi’lek with black tattoos like her Master, and like Darth Maul, her red face is covered in black tattoos. She has a low cut black cut-off armor bodysuit on which cuts off at the belly button; and long black pants with armor over them. She also had green eyes.
She and her master, Darth Ruyn trains. Talon is on the floor standing with her red lightsaber on.
“This is most Jedi’s fear! But I sense a great fear in you, but not about you…about me!” Ruyn told her.
“I’m sorry master. Yahhh!!!” Talon attacks Ruyn holding her red lightsaber over her head. Ruyn attacks! Their sabers lock!
“Why are you doing this?” Ruyn asked her.
Talon flips in the air and Ruyn flips and fights her with their sabers also locking together again.
“Because I have to!” she replied slicing Master Ruyn’s right hand off! Ruyn drops his red lightsaber. Master Ruyn falls to the ground! He bows to his knees.
Talon grabs her Master’s saber on the ground. She puts it right against his throat! Both of her sabers are in her right hand and her Master’s saber is in her left hand, crossing each other like an “X” on his throat.
“You would betray everything?” Ruyn asked her.
“Thank you Master for everything!” Talon tells him. She slices Ruyn’s throat and he dies.
Krayt walks in.
“ Very good! You are now my apprentice…my right hand! You are Darth Talon! Do not fail me!” Krayt told her.
“I will not fail you! I am honored Master! I am honored!” Talon replied.
“If the Emperor will not come to us, we’ll make him come to us with his daughter! She has a personal guard. Her name is Elke Vetter. She is an Imperial Knight. She is on our side! Kill her!!” Krayt says as Talon and Elke Vetter battle. Elke has a blue lightsaber with red armor on her neck down to her waist. Under it, a long sleeved black shirt. She is wearing a brown cape, black pants, black boots and has short blonde hair.
“You must die!” Talon tells her.
“The Princess has already left, Sith. She is safe!” Elke tells Talon.
“You have no further purpose anymore!” Talon says with lightening coming out of her hand. She slices Elke with her red saber and walks away.
Krayt watches a hologram of it and smiles!
NOT FAR, A MYSTERIOUS PRINCESS RUNS WITH A TWI’LEK GIRL IN THE MOUNTAINS CLIMBING:
“Are you alright?” the mysterious twi’lek girl asked the mysterious Princess.
“Hurry before the Sith find us…and daddy!” the mysterious Princess said.
The End??
Stay tuned for Part Two…
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song
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