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08-08-2008, 05:56 PM
2008 © Jeremiah Paul Song
GREEN
LANTERN
The Movie
PG-13
By Jeremiah Paul Song
PART ONE
Prologue
At the battleground in Iraq:
Bombs go off and soldiers die. The hard ground turns into a big, big deep hole and dust floats around, where you can’t see anything…
“Cough! Cough!” Hal says coughing as the dust he breaths into his lungs clogs them up, like the smog in Los Angeles.
“Rick, where are you?” Hal still coughs while looking in the dust for his buddy Rick.
As he is looking for his buddy, Hal buttons his shirt while his hands sweat. A bomb hits the ground and Hal falls.
“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!!!”
The bomb hits and stirs up the dust. Hal continues to cough until the dust goes away. He sees a hole in the ground and a ring is there…a green ring! Hal picks up the ring and puts it on his 2nd finger. The ring talks to him:
“The ring has chosen you!
You will shine your light at evil,
and no evil shall escape thy sight
of the GREEN LANTERN’S light!”
the ring tells him as everything goes white.
<blackout>
Chapter 1
One day before:
In San Francisco, at the Jordan mansion…
Hal walks down the stairs with two women in towels and long, wet, blonde hair. He is wearing a blue bathrobe and has brown-spiked, wet hair.
Hal’s butler comes up the stairs and tells Hal something.
“Your party is tonight,” the butler tells Hal.
“Okay,” Hal replies.
Later, at Hal’s party:
Hal is wearing a tux with his brown hair combed back. He talks to his guest…
“Thank you for coming to my birthday party! Please, raise your glasses! Cheers to my birthday! My friends! My beautiful job in the Navy! And to you Rick!” Hal lifts a wine glass up in his left hand.
A few minutes later:
Hal goes over to the bar area and pours some more wine. A girl with short, black hair and a low-cut white dress asks Hal…
“Hey birthday boy! Are you free tonight?” the girl asked Hal lowering her dress.
“Sure! My place! Upstairs!” he says.
A few minutes later, Hal and the woman kiss as Hal opens the bedroom door…
“A-H!! Nice place! Where’s the bed?” she asked while kissing him.
“Right here!” Hal says.
She pushes him on the bed.
“Kiss me!” she kisses him as she starts to take off his jacket.
“So, you’re in the war?” she asked him.”
“Yeah! Why are you stopping?” Hal asked her.
“Do you pilot?” she asked him back.
“Yes,” Hal says.
“What if I offered you a job? Top Secret in the Air Force?” she asked him.
“Who are you?” he questioned her back.
“Carol Ferris, US Air Force,” she replies.
“You’re coming with me!” she tells Hal.
“My birthday is today!” Hal says.
“Well, Happy Birthday flyboy!! You’re the US Air Force’s property! See you tomorrow in the morning!” she tells him.
“What? This doesn’t mean you can’t have some fun before?? It’s only midnight!” Hal tells her.
“What the heck! I don’t usually do this with the people or employees from work, but…” she kisses him and they fall off the bed.
<blackout>
The next morning:
Hal gets up and is getting ready for the day…
He grabs his toothbrush and brushes his teeth stroke by stroke. Then he buttons up his blue flannel shirt, button by button. He tucks the shirt in his black pants and combs his brown, spiked hair back, then goes downstairs.
About 2 ½ hours later at the US Air Force Base in San Francisco:
Hal gets dressed in the pilot suit in the bathroom, when Carol comes in…
“Be careful out there,” she tells him while touching his shoulder.
“I will. I will,” he buttons his shirt, looking at himself in the mirror.
A few minutes later:
Hal gets ready to pilot the jet. He sees other pilots with their own jets…and Carol…
“Who are they?” Hal questions out loud.
An older man walks into the area wearing a General’s uniform. “These are your team mates!” he answers Hal.
Hal turns to the right and sees someone he knows.
“Rick? Rick Flag?” Hal asked a guy that is a little overweight, has orange hair, tall and muscular.
