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08-08-2008, 05:52 PM
2008 © Jeremiah Paul Song
THE
INCREDIBLE
HULK
Episode 3
“Ravage”
PG
By Jeremiah Paul Song
Previously on “THE INCREDIBLE HULK”:
A man with amnesia of ‘WHO’ he is…hunted down by the military. He’s on the run from General Ross and Blonsky. Now, he’s going home where it all began. He met a new ally: Samuel Sterns. Bruce is going from state to state…a fugitive.
Bruce Banner must find out ‘WHO’ he is and find a cure for the HULK!
And now…
“Ravage”
DAY 11
LOCATION: Just heading into Dallas, Texas
TIME: 10 AM in a blue SUV
BRUCE NARRATES…
“It’s Day 11. Our credit cards, money and gas have run out. I’ve met a new friend, Samuel Sterns. And so it begins…”
“We’re out of money and my last credit card has gone zilch!” Stearns told them.
“And our gas is almost gone,” Betty said.
“We should get jobs,” Bruce replied.
“Yeah, I should be a teacher. Betty, you’re a nurse and Bruce can also be a teacher,” Sterns told them while looking at a newspaper.
“No way!” Betty said.
“It says it in the newspaper!” Sterns replied.
“Then I guess you’re a nurse Betty, Sterns a teacher and I’m a teacher too!” Bruce told them smiling.
DALLAS UNIVERSITY
“Hi, I’m the new assistant teacher in Science here,” Bruce told an older man whose name was Crawford. He had a long brown beard and long brown hair.
“I’m Crawford, you’ll be working with me,” Crawford replied smiling with his eyes turning green.
(song: “Don’t Make Me Angry” theme song)
MILITARY BASE
General Ross talks to Blonsky…
“Blonsky, you think just because I’m old and gray…I’m dumb??” Ross asked him.
“No sir,” Blonsky replied.
“Next time, there won’t be any grace Blonsky!” Ross told him.
“Yes sir!” Blonsky replied.
Ross smiled in an evil way.
DAY 12
LOCATION: University of Dallas, Texas
TIME: 7 PM
“Okay class, you all know what we learned last week. Now, today we have a special guest…Dr. Robert James. Give him a nice warm welcome,” Dr. Crawford told his class.
“Thank you! Thank you! In today’s class, we’re going to learn about science…” Dr. James told them.
…3 HOURS LATER…
The bell rings…
“…and that concludes the class. I will see you next week,” Crawford told them.
“Um, we need to talk to you,” two male students told Crawford. All the students leave but the two males.
“Come with me to my truck. I have to carry some stuff,” Crawford told them.
A FEW MINUTES LATER:
Outside…
Crawford puts books into his truck.
“So, what did you want to tell me?” Crawford asked.
“Well, we’re into football,” the younger, braver brother said.
“That’s great!” Crawford replied.
“Well, we don’t have time for both!” he said.
“What are you saying? You don’t have time for science AND football…both? You want to quit science and join football?” Crawford asked them.
“Well, yeah!” he replied.
“A-H-H-H!!” Crawford said with his eyes turning green.
Dr. James watched from a window in the building.
“Okay, we’re staying!!” the younger, braver brother told Crawford while afraid.
Dr. James walked outside. The two boys ran to him.
“Thought you guys were going to quit science?” Dr. James asked them.
“We changed our minds!” the boy said.
“Did Dr. Crawford have something to do with this?” Dr. James asked him.
“He’s a crazy man! Run while you still can!!” he told Dr. James as they ran off.
Dr. Crawford fell on the concrete.
“A-H-H-H!!” Crawford yelled. Dr. James ran to him.
“Get my wheelchair from the lab!” Crawford told him.
Dr. James ran to the lab. He grabbed the wheelchair.
MILITARY BASE:
Blonsky talks to 7 soldiers…
“Any of you want to tell ‘who’ told the General our conversation from lastnight?” Blonsky asked the soldiers.
