Bluedevilfire
08-03-2008, 05:25 PM
2008 © Jeremiah Paul Song
THE
INCREDIBLE
HULK
TV Pilot
PG-13
By Jeremiah Paul Song
DAY 1
LOCATION: At the University, New York City
TIME: Midnight
General Ross has a mysterious man lying on top of an x-ray table. The mysterious man’s name was Bruce Banner. His feet and arms were chained to the table.
“Are we ready General?” a soldier asked the General.
The General’s name was Ross…General Ross!
“Do it!” Ross replied smiling.
A soldier injected a shot into Bruce’s neck and arms.
“A-H-H-H!” Bruce screamed with his eyes turning green!
(white out)
A MINUTE LATER…
There was a shadow of a monster throwing soldiers!
“A-H-H-H!” a soldier cried!
There were guns firing all over until there was no sound!
A gun dropped flat on the floor with a dead soldier!
General Ross stood there in amazement!
“ROAR!!” the monster told him.
The monster jumped out the window. There was lightning and thunder! You could barely see him at all. He had green skin and long black hair to his chest. He roared…
“RRROOOAAARRR!!!”
…he said as he stood on top of a gargoyle, similar to King Kong, but his height was under 7 feet tall.
(blackout)
16 YEARS AGO:
LOCATION: Military testing base in New Mexico
In the middle of the desert …
“How about you kids play tag?” Ross asked little Bruce and little Betty.
“Okay!” Betty replied.
“Tag, you’re it!” Betty tagged Bruce on the shoulder chuckling and running away.
“David, I realize this stage of you isn’t getting any better, but it’s the best I can do,” Ross told David Banner, the father of Bruce Banner. David Banner was the original Incredible Hulk.
“But the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ helps!” David replies.
“Good! I’m glad, but…” Ross told him.
AT THE SAME TIME:
Little Betty and little Bruce play tag and see a glass dome…the door is open…they wonder in…
“Bruce, look!! It’s a jungle!!” Betty told him.
There were trees and bushes everywhere!
“Yeah, it is!” Bruce replied looking around in amazement.
A young boy, a little younger than them came in.
“I’m the Military’s son!” he said. He was short, skinny and had blonde hair. His name was Emil Blonsky…but Blonsky for short!
“Blonsky, check it out!” Betty told him.
Betty kinda’ had a little crush on him, but she had a big one on Bruce!
“Oh no!! The door…it closed!!” Betty said.
The big steel door that they came in thru closed and locked shut! And when I mean shut, I mean SHUT!! Not even bullets could shoot the door down! The ‘JUNGLE’ was located inside a bulletproof bubble-like domed green house at least the size of a football field! It was built to contain David Banner…the father of little Bruce.
The green house was called ‘JUNGLE OF FURY!’ There was also a small blue house near for David to live in. This was all there was for about 13 miles. Then there were other houses about a mile apart from each other. It was straight desert!!
AT THE SAME TIME, IN A ROOM AT THE BASE:
David Banner, General Ross and Lieutenant John Blonsky talk…
“That’s funny…listen…” David said while hearing a blow-up noise!
“Look! Look up!” Blonsky said looking up out the window.
“They’re not supposed to be testing today…RUN!!” Ross replied while running away from the giant bombs coming straight towards them!
BACK WITH THE KIDS INSIDE THE ‘JUNGLE’…
“Blonsky, where did you go?” Betty asked him.
Blonsky disappeared, wondering off to a man hanging from a pole…
“HELP ME!!” the dead man said.
He was a person that had been electrocuted!
“Huh?” Blonsky asked him.
Little Betty and little Bruce looked around for Blonsky and found him.
“There you are!” Betty said.
“Why are you shaking the creepy man’s hand?” Bruce asked Blonsky.
“Look at the pretty fireworks!” Betty said looking up inside the clear bubble. There were fire meteors dropping, which were really bombs!
“RUN!!” little Bruce said.
Blonsky shook the dead guy’s hand very slowly. A bomb came down and hit! As Blonsky shook the dead guy’s hand, he had a vision of a green monster as ABOMINATION…then he fell!
