You're my everything

[Venezuelan Lana]

hi there, this is my first fan fic, though I tried to write one before but did not work out. Let's see... Clark does not live in Smallville; he lives in a City called Caracas (where I am from btw) and has a girlfriend called Daniellah. They have been together for 3 years now, and they also go to the same school in that city: Les Campites.

Now, the intresting part is that Clark is from Smallville, but when the meteor shower hit Jonathan and Martha decided to move to south america and have a brand new life over there, and Lana is also from Smallville and when she turns 16, Nell decided to move also to Latin America, but she did not know that the Kents also live in the same small city of Caracas. Her boyfriend's name is Diego and is a handsome latin 16 year old boy that was her best friend and the first person she met in Caracas.

The story begins when Clark and Lana first meet at the school. There's a character that will play a role very similar to the one Chloe has in the series, her name is Alesia and she wants to be friends with both Lana and Clark but they're just too stubborn to even notice. There's also Alesia's boyfriend named Juan Pablo that will try to make Clark's life impossible by trying to break him and Daniellah appart and also Lana and Diego.

I don't know if I should keep this weird idea of mine going on. Actually, this was my dream last night and of course I was Lana:D... So I guess I'll keep this idea on hold until someone encourages me to keep writting. For now, I just have three or four chapters written, so please tell me if I should continue. See you later, I guess...:lol:

[LovinMe210]

I think that it sounds interesting you should continue

[happycamper]

Sounds quite interesting, but please continue only if you promise to include a lot about Caracas and your country in the story...

:D :D

[emsfan]

GReat start... Please continue!!!

[maru11]

you must continue!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter one- the first day at school

It was a sunny, yet cold day, an average one for September in the city of Caracas. The birds were singing, the clouds were almost gone, the night went out and the day was rising when Clark Kent and Lana Lang woke up.

He was nervous and did not know why. Maybe because he already missed the vacations or because he was too damn excited about first day of school because he was going to see Daniellah for the first time after the vacations. She had gone three months to Switzerland alone to a border school because she wanted to learn photography. Nah, Clark had nothing to worry about his relationship because it was a girls’ school and they just went outside twice: to Disneyland Paris and to make some rappel on a close mountain. Clark was on his way to pick Daniellah up in his brand new car: a new convertible Mustang 2006. You might think that this was too much car for a 16 year old and you’re damn right. The car was electric blue, with white stripes on the sides and a custom engine that had like 400hp. The second Daniellah saw it, she screamed and squeaked and they both headed to the school that was like one mile away.

Lana, on the other hand, was too scared. She has always been a shy girl and she was ashamed of her Spanish and she was going into an average Venezuelan school called Les Campites, where Clark and Daniellah also attended. Luckily for her, Diego also attended to that school. Diego, for the ones that doesn’t know about it, is Lana’s hot-Latin new boyfriend. He was a tall, dark, handsome young man. Besides the fact that Diego was on almost every class Lana was going to attend, she was scared because she never liked people very much and did not know anything about any Venezuelan thing or affairs, not even politics or poetry or anything. Diego was so sure that everyone would like Lana and was so determined to introduce her to every friend of his. Unfortunately for Lana, Nell decided to drive her to the school. It was embarrassing and, when she arrived, everyone already knew she was a new student.

Once in the school, Lana had a hard time finding her locker and when she already had found it she practically ran to it. All she wanted was to hide inside it and to be back at Smallville High. Without noticing, she accidentally ran into our dear Clark and knocked him off. This was the most embarrassing thing she had done so far but, when she shyly looked up at his amazing green eyes, she noticed she had ran into the most beautiful man she had ever seen. The feeling was almost the same for Clark; he felt like he was in heaven because he was watching an angel in his feet. Daniellah was the one that broke the awkward moment by saying:

Daniellah: “OMG CLAAAAAAARK! ARE YOU OK??? HUN ARE YOU HURT? DO I HAVE TO KICK SOME GIRL’S BUTT ALREADY TODAY?????????”

Clark: “Nah, sweetie, all that has happened is that this girl ran accidentally into me because I was too damn busy looking at you”

At this, Daniellah blushed and Lana was even more embarrassed and also was angry with him, like she was jealous or something. She ran into the classroom and waited, burying her head in her hands, for the teacher to come in. When she already had, she asked if there was some new student in that class and everyone pointed at Lana, who had fell asleep. The teacher threw a chalk at her and hit her on the forehead and Lana suddenly woke up and everyone, including Diego, Clark and Daniellah was laughing at her. The rest of the day went like this and she knew she had to stop it.

Lana, in the lunch hour, decided to run away from school using one of the fire exits. In a weird coincidence, she found Clark sitting alone, like hiding from the world, in the fire exit. He decided to stay quiet and hoped Lana did not noticed and she did the same. Suddenly, she felt like her feet were moving toward him. Lana sat down beside Clark and he froze. After some minutes of awkward tension she decided to move on with her plan of running away and he, at the same time, decided to get into the building and to find Daniellah.

When Lana ran away she was broken up in tears. All she wanted was to be back home in Smallville and wished she never went to Caracas. At school, no one noticed she was gone. Not even Diego, he was too busy talking to his new friend Alesia, an average Venezuelan girl whose parents are billionaires. Lana got home a few minutes afterwards and locked herself up in her bedroom. She cried herself to sleep and then a few minutes later Nell woke her up because she had a visitor. Lana did not know who this visitor might be and walked made a mess towards the living room. Clark Kent was waiting for her at the patio of her building.

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hehehe, there's my first update, tell me what you think of it :lol:

[emsfan]

Wow this is great story i can't wait for the next post.. please more...:)

[maitriniazngurl]

Hey, It's great so far...kinda funny and I love the names :D

And you should continue... but please discrible what South America is like.

PPMS!! :D

[LovinMe210]

ppms!!!

[clark&lanafan06]

This is good so far . PPMS!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm working in an update right now... maybe I'll post it tomorrow's morning, I'm too tired because of tennis training. In the next few updates I will try to explain what Caracas is like (a mess)((Who said that???)) but the little problem is that I write in Spanish and so many times I don't know how to translate it to English, that's why in the first chapter I tried not to get too poetty or whatever it's spelled like... But I'll try to and maybe include some poems and phylosophycall thoughts I've been working on since a few months ago...

*evil grin* And also the next chapter will have some hot flashbacks to Lana's time in Smallville High... That's all I'll say about it... *Zipped mouth and trying to make an evil grin but grimaces in pain*

[happycamper]

Nice start! I certainly appreciate the effort to write in another language - I've never been able to learn more than grammer myself despite studying both German and Japanese (absolutely no ability to remember any vocabulary!!).

Setting the story in such an exotic (for most of us, anyway) locale certainly provides an opportunity to learn different cultures and customs!

PPMS!!


:D :D

[maru11]

awesome start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and i know waht u mean about the english stuff because i´m form panama and we speak spanish and i dont speak english very well!!!!!!!!!!!!!
congratulations on your effort to write this fic!!!

[emogirl*88]

i love it so far!
plz update again!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter two- an unexpected visitor
Part one

Clark was thinking, like lost in himself, while he was watching some boys and girls swim in the nice pool of Lana’s building. Most of Venezuelan people live in buildings, huge ones, because it’s safer than houses (for the amount of people that live in the same places, the cops are more present than in houses urbanizations, and the buildings always have security armed people to fight burglars), at least in this city where 24 people get killed in just one day. Yeah, the thieves got the city made a mess and there’s no justice that make them be in jail or maybe just get punished somehow. They just make their August in these streets. Clark was thinking of all this. With his powers and his willingness to help people he could somehow make the city a little bit more habitable. He just wasn’t willing to give up on his life and become a full-time saviour for this city, where he wasn’t even born. He was just brought there so he could be away from all the mess the meteor shower caused and, Jonathan being Jonathan, his parents decided that he would be better away. He did not will to have a double life either. It would hurt too damn much the people around him if they knew, and, if they didn’t, it would also hurt because of all the secrecy and hiding stuff from the ones he loved. It was just too many sacrifices to make.

Lana was busy while making herself a little more presentable. Her makeup was made a mess, her hair was all scrambled, even her clothes where all wrinkled up and she didn’t even have socks on her little feet. Her head was also made a mess. Why would this Clark Kent visit her? She didn’t even know whom the h*** he was. Which one of the jerks of the school would be such an even greater jerk to make this to her? In that moment, she remembered something that happened back in Smallville High with this guy named Whitney Fordman, a guy she hated

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Flashback

Lana was heading to her bedroom when this guy she hated the most knocked at her door. It was Whitney.

Whitney: “Hey there, I was hoping we could hang out for a while”
Lana: “I’m sorry, who are you again?”
Whitney: “I’m Whitney Fordman. I go also to Smallville High and was hoping I could get some kind of date with you”
Lana: “Maybe some girl would fall to your feet with that excuse for getting inside my house and trying to make me become one of the many girls you’ve “hanged out with””

At this, Whitney was speechless because no other girl has ever known him so well before dating him. He just left and got his mind off of Lana when other girl just came to mind: Edie, his ex-girlfriend.

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Is this Clark going to try to make the same? He has a girlfriend, for God’s sake! He’s just as gross as Whitney! Why has he even come to my place and try the same lame excuse this guy tried? Doesn’t he even know of some thought called Fidelity or faith? Bah, he’s just a player. How does he look like? Is he hot? At least if he’s hot he could manage his way out of the right woman’s scorn… Someone one told me that a woman’s scorn was even hotter than hell itself and I support that theory *Lets out a giggle*

In this moment, Nell calls Lana. She has been laughing out loud for like 2 minutes already and this Kent is still on the patio. She works out something in her hair and is ready to head downstairs already. Lana’s hair was pulled up in a loose knot, got some “Cholas” on (some kind of Venezuelan shoes) and wore a really big sweater with the Smallville High’s logo. You know, the scarecrow in a circle…

When Lana saw who Clark was she nearly choked but managed not to. She was amazed of how gorgeous he looked in just a regular t-shirt. She almost could tell he had an amazing 6 pack. She was amazed and somehow jealous of Daniellah because of what she has: a boyfriend as hot as Clark Kent. Lana got lost in the most amazing blue eyes she had ever seen. The laughs of the little kids went out, the sun was not bright anymore, everything was jus concentrated in his eyes. A pair of eyes like those can not be found like dust in the wind… “oh god help! What has gotten into me?, I just want to be with him like this moment forever, I want to freeze this moment so it can last a lifetime and even longer. I’ve never felt like this about anyone, not even Diego… Oh Diego… What will I do? I have a boyfriend, he has a girlfriend that he is not able to betray. Oh! Look how pathetic I must sound…………..”

Kent, on the other side, was kissing her passionately in his mind. He wanted so much to get to know her, to develop a lasting friendship with her and, when he breaks up with Daniellah eventually, he could be with this girl he hasn’t even met yet. “Oh how could I be thinking of her so much? What has gotten into me? Can’t I just make this moment last forever and forget about everything else, my abilities, my weird relationship with Dani… You pathetic human imitation stop thinking about this now…”

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I'll post the rest of it tomorrow. It has gotten bigger than I expected to :lol:

PS: THANKS FOR ALL THE FEEDBACK... I REALLY APPRECIATE IT... maru I shouldn't have too much problems writing in English, my school has this weird program of international baccalaureate and they make us study 10 hours a week of English... but learning grammar and vocabulary is far different from trying all the spanish thoughts to become a mid-sensed sentence in English :rotfl:

[maitriniazngurl]

Whoa..... I didn't know that your all Spanish... I just thought you're English but your going to Venuzula. Your writting is really good for someone who is Spanish..