“No?? Okay, then let me show you what I do to liars!” Blonsky told them.
“It’s Samuel Rogers, right?” Blonsky asked a soldier.
“Yes sir!” he replied.
“And do you have a family?” Blonsky asked him again.
“Yes sir! Two kids and a beautiful wife, sir!” he replied.
“I’ll say ‘hi’ to your wife for you!” Blonsky told him while shooting him with his gun! Blonsky smiled!
“Anyone else?” Blonsky asked them.
“Then…!!” he told them, shooting all of them but one!
”You’re in charge now!” Blonsky told the one soldier.
“Yes sir!” he replied.
“A-H-H-H!” Blonsky said.
“Are you okay sir?” the soldier asked Blonsky.
“Fine!” Blonsky smiled with his eyes lighting up green!
Blonsky ran off to his closed off room and shut the door. There was opera music. Blonsky injected himself with a shot and then smiled. There were “tons” of empty syringes on the floor.
IN DR. CRAWFORD’S LAB:
Crawford is in a wheelchair talking to Dr. James…
“So, how did…?” Dr. James asked Crawford.
“I was with my family in a river swimming when there were bright lights up in the sky. It was sunny, but it started to rain in the water. The bright lights were gamma bombs…sometimes I can walk and sometimes I can’t,” Crawford explained.
“I’m sorry,” Dr. James told him.
“um…I’m going to need your blood sample,” Crawford told him.
“What for?” Dr. James asked him.
“Just so if you ever kill…or are a fugitive…or something…but I won’t look at it!” Crawford explained.
“Okay,” Dr. James replied.
A FEW MINUTES LATER:
After Crawford drew the blood sample…
He examines it in his lab!
“Incredible!! His DNA…it’s gamma infected like I’ve never seen!! All that power to one man!!” Crawford said outloud looking at it with his microscope.
“WHO are you really? Computer, WHO is this DNA?” Crawford asked his computer.
“Bruce Banner…a fugitive in 5 states now!” the computer replied.
“Ross…he’s looking for him!” Crawford said to himself.
MILITARY BASE:
A telephone rings, Ross picks it up…
“Hello?” he questions.
“Hi, this is Dr. Crawford at the University of Dallas, Texas. I’m calling because one of my associates is a fugitive. His name is Dr. Bruce Banner!” Crawford told Ross.
“Banner?? Thanks!!” Ross said hanging up.
Crawford hung up smiling.
“Blonsky, we found Banner! He’s at a University here…let’s go!” Ross told Blonsky.
“Yes sir!” Blonsky replied.
“And if you’re trying to play the kill card, don’t murder your own men!” Ross told him.
“Yes sir!” Blonsky replied.
AT A GAS STATION NEARBY:
“Fill ‘er up please!” a mysterious man told the gas station attendant.
“Yes sir!” he replied.
The stranger had a blue pickup.
“Have you seen a young couple pass by here…let’s say, a few hours ago?” the stranger asked the gas station attendant.
“No, I can’t give you personal information!” the attendant said.
“Answer this, Agent 1.22!” the stranger got out of his truck, loaded his gun and shot the gas station attendant in the heart!
The stranger turned around and it was none other than Betty’s fiancé’, Leonard Samson smiling!
“I’m back…and nothing is going to stop me from being with you!” he said still smiling and leaving the gun on the ground.
HOSPITAL
Betty has been working as a kids nurse. Another nurse tells her something…
“Your dad is here to see you,” the nurse tells Betty.
“My dad?” RUN!!!” Betty replied.
“Not so fast Betty!” Blonsky told her.
“What do you want?” Betty asked him.
“Don’t worry! I came alone,” Blonsky replied.
“What are you doing here?” she asked him.
“I need your help!” Blonsky told her.
“With what?” she asked him again.
“Something is happening to me. Something big and powerful! I know you have it too!” he explained.