“Hey Hal! Good to see you buddy! It’s been a long time!” Rick tells him.
“I’m the General! Your job is to test our new prototype jet along with the other pilots. You will do a surprise attack on Iraq. Get in your jet, boy!” he tells Hal.
“Yes sir!” Hal replies.
“Be careful up there pilot!” Carol tells him.
“Yes mam!” he replies.
“Not to interrupt your family reunion, but get your hides on the jets!” the General tells them.
“Yes mam!” Hal replies.
“What did you call me boy?” the General asked Hal.
“Nothing!” Hal replies chuckling.
The General walks away.
“Word to the wise, don’t tease my father!” Carol tells him.
“Yes sir!” Hal chuckles.
“Come on lover boy, the jet isn’t ‘gonna fly on its own, is it?” Rick asked Hal while getting in his seat in the jet.
“Let’s get these babies off the ground!” Carol tells them.
“Coming!” Hal replies.
“Be careful!” Carol tells Hal, kissing him.
“Come on, lover boy!” Rick tells Hal.
“I’m coming!!” Hal holds Carol’s hand, and then runs up the ladder to his seat.
He pushes a button and the hatch closes. He turns on the engine.
“You ready flyboy? Let’s go!” Rick tells him on the headphone.
“Okay, Flaggie!” Hal replies while taking off the ground with the other jets.
“You’re in love with daddy’s girl? Carol Ferris? Dang!” Flag tells Hal on the headphone.
“Yeah! You got a problem with that Rick?” Hal asked him.
“Yeah, Carol’s family!” Rick says.
“By family, you mean your girlfriend?” Hal says.
“Shut up!” Rick says.
“Cool off!” another pilot says.
A few hours later:
The pilots still talk as they continue flying…
“Peace out dude!” Hal puts his hand in a ‘gang sign’ to the window to Rick while inside the jet.
“Oh yeah! Well, peace to you…crud!!” Rick says as a ‘rock’ hits his jet.
“Rick!! NOOO!!!” Hal says.
“Oh crud!” Hal says as he sees a meteor hit his own jet.
“A-H-H-H-H!!” Hal screams as the cockpit window breaks into pieces. Hal ejects out of the jet and his parachute comes open. He crashes on the ground. He sees dust stirring up in the sky…bombs go off on the ground…soldiers screaming, “A-H-H!! and Yahh!!”
Hal coughs as the dust stirs up in his lungs. Fog covers the sky and the ground where he can’t see a thing!
The dust clears away and Hal sees a hole in the ground with fire outlining it. A green ring is inside the hole. Hal picks it up and puts the ring on the finger. A voice of an older man, along with images of a blue skinned dwarf; with long white hair, green eyes, a red outfit on that has a lantern on it; says, “The ring has chosen you! It has chosen well, Hal Jordan!” green eyes stare at Hal Jordan and another familiar voice says, “Wake up Hal…Hal…Hal…” a woman’s voice tells Hal.
Hal wakes up seeing Carol leaning over him. The General is there also.
Chapter 2
One week later:
Hal wakes up seeing Carol and the General in a room. He finds himself in a bed…
“Where am I?” Hal asked them.
“You’ve been in a coma for a week. Your jet went down, but you’re okay,” Carol tells him.
“Rick…is he…?” Hal asked her.
“No, I’m not…” Rick appears.
“I ‘gotta get up…A-H-H-H my head!” Hal says trying to get out of bed.
“Easy!” Carol tells him.
“Maybe I’ll walk tomorrow!” Hal says.
The next day:
Hal is pushed in a wheelchair by Carol…
“I’m not a baby Carol!” Hal tells her getting out of his wheelchair.
“The doctor said…” Carol tries to tell him.
“The doctor said, when I am ready I can get out of this chair! It’s your lucky day, because I’m ready now! If you will excuse me, I have a meeting to go to…” Hal walks away.
Back at the mansion:
Hal opens up gold-double doors and sees a whole bunch of people. He clears his throat and then begins to talk…
“Thank you! Thank you! As you know, I’ve been in a coma for a week and experienced some injuries. Now, I’m back and ready to fly again. Also, I’m going to takeover my father’s industry. So, goodnight and good luck!!” he tells the people.
