Gone Bye Karina

[kina_jo]

gone

chapter 1

i ran as fast as i can....away....away from him. at the age of thirteen i had good grade nice freinds and got along with everybody. some people would say i had a perfect life, but they were wrong. ever scince i was little i had this beast after me. at birth my family went into hiding for i was said to become the most powerful wich in the world. it had finaly found me after years of searching.

i ran inside "mom it found me, what do i do? were do i go?" i said in a panic voice.

"run", my mom said, "run and never return, untill it is safe." my mom went behind the couch and gave me a suit case she said "you have cloths and food."

"mom i love you"

"i love you too." she said , "go". i ran outside hoped on my bike and petaled and petaled with all my might. after hours of petaling i fell into a hole, i dont remember anything after that..........

[Shadow116]

wow cool story Karina :)

[kina_jo]

thanks im going to continue it

[Shadow116]

No prob but as some advice you might wanna type chapters on Microsoft word or something before posting so you can use spell check and stuff.

Hope that helps a bit :lol:

But I really wanna see where this goes :)

[kina_jo]

chapter 2

"huh huh were am i," iasked myself.

i saw this creature tall not the same one i saw erleyer today he was a tall bear like creaturestanding over me. are you all right he asked.

"yes, what happened," i asked.

"you fell through the the portal into the magical world land ghont."

"what," i asked.

"never mind, want some tea."

"yes please", i answered. i felt a cold wind blow over my shoulder and agin he found me, "i got to go," i said, and ran grabing my suit case and leaving what was left of my bike.

i ran and ran until night fall covered the sky then i just calapsed on the ground and fell asleep.

THANKS FOR THE ADVICE, ASHLEY SPELL CHECKED IT WICH FIGURES BECAUSE WE BOTH HAVE BAD SPELLING

[Shadow116]

it's cool and Ch.2 was good and you started great I started with Chapters this short too :)

[kina_jo]

thanks i read a book once with one page chapters

[kina_jo]

chapter 3

the next morning i could hardly move, my legs arms and my whole body was sore. suddenly questions i had never thought of before popped in my head why if i was a which have i never used my powers?

finaly i got up and sighed "how will i get back home." i ate a peace of bred and started on my journy. but that question kept bugging me. finallyi stopped and tried my magic, but i had no magic spells. " twiddledee twiddle dumb i want a spell so give me one," a spell book suddenlyapeared. i picked it up put it in my suit case and keap walking.







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ok have you read the other two chapters o yah you wher here







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yep so how are you kina

hey kina do you want to meet me in the kryptonsit cuture thread?



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CHAPTER 4

MY MOUTH KEPT GETTING DRIER AND DRIER AS I WALKED FARTHER AND FARTHER. I WAS HOPING TO COME UPON A STREAM BUT NO SUCH LUCK. SUDDENLY I REMEMBERED MYSPELL BOOK. I SLOWLY OPENED THE PAGES ANDCAME TO A SPELL ON WATER, "WATER IN A GLASS APEAR HERE FAST," I READ. AS I LOOKED DOWN I SAW A GLASS OF WATER IN A PACH OF FLOWERS THE COLD FELT COLD AGINST MY LIPS AS I DRANK DOWN EVERY LAST BIT OF WATER. I THOUGHT I NEADED MORE TELL THE HOT AIR TURNED COOL, AND A BIIG BLACK CLOUD FORMED OVER HEAD. THERE WAS NO EXSCAPIG THIS TIME....UNLESS......