“No, you’re a gamma freak!” Betty replied.
“Please, don’t tell the General about this…please!” he begged her.
“Then STOP chasing us!” she told him.
“Fine, just this once!” he replied.
“Meet me at the University…midnight!” she said.
“Done!” he replied smiling.
NEXT MORNING:
Sterns and Bruce talk…
“Okay, while you were doing teaching, I was doing some researching. This machine can track gamma energy, as you know. Well, it can track someone here from a state away! By the way, there’s someone here that is a massive, massive radiation! It’s getting closer and closer!” Sterns said.
“Boo!! I’m Dr. Crawford!” He stood in front of Sterns.
“I’m Samuel Sterns,” he replied.
“And the two genius’ meet now! The machine said Crawford is gamma infected!” Bruce said.
“You have a machine that tracks gamma infected people? That’s too cool…too cool!!” Crawford replied.
“Well, Bruce, we have to go teach a class, but it was nice meeting you Sterns,” Crawford said.
Bruce went into Crawford’s lab with him.
“Where’re all our students?” Bruce asked him.
“School’s out!! I’m sorry!!” Crawford said hitting Bruce on the head with a wrench!
(blackout)
“A-H-H-H! My head!! Where am I?” Bruce asked himself finding he was strapped down to an x-ray table with handcuffs on his neck, arms and feet.
“You’re in my private lab! Let’s take a tour! What happens when electricity hits gamma ray energy? Answer?” Crawford questions Bruce.
“Transfers my powers to you!” Bruce replied.
“BINGO!! Imagine your power with mine? What I didn’t tell you was that when the gamma hit the water, the water got on my bones and it affected me with a disease. I’m dying of it. It’s a degenerative nerve disease. But I can cure you also from your curse Bruce. That would be Ross and his men now!” Crawford told Bruce.
“You betrayed me!! You son of a twitch!!” Bruce replied.
Ross and his men kicked down the door, but it was too late!
“NOOOO!!” Ross yelled.
Crawford had transferred Bruce’s power to himself.
Crawford transformed into RAVAGE…a muscular monster that has dark green skin, bare green feet, brown beard, green eyes torn jeans…and bigger than HULK!!!
RAVAGE took off!!!
Ross and his men went after ‘Crawford!’
Bruce was alone…stuck to the x-ray table when someone kicked open the door again…
“Call me your sidekick!” Sterns said smiling.
“Good, let’s save the world!!” Bruce ran out transforming into HULK!
HULK ran up to Ross.
“Go get him Banner!” Ross told him.
RAVAGE was under a football stadium HULK got to him!
“You hear those thousands of people cheering their hero…their quarterback!! Imagine what RAVAGE…I can bring to them!!” RAVAGE told HULK!
“You’re the Einstein!! You figure out when gamma rays and electricity hit you…what would happen??” Sterns asked RAVAGE.
“Your powers would transfer!” Sterns replied firing his gamma ray gun and transforming that power back to Bruce. HULK falls down!
“NO!! THE POWER…IT’S…IT’S GONE!! NO!!” Crawford screams on the ground.
General Ross walks over.
“You’re under arrest Banner!” Ross tells him.
“Do you want me or Crawford…your choice?” Bruce replied.
“Darn you Banner!” Ross said.
Banner, Betty and Sterns left.
BRUCE NARRATES:
“We won, but why does it feel like we didn’t?
Betty is hiding something…but what?”
MIDNIGHT:
Betty and Blonsky…
“You’re here!” Blonsky told her.
“Of course I am! Goodbye Blonsky!” she told him.
“Bye?” he asked her.
She grabbed a gun out of her pocket and shot Blonsky in the chest!
BRUCE NARRATES:
“We all betray in the end…don’t we?
We all have our darkside…this is mine.
Can’t sleep or eat…just run!
That is the answer to our life…just run away!
My life is simply: lie…kill…run!