“A-H-H-H!!” Betty screamed!
OUTSIDE:
General Ross, David Banner and John Blonsky continued to run…
“RUN…RUN…A…A-H-H-H!!!” General Ross said while still running.
Everything was dusty and smoky…
GREEN SMOKE!!!
(blackout)
PRESENT DAY
LOCATION: New York City
“Where am I?” Bruce asked a mysterious woman.
“What did they do to you?” the mysterious woman asked Bruce. She had short red hair, gold earrings, blue eyes, a long sleeved pink low-cut shirt, black pants and white tennis shoes on. Her name was Clarice Banner. She was the older sister of Bruce.
(credits)
“What do you mean? Who are you?” Bruce asked her confused. He was shirtless and had ‘green tattoo like marks’ where the needles hit him last night.
“I’m your sister Clarice,” she replied.
“Huh?” Bruce asked her. Bruce had long blonde hair to his shoulders.
“Gotta’ go! But stay here. I’m gonna’ pick some groceries up, okay?” she asked him.
“Okay,” he replied.
DAY 2
LOCATION: Leonard Samson’s apartment, New York City
TIME: 9 AM
“Wakie Pakie!” Samson told Betty in bed while giving her a kiss on the forehead. He had brown hair, blue eyes and was shirtless.
“Okay,” Betty replied.
“Only 34 hours before we’re married,” Samson said.
“33 hours! But who’s counting!” Betty replied with covers over her.
“Coffee time,” Samson said smiling.
BACK AT BRUCE’S SISTER’S SKYSCRAPER:
Bruce goes down the stairs to the city. He had a blue shirt on, black pants and barefoot. He had a blue shirt on, black pants and was barefoot. He headed over to the University where the last thing he could remember was being in a room. He walks to the room where the x-ray table is and begins having flashbacks…
(flashbacks)
“Do it!!” General Ross said.
“NO!!” Bruce cried!
(blackout)
Betty walked up to Bruce…
“You weren’t at class, where were you?” Betty asked him.
“Around,” he replied.
“Well, Samson and I wanted to invite you to the wedding tomorrow,” Betty said.
“Oh!” Bruce said shocked.
“Okay!” Bruce replied.
“Great, so you’ll be there?” Betty asked him.
“Yeah, sure,” Bruce replied.
“Only 30 hours before we can sleep together and say we’re married!” Samson told her touching her back.
“Stop it!” Betty said.
“Well, we better go. But did you hear about that room…some explosion or something happened,” Samson told Bruce.
“Yeah, that’s horrible!” Bruce replied.
“We’ll see ‘ya Bruce!” Betty told him walking away with Samson.
“See ‘ya!” Bruce replied. He still thought there was something familiar about the chair that night.
LATER THAT NIGHT:
Betty was walking down a sidewalk to have dinner with Samson. It was a late dinner, about 10:00 PM…
Bruce watched Betty from a rooftop. A strange hooded robber came up and grabbed Betty’s mouth so she wouldn’t scream! Bruce saw this from the rooftop and suddenly began to turn angry!! His eyes turned black! His hair turned into long black hair! His shirt tore off! His blue jeans ripped off into jagged shorts! …and he was green! He jumped off the rooftop to the ground on the sidewalk where Betty was. He flipped the hooded creature on the ground! It was pouring rain and you couldn’t see much! Bruce, now the HULK, flipped the hooded stranger on his back! He jumped on him and flipped him again! A lightning bolt hit nearby and you could see HULK’S chest with a mark for each gamma needle he was injected with…like tattoos. He took the hood of the stranger and he was just pure electricity! He was covered in electricity!!
“A-H-H-H!” the electric stranger said while disappearing into a telephone pole nearby!
“Thanks!” Betty said to the HULK.
“Who are you?” she asked him.
“HULK!” he replied.
“Oh shoot! I have to go!” Betty told him. She ran off.
“Pretty woman!” HULK said.