I know what you mean.. saying a sentence in English is backwards from saying it in Spanish.. right? Well... I've can talk a bit of Spanish but I can never right a whole story. I applaud you.. your English is really good. :D

Btw. Great update!! I can't believe all those people were so mean.. to her.

P.S... does Smallville come on in Panama? b/c My good friend is there visiting her family and for a whole year I've been trying to get her to watch SV she's watched like 3 episodes then she went on vacation and I'm just making sure they have there so I can nagg her when she gets back... :D :D :) :) :D

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeahh.. smallville was on tv on panama until it get to the 4 season and they took it off air, they are waiting until season5 came in dvd so they can put it on air again.
the only way u can watch it is on cable.

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter two – an unexpected visitor
Part two

Clark was still sitting near the pool when Lana was approaching him. She decided she was going to let him talk first. She did not want to have any kind of prejudices about him. Why would she? Lana hasn’t even talked to him yet. He cut all of these thoughts on Lana’s mind by saying

Clark: “Hello. I guess you don’t even know who I am. Let me introduce myself; I’m Clark Kent from your school. The English teacher, Mr. Rodriguez, asked me to see if you were ok after running away from school and, personally, after I saw you almost broken up in tears, I wanted to see by myself you were ok and to offer you my friendship and support to get through the transition from the states to Venezuela. Trust me, I know it’s a really hard one. So let’s talk about yourself ok?”

Lana: “Yeah… so, what do you want to know?”

Clark: “how about where are you from? Can you tell me how are the things up there? I haven’t had any news of the states in a while..”

Lana: “Why are you so interested? Are you from the states also? By the way, I’m from Smallville, a small town in Kansas”

Clark: “ Yeah, my parents used to live in Smallville also when the meteor shower hit, then I was adopted and we practically ran to Caracas. Since then I live here, isolated from the rest of the known world…”

Lana: “awww, poor thing, I feel the same way. Can I ask you something?”

Clark: “sure”

Lana: “How come you and your parents decided to live in here?”

Clark: “I’ll tell you if you tell me”

Lana: “Fine, you first”

Clark: “ They thought I could use a fresh start after the meteor shower. I wasn’t from Smallville and they did not want me to see their town broken into pieces just because of a meteor shower. So they left.”

Lana: “Aww, I’m sorry. My parents died that day. Since then I live with my aunt Nell. But before my mother died, she asked Nell to promise her that we would leave Smallville if something bad happened and to head to South America. Nell was the one who decided to come to Caracas. I just wanted to stay in Smallville but a promise is a promise and has to be fulfilled.”

Clark: “ You’re here now. That means something bad had to happen. Can I ask what it is?”

Lana: “sure thing. Nell used to have this boyfriend, Dean. They were about to get married and I never saw Nell as happier as the day it happened. Dean decided to go to Metropolis to do some shopping. He carried like 20.000$ in cash that day because he had saved them in his piggy and also was going to put them on the bank. Not soon after he got to Metropolis, we got a call from the Metropolis PD. He got murdered that day and Nell was broken so she decided to finally keep the promise she made to my mom. The next thing I knew, I was heading to the south in an airplane”

Clark: “I’m sorry, Lana. Can I do something for making things better?”

Lana: “For now, just promise you’ll try to make things better in the school”

Clark: “Sure thing, I promise you I will and remember I do never break my promises” He said with that Kent smile Lana was going to see much more often.

The awkwardness between them was rising. Lana was sitting on the bench with her sweater’s sleeves up her elbows. Clark was sitting on the floor, just in front of her. He was so big his face was almost in the same level Lana’s was. As the sound of the kids playing on the pool was fading, Clark found himself inching closer and closer to Lana. He could not resist. In the exact moment their lips were almost touching, someone called Lana.

“Lana, what the h**** are you doing?”
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If I get at least one comment, I'll post the rest of chapter two today, after I finish writting it. Oh, btw maitriniazngurl thanks for the encouraging comments. And thank you so much for thinking I was English, I've always wanted to be british and, fortunately for me, my English teacher is british, so I do talk with the funny accent she taught me. And yeah, almost all venezuelan people are kinda rough to a person they first meet. it's some kinda self deffense mechanism... But, as I lived some years in the states when I was little I am not like most of venezuelan... hehe... :D

[maitriniazngurl]

Hey Great update!! I bet it's Diego who's yelling at her!!

And same here.. I've always wanted to be American..not British but I did have a British teacher one year... when I was like in the 9th grade... and it's hard to understand.. well for me..and I would love to go to South America one day.. it sounds great!!

P.S: I'm expecting that update!!

[clark&lanafan06]

Busted ! Great update ! Can't wait for the next update !

[clana1fan4ever]

awsome! cant wait for more!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

sorry I didn't update on Saturday... my mom wanted me to drive her to the mall and help her make some shopping and today sunday it was some weird kinda children's day and my parents wanted me to spend the day with my little sis... Sorry! I'll update tomorrow's morning, it's late in here and I need some serious sleep after spending all the day with Erika... So I'll see ya tomorrow :D bye for now

[clark&lanafan06]

Great can't wait !

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter two – an unexpected visitor
Part three

Lana was caught off of guard by this sudden yelling. It was not Diego, as most of you might think. It was Nell who was looking for her because she has been worried that Lana was alone with this stranger. She didn’t know it was her high school old boyfriend’s son. Nell was in shock after seeing Lana almost kissing a boy that wasn’t her boyfriend, Diego. “What has gotten into her head? Is she insane or what?”

Nell: “Lana, please go inside the apartment right away while I have a little talk with this young man sitting in front of me”

Lana: “But… Nell!” She said with the most gorgeous puppy-watery eyes she could manage. Nell finally gave up.

Nell: “ fine! But be sure you’ll be in the house within 10 minutes from now”

Lana: “Thanks”

Nell, walking away: “Welcome” They both kept staring at her while she was walking away. None of them knew what to say to each other…

Lana’s thoughts: “ OH MY! What the heck am I doing, almost kissing Clark? OH god, I hope Nell won’t tell Diego or his mom! You’re insane, Lana. Just that Clark reminds you of him you don’t have to kiss him! But! What was he thinking when he inched closer? He has a girlfriend for god’s sake! But… why do he reminds me so much of Chad? What is their resemblance? I think I just had a deja vu or something. This can’t be. Uh-uh… It’s impossible. He hasn’t been in the States in a while. But… What does Clark consider a while? So many questions unanswered!”

Clark thoughts: “ Stupid, stupid BDA! What the heck are you thinking? She could notice you’ve been in Smallville before! And I know you don’t want that”

Lana was trying to make a coherent thought in her head when Diego showed up behind them and hugged her from behind.

Diego: “Hi my dear Lana. How are you doing?”

Lana: “Me? Hum, I guess I’m ok… How are you?”

Diego: “I’m ok. So… Clark, what are you doing in here?”

Clark: “Umm… I was just checking on her as Mr. Rodriguez asked me to. And what are you doing here?”

Diego: “I’m just visiting my girlfriend. Why do you ask?”

Clark: “ umm I just wanted to know. So… I’m going to go now. Things are getting kind of awkward.”

Diego: “Yes, they are. So, bye”

Lana: “umm… Bye Clark, See you around.”

Clark, looking only to Lana: “Bye, see you at school”

Lana: “Diego, what was all that about?”

Diego: “ Nothing, just me taking care of my girlfriend”

Lana: “You know I do not need your protection. He came to say to me that Mr. Rodriguez has asked him to be my mentor.”

Diego: “WHAT????”

Lana: “It’s not a big deal. I mean… I-I do not like him” She said, lying

Diego: “You’re not a very good liar, my dear”

Lana: “And now you imply I’m a liar! Great!”

Diego: “I didn’t mean it like that!”

Lana: “I’ll talk to you later. Nell wants me to go home now. She came downstairs a while ago and asked me to come over before 10 minutes. Dinner is ready”

Diego: “I guess I’ll see you tomorrow then. Bye”

Lana: “Bye hun”
Lana walked away, towards her building. She was afraid of what Nell might say or do. She wasn’t a pretty good mom in that department.
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I'll post the next chapter tomorrow: The fight! MWAHAHAHA:D

[clana1fan4ever]

PPMS!!!

i kinda have a feeling that Nell is going to tell Diego

[clark&lanafan06]

Good update ppms !!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey there... I'm just writting to let you know that there might be a short update today before I go out and party with my friends but first I'll go and get ready and then maybe I'll manage to write something and get it posted... See you guys later...

[maitriniazngurl]

I bet.. Nell is going to tell Diego's Mom... :D

[Totalclanafan614]

Wow! I just started reading this!!
I like it a lot! :D
PPMS!!
I wonder what the connection is between Clark and Chad??
hmm..

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter three – The fight

Lana found herself opening her flat’s door when Nell yelled at her… they were both decided to start a yelling contest this evening and they both wanted badly to win it…

Nell: “HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND OR WHAT?”

Lana: “WHAT?”

Nell: “DON’T WHAT ME! I WANT TO KNOW THE REASON OF YOUR ALMOST-MAKING OUT SESSION WITH THIS CLARK KENT!”

Lana: “ NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS… AFTER ALL, I THOUGHT YOU WEREN’T INTRESTED IN MY PERSONAL LIFE… SINCE YOU HATE ME SO MUCH THAT YOU MADE ME LEAVE SMALLVILLE AND ALL MY LIFE BEHIND AND START OVER IN THIS LIVING H***”

Nell: “I DO NOT HATE YOU, YOU B****! IT WAS A PROMISE I MADE TO YOUR MOTHER! I WOULD HAVE GIVEN UP MY LIFE IN A SECOND TO SWITCH PLACES WITH MY SISTER AND LET YOU HAVE A NORMAL LIFE, YOU UNCONSIDERED BRAT!”

Lana: “Nell... I… I… I WOULD LOVE THAT ALSO! SO WHY DON’T WE PRAY FOR A MIRACLE TO HAPPEN AND THEN I COULD BE BACK AT HOME WITH MY MOM AND DAD, WHERE I BELONG???”

Nell determined to win this: “ LANA ELIZABETH LANG! IF YOU CONTINUE I WILL HAVE YOU GROUNDED UNTIL YOU HAVE YOUR FOURTH GRANDCHILDREN”

Lana: “ THEN YOU WOULD BE DEATH AND I WOULDN’T BE GROUNDED ANYMORE!!!” at this they both broke down and started to cry…

Nell: “GO TO YOUR ROOM IMMEDIATELY! AND BEFORE YOU GO AND MAKE YOUR USUAL PLAY OF HEART-BROKEN ORPHAN LIVING WITH A HATEFUL SUBSTITUTE MOTHER GIVE ME THE ADRESS OF THIS KENT AND THEN STAY IN YOUR ROOM FOREVER”

Lana: “FINE! CLARK ALSO LIVES IN THIS BUILDING. APARTMENT 102-C! BYE YOU B****! SEE YA AT H***”

Lana finally found a way to get to her bedroom. While she was there she broke down and cried herself to sleep. In the meanwhile, Nell was trying to make herself presentable enough to go and meet some neighbours. After a half hour she was done and could still hear Lana crying. This made her heart shatter into pieces. Million of pieces. She didn’t mean most of the things she said. But… She had been honest when she told her she would rather die herself than her sister.