And so I run!”
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song
THE
INCREDIBLE
HULK
Episode 3
“Ravage”
PG
By Jeremiah Paul Song
Previously on “THE INCREDIBLE HULK”:
A man with amnesia of ‘WHO’ he is…hunted down by the military. He’s on the run from General Ross and Blonsky. Now, he’s going home where it all began. He met a new ally: Samuel Sterns. Bruce is going from state to state…a fugitive.
Bruce Banner must find out ‘WHO’ he is and find a cure for the HULK!
And now…
“Ravage”
DAY 11
LOCATION: Just heading into Dallas, Texas
TIME: 10 AM in a blue SUV
BRUCE NARRATES…
“It’s Day 11. Our credit cards, money and gas have run out. I’ve met a new friend, Samuel Sterns. And so it begins…”
“We’re out of money and my last credit card has gone zilch!” Stearns told them.
“And our gas is almost gone,” Betty said.
“We should get jobs,” Bruce replied.
“Yeah, I should be a teacher. Betty, you’re a nurse and Bruce can also be a teacher,” Sterns told them while looking at a newspaper.
“No way!” Betty said.
“It says it in the newspaper!” Sterns replied.
“Then I guess you’re a nurse Betty, Sterns a teacher and I’m a teacher too!” Bruce told them smiling.
DALLAS UNIVERSITY
“Hi, I’m the new assistant teacher in Science here,” Bruce told an older man whose name was Crawford. He had a long brown beard and long brown hair.
“I’m Crawford, you’ll be working with me,” Crawford replied smiling with his eyes turning green.
(song: “Don’t Make Me Angry” theme song)
MILITARY BASE
General Ross talks to Blonsky…
“Blonsky, you think just because I’m old and gray…I’m dumb??” Ross asked him.
“No sir,” Blonsky replied.
“Next time, there won’t be any grace Blonsky!” Ross told him.
“Yes sir!” Blonsky replied.
Ross smiled in an evil way.
DAY 12
LOCATION: University of Dallas, Texas
TIME: 7 PM
“Okay class, you all know what we learned last week. Now, today we have a special guest…Dr. Robert James. Give him a nice warm welcome,” Dr. Crawford told his class.
“Thank you! Thank you! In today’s class, we’re going to learn about science…” Dr. James told them.
…3 HOURS LATER…
The bell rings…
“…and that concludes the class. I will see you next week,” Crawford told them.
“Um, we need to talk to you,” two male students told Crawford. All the students leave but the two males.
“Come with me to my truck. I have to carry some stuff,” Crawford told them.
A FEW MINUTES LATER:
Outside…
Crawford puts books into his truck.
“So, what did you want to tell me?” Crawford asked.
“Well, we’re into football,” the younger, braver brother said.
“That’s great!” Crawford replied.
“Well, we don’t have time for both!” he said.
“What are you saying? You don’t have time for science AND football…both? You want to quit science and join football?” Crawford asked them.
“Well, yeah!” he replied.
“A-H-H-H!!” Crawford said with his eyes turning green.
Dr. James watched from a window in the building.
“Okay, we’re staying!!” the younger, braver brother told Crawford while afraid.
Dr. James walked outside. The two boys ran to him.
“Thought you guys were going to quit science?” Dr. James asked them.
“We changed our minds!” the boy said.
“Did Dr. Crawford have something to do with this?” Dr. James asked him.
“He’s a crazy man! Run while you still can!!” he told Dr. James as they ran off.
Dr. Crawford fell on the concrete.
“A-H-H-H!!” Crawford yelled. Dr. James ran to him.
“Get my wheelchair from the lab!” Crawford told him.
Dr. James ran to the lab. He grabbed the wheelchair.
MILITARY BASE:
Blonsky talks to 7 soldiers…
“Any of you want to tell ‘who’ told the General our conversation from lastnight?” Blonsky asked the soldiers.