DINNER:
Betty rushes in at Samson’s table at the real fancy, black tie restaurant…
“Sorry I’m late!” Betty told Samson.
“R e a l l y late!! Anything happen while I was here waiting?” Samson asked her.
“No,” Betty replied.
AT THE FRONT OF THE RESTAURANT CHECK- IN AREA:
HULK walked in trying to find Betty. The police were chasing him…
“Sir, we have a strict policy…dress policy!!” the waitress at the check-in area said. Her name was Mary. She had long red hair and blue eyes.
“BETTY!!” HULK replied running.
“Sir… Mary tried to tell him.
HULK ran to Betty!
“Not you!!” she thought to herself.
HULK began to throw chairs.
“Excuse me…” Betty said while running to HULK.
HULK looked at Betty and Samson, and then ran away. Betty followed.
“Wait!” she told HULK but he was already outside.
Betty went outside the door that HULK broke. HULK stood on top of a rooftop.
“Come down!” Betty told him.
“NO!” HULK replied.
“Well at least let me see your face!” Betty told him.
HULK turned. He had long black hair to his chest. His face ashamed.
“You saved my life more than once! Now, what’s your name?” she asked him.
“HULK!” he replied.
“What’s your name?” she asked him again.
“I am HULK!!” he replied.
He began to fall off the rooftop to the ground transforming into Bruce Banner.
“Get me to my sister’s house!” Bruce told her before passing out.
Betty picks him up onto her lap and carries him.
AN HOUR LATER:
Betty knocks on Clarice’s door at the skyscraper…
“Hello?” Clarice asked Betty.
“He keeps calling for you!” Betty told her carrying Bruce in her arms.
“Come in,” Clarice replied.
A FEW MINUTES LATER:
Clarice and Betty talk while Clarice puts Bruce into the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ replica.
“So, what happened to him?” Betty asked Clarice.
“Our father, Dr. David Banner, was transformed into the HULK once…and now he still looks for a cure. My family was born with what you call a ‘disease of gamma radiation,’” Clarice explains.
“So, he turns into a monster?” Betty asked her.
“Yeah,” she replied.
Betty went up the stairs to the caged ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ that Bruce was in on the top floor.
“What have I done?” Bruce asked himself outloud.
“You have quite the story!” Betty told him.
“Who am I?” he asked her.
“You…you’re the man I fell in love with,” she replied.
“Am I, or am I just a monster?” Bruce asked her.
“I have to go, but I’ll be back tomorrow,” Betty told him walking away.
“I love you too…I love you too…” Bruce told her with a tear going down his face.
AN HOUR LATER:
Betty walked into Samson’s apartment…
She went into the bedroom and climbed into bed.
DAY 3
Next morning
TIME: 6 AM
“NOW!!” Ross told his men standing outside Clarice’s skyscraper apartment.
A soldier knocked on the door…
“KNOCK!! KNOCK!! KNOCK!!”
“Hello?” Clarice asked the soldier.
“MOVE IN! MOVE IN!” General Ross told the soldiers.
“What?” Clarice asked him. She had a long black low-cut dress on, black high heels and short red hair.
“Where’s Banner?” Ross asked her demandingly.
“Banner? Why, did you lose something?” she asked him back.
“He’s here…you…you’re hiding him you twitch!” Ross told her.
“IF I was, YOU couldn’t find him!!” she replied.
“General, Banner…he’s not here!” a soldier told Ross.
“Still smoke huh? Same old Ross, but no motorcycle?? Wow! Not a shock!” Clarice told him.
Ross was still smoking his cigar.
“You still remember…huh?” he asked her.
“Yes, I remember quite well!” she replied.
“Come on men! We have to go! If Banner comes, I’ll find him!” Ross told her.
“See ‘ya Ross!” Clarice told him smiling in an evil way.
“Who was that?” a soldier asked the General while walking away.
“An old friend…an old friend,” Ross replied smiling…smoking his cigar.
Clarice walked up the stairs to the top floor where a locked room said “Storage.” Bruce was in the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ cage.