------Kent’s Home-----

Martha Kent was in her kitchen, just cooking. Jonathan wasn’t home, he was working. Clark had locked himself in his room after arriving from the patio. This was weird, but Martha didn’t mind. She just thought it was some normal teenage attacks, you know, those they hate everyone and think everyone was a b**** or SOAB… then, she heard a knock on her door, not knowing how awkward things were about to get….

[clana1fan4ever]

wow that was a good update ppms!!!

[Totalclanafan614]

Nice Update! :D

[maitriniazngurl]

lol... I've got to say... WOW!! I Cant' blieve they said those things.. your story does give me lots of laughs... especailly the THEN YOU WOULD BE DEAD!! Part... hilarious!!

Great update!! :D :D

PPMS!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter four – Growing Awkwardness

There was a knock on the Kent’s door. Martha did not recognize the woman standing at her door. She thought she saw her somewhere else. And then it hit her: Nell Potter, Jonathan’s high school sweetheart. “OMG! What is she doing in here????”

Nell: “Hi, I take as you are Mrs. Kent. My name’s Nell Potter, aunt of Lana Lang, a friend of your son Clark.”

Martha: “ Hi, nice to meet you. I think that you’re American, for your accent.”

Nell: “Yes, I am. So… Can I come in? this will only take a few minutes”

Martha: “Yes, please come in Miss Potter”

Nell: “So, is your son Clark around? He might want to be here so he can defend himself”

Martha: “Defend from what?”

Nell: “oh well… I found Clark and Lana in the patio… they were almost kissing when I stopped them. See, the fact is that Lana has a boyfriend. And I think Clark wanted her to cheat on Diego.”

Martha: “OMG! Clark also has a girlfriend… What can I do for you, miss Potter?”

Nell: “Make sure you keep Clark away from my Lana, that would do.”

Martha: “I’ll see what can I do. So, can I offer you a cup of coffee?”

Nell: “Sure thing. So, what part of the states are you from?”

Martha: “Kansas… I used to live in Metropolis until I married John and then moved to his farm at Smallville.”

Nell’s thought: “OMG! Is that Jonathan Kent’s wife??? The one that broke us up??? The one that, without knowing, broke our engagement?? Oh, now I have real reasons to keep Lana away from them. They’re professional home breakers!”

Martha: “Is there anything wrong Miss Potter? You just chocked on your coffee”

Nell’s thought: “Don’t worry, you smart*** b****, I’m ok, with or without your husband”

Nell: “Nothing wrong, I’m perfectly fine.”

The talking between these two woman continued without any interruption until both Clark and Jonathan irrupted into the kitchen. Nell was amazed to see John again. She was amused because of his gorgeous body and face. Then, he kissed Martha and said hello to Clark before he noticed her sitting there with his wife.

Nell: “Hi, Mr. Kent. I just came here to talk a while to Martha. Oh, by the way, my name’s Nell Potter. Nice to meet you.”

Jonathan, in shock: “Nice to meet you, Miss Potter. I’m Jonathan Kent and this is my son Clark.”

Nell: “Oh, I’ve already met Clark before, haven’t we Clark?”

Clark, turning million of shadows of red: “Yes, madam, we have met before.”

With this Clark ran into his room and closed the door behind him, leaving behind a very confused Jonathan, an ashamed Martha and an amazed Nell.

Nell: “I should be leaving now. Nice to meet you, Mr. and Mrs. Kent. I’ll go now and make some dinner to Lana. Bye”

Jonathan, still confused: “uh, bye”

Martha: “Bye, Nell stop by anytime.”

Nell, giving Jonathan an unseen by Martha mischievous look: “Oh, yeah, I sure will”

Jonathan, after Nell left: “What was all that about, my dear Martha?”

Martha: “she found some former farm boy ALMOST making out with her niece, Lana Lang”

Jonathan, to himself: “oh my… Thing are not going to be easy from now on, are they?”

Martha: “would you mind to tell me what the heck’s going on in here?”

Jonathan just looked away into the space. Martha knew something was wrong, but didn’t know yet. At the same time, Nell was planning her vengeance for what Martha Clark had done to her.
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So, here's the update for today. If I get at least 5 replies, then I'll post the next chapter: Planning the vengeance

[Totalclanafan614]

#1
Good update!!
comeon ppl 4 more!!
lol PPMS!

[clana1fan4ever]

great update!!! ppms

[clark&lanafan06]

Great Update !!!!!!!!!!! ppms !!!!!!!!

[happycamper]

Oh my...complications. I would really hate to be in Jonathan's shoes right now!:lol:

Why such a great heartache over the near kiss? Teenagers here are expected to go through a lot of break-ups as part of growing up...are you used to something different?

The language you use in the conversations actually seems to highlight quite a bit of the differences on how those in Venezuela would address and talk to one another versus those of us here in Hawaii and the rest of the U.S. Very interesting!

And I want to find out more about Caracas!!!

:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by happycamper
Oh my...complications. I would really hate to be in Jonathan's shoes right now!:lol:

Why such a great heartache over the near kiss? Teenagers here are expected to go through a lot of break-ups as part of growing up...are you used to something different?

The language you use in the conversations actually seems to highlight quite a bit of the differences on how those in Venezuela would address and talk to one another versus those of us here in Hawaii and the rest of the U.S. Very interesting!

And I want to find out more about Caracas!!!

:D :D

Happycamper, the great headache about the near kiss is that Venezuelan people expect us,the teenagers, to have lasting relationships of years and years... Yes, venezuelan culture is pretty weird; they expect us to act like adults even if you're just 9 years old. In here we're different from American people and Lana is about to find out in the hard way *evil grin*

oh, btw... thank you all for the feedback... i really appreciate it! :D ;)

[lanalang1234]

i think that u should make them be together more and this will be very good on how he meets lana just make them love each other like they do in smallville

[maitriniazngurl]

Wow, that's just like the Asian traditions.. my parents wouldn't let me get a boyfriend till I'm 16!! And I had to bring him to meet them.. and once your married.. you can't get divorced!! (Well that was a tradition long ago) I understand why it's different then in the U.S

btw Great update!! and I can't wait to see the payback!! hehehe.. your story has so many people that are acting...so.. bad..like Nell. :lol:

PPMS!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey, there will be an update today... I'll just go and take a shower, cuz I just got home from tennis trainning (The trainer has tried to kill me!!!!:O), and then I'll work on it and post it... See ya guys later! :D

[emogirl*88]

love this!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter five – The vengeance

Nell Potter was making dinner on her brand new kitchen, but also was planning the vengeance that she was going to apply on Martha Kent for stealing her man. She was mad at her since always, but never got the nerve or the chance to get back. Suddenly, it hit her.

Nell’s POV

What can I do? What? Is it possible for me to get back at her without hurting Jonathan in the meanwhile? Can I set her lovely kitchen on fire? No, it would be too simple. OH! OH! Can I hire some thieves? No… it would be too obvious. What is the most hurtful thing I can do to a mother? Make her children be hurt? DING DING DING! Someone has won a prize!!! But… how can I make Clark ache without getting him hurt physically? Think, Nell, think!!! Martha said… MARTHA SAID CLARK HAD A GIRLFRIEND!!! That’s it! What if I encourage Lana to break them up? No, Lana would need some reason to hurt someone she doesn’t know yet… But… she can do something for me… I’ll make them spend more time together! And then… when the kiss happens, I’ll take a picture of them and send it to his girl! And then they’ll break up and Martha will ache for her little boy!!! THAT’S IT!!! I GOT MY PLAN!!! Now… let’s get the hands dirty! HAHAHA!!!

End of Nell’s POV

In the meanwhile Lana was sleeping soundly at her bedroom, having a nice dream about some boy we all love. Nell didn’t try to wake her up. Not yet. Her plan would take months to work, but it WILL work. She was going to make sure of it.

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Sorry for the short update. I'm off of ideas. I think my "thinking" brain has just lost that characteristic because of tennis training... I'm going to bed now, I'll update tomorrow's afternoon or night... See ya then

[happycamper]

Somehow, I can't help believing that Nell's plan is going to have some unintended consequences that are going to greatly displease her, but make us Clana fans much happier! :p

Can't wait for the results!!

:D :D

[clana1fan4ever]

good update ppms!!!

[maru11]

awesome updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter six – Dreams, dreams, dreams…
Part one

Clark had fallen asleep in his bedroom. Lana was in deep sleep also. They were both having the same dream. A dream that looked so real. As it had happened before, or it was something that was going to happen.

Dream sequence

Lana was getting dressed. She had a date in the early evening, at 2:00 pm. It was a date with her boyfriend: Clark Kent. She had no idea where they were going, but Clark made her know that she had to dress in a pair of jeans and running shoes. She was wondering about where they were going to when she heard a knock on the door and asked Nell to open for her, since she wasn’t ready yet. She had to work on her hair and apply some makeup. She hadn’t noticed yet, but it was 2:00pm already. “OMG I am running late! Hurry, Lana, hurry!”

Clark was waiting for her at the living room. Nell was making some lemonade for both of them as Clark was pacing around the living room, really nervous. He planned a date on the mountain, specifically in the Avila mountain. It’s the mountain that surrounds Caracas. The Avila is 3000m over the level of the sea and it’s a national park of Venezuela. There’s a little town in the top, called Galipan, which is famous around the world because there, in the top of the mountain, if you look at the right, you see the ocean, an, if you look at the left, you see the city. It’s an amazing feeling, to feel at the top of the world. There’s an ice-skating ring in the little town.There are two ways to get there: first, in some special Jeeps the city has to get there, and second, and most beautiful, in a cableway. He had chosen for the date to go in the cableway, because you get to see really close all the fauna and flora that is in the great park.

Nell: “Clark, have you been listening to anything I’ve been telling you lately?”

Clark: “Huh? I’m sorry, Nell, I was working on the little details of the date”

Nell: “Oh, ok. Can I tell you something?”

Clark: “sure, what is it?”

Nell: “Make sure your big date has lilacs and irises for Lana. They’re her favorite flowers.” She said with a wink.

Clark: “sure thing, my dear Nell.” He said giving her the most bright Kent smile he had given someone that wasn’t Lana. “Nell, do you mind tell Lana that if she wants to get the date then we should hurry to get there on time? I have many surprises to her and I don’t want them to be wasted”

Nell: “Yeah, I’ll bring her in a minute. Finish your lemonade, I bet you’re going to need it by the time you see Lana”

Minutes later, an stunning Lana comes out of her bedroom. She had a pair of light blue jeans, a pair of white and blue training shoes, a light red t-tank top with a dark blue button shirt open. Lana’s hair was pulled back in a knot and had little makeup. She also had with her a jacket, because Clark told her to bring one. Clark was speechless.

“how do I look, drooling Clark?” She asked

Clark, waking up: “uh… You look amazingly beautiful.”

