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kina_jo
07-21-2006, 01:40 PM
am i

am i invisable? am i not beautiful?
am i not wonderful?
or am i not good enough for you?

spring

the sun is out
the birds dance about
they chirp and sing
for it is spring

you

you are my love
your my only true love
you are the one
your the only one for me
cant you see
we belong together

invisable

i cant be seen
im not known
people dont notice im there
but like they care

im invisable
im not important


by karina

AshRose62
07-21-2006, 02:02 PM
thoughs are pretty good:)

Shadow116
07-21-2006, 07:53 PM
wow suprisingly good :D

kina_jo
07-21-2006, 07:55 PM
thanks i love writing poems

AshRose62
07-21-2006, 08:05 PM
I like them KK

kina_jo
07-21-2006, 08:18 PM
Thanks Ash

AshRose62
07-22-2006, 04:03 PM
No problem

rae19780625
07-27-2006, 04:39 AM
Wow... I really am impressed with your poetry... truly lovely...

kina_jo
07-27-2006, 01:04 PM
thank you

supergirl_1095
08-04-2006, 05:41 PM
Those are really cool kina jo! I like the one 'Invisible' best.

Shadow116
08-06-2006, 09:19 PM
nice kina sorry I haven't stopped by in awhile :) *hugs*

kina_jo
08-12-2006, 12:27 PM
*hugs* j.d thanks for stoping by

fatima
08-12-2006, 10:39 PM
the poems are nice i like they!!! more!

kina_jo
08-13-2006, 01:32 PM
I HAVE A THREAD OF MY NEW POEMS AND I HAVE ALREADY ADDED ON TO IT