“Are they gone?” Bruce asked her.
“Yes, they’re gone,” she replied.
“You want anything to eat?” she asked him.
“No, I’m not hungry,” he said.
DOWNTOWN
New York City:
The stranger in the hood that attacked Betty, put his arm in the air waving to the thousands of people in the city…his hand let out energy…blue electric energy that hit people! Streetlights began to turn green, blue, orange, yellow…
BACK AT CLARICE’S SKYSCRAPER:
In the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’…
“The power is out!” Clarice told Bruce.
“No! The power in the whole city is out?” Bruce asked.
“GO!!” she told him.
“It’s the hooded man I think…that’s all I can remember!” Bruce told her.
“Save the world…GO! NOW!!” she told him.
DOWNTOWN NEW YORK CITY:
The hooded stranger was feeding off the electricity of the power lines. HULK watched from a rooftop, then jumped down to the hooded stranger…
“I won’t let you do this!!” HULK told the hooded creature.
“You never learn, do you??” the hooded stranger asked the HULK.
“I AM POWER!!” he said shocking the HULK with his hands.
HULK gets shot by energy coming from the stranger’s hands. Blonsky and his men are there. Blonsky looks closely at the hooded man. The hood came off the stranger…he was pure white electricity with blue outline around him! Blonsky looked at him again having a flashback…
(flashback)
…Blonsky running in the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ to the deadman…
…The deadman said “Help Me!” and lit up into energy…
(whiteout)
PRESENTLY:
HULK grabbed the stranger.
“I won’t let you do this!” HULK told him. HULK punched him but fell because of the electric force field.
“Let’s spark things up, shall we?” he asked the HULK while touching a green truck with his hand and recharging it! He got in the truck and started to run the HULK over! HULK jumped a fire hydrant which electricity hit and it exploded!! When the electricity hit, the stranger went into sparks as tall as 50 feet!! HULK pushes him into the water and he is electrocuted!!
SAMSON’S APARTMENT:
Betty got out of bed where Samson was also. She looked at him while he was asleep and wrote a letter…
Dear Lenny, Things have come up and an
old friend came back. I have to go, but I
will always love you…
Love, Betty
BACK TO NEW YORK CITY:
The HULK got away from Blonsky…
BETTY NARRATES:
“We all leave our loved ones at some point…
It’s just the question of when?
We all have sacrifices we have to make…
It’s life…”
AT CLARICE’S APARTMENT:
Betty goes to Clarice’s place on the top floor, ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’…
“You saved a city today…you saved me!” Betty told him.
“Why are you here?” Bruce asked her.
“I’m here to take you home!” Betty replied.
“I’m a fugitive now, I can’t!” Bruce said.
“We’re going Bruce! Now, my brand new red truck is waiting!” Betty told him.
A MINUTE LATER:
Bruce and Betty headed downstairs to talk to Clarice…
“Where are you guys going?” Clarice asked.
“We’re going to where it all began…New Mexico!” Bruce replied.
“Be careful Bruce!” Clarice told him.
(song: It’s Too Late To Apologize)
AFTER BRUCE AND BETTY LEAVE:
As they drive off, Clarice makes a call…
“Hello?” Clarice questions if anyone was there.
“Yeah?” a voice said.
“They just left for New Mexico!” Clarice replied.
General Ross hung his cellphone up and smiled.
“We’re going to New Mexico!” he told a soldier named Blonsky.
“Sir, they’ll stop in Oklahoma on the way,” Blonsky told him.
“Then Oklahoma it is…Oklahoma it is…” Ross replied.
2 DAYS LATER
LOCATION: South Carolina
Betty is in bed in a motel talking online to a “Mr. Blue…”
MILITARY BASE:
“Did you recover the body in the water?” Blonsky asked a soldier.
“Yes, we did,” he replied.
“Good! He holds the answers to my life!” Blonsky said smiling.
BRUCE NARRATES:
“I don’t remember WHO I am or WHAT I am.
I must search until I find out!