Later that day:
Hal goes in his bedroom and goes to his drawer. He opens it and gets out the green ring that he put on his finger while in the fight in Iraq…
He said to himself, “you got some explaining to do, like why there’s a ring shaped birthmark on my hand! Okay, it’s time to see what you can really do!” He puts the ring on.
“Nothing!” he replies to himself.
“Use your will!” a voice tells Hal.
“My will? Whoa!” Hal’s clothes transform into a black leotard suit with a green symbol.
He flies up and breaks a hole in the ceiling. He finds himself flying over the city.
“Whoa! Heck!?!?” he can’t get control of flying! He’s going so fast he turns totally on fire…light green fire all around him!
He flies by a car…almost hitting it…then a building…then goes up like a speeding bullet by a wing of a skyscraper, on the side of the building where a girl in a meeting sees him and says to other workers,” Whoa? Look up in the sky! It’s a bird…it’s a plane…Whoa…the Lantern man???”
Hal still continues to go up until he’s out of orbit, hovering above earth.
“Cool! Whoa!!” Hal starts falling…he falls until suddenly, he stops over clouds! A jet is nearby.
“General, we have an unidentified object and it’s…it’s stopped in midair!” a pilot tells the General on his headphone.
“Shoot it down!!” the General replies.
“Yes sir! You hear that, daddy’s girl?” the pilot asked a girl pilot on his headphone.
A few miles in the air from him, the girl pilot replies, “ I hear you! By the way, it’s Carol Ferris! I’m coming in!” she moves her jet sideways to find the other pilot.
Back with Hal hovering over clouds…
“Okay, I’m getting the hang of this! Let’s see what else you can do!” Hal says. There is rocket, green fire coming out of his boots. He flies away at super-speed with green energy outlining his whole body.
“General, the target is moving at super speed! He’s over the White House!” the pilot tells the General.
“Shoot it down!! This is a national security threat now!! All five pilots up there:
SHOOT TO KILL!!” the General tells them.
“Yes sir!!” the five pilots reply at the same time.
“Understood, sir General, sir! Ready to lock on target!!” one pilot says.
“I see him! We’re doing attack 44.9! Boys, let’s go!” Carol tells them while flying her jet up.
“Understood, daddy’s girl!” Pilot Rick Flag tells Carol while flying his jet sideways.
The other jets follow; forming a “V,” they point up and do a flip, then land straight ahead, seeing Hal.
“Target locked! Let’s bring this shark home! Boys, shall we?” Carol asked the other pilots while being the leader.
“Permission to fire, sir?” Rick asks the General.
“Permission to fire! On my mark…5, 4, 3, 2, lock on target, 1, fire!” General tells him.
Rick fires the missile at Hal.
“Oh shoot! Come on! Yaaahhh!!” Hal points his lantern and grabs the missile with a force field coming out of the ring. He throws the missile back at the pilots.
“Where did it go?” Rick asked the other pilots.
“Oh crud!” one of the other pilots said as the missile blew up his jet.
“BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!” the jet explodes!
“Son of a twitch!” Rick says.
“Shoot the twitch down…whatever it takes!!” Carol tells Rick.
“Position exercise 1.110! Positions ready…2nd attack…aim…target locked…ready…fire!!” Carol fires at Hal.
“Oh! So they want play!! Then let’s play!!” Hal says catching the missiles with his ring and throwing them back at the jets.
“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!” two jets blow up!
“Son of a twitch! We lost two more jets! General, I’m going in! Cover me!” Carol tells the General.
“Carol…NO!!” Rick says.
Carol’s jet moves closer to fire… “Target lost!” Carol says.
“Darn!” General replies.
“Hey, General’s daughter, be careful!” Rick tells her.
“Turn all sound off now!” Carol tells all the pilots that are left.
“Turning off!” Rick replies. “All sound is turned off!”
Rick spots something… “Oh crud! Oh crud!” Rick says.
