More Things Out There (Clark/Buffy) Mature

[SexyLex]

Leaving Site.

[Kira]

That was very good start. I hope Clark does change his mind when he confronts the vampires with Buffy's help. PPMS!!:D

[Kira]

It was good update for my opinion. I hope this was the beginning of Clark/Buffy friendship.:D

[SexyLex]

I'm thinking of expanding this into a romance between them because I like romances...:) Thank you Kira again for your feedback! I"m glad you like it. :)

[Kira]

Wow, that was pretty fast! First flirting and they finally kissed!! That was so sweet. Yay for them! :) Clark & Buffy spending day on the beach, it was so romantic.:D

Update was sweet and romantic. I'll raise two thumbs for you.;)

[SexyLex]

Thank you, Kira!! :)

[SexyLex]

Thank you! :) I will try to update soon. I posted another fic of mine here too...not sure if it will be liked, but I put it up anyhow! :)

[SexyLex]

Thank you so much!! :) *hugs* I have ideas of what I could do next, but I have to write them down and work on them, so I will see what happens next...I"m glad that you liked it and thank you for your P.S.! :) It means a lot!! :)

[Wooderson_Grey]

I dont see Clark in Sunnydale, he's too powerful. All he has to do is look at a vampire with heat and hes dead. Which is also why i dont see Clark asking for a steak. Why would he do that, when he can just freakin look at them! Not to mention, hes invulnerable to harm.
Clark and Buffy just dont mix to me. Clark would just 'trump' Buffy. She is supposed to be the all powerfull slayer, but with Clark in town, It seems to deminish her ability. Think about it. Clark could use super speed and check every nook and cranny in town in a minute. And if he found even a huge den of 100 vampires, all he would have to do is scan his head from one side of the room to the other with heat vision, and they all turn to dust. Compare that to Buffy "going on patrol" every night.
In a good show, the hero has to have a worthy enemy. One that really sums the gist of the show. Buffy has that in the vampires and demons that she faces. But if you put Clark in Sunnydale, the enemy just isnt worthy anymore.
I only mention it because i am a huge Buffy fan. And I like the thought of Buffy being THE hero of Sunnydale. If Clark is there than he would have to hold back on his abilities to make her look useful. Imagine if you will.......

*Clark, Buffy and the crew are hanging out in the library*
"I like the way it matches your shoes." Buffy said to Anya, talking about the new shirt she had gotten that night. "Thanks it was only........" Suddenly Xander comes rushing in the door, nearly breathless.
"What's is it?" Buffy asked "Whats wrong?"
"The Master is back! He is at the Bronze right now with about 10 other vampires. They are killing everyone!" Xander replied.
Buffy grabs her steak, and starts to get up to leave when a sudden rush of air blows past her making her hair stand up for a second. She looks at Giles. He looked as confused as she did.
Suddenly Buffy realizes that Clark is not there. "Wheres Clar......."
But before she could finish her sentence, Clark rushes back in, almost as if materializing in front of them.
"What was that all about Clark?" Buffy asked. But before Clark could answer she says "Nevermind, we have to go to the Bronze! There are people dying." "No they're not, everything is ok." Clark said. "It is?" Giles asked.
"Yea, I took care of it." "You took care of it? The Master?"
"Yep" Clark replies, not wanting to sound too arrogant.
The group just stands there and looks around. An odd moment of silence goes by.
Then Anya speaks. " Anyway, like i was saying the shirt was only 19 dollars, i just had to get it."

[SexyLex]

lol! Well it's true, the couple may not have worked, but I had to try it. I like the idea of the two of them because I think they are strong characters, but to each his own...:) Thank you for your constructive feedback! :)

[Wooderson_Grey]

Dont get me wrong, I love what you have written. I would like to continue to read it. I was just thinking what it would be like if Clark were a permanent fixture in Sunnydale.
Your story is cool because it tells about Clark getting his feet wet to the whole 'vampire' thing. And i think you have nailed what Clark would act like in that vein. And i wasnt even thinking about Clark and Buffy as a couple, which would change a lot of things about the way Clark would behave around her and even how he would use his powers.
Please SexyLex, make a sequel! We dont have any new SV to watch right now, so its really cool to read your story chapters.Because, believe me, I wasnt ripping on your story, I was really just spelling out what i wouldnt want to happen if Clark lived in Sunnydale for good, which i know, was not your point of view. Heres why its good to read your stories...
1. Because you are a good writer.
2. I love Smallville.
3. I love Buffy the Vampire Slayer
So please, if you have the time and want to, it would be cool if you posted some more!!!

[SexyLex]

Thank you, Wooderson Grey for your kind feedback! :) I agree, Clark couldn't be a permanent fixture in Sunnydale. It would be weird. He was just helping out...:) I am thinking seriously of doing a sequel in Kansas...so stay tuned and thank you again! :)