So, my story begins…”
The End
By Jeremiah Paul Song
THE
INCREDIBLE
HULK
TV Pilot
PG-13
By Jeremiah Paul Song
DAY 1
LOCATION: At the University, New York City
TIME: Midnight
General Ross has a mysterious man lying on top of an x-ray table. The mysterious man’s name was Bruce Banner. His feet and arms were chained to the table.
“Are we ready General?” a soldier asked the General.
The General’s name was Ross…General Ross!
“Do it!” Ross replied smiling.
A soldier injected a shot into Bruce’s neck and arms.
“A-H-H-H!” Bruce screamed with his eyes turning green!
(white out)
A MINUTE LATER…
There was a shadow of a monster throwing soldiers!
“A-H-H-H!” a soldier cried!
There were guns firing all over until there was no sound!
A gun dropped flat on the floor with a dead soldier!
General Ross stood there in amazement!
“ROAR!!” the monster told him.
The monster jumped out the window. There was lightning and thunder! You could barely see him at all. He had green skin and long black hair to his chest. He roared…
“RRROOOAAARRR!!!”
…he said as he stood on top of a gargoyle, similar to King Kong, but his height was under 7 feet tall.
(blackout)
16 YEARS AGO:
LOCATION: Military testing base in New Mexico
In the middle of the desert …
“How about you kids play tag?” Ross asked little Bruce and little Betty.
“Okay!” Betty replied.
“Tag, you’re it!” Betty tagged Bruce on the shoulder chuckling and running away.
“David, I realize this stage of you isn’t getting any better, but it’s the best I can do,” Ross told David Banner, the father of Bruce Banner. David Banner was the original Incredible Hulk.
“But the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ helps!” David replies.
“Good! I’m glad, but…” Ross told him.
AT THE SAME TIME:
Little Betty and little Bruce play tag and see a glass dome…the door is open…they wonder in…
“Bruce, look!! It’s a jungle!!” Betty told him.
There were trees and bushes everywhere!
“Yeah, it is!” Bruce replied looking around in amazement.
A young boy, a little younger than them came in.
“I’m the Military’s son!” he said. He was short, skinny and had blonde hair. His name was Emil Blonsky…but Blonsky for short!
“Blonsky, check it out!” Betty told him.
Betty kinda’ had a little crush on him, but she had a big one on Bruce!
“Oh no!! The door…it closed!!” Betty said.
The big steel door that they came in thru closed and locked shut! And when I mean shut, I mean SHUT!! Not even bullets could shoot the door down! The ‘JUNGLE’ was located inside a bulletproof bubble-like domed green house at least the size of a football field! It was built to contain David Banner…the father of little Bruce.
The green house was called ‘JUNGLE OF FURY!’ There was also a small blue house near for David to live in. This was all there was for about 13 miles. Then there were other houses about a mile apart from each other. It was straight desert!!
AT THE SAME TIME, IN A ROOM AT THE BASE:
David Banner, General Ross and Lieutenant John Blonsky talk…
“That’s funny…listen…” David said while hearing a blow-up noise!
“Look! Look up!” Blonsky said looking up out the window.
“They’re not supposed to be testing today…RUN!!” Ross replied while running away from the giant bombs coming straight towards them!
BACK WITH THE KIDS INSIDE THE ‘JUNGLE’…
“Blonsky, where did you go?” Betty asked him.
Blonsky disappeared, wondering off to a man hanging from a pole…
“HELP ME!!” the dead man said.
He was a person that had been electrocuted!
“Huh?” Blonsky asked him.
Little Betty and little Bruce looked around for Blonsky and found him.
“There you are!” Betty said.
“Why are you shaking the creepy man’s hand?” Bruce asked Blonsky.
“Look at the pretty fireworks!” Betty said looking up inside the clear bubble. There were fire meteors dropping, which were really bombs!
“RUN!!” little Bruce said.
Blonsky shook the dead guy’s hand very slowly. A bomb came down and hit! As Blonsky shook the dead guy’s hand, he had a vision of a green monster as ABOMINATION…then he fell!