“What?” Carol asked him.
“He’s on the tail of my jet, holding on!” Rick says.
“Son of a twitch! Shake him off!” Carol replies.
“Roger!” Rick says.
Rick flies down…upside down, trying to shake him off.
“That darn son of a twitch won’t shake off!” Rick says as Hal still holds on.
Rick does another circle by the water…almost touching the jet with the water. The water turns into waves and it follows the jet. Rick’s jet then flies straight up.
“A-H-H-H-H!!” Hal tries to hold on because he’s starting to fall sideways.
“He’s falling!” Rick tells Carol.
Hal jumps off the jet.
“Whewww!!” Hal flies in the middle of the air, viewing the 2 jets left.
“What the freakin’ son a twitch devil is that?” Rick asked Carol while looking at Hal.
Hal hears a frequency and wishes he had his cell phone. Suddenly, a green headphone appears on his ear.
“Hello??” Hal questioned the headphone.
“I know you can hear me! What the devil are you?” the General asked Hal on his headphone.
“I’m one of the good guys!” Hal replies.
“Who the heck are you?” General demanded him.
“I’m the GREEN LANTERN!” Hal replies.
“Son of a twitch!” General says.
“A-H-H-H-H!!” Hal starts falling and his ring turns ‘plain’ green instead of ‘lighting up’ green…he falls.
“Son of a devil! Is he falling?” Rick asked Carol.
“Yes, he is!” Carol replies.
“And you didn’t even get his phone number!” Rick tells Carol.
Back with Hal falling…
“Come on ring, PLEASE! A parachute or something…come on!” Hal hits the ring hoping a parachute will come out as his GREEN LANTERN suit disappears. His regular clothes come back…wearing a tan t-shirt, pants and black dress shoes…size 9 to be exact!
“Oh crud!” Hal sees a window on a skyscraper and hits the window. The glass window shatters into a million pieces and he then hits the ground…a smooth wood floor inside a kitchen.
“I ‘gotta work on that landing!” Hal replies.
……stay tuned for more……
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song
GREEN
LANTERN
The Movie
PG-13
By Jeremiah Paul Song
PART ONE
Prologue
At the battleground in Iraq:
Bombs go off and soldiers die. The hard ground turns into a big, big deep hole and dust floats around, where you can’t see anything…
“Cough! Cough!” Hal says coughing as the dust he breaths into his lungs clogs them up, like the smog in Los Angeles.
“Rick, where are you?” Hal still coughs while looking in the dust for his buddy Rick.
As he is looking for his buddy, Hal buttons his shirt while his hands sweat. A bomb hits the ground and Hal falls.
“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!!!”
The bomb hits and stirs up the dust. Hal continues to cough until the dust goes away. He sees a hole in the ground and a ring is there…a green ring! Hal picks up the ring and puts it on his 2nd finger. The ring talks to him:
“The ring has chosen you!
You will shine your light at evil,
and no evil shall escape thy sight
of the GREEN LANTERN’S light!”
the ring tells him as everything goes white.
<blackout>
Chapter 1
One day before:
In San Francisco, at the Jordan mansion…
Hal walks down the stairs with two women in towels and long, wet, blonde hair. He is wearing a blue bathrobe and has brown-spiked, wet hair.
Hal’s butler comes up the stairs and tells Hal something.
“Your party is tonight,” the butler tells Hal.
“Okay,” Hal replies.
Later, at Hal’s party:
Hal is wearing a tux with his brown hair combed back. He talks to his guest…
“Thank you for coming to my birthday party! Please, raise your glasses! Cheers to my birthday! My friends! My beautiful job in the Navy! And to you Rick!” Hal lifts a wine glass up in his left hand.
A few minutes later:
Hal goes over to the bar area and pours some more wine. A girl with short, black hair and a low-cut white dress asks Hal…
“Hey birthday boy! Are you free tonight?” the girl asked Hal lowering her dress.
“Sure! My place! Upstairs!” he says.