Lana blushed at this and motioned to the door. “You don’t mind if we go to the date, do you? Or you just want to stay there drooling all over the house?” Lana and Nell giggled at this and Clark blushed hardly.

Clark: “So, it’s time we get on the road, don’t you think, my dear?”

Lana: “Sure. Bye, Nell! Love you!”

Nell: “Bye Lana. Clark. Take care!”

Clark and Lana: “Sure we will” they both grinned at each other and left Lana’s place. When they entered the car, Clark’s mustang, he started the engine and immediately hit play in the stereo. It started playing a song they both loved: Iris, by the goo goo dolls.

And I'd give up forever to touch you
Cause I know that you feel me somehow
You're the closest to heaven that I'll ever be
And I don't want to go home right now

Clark wasn’t driving yet. He was singing the song to Lana, looking her straight in the eye and holding her hands. She had no idea how much these words meant to Clark, because she didn’t know about his abilities yet.

And all I can taste is this moment
And all I can breathe is your life
Cause sooner or later it's over
I just don't want to miss you tonight

And I don't want the world to see me
Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am
while Clark sang the chorus, Lana saw him holding back some tears. She just wanted to hold him tight and never let him go. Never…

And you can't fight the tears that ain't coming
Or the moment of truth in your lies
When everything seems like the movies
Yeah you bleed just to know your alive

And I don't want the world to see me
Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

I don't want the world to see me
Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am

I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am
I just want you to know who I am

When Clark finished singing, he was crying, and so was Lana. He inched closer to her and kissed her tenderly. In the meantime, he tried to wipe away her tears. Neither one of them wanted to let go of the other but they had to due to lack of air. Clark then whispered softly to her ear: “Lana, we need to get going now, the Avila is waiting for us” Lana grinned from ear to ear and then gave him a soft peck on the cheek. “ So, let’s get going then”

oh, and btw... I might post the rest of this chapter today after I get home from the gym... So... see ya then:D

[Totalclanafan614]

Cool updates :D
PPMS

[happycamper]

Ah, I've always wanted to ride a cable car up a big mountain. You make me want to visit Galipan . . . perhaps in a future where our nations are closer. :(

So the dream is allowing Clark to learn true details about our dear Lana (irises and lilacs). It's just too bad Nell can't be as nice in real life.

Clark singing was also very nice . . .


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

hi there... I might not be able to finish the update I'm working on today... It's a long one and I want to get it done right.. Besides, I have a date tonight and gotta get ready for it... So... I'll see ya guys later...

[Totalclanafan614]

I hope your date goes well!!
PPMS! :D

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[clana1fan4ever]

Nice update!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

totalclanafan614, my date went very well, thanks... and btw, thank you all for the encouraging comments, as I've said before, I really appreciate it...:D

Chapter six- Dreams, dreams, dreams
Part two

Clark drove smoothly the Mustang down the intricate and busy streets of Caracas while Lana was holding his right hand. It was too bad he didn’t have a truck so they could be cuddling while Clark drove. They were both silent, lost in the amazing feeling of just being together. Lana had not thought about her former boyfriend, Chad, in the whole day, she was just too excited about her date with her new boyfriend. Clark, on the other hand, was thinking about where to get irises and lilacs for her. “OH! I know where! Once we’re in Galipan, I can visit Mr. Pacheco and ask him the favor!” He just wanted them both to have a different day. A day away from that concrete forest Caracas has build into, due to all the four million persons that live in it. Some of them are like monkeys living in the forest, some like little bugs, some like panthers and some, like Clark, are the saviors of the innocent.

Clark’s thought: “Why am I not capable to keep my mind off of saving innocent for just one minute? ARGH! I’m supposed to be having the best date ever and I’m thinking on how to save more innocent!”

They were both enjoying themselves. Clark started to surf the radio, looking for something nice to listen to, because he was bored of the same old CDs he had in his car and forgot to bring with him his CD case. “beautifully played, BDA!”

He was driving carefully, not fast as he usually did, because he was with Lana and didn’t want to have an accident like the one that killed his friend Marbel few months ago, in January. He would be able to live, although, and tell about it, but was afraid that Lana didn’t, since she was a normal human. So he decided to drive slower than normal, just for Lana’s wellbeing.

He drove about half an hour and then he suddenly came to an stop. He inched closer to her ear and whispered just for her to hear: “My dear Lana, we’re here, at the Avila’s Cableway. I’m going to take you to Galipan, because I know you haven’t seen it yet.” Lana let out a small sigh of surprise and then kissed him sweetly and tenderly for about 5 minutes. They were at the Avila Cableway’s station and he parked his car near it, so Lana didn’t have to walk too much. Once they arrived the station, holding hands of course, he paid for two one-way tickets to Galipan. “What is he doing? One way tickets?”

Clark and Lana waited until their turn came to get into the cableway’s cabin and he held the door for Lana, as he always did, and then climbed into it and found two places near the window. Lana’s grip intensified on Clark’s arm, so he thought she was scared, and was right, and held her close to him. Once the cabin was fully loaded, it started its way to Galipan.

The view was amazing. They were close enough to see the little birds in the trees and the wild animals in the ground. Lana was like a little girl, glued to the window, and eventually let out some “Ooooh!” and “Wow” out to show her amaze to her dear boyfriend, who was sitting next to her and held her hand. They both felt like drown into the eternal greenness of the virgin forest, into its invulnerable peace and into the light blue sky with no clouds. It was the perfect day for the perfect date.

After long 45 minutes they arrived to the Avila Hotel, a hotel situated in the top of the mountain which was also the arrival of the cableway. It was almost 4pm and hopefully they would arrive to the town in time for seeing the sunset over the Caribbean Sea.

Once they arrived to the hotel, Clark and Lana headed towards the stone road that leads to Galipan. They decided to make it walking, instead of taking a Jeep, because that way they could get to spend more time together and interact with the amazing nature surrounding them.

It was an one hour walk to the town. Both of them were silent, holding each other close to their bodies, and eventually had to stop for various reasons: maybe Lana or Clark had to tie his or her shoes, maybe they wanted to get some rest and sit down in the floor, or perhaps some strange animal caught their eye and wanted to take a closer look.

After about 30 minutes of silent walking, they arrived to a little river. Its water was clear, pure, its temperature was refreshing and Clark had a sudden idea, which he discarded after blushing hardly.

Lana: “what were you thinking about? You had just turned 20 shadows of red!”

Clark: “uhm… It was nothing…” he said, getting even more blushed

Lana: “right… were you thinking about going skinny dipping?” she said laughing

Clark then turned almost purple because of how blushed he was. Then Lana started laughing even harder.

Clark: “I take it as you want to laugh, don’t you?” he said, starting to tickle her using a little bit of his super speed.

After a few minutes of ticking her, Clark decided to stop. Lana’s eyes were crying of the laugh she got and her hair was already a mess, it had dirt and little sticks in it, it looked like a nest without any birds yet. She thought she was a mess, but Clark didn’t agree with her, he thought it was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen, to see Lana on the ground, all messed up, still laughing. Then, he sit next to her and folded his arms behind his head as he looked up to the sky. They were there for a few minutes before Lana suddenly approached Clark and kissed him softly, tenderly. When they were done, Lana nested her head in this shoulder and he held her close to him. He was caressing her smooth face and said: “Sweetie, we need to get going if we want to go and watch the sunset over the sea” she agreed and both got up and walked towards Galipan.

“This is the most happy time I’ve ever had” was Lana’s last thought before she got up.

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I divided this update in two... I'll post the rest of it tomorrow...

PS: feedback's appreciated XD

[treker]

I do love how you have Clark and lana together...but, you have them calling each other boyfriend and girlfriend...when they haven't broken up with thier other people they were involved with. Lana especially with diego.

??????

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by treker
I do love how you have Clark and lana together...but, you have them calling each other boyfriend and girlfriend...when they haven't broken up with thier other people they were involved with. Lana especially with diego.

??????

treker, it's a dream sequence they are both experimenting and that will change their lives... It's nothing more than a dream, a sweet one, sorry for the confusion!!!:rolleyes:

[treker]

oh...sorry...I didn't realize it was a dream...sorry....

[Venezuelan Lana]

Don't worry, everyone makes mistakes ;) And I'm writting it as a dream because I want to write happy Clana but first need to fix all the issues both of them have to all the other characters and dreaming is a way to make happy Clana:D

[happycamper]

So was this Clark's or Lana's dream? Or was it mutual?

They were certainly learning how happy they could be together...


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

It's a mutual dream, like they're connected in their dreams... it's kinda weird, but I like it...:D:D

[Totalclanafan614]

I loved the update!
Full of Clanaey goodness!!
I like the mutual dream sequences!! :D
PPMS! :D

[maitriniazngurl]

loved the dream... Great update!! PPMS!!

btw... this one time I've had this dream.. and then I think I had it again.. but I'm not sure.. it was total Deja Vu... only in my dreams.. Okay.. I'm way off topic.. update soon!! :D

[lanalang1234]

yea i want u to put lana and clark together and make it all lovey dovey and make me cry i will read and post moer than u think

dude when are you going to post the rest of chapter 6?

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm gonna post it tomorrow's morning... I'm now working on it but I want to make it right and get everything done well... It's gonna be a four part chapter because it's getting really long and besides... it's more fun to keep you people waiting for the next update than to update all at once:rotfl: So... I'm gonna go now and play age of empires III:D BYE :p

[lanalang1234]

that is awesome cant wait 4 the next update

[maru11]

they are so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[clana1fan4ever]

cant wait for da next update!!!

[maru11]

me neither!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Sorry guys I didn't update today... I'm having a hard time at writting, I'm in a tough writter's block... I guess it's due to my godmother's death... I actually started this fic trying to get trough my block but I haven't been really succesfull at it and it's coming back again... So I'm gonna try to write tomorrow something that's not as crappy as the things I've written for part three of the sixth chapter... Sorry for not updating today...Bye...:S

[emsfan]

this is so great can't wait for the next post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[lanalang1234]

plz upsate soon or i will die

[maitriniazngurl]

Whree's the update?

[Venezuelan Lana]

maitriniazngurl... As i've said before, I'm in a serious block... I've tried to write something for the update, but it's really crappy... Maybe I'll try to write something less crappy in the next few hours, but I'm gonna be at the gym for an hour, maybe more... I'll be home at 6:00pm, Eastern time in the States. Then I'll try to write something good enough... I g2g for now... Bye

[maitriniazngurl]

okay... I know what u mean.. having writer's block is hard!! Especaially when someone is forcing you.. so I'm backing down.

Sorry! :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Nah... Don't worry, you're not forcing me... Actually, is nice to know that ppl like my story and that they encourage me to keep writting... I'll try to write something later because I need to get rid of this block :lol: And then you people can have your happy Clana and then we're all happy :D

[maru11]

hope u can update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm working on the update right now... It should be ready to go in about an hour or maybe more because in a few minutes Smallville is coming up in my country and I want to watch it :lol: So, stay tuned for the next update... What will Lana do when Clark tells her that they're staying for the night in Galipan? What will they think when they both wake up? What will happen in the school next day? :D

[lanalang1234]

caint wait for the update ppms

[maitriniazngurl]

update soon!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

don't know if I can post it today, I'm halfway of the part three... but I don't know if I'll be able to finish it today because I have a party today at 8:00pm, eastern time, and my dad has me working in his office today... I finally got all the ideas to finish this chapter but I have to get some things done at work before I get time to finish it... I'm gonna go for now to see if I can finish work and the chapter today and post it... BYE

[maru11]

hope u can post it today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[clark&lanafan06]

^^^^^^^
Same here !