“A-H-H-H!!” Betty screamed!
OUTSIDE:
General Ross, David Banner and John Blonsky continued to run…
“RUN…RUN…A…A-H-H-H!!!” General Ross said while still running.
Everything was dusty and smoky…
GREEN SMOKE!!!
(blackout)
PRESENT DAY
LOCATION: New York City
“Where am I?” Bruce asked a mysterious woman.
“What did they do to you?” the mysterious woman asked Bruce. She had short red hair, gold earrings, blue eyes, a long sleeved pink low-cut shirt, black pants and white tennis shoes on. Her name was Clarice Banner. She was the older sister of Bruce.
(credits)
“What do you mean? Who are you?” Bruce asked her confused. He was shirtless and had ‘green tattoo like marks’ where the needles hit him last night.
“I’m your sister Clarice,” she replied.
“Huh?” Bruce asked her. Bruce had long blonde hair to his shoulders.
“Gotta’ go! But stay here. I’m gonna’ pick some groceries up, okay?” she asked him.
“Okay,” he replied.
DAY 2
LOCATION: Leonard Samson’s apartment, New York City
TIME: 9 AM
“Wakie Pakie!” Samson told Betty in bed while giving her a kiss on the forehead. He had brown hair, blue eyes and was shirtless.
“Okay,” Betty replied.
“Only 34 hours before we’re married,” Samson said.
“33 hours! But who’s counting!” Betty replied with covers over her.
“Coffee time,” Samson said smiling.
BACK AT BRUCE’S SISTER’S SKYSCRAPER:
Bruce goes down the stairs to the city. He had a blue shirt on, black pants and barefoot. He had a blue shirt on, black pants and was barefoot. He headed over to the University where the last thing he could remember was being in a room. He walks to the room where the x-ray table is and begins having flashbacks…
(flashbacks)
“Do it!!” General Ross said.
“NO!!” Bruce cried!
(blackout)
Betty walked up to Bruce…
“You weren’t at class, where were you?” Betty asked him.
“Around,” he replied.
“Well, Samson and I wanted to invite you to the wedding tomorrow,” Betty said.
“Oh!” Bruce said shocked.
“Okay!” Bruce replied.
“Great, so you’ll be there?” Betty asked him.
“Yeah, sure,” Bruce replied.
“Only 30 hours before we can sleep together and say we’re married!” Samson told her touching her back.
“Stop it!” Betty said.
“Well, we better go. But did you hear about that room…some explosion or something happened,” Samson told Bruce.
“Yeah, that’s horrible!” Bruce replied.
“We’ll see ‘ya Bruce!” Betty told him walking away with Samson.
“See ‘ya!” Bruce replied. He still thought there was something familiar about the chair that night.
LATER THAT NIGHT:
Betty was walking down a sidewalk to have dinner with Samson. It was a late dinner, about 10:00 PM…
Bruce watched Betty from a rooftop. A strange hooded robber came up and grabbed Betty’s mouth so she wouldn’t scream! Bruce saw this from the rooftop and suddenly began to turn angry!! His eyes turned black! His hair turned into long black hair! His shirt tore off! His blue jeans ripped off into jagged shorts! …and he was green! He jumped off the rooftop to the ground on the sidewalk where Betty was. He flipped the hooded creature on the ground! It was pouring rain and you couldn’t see much! Bruce, now the HULK, flipped the hooded stranger on his back! He jumped on him and flipped him again! A lightning bolt hit nearby and you could see HULK’S chest with a mark for each gamma needle he was injected with…like tattoos. He took the hood of the stranger and he was just pure electricity! He was covered in electricity!!
“A-H-H-H!” the electric stranger said while disappearing into a telephone pole nearby!
“Thanks!” Betty said to the HULK.
“Who are you?” she asked him.
“HULK!” he replied.
“Oh shoot! I have to go!” Betty told him. She ran off.
“Pretty woman!” HULK said.
DINNER:
Betty rushes in at Samson’s table at the real fancy, black tie restaurant…
“Sorry I’m late!” Betty told Samson.