A few minutes later, Hal and the woman kiss as Hal opens the bedroom door…
“A-H!! Nice place! Where’s the bed?” she asked while kissing him.
“Right here!” Hal says.
She pushes him on the bed.
“Kiss me!” she kisses him as she starts to take off his jacket.
“So, you’re in the war?” she asked him.”
“Yeah! Why are you stopping?” Hal asked her.
“Do you pilot?” she asked him back.
“Yes,” Hal says.
“What if I offered you a job? Top Secret in the Air Force?” she asked him.
“Who are you?” he questioned her back.
“Carol Ferris, US Air Force,” she replies.
“You’re coming with me!” she tells Hal.
“My birthday is today!” Hal says.
“Well, Happy Birthday flyboy!! You’re the US Air Force’s property! See you tomorrow in the morning!” she tells him.
“What? This doesn’t mean you can’t have some fun before?? It’s only midnight!” Hal tells her.
“What the heck! I don’t usually do this with the people or employees from work, but…” she kisses him and they fall off the bed.
<blackout>
The next morning:
Hal gets up and is getting ready for the day…
He grabs his toothbrush and brushes his teeth stroke by stroke. Then he buttons up his blue flannel shirt, button by button. He tucks the shirt in his black pants and combs his brown, spiked hair back, then goes downstairs.
About 2 ½ hours later at the US Air Force Base in San Francisco:
Hal gets dressed in the pilot suit in the bathroom, when Carol comes in…
“Be careful out there,” she tells him while touching his shoulder.
“I will. I will,” he buttons his shirt, looking at himself in the mirror.
A few minutes later:
Hal gets ready to pilot the jet. He sees other pilots with their own jets…and Carol…
“Who are they?” Hal questions out loud.
An older man walks into the area wearing a General’s uniform. “These are your team mates!” he answers Hal.
Hal turns to the right and sees someone he knows.
“Rick? Rick Flag?” Hal asked a guy that is a little overweight, has orange hair, tall and muscular.
“Hey Hal! Good to see you buddy! It’s been a long time!” Rick tells him.
“I’m the General! Your job is to test our new prototype jet along with the other pilots. You will do a surprise attack on Iraq. Get in your jet, boy!” he tells Hal.
“Yes sir!” Hal replies.
“Be careful up there pilot!” Carol tells him.
“Yes mam!” he replies.
“Not to interrupt your family reunion, but get your hides on the jets!” the General tells them.
“Yes mam!” Hal replies.
“What did you call me boy?” the General asked Hal.
“Nothing!” Hal replies chuckling.
The General walks away.
“Word to the wise, don’t tease my father!” Carol tells him.
“Yes sir!” Hal chuckles.
“Come on lover boy, the jet isn’t ‘gonna fly on its own, is it?” Rick asked Hal while getting in his seat in the jet.
“Let’s get these babies off the ground!” Carol tells them.
“Coming!” Hal replies.
“Be careful!” Carol tells Hal, kissing him.
“Come on, lover boy!” Rick tells Hal.
“I’m coming!!” Hal holds Carol’s hand, and then runs up the ladder to his seat.
He pushes a button and the hatch closes. He turns on the engine.
“You ready flyboy? Let’s go!” Rick tells him on the headphone.
“Okay, Flaggie!” Hal replies while taking off the ground with the other jets.
“You’re in love with daddy’s girl? Carol Ferris? Dang!” Flag tells Hal on the headphone.
“Yeah! You got a problem with that Rick?” Hal asked him.
“Yeah, Carol’s family!” Rick says.
“By family, you mean your girlfriend?” Hal says.
“Shut up!” Rick says.
“Cool off!” another pilot says.
A few hours later:
The pilots still talk as they continue flying…
“Peace out dude!” Hal puts his hand in a ‘gang sign’ to the window to Rick while inside the jet.
“Oh yeah! Well, peace to you…crud!!” Rick says as a ‘rock’ hits his jet.
“Rick!! NOOO!!!” Hal says.
“Oh crud!” Hal says as he sees a meteor hit his own jet.