[emsfan]

update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter six – dreams, dreams, dreams
Part three

As they walked towards Galipan, Clark and Lana were talking about nothing really important and were enjoying just being with each other. The rest of the way they just talked and joked. They arrived hand in hand to the little amazing and beautiful town about at 5:00pm.

Clark: “Lana, now we’re going to go to my uncle Pete’s house, we’re going to stay there for the night. I talked to Nell and, after talking to my uncle, she said it was ok for you to stay here with me tonight. I hope you like this surprise, if not then we can always head back to Caracas”

Lana: “What are you? Kidding me? I would love to stay here tonight!” She said, giving Clark a soft, tender kiss.

Then they started walking towards Uncle Pete’s house, but before Clark took her to a little restaurant called Le Cuisine de Clara, Clark’s favorite restaurant. It serves French and Switzerland food. He had reserved a table next to the window which looks toward the Sea. The view was amazing. They could see the dark-blue sea, as well as the large waves it has. They could see the small animals walking between the greenness of the mountain, the flowers growing among million of little leafs and smell them, the goats, the sheep the owner of the place have in the backyard. It’s a little and small house Miss Clara owns and made arrangements for the first floor to be a small restaurant because she loves to cook. When you enter the restaurant, Miss Clara leads you to a small country made table and, if you have asked for it before, because she has a really good memory, she will lead you to the special table, which is the one that’s next to the window. The place is really cozy and it almost feels like you’re having dinner in your own house. You can even go to the kitchen and help make your own food.

Once they had ordered two large cokes, Clark ordered a large steak with smashed potatoes and Caesar Salad and Lana ordered Carbonara Fettuccini and an small “palmito and aguacate” salad. Then Clark whispered something to Miss Clara and she nodded in agreement. Some minutes later, a song started to fill all the house, in which were only Clark, Lana and Miss Clara.

Caught in the sun – Course of Nature.

You're my distanced destination of choice
I'd give anything just to hear your voice
I couldn't pass you on the street
Without saying a word
Most times I missed the voice
That goes unheard


What if I missed you
You got caught in the sun
What if I did something
Never to be enough


People everywhere how could I be sure
Is it you that I have been looking for
What would it take for me to be comfortable
With you, with me you're the chosen one

Clark: “Lana, I have something really important to tell you”

Lana: “Yes?”

Clark: “Lana, you’re an amazing girl, you’re the most incredible person I’ve ever, ever met. I really want to get to know you better, to know what you’re thinking without even have to ask you. I want you to know that I think every second of my life of you, I want you to know that without you I’m nothing. I would be an empty shell if it wasn’t for your goodness beside me. Lana, you’re all I want, you’re all I need. I love you more than you will ever know, I would give up my life it yours was in danger. There are no words to express how I feel about you accurately, there’s just this” With that, he kissed her passionately and Lana eagerly responded to his kiss. Also, Miss Clara, that was listening to what Clark said because she already had the food cooked, cried silently. She was hoping that some day she would find someone as good as this teenage boy.

What if I missed you
You got caught in the sun
What if I did something
Never to be enough


You are there for me this I hope and pray
You will wait for me, I wont be to late


What if I missed you
You got caught in the sun
What if I did something
Never to be enough


Will you wait for me
Or will I be to late this time
You are there for me this I hope and pray
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this is the best that I've written lately... So, I hope you enjoy it...

[maitriniazngurl]

Wow!! I really enjoyed and the song great too!! PPMS!!

[clana1fan4ever]

WOW!!!
that was really good!!!
PPMS!!!

[lanalang1234]

yes i finally found some clana great update ppms:confused: :D





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[clark&lanafan06]

Great update ! PPMS !!!!!!!!!

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[clark&lanafan06]

Update Soon Plz !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[happycamper]

Very sweet. I love the Clana...

:D :D

[maitriniazngurl]

OOh.. Great job on the clana!! PPMS!!

[maru11]

update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[lanalang1234]

hurry up and post i need more clana

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey guys! thank you very much for the feedback... I'm sorry, I haven't finished the last dream sequence update... And won't be able to write until monday because tomorrow I have tennis torunament, as well as today I had.. So I'm pretty sorry I'm gonna leave you guess what will happen next when they meet at the school after the dream... g2g... bye:)

[maitriniazngurl]

Darn!! I can't wait!! post when you can!

[lanalang1234]

hey u need to hurry up and post i am getting agruvated

[emogirl*88]

plz update!

[maru11]

update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey guys I'm woking on an update now... but Smallville is up at 3:30 and I'm gonna watch it before I finish my update... so I'm gonna go now and watch SV...BYE!! :D

[maitriniazngurl]

can't wait!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

OMG I'M SO SO SO SORRY! I WON'T BE ABLE TO UPDATE THIS TODAY... I GOT CAUGHT IN A REALLY REALLY LONG CHAT WITH MY BF AND LOST THE NOTION OF TIME AND DID NOT FINISH THE UPDATE... NOW I HAVE TO GO AND GET READY FOR ANOTHER PARTY AND I'M ALREADY LATE...

IN AN ATTEMPT TO MAKE UP TO YOU GUYS I'LL POST AN EXTRA LONG UPDATE TOMORROW OR WEDNESDAY... IT WILL END THE DREAM SEQUENCE AND HAVE THE SECOND DAY AT SCHOOL UPDATE... I'M SO SO SO SO SO SORRY AGAIN!!!

G2G NOW... BYE!:(

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

plz update soon

[maru11]

update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

update

[emsfan]

please need your update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[maru11]

update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter six – Dreams, dreams, dreams
Part four…

Clark and Lana were having so much fun at Miss Clara’s house. They ate slowly and talked about nothing really important. They were making jokes to each other and kissed a few times during the beautiful sunset.

The ski had turned like 20 shadows of yellow, red and orange, and a few touches of blue and deep, dark purple. They could see the sun setting over the sea and also over the concrete forest that Caracas became a few years ago. They decided to watch it over the sea from an unique point of view, because they had already seen the sunset so many times from their building.

When they finished their desserts, a “chocolate marquesa”, which is a Venezuelan dessert, and after Clark paid the bill, they decided to head to Uncle Pete’s home. They walked hand in hand and didn’t talk at all during the walk to his house. Clark just led Lana smoothly through the old stone streets.

Clark, before going inside his uncle’s house, put his iPod’s earphones to Lana’s ear and told her: “Sweetie, please listen to this song. It reminds me so many moments we’ve spent together already and I recall every one of them while I listen to this song.” Then he pressed play and Lana’s eyes almost jumped off of her head.

Je t'aimais, je t'aime, je t'aimerais – Francis Cabrel

Mon enfant nue sur les galets
Le vent dans tes cheveux défaits
Comme un printemps sur mon trajet
Un diamant tombé d'un coffret

Seule la lumière pourrait
Défaire nos repères secrets
Où mes doigts pris sur tes poignets
Je t'aimais, je t'aime et je t'aimerai


Quoi que tu fasses
L'amour est partout où tu regardes
Dans les moindres recoins de l'espace
Dans le moindre rêve où tu t'attardes
L'amour comme s'il en pleuvait
Nu sur les galets

Le ciel prétend qu'il te connaît
Il est si beau c'est sûrement vrai
Lui qui ne s'approche jamais
Je l'ai vu pris dans tes filets


Le monde a tellement de regrets
Tellement de choses qu'on promet
Un seule pour laquelle je suis fait

Je t'aimais, je t'aime et je t'aimerais

Quoi que tu fasses
L'amour est partout où tu regardes
Dans les moindres recoins de l'espace
Dans le moindre rêve où to t'attardes
L'amour comme s'il en pleuvait
Nu sur les galets

On s'envolera du même quai
Les yeux dans les mêmes reflets
Pour cette vie et celle d'apres
Tu seras mon unique projet

Je m'en irai poser tes portraits
A tous les plafonds de tous les palais
Sur tous les murs que je trouverai
Et juste en dessous, j'écrirai

Que seule la lumière pourrait...
Et mes doigts pris sur tes poignets
Je t'aimais, je t'aime, je t'aimerais

TRADUCTION TO ENGLISH
My naked child on the rollers wind
in your hair demolished
Like one spring on my way
a diamond fallen from a box

Only the light could Défaire
our reference marks secret
Where my fingers taken on your wrists
I loved you, I love you and I will love you

No matter what you make
the love is everywhere where you look
In the least recesses of space
In the least dream where you are delayed the love as if it rained

Naked of it on the rollers
The sky claims that he knows to you
He is so beautiful it is surely true
Him which never approaches

I saw it taken in your nets
The world regrets so much
Saying things which one promises
One only for which I am made
I loved you, I love you and I will love you

No matter what you make
the love is everywhere where you look
In the least recesses of space
In the least dream where to delay you the love as if it rained

Naked of it on the rollers
One will fly away same way the eyes in the same reflections
For this life and that according to

You will be my single project
I from there will be posed your portraits
all the ceilings of all the palaces
On all the walls which I will find right below
And, I will write that only the light could...
And my fingers taken on your wrists

I loved you, I love you, I will love you

Lana just hugged him tightly, never to let go. Clark returned her tight and warm hug. They were about to kiss again when both Clark and Lana woke up in their bedrooms.

--------------Clarks bedroom-------------
Clark: “WTF? Did I dream the dream sequence I think I dreamt?!?!?! Yeah, I know Lana’s really beautiful and hot, and that I almost kissed her today. But… I have a girlfriend! I cannot think of her this way, although I’m dying to kiss her soft lips again. Oh my dear Lana. So many time has passed since our last love meeting. I miss to have you the way I had you in Smallville. You were my girlfriend, but I had to come home again after my father’s training for me at the Kawatche Caves. I want to be the one for you, because I know you’re the one for me. But it’s just too complicated. I cannot tell you I was the one who broke your heart in millions of pieces… I just can’t. So… I have to settle to have Daniellah and leave you to have a beautifully played romance with Diego. Although all I want is to break his nose. But-.. I just can’t” A tear fell from Clark’s face and he tried to go to sleep, but just couldn’t so he woke up and went to the kitchen to have some breakfast at 4:00 in the morning. After that, he went to the patio to take a walk

--------------------Lana’s bedroom------------------------

Lana: “OMG! This cannot be happening. I keep dreaming about Chad. But… I remember calling him Clark. And they do have some resemblance, just I do not know what it is… I have this undying desire to be with him and to kiss him… but I can’t… I’m with Diego now… I just can’t do it… Although I want to…I just Cannot” Lana tried to go to sleep but couldn’t… So she dressed up, went to the kitchen and had some breakfast. After that she went to the patio and take a little walk. She didn’t know who she was going to run into a few moments later

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sorry for the cliffie... I'll post the rest of it tomorrow's morning. I have training in 45 minutes and after that I and my friends are going out and party, just to enjoy the vacations... :p

[maitriniazngurl]

Whoa!! Loved it!! Especaially the dream squence! Post when your home!! :D

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[happycamper]

I was hoping that they were never going to wake up from their mutual dream.