“R e a l l y late!! Anything happen while I was here waiting?” Samson asked her.
“No,” Betty replied.
AT THE FRONT OF THE RESTAURANT CHECK- IN AREA:
HULK walked in trying to find Betty. The police were chasing him…
“Sir, we have a strict policy…dress policy!!” the waitress at the check-in area said. Her name was Mary. She had long red hair and blue eyes.
“BETTY!!” HULK replied running.
“Sir… Mary tried to tell him.
HULK ran to Betty!
“Not you!!” she thought to herself.
HULK began to throw chairs.
“Excuse me…” Betty said while running to HULK.
HULK looked at Betty and Samson, and then ran away. Betty followed.
“Wait!” she told HULK but he was already outside.
Betty went outside the door that HULK broke. HULK stood on top of a rooftop.
“Come down!” Betty told him.
“NO!” HULK replied.
“Well at least let me see your face!” Betty told him.
HULK turned. He had long black hair to his chest. His face ashamed.
“You saved my life more than once! Now, what’s your name?” she asked him.
“HULK!” he replied.
“What’s your name?” she asked him again.
“I am HULK!!” he replied.
He began to fall off the rooftop to the ground transforming into Bruce Banner.
“Get me to my sister’s house!” Bruce told her before passing out.
Betty picks him up onto her lap and carries him.
AN HOUR LATER:
Betty knocks on Clarice’s door at the skyscraper…
“Hello?” Clarice asked Betty.
“He keeps calling for you!” Betty told her carrying Bruce in her arms.
“Come in,” Clarice replied.
A FEW MINUTES LATER:
Clarice and Betty talk while Clarice puts Bruce into the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ replica.
“So, what happened to him?” Betty asked Clarice.
“Our father, Dr. David Banner, was transformed into the HULK once…and now he still looks for a cure. My family was born with what you call a ‘disease of gamma radiation,’” Clarice explains.
“So, he turns into a monster?” Betty asked her.
“Yeah,” she replied.
Betty went up the stairs to the caged ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ that Bruce was in on the top floor.
“What have I done?” Bruce asked himself outloud.
“You have quite the story!” Betty told him.
“Who am I?” he asked her.
“You…you’re the man I fell in love with,” she replied.
“Am I, or am I just a monster?” Bruce asked her.
“I have to go, but I’ll be back tomorrow,” Betty told him walking away.
“I love you too…I love you too…” Bruce told her with a tear going down his face.
AN HOUR LATER:
Betty walked into Samson’s apartment…
She went into the bedroom and climbed into bed.
DAY 3
Next morning
TIME: 6 AM
“NOW!!” Ross told his men standing outside Clarice’s skyscraper apartment.
A soldier knocked on the door…
“KNOCK!! KNOCK!! KNOCK!!”
“Hello?” Clarice asked the soldier.
“MOVE IN! MOVE IN!” General Ross told the soldiers.
“What?” Clarice asked him. She had a long black low-cut dress on, black high heels and short red hair.
“Where’s Banner?” Ross asked her demandingly.
“Banner? Why, did you lose something?” she asked him back.
“He’s here…you…you’re hiding him you twitch!” Ross told her.
“IF I was, YOU couldn’t find him!!” she replied.
“General, Banner…he’s not here!” a soldier told Ross.
“Still smoke huh? Same old Ross, but no motorcycle?? Wow! Not a shock!” Clarice told him.
Ross was still smoking his cigar.
“You still remember…huh?” he asked her.
“Yes, I remember quite well!” she replied.
“Come on men! We have to go! If Banner comes, I’ll find him!” Ross told her.
“See ‘ya Ross!” Clarice told him smiling in an evil way.
“Who was that?” a soldier asked the General while walking away.
“An old friend…an old friend,” Ross replied smiling…smoking his cigar.
Clarice walked up the stairs to the top floor where a locked room said “Storage.” Bruce was in the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ cage.
“Are they gone?” Bruce asked her.