“A-H-H-H-H!!” Hal screams as the cockpit window breaks into pieces. Hal ejects out of the jet and his parachute comes open. He crashes on the ground. He sees dust stirring up in the sky…bombs go off on the ground…soldiers screaming, “A-H-H!! and Yahh!!”
Hal coughs as the dust stirs up in his lungs. Fog covers the sky and the ground where he can’t see a thing!
The dust clears away and Hal sees a hole in the ground with fire outlining it. A green ring is inside the hole. Hal picks it up and puts the ring on the finger. A voice of an older man, along with images of a blue skinned dwarf; with long white hair, green eyes, a red outfit on that has a lantern on it; says, “The ring has chosen you! It has chosen well, Hal Jordan!” green eyes stare at Hal Jordan and another familiar voice says, “Wake up Hal…Hal…Hal…” a woman’s voice tells Hal.
Hal wakes up seeing Carol leaning over him. The General is there also.
Chapter 2
One week later:
Hal wakes up seeing Carol and the General in a room. He finds himself in a bed…
“Where am I?” Hal asked them.
“You’ve been in a coma for a week. Your jet went down, but you’re okay,” Carol tells him.
“Rick…is he…?” Hal asked her.
“No, I’m not…” Rick appears.
“I ‘gotta get up…A-H-H-H my head!” Hal says trying to get out of bed.
“Easy!” Carol tells him.
“Maybe I’ll walk tomorrow!” Hal says.
The next day:
Hal is pushed in a wheelchair by Carol…
“I’m not a baby Carol!” Hal tells her getting out of his wheelchair.
“The doctor said…” Carol tries to tell him.
“The doctor said, when I am ready I can get out of this chair! It’s your lucky day, because I’m ready now! If you will excuse me, I have a meeting to go to…” Hal walks away.
Back at the mansion:
Hal opens up gold-double doors and sees a whole bunch of people. He clears his throat and then begins to talk…
“Thank you! Thank you! As you know, I’ve been in a coma for a week and experienced some injuries. Now, I’m back and ready to fly again. Also, I’m going to takeover my father’s industry. So, goodnight and good luck!!” he tells the people.
Later that day:
Hal goes in his bedroom and goes to his drawer. He opens it and gets out the green ring that he put on his finger while in the fight in Iraq…
He said to himself, “you got some explaining to do, like why there’s a ring shaped birthmark on my hand! Okay, it’s time to see what you can really do!” He puts the ring on.
“Nothing!” he replies to himself.
“Use your will!” a voice tells Hal.
“My will? Whoa!” Hal’s clothes transform into a black leotard suit with a green symbol.
He flies up and breaks a hole in the ceiling. He finds himself flying over the city.
“Whoa! Heck!?!?” he can’t get control of flying! He’s going so fast he turns totally on fire…light green fire all around him!
He flies by a car…almost hitting it…then a building…then goes up like a speeding bullet by a wing of a skyscraper, on the side of the building where a girl in a meeting sees him and says to other workers,” Whoa? Look up in the sky! It’s a bird…it’s a plane…Whoa…the Lantern man???”
Hal still continues to go up until he’s out of orbit, hovering above earth.
“Cool! Whoa!!” Hal starts falling…he falls until suddenly, he stops over clouds! A jet is nearby.
“General, we have an unidentified object and it’s…it’s stopped in midair!” a pilot tells the General on his headphone.
“Shoot it down!!” the General replies.
“Yes sir! You hear that, daddy’s girl?” the pilot asked a girl pilot on his headphone.
A few miles in the air from him, the girl pilot replies, “ I hear you! By the way, it’s Carol Ferris! I’m coming in!” she moves her jet sideways to find the other pilot.
Back with Hal hovering over clouds…
“Okay, I’m getting the hang of this! Let’s see what else you can do!” Hal says. There is rocket, green fire coming out of his boots. He flies away at super-speed with green energy outlining his whole body.
“General, the target is moving at super speed! He’s over the White House!” the pilot tells the General.