“No?? Okay, then let me show you what I do to liars!” Blonsky told them.
“It’s Samuel Rogers, right?” Blonsky asked a soldier.
“Yes sir!” he replied.
“And do you have a family?” Blonsky asked him again.
“Yes sir! Two kids and a beautiful wife, sir!” he replied.
“I’ll say ‘hi’ to your wife for you!” Blonsky told him while shooting him with his gun! Blonsky smiled!
“Anyone else?” Blonsky asked them.
“Then…!!” he told them, shooting all of them but one!
”You’re in charge now!” Blonsky told the one soldier.
“Yes sir!” he replied.
“A-H-H-H!” Blonsky said.
“Are you okay sir?” the soldier asked Blonsky.
“Fine!” Blonsky smiled with his eyes lighting up green!
Blonsky ran off to his closed off room and shut the door. There was opera music. Blonsky injected himself with a shot and then smiled. There were “tons” of empty syringes on the floor.
IN DR. CRAWFORD’S LAB:
Crawford is in a wheelchair talking to Dr. James…
“So, how did…?” Dr. James asked Crawford.
“I was with my family in a river swimming when there were bright lights up in the sky. It was sunny, but it started to rain in the water. The bright lights were gamma bombs…sometimes I can walk and sometimes I can’t,” Crawford explained.
“I’m sorry,” Dr. James told him.
“um…I’m going to need your blood sample,” Crawford told him.
“What for?” Dr. James asked him.
“Just so if you ever kill…or are a fugitive…or something…but I won’t look at it!” Crawford explained.
“Okay,” Dr. James replied.
A FEW MINUTES LATER:
After Crawford drew the blood sample…
He examines it in his lab!
“Incredible!! His DNA…it’s gamma infected like I’ve never seen!! All that power to one man!!” Crawford said outloud looking at it with his microscope.
“WHO are you really? Computer, WHO is this DNA?” Crawford asked his computer.
“Bruce Banner…a fugitive in 5 states now!” the computer replied.
“Ross…he’s looking for him!” Crawford said to himself.
MILITARY BASE:
A telephone rings, Ross picks it up…
“Hello?” he questions.
“Hi, this is Dr. Crawford at the University of Dallas, Texas. I’m calling because one of my associates is a fugitive. His name is Dr. Bruce Banner!” Crawford told Ross.
“Banner?? Thanks!!” Ross said hanging up.
Crawford hung up smiling.
“Blonsky, we found Banner! He’s at a University here…let’s go!” Ross told Blonsky.
“Yes sir!” Blonsky replied.
“And if you’re trying to play the kill card, don’t murder your own men!” Ross told him.
“Yes sir!” Blonsky replied.
AT A GAS STATION NEARBY:
“Fill ‘er up please!” a mysterious man told the gas station attendant.
“Yes sir!” he replied.
The stranger had a blue pickup.
“Have you seen a young couple pass by here…let’s say, a few hours ago?” the stranger asked the gas station attendant.
“No, I can’t give you personal information!” the attendant said.
“Answer this, Agent 1.22!” the stranger got out of his truck, loaded his gun and shot the gas station attendant in the heart!
The stranger turned around and it was none other than Betty’s fiancé’, Leonard Samson smiling!
“I’m back…and nothing is going to stop me from being with you!” he said still smiling and leaving the gun on the ground.
HOSPITAL
Betty has been working as a kids nurse. Another nurse tells her something…
“Your dad is here to see you,” the nurse tells Betty.
“My dad?” RUN!!!” Betty replied.
“Not so fast Betty!” Blonsky told her.
“What do you want?” Betty asked him.
“Don’t worry! I came alone,” Blonsky replied.
“What are you doing here?” she asked him.
“I need your help!” Blonsky told her.
“With what?” she asked him again.
“Something is happening to me. Something big and powerful! I know you have it too!” he explained.
“No, you’re a gamma freak!” Betty replied.