You already have them cheating on their current others, even if no one else knows about it!

Then again, this may be a good indication to look somewhere else for love...;)

And exactly what is a chocolate marquesa?


:D :D

[clana1fan4ever]

that was greate update!!
PPMS!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

happycamper, a chocolate marquesa is a dessert made of layers of cookies and melted chocolate... it's like one layer of cookie then one of chocolate, then one of cookie, then one of chocolate... it's really, really good. In fact, it's my favorite dessert:D

With this dream sequence they will both realize that they're absolutely not happy with their current relationships... Ok... time to shut up or else you will know what I have planned with this fic...:lol:

I'm working on the update in where they meet at the patio at 4:00 in the morning *evil grin* hehe... I'll leave now and finish it XD

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

great update more clana

[maitriniazngurl]

Oh.. Can't wait for the update!! :D

[maru11]

can´t wait for next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey guys I'm sorry I haven't posted the update today... I had a little problem over here and I needed to take care of it before I could finish my update... I'm not done with it anyways and I'm going to post it tomorrow because that would give me more time to finish it and make it a good Clana one...:D

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'll post the update tomorrow, I'm brain dead now and slept all day long due to morning training... I'm sorry... I still need to revise it and to check spelling and grammar in this update... and I'm not able to do it today so I'll do it in the morning and then post it... SORRY FOR THE DELAY!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter seven –Four o’clock in the morning

Clark was pacing around the pool still dressed in his pajama pants and with a fresh T-shirt on when, with his super-hearing, he heard someone coming closer to him, with light and slow steps. It sounded like a petite woman, someone as small as Lana was. “Oh, Lana… What a dream, what a life… I want it, but I know that right now I can’t have that kind of relationship with you”

Lana was walking towards the pool, dressed in a long jean and a Smallville sweater. Suddenly, she felt like someone was near there so she got into alert state. But, even if she was in alert, she couldn’t erase from her memories her dreams. “ Are they a prediction of what will happen one day or are they just a reflex of my very own desires? That’s the kind of dreams I will remember for the rest of my life, the ones that will always be burnt into my mind and that will never, ever leave me alone anymore” Then, she bumped into someone bigger than her.

Lana: “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! HEEEEEEEELP MEEE THERE’S A THUG INTO MY BUILDING AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!”

Clark: “Shhhhhhhhh, little woman! Don’t you realize it’s four o’clock in the morning?!?!?!?!”

Lana: “YEAH, I KNOW… WHAT ARE YOU THUG IN HERE? ARE YOU HERE TO STEAL SOMETHING OR TO RAPE SOMEONE?!?!?”

Clark: “First of all, I’m no thug. Second, I live here and came for an early morning walk. And third who are you and why are you here?”

Lana: “Ehm, I live here and had this wonderful dream about having a date with this boy I met yesterday in some place called Galipan. It was wonderful, but then woke up and couldn’t sleep anymore… I still had in my head these images of me being tickled and then the kisses and the he singing Iris for me…”

Clark: “Ehm… I… I… you… we… huh…eh…”

Lana: “Are you ok?!?!?! You’re babbling!”

Clark: “uh… Yeah, I think so…” Is it possible that she had the same dream I had?!?!??!?!?!?!

Lana, inching closer: “So… why were you up at four o’clock in the morning?” Lana Elizabeth Lang! This is wrong! You’re with Diego!!!

Clark, also inching closer: “I had this dream about the girl of my dreams having a date in Galipan…”

Clark’s mind:
“This is SO wrong!
Only if you say so…
You can’t do it.. How will Dani feel?!?!
I don’t care I want to do this!
You don’t even know who she is!!!
I don’t care
What if she’s Dani and wants to see if you’re cheating?
Nah, impossible
She also lives here you dumb ass!
Don’t care
Yeah, right!
I just know it's the right thing! TRUST ME”

Lana’s mind
“Don’t you dare!!!
You’re not my master!
Literally, I am… I think thing through!
I also do, but with my feelings!
I don’t care… You can’t cheat on Diego!
Don’t care, I want to do it!
You don’t even know who he is!
Don’t care… I feel like doing it!
But! YOU HAVE DIEGO!
Oh damn, shut up! I know it's the right thing to do”

They inched closer, engulfed in the darkness and in the need to kiss each other even without knowing who the other was. Lana tipped her head and Clark slowly drawn her closer. They stayed like that until the sunrise...

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I hope you, Clana lovers, like it... I spend many hours working on this because everything else was really crappy...

PS: Feedback's appreciated!!!

[maitriniazngurl]

Yeah I think it's great!! Loved how you have Clark and Lana bumping into each other... :D

Great update!! PPMS!!

[happycamper]

Very sweet update!

I always enjoy how Lana and Clark are attracted to each other no matter the circumstances. :)

Clark is convinced that he shared the same dream with Lana, but I'm not sure the reverse is true.

I think Clark should have delivered the line about singing the song in response to Lana, then she would have known, too.

But they managed to get together, so the most important goal was still realized! ;)


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by happycamper
Very sweet update!

I always enjoy how Lana and Clark are attracted to each other no matter the circumstances. :)

Clark is convinced that he shared the same dream with Lana, but I'm not sure the reverse is true.

I think Clark should have delivered the line about singing the song in response to Lana, then she would have known, too.

But they managed to get together, so the most important goal was still realized! ;)


:D :D

Thanks hc! I didn't put the line of the song because I felt like, as always, Lana would have these doubts about Clarkie here and no matter what, initially she would be with him...

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can´t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Hey guys... I'll update among tomorrow and wednesday... I've been pretty busy in here and today I went to the venezuelan red carpet of Superman Returns... Yeah, we're a little delayed in the movie premieres in Caracas... :lol:

So I'll update in the next few days... Discover who watched Lana and Clark from afar in the morning liplock and also what role will Alesia and her bf Juan Pablo in the fic... :D

[clana1fan4ever]

nice update...
update when u can!!

[maru11]

updte please!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter eight – Sunrise

As Clark and Lana were enjoying just being with each other, someone was watching from afar. It wasn’t Daniellah or Diego. It was Daniellah’s best friend, Alesia. She was kind of short, with dark, long curly hair, penetrating hazel eyes and a really loud voice that could make someone go deaf in just seconds.

Alesia: “OMG! I can’t wait until Juan Pablo hears this!!! I know he’s my boyfriend but I can tell that all he wants is to be with Daniellah… And frankly… I want to be with our dear Clarkie here. So… Juan Pablo will have to think some way to have this Lana out of the way…” A mischievous grin spread right in her face… She looked kind of psycho with that look in her face. “I’m going to go and get ready for school. Today’s a special day!!!” She squeaked and started jumping towards her bedroom.

-------------------Patio----------
Clark and Lana were now sitting on the floor, Clark embracing Lana from behind and she was resting her head in his shoulder. They were watching the sunrise, the million of colours the South American sunrises.

Clark: “You know, Lana… I just met you yesterday and I already feel like I’m falling for you…” He said, lying, because he had fell in love so many time ago, in Smallville.

Lana: “yeah, me too… I mean, I feel like I’ve known you from somewhere before. It’s weird, you remind me so much to my former boyfriend, Chad” Clark swallowed hard. He had been discovered.

Clark: “So… Who’s hotter? Me or Chad?”

Lana: “Uh… Let’s see… Who’s more hot?” She said, teasing him. Then she kissed him and then whispered in his ear: “You…”

Clark: “uh… I think that’s good!”

Lana: “Yeah, it is. So… What are we going to do with our partners?”

Clark: “Good point, I haven’t though of it just yet… I don’t want to keep this a secret… But we have to figure out first what we will do”

Lana: “yeah… I haven’t though about it either… It’s not like we’ve had time to think about it…” She said, giving a mischievous grin to Clark.

Clark: “Can I take a rain check to that one? We still need to sneak back in our houses without anyone getting noticed. Have you though about how’re you going to get back home without Nell getting upset?”

Lana: “Uh, No... Have you?”

Clark: “I have some tricks under my sleeve to do it...”

Lana: “Do those tricks can help me get into my home without being noticed?”

Clark: “uuuuuuuh… I don’t think so… Since I was a little boy I live in that flat and I know many ways to get into it without being noticed” He said, lying.

Lana: “uh… I think I’ll have to deal with Nell…”

Clark: “Yeah, me too…”

--------------Lana and Nell’s flat------------

Nell was running all over the flat, trying to find Lana even under the rug. After a while she figured out that Lana wasn’t hiding, like she did when she was a little girl, back in Smallville. She went to the patio and then saw Clark and Lana, sitting together under a tree, hugging and kissing each other. “My vengeance is having it’s fruits already!!!”
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Sorry it's so short. I have been really busy lately. I'm thinking about ending this fic already, I'm getting dry of ideas... What do you guys think? Should I end this already? Feedback's appreciated...

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

keep going dont stop great story

[clana1fan4ever]

no!!! dont end it keep going i think this is a great story!!!

[maru11]

of course not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

mna i neeed and update

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm working on an update right now... I still don't know if I'll end this fic... I'll let u guys know what's my choice... The update will be ready in about an hour... Hope u like it..

Chapter nine - School...6 months later

It was a rainy day, a weird thing being March the month in which it was having place. Normally, in Venezuela there are two stations; the rainy one, between May and November, and the dry one, between November and April. Clark and Lana had been together undiscovered. He was still with Daniellah, but not as before. She was still with Diego, but the relationship was maintained just because sometimes it’s good to pretend. Nell knew of their relationship and didn’t bother to tell Lana that she knew. The Kents didn’t know. They knew something was going on when Clark disappeared at nighttime and came back in the morning, they just decided to think that Clark was making his abilities become better everyday with Jor-El’s help back in the caves. They were so wrong. All that Clark wanted to do at night was to be with Lana, to talk to her, to hold her close to him and to kiss her. He wanted her problems to be gone, he wanted her to forget about Chad and so did he. He wanted to forget the life he had one summer back in Smallville under the influence of red k about two years ago. He ran away from home, trying to “walk the path of a good kryptonian” but in Smallville he met the red kryptonite. A bad memory to be hold.

Daniellah didn’t know Clark was with Lana. She didn’t want to be with Clark, he had become too distant and cold, but her mother keep telling her that he was the best catch she might ever get. And she knew her mom was right. She just thought that sometime Clark would come back and be the perfect boyfriend he once was. God, she was so naïve. If the whole school knew about Danni being cheated by Clark, it would be a tragedy, socially speaking. She was like Big Girl on Campus: everyone knew who she was and everyone liked her so much. Clark’s existence, on the other hand, wasn’t totally ignored, but not many people knew who he was, or why Daniellah would be with him in the first place. If Danni got dumped by someone like Clark it would make her social status fall to the floor and Clark knew that, he was waiting to be dumped by Daniellah.

Alesia kept spying on Clark and Lana everyday. She got not much sleep at night because that was the time both of them used to go to the patio and be together. At school they treated like they have barely met before. But she knew the looks that Lana gave Clark; She was so in love with her best friend’s cheating boyfriend. She also observed Clark close enough to notice what his girlfriend refused to see: he also was very, deeply in love with Lana. Alesia normally would have thought this thing was cute, two people in love trying to hide the way they feel from everyone except to each other, but since he was her best friend’s boyfriend, she thought this would break Danni’s heart and would make Clark really unhappy, because she knew Clark cared a lot about Danni, just not the way he cares about Lana, not anymore.