“Yes, they’re gone,” she replied.
“You want anything to eat?” she asked him.
“No, I’m not hungry,” he said.
DOWNTOWN
New York City:
The stranger in the hood that attacked Betty, put his arm in the air waving to the thousands of people in the city…his hand let out energy…blue electric energy that hit people! Streetlights began to turn green, blue, orange, yellow…
BACK AT CLARICE’S SKYSCRAPER:
In the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’…
“The power is out!” Clarice told Bruce.
“No! The power in the whole city is out?” Bruce asked.
“GO!!” she told him.
“It’s the hooded man I think…that’s all I can remember!” Bruce told her.
“Save the world…GO! NOW!!” she told him.
DOWNTOWN NEW YORK CITY:
The hooded stranger was feeding off the electricity of the power lines. HULK watched from a rooftop, then jumped down to the hooded stranger…
“I won’t let you do this!!” HULK told the hooded creature.
“You never learn, do you??” the hooded stranger asked the HULK.
“I AM POWER!!” he said shocking the HULK with his hands.
HULK gets shot by energy coming from the stranger’s hands. Blonsky and his men are there. Blonsky looks closely at the hooded man. The hood came off the stranger…he was pure white electricity with blue outline around him! Blonsky looked at him again having a flashback…
(flashback)
…Blonsky running in the ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’ to the deadman…
…The deadman said “Help Me!” and lit up into energy…
(whiteout)
PRESENTLY:
HULK grabbed the stranger.
“I won’t let you do this!” HULK told him. HULK punched him but fell because of the electric force field.
“Let’s spark things up, shall we?” he asked the HULK while touching a green truck with his hand and recharging it! He got in the truck and started to run the HULK over! HULK jumped a fire hydrant which electricity hit and it exploded!! When the electricity hit, the stranger went into sparks as tall as 50 feet!! HULK pushes him into the water and he is electrocuted!!
SAMSON’S APARTMENT:
Betty got out of bed where Samson was also. She looked at him while he was asleep and wrote a letter…
Dear Lenny, Things have come up and an
old friend came back. I have to go, but I
will always love you…
Love, Betty
BACK TO NEW YORK CITY:
The HULK got away from Blonsky…
BETTY NARRATES:
“We all leave our loved ones at some point…
It’s just the question of when?
We all have sacrifices we have to make…
It’s life…”
AT CLARICE’S APARTMENT:
Betty goes to Clarice’s place on the top floor, ‘JUNGLE OF FURY’…
“You saved a city today…you saved me!” Betty told him.
“Why are you here?” Bruce asked her.
“I’m here to take you home!” Betty replied.
“I’m a fugitive now, I can’t!” Bruce said.
“We’re going Bruce! Now, my brand new red truck is waiting!” Betty told him.
A MINUTE LATER:
Bruce and Betty headed downstairs to talk to Clarice…
“Where are you guys going?” Clarice asked.
“We’re going to where it all began…New Mexico!” Bruce replied.
“Be careful Bruce!” Clarice told him.
(song: It’s Too Late To Apologize)
AFTER BRUCE AND BETTY LEAVE:
As they drive off, Clarice makes a call…
“Hello?” Clarice questions if anyone was there.
“Yeah?” a voice said.
“They just left for New Mexico!” Clarice replied.
General Ross hung his cellphone up and smiled.
“We’re going to New Mexico!” he told a soldier named Blonsky.
“Sir, they’ll stop in Oklahoma on the way,” Blonsky told him.
“Then Oklahoma it is…Oklahoma it is…” Ross replied.
2 DAYS LATER
LOCATION: South Carolina
Betty is in bed in a motel talking online to a “Mr. Blue…”
MILITARY BASE:
“Did you recover the body in the water?” Blonsky asked a soldier.
“Yes, we did,” he replied.
“Good! He holds the answers to my life!” Blonsky said smiling.
BRUCE NARRATES:
“I don’t remember WHO I am or WHAT I am.
I must search until I find out!
So, my story begins…”
The End
By Jeremiah Paul Song