“Please, don’t tell the General about this…please!” he begged her.
“Then STOP chasing us!” she told him.
“Fine, just this once!” he replied.
“Meet me at the University…midnight!” she said.
“Done!” he replied smiling.
NEXT MORNING:
Sterns and Bruce talk…
“Okay, while you were doing teaching, I was doing some researching. This machine can track gamma energy, as you know. Well, it can track someone here from a state away! By the way, there’s someone here that is a massive, massive radiation! It’s getting closer and closer!” Sterns said.
“Boo!! I’m Dr. Crawford!” He stood in front of Sterns.
“I’m Samuel Sterns,” he replied.
“And the two genius’ meet now! The machine said Crawford is gamma infected!” Bruce said.
“You have a machine that tracks gamma infected people? That’s too cool…too cool!!” Crawford replied.
“Well, Bruce, we have to go teach a class, but it was nice meeting you Sterns,” Crawford said.
Bruce went into Crawford’s lab with him.
“Where’re all our students?” Bruce asked him.
“School’s out!! I’m sorry!!” Crawford said hitting Bruce on the head with a wrench!
(blackout)
“A-H-H-H! My head!! Where am I?” Bruce asked himself finding he was strapped down to an x-ray table with handcuffs on his neck, arms and feet.
“You’re in my private lab! Let’s take a tour! What happens when electricity hits gamma ray energy? Answer?” Crawford questions Bruce.
“Transfers my powers to you!” Bruce replied.
“BINGO!! Imagine your power with mine? What I didn’t tell you was that when the gamma hit the water, the water got on my bones and it affected me with a disease. I’m dying of it. It’s a degenerative nerve disease. But I can cure you also from your curse Bruce. That would be Ross and his men now!” Crawford told Bruce.
“You betrayed me!! You son of a twitch!!” Bruce replied.
Ross and his men kicked down the door, but it was too late!
“NOOOO!!” Ross yelled.
Crawford had transferred Bruce’s power to himself.
Crawford transformed into RAVAGE…a muscular monster that has dark green skin, bare green feet, brown beard, green eyes torn jeans…and bigger than HULK!!!
RAVAGE took off!!!
Ross and his men went after ‘Crawford!’
Bruce was alone…stuck to the x-ray table when someone kicked open the door again…
“Call me your sidekick!” Sterns said smiling.
“Good, let’s save the world!!” Bruce ran out transforming into HULK!
HULK ran up to Ross.
“Go get him Banner!” Ross told him.
RAVAGE was under a football stadium HULK got to him!
“You hear those thousands of people cheering their hero…their quarterback!! Imagine what RAVAGE…I can bring to them!!” RAVAGE told HULK!
“You’re the Einstein!! You figure out when gamma rays and electricity hit you…what would happen??” Sterns asked RAVAGE.
“Your powers would transfer!” Sterns replied firing his gamma ray gun and transforming that power back to Bruce. HULK falls down!
“NO!! THE POWER…IT’S…IT’S GONE!! NO!!” Crawford screams on the ground.
General Ross walks over.
“You’re under arrest Banner!” Ross tells him.
“Do you want me or Crawford…your choice?” Bruce replied.
“Darn you Banner!” Ross said.
Banner, Betty and Sterns left.
BRUCE NARRATES:
“We won, but why does it feel like we didn’t?
Betty is hiding something…but what?”
MIDNIGHT:
Betty and Blonsky…
“You’re here!” Blonsky told her.
“Of course I am! Goodbye Blonsky!” she told him.
“Bye?” he asked her.
She grabbed a gun out of her pocket and shot Blonsky in the chest!
BRUCE NARRATES:
“We all betray in the end…don’t we?
We all have our darkside…this is mine.
Can’t sleep or eat…just run!
That is the answer to our life…just run away!
My life is simply: lie…kill…run!
And so I run!”
Written by Jeremiah Paul Song