Juan Pablo. He was Alesia’s boyfriend. He was kind of short, with long, curly brown hair, he had some incipient beard he refused to shave, and was a quiet person. He also plays guitar and is the guitarist of a band called Hero. He wasn’t friends with Clark because he always had this thing for his girlfriend, Daniellah, and became Alesia’s boyfriend just because he wanted to be with someone. But he learned to care about Alesia, although he didn’t love her the way she does. So, they decided to bring Clark and Lana down because Alesia have always liked Clark and he had always loved Daniellah. That way, Alesia could try to bring Clark and Lana down and he would be there to comfort Daniellah. Yeah, they were a really evil couple.

Diego didn’t noticed Lana’s coldness toward him in the last six months. He just thought that was the way Lana was, since she was like that since the first day of school. He didn’t care either, he just wanted Alesia to be his. Diego didn’t know how lucky he was to, at leas officially, be with Lana. They didn’t spend too much time together, but he didn’t care, he was too busy trying to be a Latin lover that he didn’t cared about Lana. He just cared about how Alesia saw him.

One day, Alesia decided to take pictures of them being together. She was sick of waiting Clark to be available and of being with Juan Pablo. Clark heard the camera shoot and, before it could take their picture, being together, he grabbed Lana and speeded away. Lana was caught by surprise, she didn’t think someone outside Smallville could have meteor-induced abilities.

“What the…” was all that Lana and Alesia could muster.

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Hope you like it... I'll post Lana's reactions after I get at least 5 replies... :rolleyes:

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

man great update i hope lana will still like him and love nim the way he does if she reactes good

[Venezuelan Lana]

well... you might find out later today if I get other 4 replies, *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*...;)

[LovinMe210]

**gasp** ppms!!!!

[clana1fan4ever]

PPM!!!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

cmon here is another reply, 2 more 2 go

[treker]

This reminds me of the Michael J Fox movie "the secret of my success." <that's a good thing by the way....very funny>

everybody running around trying to get in everybody else's bed. very funny.

[happycamper]

Am I the 'lucky' number five?:lol:

I love the confusion between the couples and all the underplay - everyone wants something other than what they have, except for Lana and Clark, who know exactly what they want.

But oops, it looks like Clark might have blown the secret!


:D :D

[maitriniazngurl]

Okay... are you getting this from an opera or something?? B/C it's very fimilar!! :D

Great update!! I love how they're all falling for someone they're not with... lol.. I saw a opera like this once... where the main characters can't dump their partners... :D :D

PPMS!! :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by maitriniazngurl
Okay... are you getting this from an opera or something?? B/C it's very fimilar!! :D

Great update!! I love how they're all falling for someone they're not with... lol.. I saw a opera like this once... where the main characters can't dump their partners... :D :D

PPMS!! :D

I'm not getting these ideas from any opera... It's like venezuelan relationships are always like that... We're always trying to pretend, to be something we're not, to want something we can't have... Yeah, I know this sounds kinda proper of Luthors... but that's the way most ppl are like in here! It's like... "OMG I'M SURROUNDED BY LEX'S DOUBLES EVERYWHERE!!!AAAAAAH!!! AND I'M NOT ONE OF THEM!!! HEEEEELP!!!"

I'm sorry, I can't end this update before monday. It's like 1am already and tomorrow I have training at 6am and I have to go to a wedding in a different city (where I am lalready and don't have the fic in here!) and I will stay there for the weekend. SORRY!!!! :(

I promise I'll post as soon as I get back at home!!! For now I gotta go, my grandpa wants me to go to bed now... ttyl! See ya!

[happycamper]

I actually meant to say that Clark had blown his personal secret... :\


Originally posted by maitriniazngurl
Okay... are you getting this from an opera or something?? B/C it's very fimilar!! :D

Great update!! I love how they're all falling for someone they're not with... lol.. I saw a opera like this once... where the main characters can't dump their partners... :D :D

PPMS!! :D
You know, maitriniazngurl, I was thinking the same thing, but decided not to say anything to avoid looking like an idiot. I was also thinking opera, or a Victorian-era play where everyone has secret yearnings, and everyone ends up happily with someone else. Thought I would add my $0.02 since you were brave enough to comment.


:D :D

[maitriniazngurl]

Emily, relax!

I just saying that it's really fimilar! I've watched many opera's so I'm very fimilar with these kind of stories... besides I have a Panamanian friend and she's a big opera fan.. so when I told her about your story she said it's oddly fimilar.. that's all!!

Btw, sorry if your surrounded by Baldies... and I can't wait for your update! :D

HC, LOL.. I just say what I think.. and it seemed a lot like a opera.. (no offense Emily)

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by maitriniazngurl
Emily, relax!

I just saying that it's really fimilar! I've watched many opera's so I'm very fimilar with these kind of stories... besides I have a Panamanian friend and she's a big opera fan.. so when I told her about your story she said it's oddly fimilar.. that's all!!

Btw, sorry if your surrounded by Baldies... and I can't wait for your update! :D

HC, LOL.. I just say what I think.. and it seemed a lot like a opera.. (no offense Emily)

Don't worry, you might find many ressemblences to operas in this fic because that's the way most venezuelan ppl are :lol: I don't mind if you tell what ya think, I actually find that really cool! So if anyone doesn't like my fic is free to come here and say "hey dude! this thing sucks!" ;)

I might post tomorrow, I'm already back home... It was a early-day wedding and we decided to come home tonight... So I'll post either tomorrow or Monday...

And now... some spoilers...
Will Lana act rationally to the revaling?
what will Alesia do when she can't have the pic of Clana?
Danni... what will she do when she sees Clana with her own eyes...

to find the answers to these questions read the next coming update soon!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

huryy and upday=te when ever you get the chance

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm not updating today... I have too much work to do... I'm sorry... I'll make an extra long update before Saturday for making it up...:D

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

before sturday? dude isnt it like monday


dont make us wait that long

[Venezuelan Lana]

yeah it is... but I'm sorry this week I have absolutely no free time... I have to squeeze it so I can write a little... I'm having extra trainings cuz I'm going to play an international tennis tournament in two weeks... So I'm sorry clanafan99210... I'll try my best to do it before sat...

[maru11]

hope u can update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

yea irl cmon we all need an update on lanas reaction

[treker]

update when you can....just don't wait to long...

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter ten – Secrets
Lana looked up at Clark and finally her suspicious became clear. He was Chad, the meteor rock affected boyfriend she once had. She had blew him away because she was scared. Scared that he might kill her with his super speed. Afraid that she would die young, like her parents did. Afraid that she might be hurt, broken or anything like it. But mostly, she was afraid she would become one of them. Then, a flashback came to her head.
---------------Flashback to Smallville-----------
Lana: “What the heck? Are you a meteor freak?” She screamed to Chad who was standing still in front of her, tears flowing freely of his eyes.

Chad/Clark: “I’m not a meteor freak. I was born this way. I don’t know why. Just did. That’s why I came here, to Smallville, from far away, to find out why I am like this. I’m adopted, you know… And I want to find out why the heck I can run this fast.”

Lana: “If you think I will swallow that piece of crap then you’re mistaken, boy”

Chad/Clark: “So you’re scared to death, from the look on your face I can tell.” He said, his voice cracking.

Lana: “I’m scared, yeah. I don’t know you anymore”

Chad/Clark: “Yeah, you know me. You know what’s in my heart, you know what I think by just looking at my face. You know me better than anyone. This doesn’t change anything! This is who I am. How many times did you ask me for the truth? Well, the truth now is that I trusted you and you hate me now”

Lana: “It’s not what I meant…”

Chad/Clark: “Maybe it isn’t. But is how I felt it.”

Lana: “Chad… I just need time to think about this!”

Chad/Clark: “Yeah, time to figure out how to send me to hell right?”
Lana: “I can’t talk to you in this state you’re right now.”

Chad/Clark: “Maybe you’re right… I have never had to trust you. I’m sorry… I’ll leave you alone. I’m going home. Bye.” With that, he disappeared and speeded away.
---------end of flashback------

Lana decided this time she had to be more careful. Clark was a person that never tells his secrets to anyone. Yet, he has decided to tell her twice. Well… Show her…

Lana: “Clark… You’ve changed a lot in the past 3 years. I, no matter what, have loved you ever since. Nothing had changed since you showed me your ability back in Smallville. Now, my suspicion have become reality. You’re Chad. The first and only boy I ever loved. I know this sounds silly, since you left me there alone and mourning for your departure, but nothing changed since that day. I still loved you and I still do and will, no matter what.”

Clark: “Lana… This is only part of my secret. That time in Smallville I found out who I am and who I will become. I found my parents, Lana. And they weren’t from around. They lived in a planet called Krypton. And send me here before the planet exploded due to Zod, an evil man that destroyed my home. And I was sent here to protect everyone from danger. I want to become a savior for this planet. And I will… I have many powers and many ways to make this planet safer. Just need time to master all of them and I will be the one this world needs.”

Lana: “Show me.”

Clark: “First of all… I am super strong. There’s nothing I can’t lift. Here.” He lifted his truck with one hand. “Second of all… I am invincible. Only green meteor rocks, AKA green kryptonite. It makes me sick. That why my parents decided to left Smallville. You can hit me with anything and I won’t feel it. Still I can feel anything I really want. Like this.” Then he kissed her softly and she kissed him back. “Third. I can see trough anything but led.” At this Lana tried to cover herself.

Lana: “You cheater! You have to be kidding! You can’t see through anything solid can you?”

Clark: “Wanna make me tell you what color is your underwear?” He tried to put a straight face but couldn’t and started to laugh uncontrollably.

Lana: “Yeah, let’s see if it’s true!”

Clark: “They’re black and with small snow cones forming a pattern.” He blushed, but not as hardly as Lana.

Lana: “uuuuhh… you’re right…” She blushed even harder.

Clark: “Moving on… I can start fire with my eyes, and hear any sound I want to, even if it’s a whisper miles away from here.”

Lana: “Ok… Let’s make a test again! I’ll hide and then you find me and then tell me what I whispered.”

Clark: “OK”

After a while, Lana had hid on the other side of the building and whispered “Clark you’re my everything” Clark then speeded towards the sound and found her. Then kissed her and told her “You’re my everything also. Without you I would be incomplete. I’m glad you moved down here. I’m glad our hearts found each other again” She responded kissing him even more passionately.
Clark, after a while said: “Ok… There’s one more thing I want to show you. Hold on tightly!” He started to fly slowly and then landed on the top of the building.

Someone from afar watched him do it. “Kent. You’re so dead!!”

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there you go... An update before Saturday! I could squeeze time and do it... Hope you enjoy!!!

[<Nimrod>]

By updating you just made me a happy Nimrod;)


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[clana1fan4ever]

Great update!!!

[maitriniazngurl]

Great update!! Very cool! :D

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

great update and nimrod do you like greenday?

[happycamper]

It seems that Lana was the one who had to grow up in this story...one hopes she's now ready for a real relationship with Clark.

“Kent. You’re so dead!!” Was that Lana's boyfriend who said that? Did he see the flying, or just the two of them on the roof.