“Shoot it down!! This is a national security threat now!! All five pilots up there:
SHOOT TO KILL!!” the General tells them.
“Yes sir!!” the five pilots reply at the same time.
“Understood, sir General, sir! Ready to lock on target!!” one pilot says.
“I see him! We’re doing attack 44.9! Boys, let’s go!” Carol tells them while flying her jet up.
“Understood, daddy’s girl!” Pilot Rick Flag tells Carol while flying his jet sideways.
The other jets follow; forming a “V,” they point up and do a flip, then land straight ahead, seeing Hal.
“Target locked! Let’s bring this shark home! Boys, shall we?” Carol asked the other pilots while being the leader.
“Permission to fire, sir?” Rick asks the General.
“Permission to fire! On my mark…5, 4, 3, 2, lock on target, 1, fire!” General tells him.
Rick fires the missile at Hal.
“Oh shoot! Come on! Yaaahhh!!” Hal points his lantern and grabs the missile with a force field coming out of the ring. He throws the missile back at the pilots.
“Where did it go?” Rick asked the other pilots.
“Oh crud!” one of the other pilots said as the missile blew up his jet.
“BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!” the jet explodes!
“Son of a twitch!” Rick says.
“Shoot the twitch down…whatever it takes!!” Carol tells Rick.
“Position exercise 1.110! Positions ready…2nd attack…aim…target locked…ready…fire!!” Carol fires at Hal.
“Oh! So they want play!! Then let’s play!!” Hal says catching the missiles with his ring and throwing them back at the jets.
“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!” two jets blow up!
“Son of a twitch! We lost two more jets! General, I’m going in! Cover me!” Carol tells the General.
“Carol…NO!!” Rick says.
Carol’s jet moves closer to fire… “Target lost!” Carol says.
“Darn!” General replies.
“Hey, General’s daughter, be careful!” Rick tells her.
“Turn all sound off now!” Carol tells all the pilots that are left.
“Turning off!” Rick replies. “All sound is turned off!”
Rick spots something… “Oh crud! Oh crud!” Rick says.
“What?” Carol asked him.
“He’s on the tail of my jet, holding on!” Rick says.
“Son of a twitch! Shake him off!” Carol replies.
“Roger!” Rick says.
Rick flies down…upside down, trying to shake him off.
“That darn son of a twitch won’t shake off!” Rick says as Hal still holds on.
Rick does another circle by the water…almost touching the jet with the water. The water turns into waves and it follows the jet. Rick’s jet then flies straight up.
“A-H-H-H-H!!” Hal tries to hold on because he’s starting to fall sideways.
“He’s falling!” Rick tells Carol.
Hal jumps off the jet.
“Whewww!!” Hal flies in the middle of the air, viewing the 2 jets left.
“What the freakin’ son a twitch devil is that?” Rick asked Carol while looking at Hal.
Hal hears a frequency and wishes he had his cell phone. Suddenly, a green headphone appears on his ear.
“Hello??” Hal questioned the headphone.
“I know you can hear me! What the devil are you?” the General asked Hal on his headphone.
“I’m one of the good guys!” Hal replies.
“Who the heck are you?” General demanded him.
“I’m the GREEN LANTERN!” Hal replies.
“Son of a twitch!” General says.
“A-H-H-H-H!!” Hal starts falling and his ring turns ‘plain’ green instead of ‘lighting up’ green…he falls.
“Son of a devil! Is he falling?” Rick asked Carol.
“Yes, he is!” Carol replies.
“And you didn’t even get his phone number!” Rick tells Carol.
Back with Hal falling…
“Come on ring, PLEASE! A parachute or something…come on!” Hal hits the ring hoping a parachute will come out as his GREEN LANTERN suit disappears. His regular clothes come back…wearing a tan t-shirt, pants and black dress shoes…size 9 to be exact!
“Oh crud!” Hal sees a window on a skyscraper and hits the window. The glass window shatters into a million pieces and he then hits the ground…a smooth wood floor inside a kitchen.
“I ‘gotta work on that landing!” Hal replies.
……stay tuned for more……
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song