That's because I think he has to be a little dumb. If I saw someone flying, I'm pretty sure I'd try to avoid getting into a fight with that person.


:D :D

[maru11]

awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey guys... I'm gonna update before wednesday... today I have no time... gotta go and train in about one hour... so I guess I'll leave you some head-ups of what will happen in the next update...

who's the guy who said kent you're so dead? what will he do to the Clana?

How does Lana see the fact that Clark flies?

what will Clark do when Lana tells him the way she sees him now?

hehe... wait and see how this turns out to be in a few hours from now!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter eleven – Hopeless…
Juan Pablo had an evil grin on his face. He had seen the most amazing thing in the world and planned to use it to his own purposes. He would watch Clark in every step he takes and, in the exact moment, he would let him know he knows his secret and use it to break Clark and Lana apart. That way, he would have Danni and Alesia would be there to comfort Clark. All they wanted they could get it after what he saw last night. “Yippee!” In the back of his mind he was doing back flips, but he didn’t do it really because he was too short to even try.

Lana’s POV…

“What the… he can fly! OMG he flies… Does this change the way I see him now? Maybe. But… you do not wanna lose him again! He had shared the darkest secret of his life to me. And I just cannot tell him ‘hey you big dumb alien, if you thought I was going to be with you after you showed me you could fly, then you were so damn wrong!’ I just can’t... but that’s the way I feel. What should I do? I mean… I can accept all his other abilities… But this one is too overwhelming to embrace as a part of him. I do not mind he killed my parents. WAIT A MINUTE… HE killed my parents. He came here in a meteor shower that hit Smallville. He came, my parents died. God.. He can fly and killed, unwillingly, my parents. Now… The real question is: Can I accept him after he showed me he can fly and told me that, for his arrival to earth, he unwillingly took hundreds of lives and changed thousands? Including my own and my parents’? I don’t know that answer yet. I need to figure it out. Soon”

Meanwhile, Clark was watching her changing expression of her face. His eyes became watery, his thoughts raced a thousands miles per second, he started to imagine all the things that could happen after he took the risk of telling Lana. He just had dropped a bomb on her. He thought she would never accept him, not anymore. She could be disgusted, angry, sad, irritated, hating him. He didn’t know. It was the first time he couldn’t read her face. And it worried him. He was damn worried if she would say something to anyone. Even if it was Nell, he knew anyone that knew the secret would make try to make him get into a lab and study him. His warm tears started to flow freely from his eyes. He couldn’t take Lana’s silence anymore. It was even more hurting that kryptonite. He knew he would never have Lana back. Not anymore. He started to walk away. To walk away from his love, from his pain. He tried. He couldn’t.

Lana saw him holding back tears, then she saw them running freely from his face and then saw his walking away. She couldn’t let him walk away. Not again.

Lana: “Clark. I do not know what to say. That’s why I’ve been so quiet. I wasn’t making an evil plan to make you get into a lab. I need time to think. Just that. Nothing will change, at least now. I still love you, a lot. I just need time to think if my parents death could be forgotten. I know the pain and the hole they left in my heart will be filled by you. But the pain’s still there and first I need to do what I’ve tried not to do in all these years they were gone, to be able to be in the kind of relationship you want. I want it to be with me. So I need time to work this out. This will be painful, I know. But you will be there to help me, and after that, we will have the relationship we both want for ourselves”

Clark: “OK… I’ll give you any time you need. Now let’s get out of here. I don’t want to be here. Not anymore. I feel like someone’s watching. Let’s get going, but before, please read this" Clark handed a small paper to Lana which was printed in a computer. It's title was we're only existing.

When something like this happens,
When you only feel loved when you’re by yourself,
When you’re thinking over everything
And then nothing like it will ever occur

We’re only existing when your love’s not by your side
When you’re broken inside, without any cure
When you’ve loved someone
And it doesn’t turn out the way you wanted

When you carry a burden that makes your soul ache
When you have a secret
Oh damn secret! That make you ache in pain
Secrets that can make you be the most amazing person
But in this moment only make you cry in agony

But we’re living. We’re living every time this feeling overwhelms us
When we’re around each other
When we can learn something new each day from the other one
Even when we hate, because in that mere moment we know we’re alive

We’re actually living when you feel the wind on your face
When you’re able to talk to anyone
Yet, still feel silly for saying such unimportant stuff
When we collide, because we can still become once again one

But in this moment. In this moment we’re living and also existing
We exist because we can still feel sad for the past
We live because we can still feel happy for the future
We’re living and existing because we can feel both in the same moment

We can be happy and sad.
We can be warm yet cold
We can put a brave face and be deathly afraid of
What this uncertain future will bring

Still neither of us are living without the other one
But we can still exist because of the grief
Grief. That all our souls need to exist.
Gas of all humans it is
So neither of us are living. We’re only existing.

Clark: "I wrote that after I left Smallville. I always wanted you to have it, but I never found the time to give it to you until today. So let's get going"


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Hey guys... this fic's coming to an end... I don't know how long it will take. I just know there won't be much updates after this one. Hey, feedback's always appreciated!

[Venezuelan Lana]

there won't be an update before saturday I think... I'm kinda busy and I've got the feeling that ppl don't like this story anymore so I think this will have two or three more updates and that's it...

[happycamper]

People are reading, it's just that the board is in such a mess with old stories and things so that one cannot always find all the posts once they disappear back into the pack. Sorry!:( I think the same thing happened to my last post on Sunday.

Anyway, I'm not sure Juan Pablo is being too rational in his thoughts.

I just hope Lana will be rational in hers.



:D :D

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

ok first people love this stroy and i dont think you shojld end it you are a great writer and you should continue please update soon

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'll be posting the next update tomorrow or saturday. Got plenty of free time to do it... I'm still gonna end this fic and start a new one. I don't have much ideas to play with...

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey guys... I've had a little trouble here and I'm in an absolute lack of ideas... So I do not know when the next update is up... I'll let you know later...

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter twelve – Demons

Lana Elizabeth Lang. Her whole life she had been trying to move on. Lana’s parents died when she was four. We’re not supposed to be able to remember what happens to us before age 5 or 6, yet, she still remembered her mom’s face and her dad’s when the meteor hit them and the pain came to her life. She cried herself to sleep every night. For years. She doesn’t remember a happy childhood, like other kids should have. Lana had had happy times with Nell, sure, but her parents’ death had been hard…

A week has passed since Clark told her he’s from Krypton. She had tried to think a lot about what this could mean. Of course, he’s an alien. Of course, he’s not human, but, he loves her like no one has before and she loves him so much too. Could he have control over the ship that brought him to earth? She didn’t know. If he had, it would make things different. Really, really different. What’s his mission here, on earth? Could it be to conquer? Lana didn’t think so. He’s so gentle, so loving, so caring. Could it be a façade? Could he be the first that would be coming to earth in an alien invasion? So many questions, yet unanswered!

As the days passed by, Lana’s eyes grew older. In them now you could see a person that had been trough so much pain, so much anger, so much tears, but you could also see a strong, determined, loving and caring young girl. At times, her eyes seemed to be mysterious, dark, scaring. But when she was with Clark all you could see was love, a girl that felt protected and loved. She changes a lot when she’s with Clark. That’s why she didn’t want to miss him, Lana Lang’s afraid that her darkness could take over her whole body when she wasn’t with Clark. She felt it creeping outside the corners, to overwhelm her whole body, to take over her brain, her actions, her heart, her soul. She felt paralyzed and helpless when this sudden force takes over her whole self. Like someone’s being inhabitating her. At times, she didn’t fight it, she just let it take over. It made her feel better. Free, strong, determined. Lana doesn’t like to be who she really is. That’s why she cares a lot about Clark. She felt like, when she’s with him, a new person. She leaves everything behind, all that matters is now and the future. The past is dead and buried. And that was everything to her. Don’t get me wrong. Lana’s love for Clark wasn’t an interested love. She truly loves him. And the fat that he made her forget her past and focus on them was a plus.

Yes, she has cried a lot while she tried to reach these conclusions. Nell has been there for her in every way. Nell’s heart crushed in pieces every time she heard Lana’s undeviating expression of grief. That’s why they moved to Caracas, she wanted them both to leave the past behind. When they both thought they found happiness with a gentleman that loved them, he died abruptly in a horrifying car collision. The funny thing is that Nell had dreamed repeatedly with Dean’s death, that always happened the way he died, since they got engaged. She always thought it was a bad dream, you know, like these that keep coming over and over again and that never became the truth. But this nightmare had. These things kept happening to Nell since before the first meteor shower. She dreamt with Laura’s death. That’s why she told them to go to Metropolis that critical day. Ever since, Nell had become some sort of meteor freak. She always visualized deaths that subsequently became true. She hid this from Lana because Nell didn’t think she needed another meteor freak in her life. After she had been with Chad, the meteor-induced-speeding guy, Lana became somebody else. She didn’t identify her. It was like tiny 14 year old Lana became a 30 year old woman in a fraction of a second.

Going back to Clark and Lana. She fixed her thoughts on the good moments they have had in these remarkable 6 months. And in the year they had been together in Smallville. Yet, her attention was always on the travel from Krypton to earth, on the feelings that Clark must have had when he was a toddler and discovered that he had powers, on the way his parents were always there for him no matter under what stars he was born. She unquestionably wanted him in her life, no matter what the cost. She had defeated her demons. Now, she’s ready to go to Clark. To be with the man that she want to be with forever.
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I hope you enjoy this chapter. I've spent 2 hours working on it! so enjoy!!!
PS: I might post something more later tonight. I'm not sure. I've got plenty of time today and I want to make a few more updates before I decide if I'm ending or not this fic. As always, Feedback's appreciated!!!!

[happycamper]

Wonderful update!!

You let us know so much of what's motivating Lana in this story, her defeat of personal demons because of his presence, and her choice of Clark as her future.

Please don't end this story now...:(


:D :D

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

that really was wonderful

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter thirteen – Fears

My name’s Clark Eugene Kent. Uncertainties had taken over my whole body since last weekend. I fear Lana would tell anyone and that everyone would stop see me as the American boy from Kansas. I’m at unease when he thought that I might be seen as the freak, as the alien, as the Big Dumb Alien I once thought I was for telling Lana. Twice. I had told her twice and didn’t know why.

The former time I resolute to tell Lana for the because it was utterly necessary. We were camping near the Kawatche Caves a sunlit day of July. Both were more contented than ever before. We knew we had already found the one we wanted to spend the rest of their lives with. You may think we were too immature, at the age of 14, but in the foundation of mine and her heart we just knew it was supposed to be. That day, for the first time, I had heard the voice of Jor-El. “My son, It’s time to fulfil your destiny on this earth” My thoughts were focused on combating that voice inside my head. “Who’s Jor-El and why Lana doesn’t hear his voice? Is he my real father? I know I’m not human, but it doesn’t mean I can hear to my dead father’s voice, right? Am I finally going crazy?” I didn’t want to leave, not now that I had finally found Lana’s love. She didn’t know of my powers, my origins or anything like that. Lana believed I just ran away from home and she decided to ask Nell if I could stay in their home. Of course, Nell accepted, she was way too liberal. The only rule for us is that if we would be sleeping in the same bedroom we should leave the door opened. Her and I gladly agreed to act upon that regulation.

Going back to my story, Jor-El wanted me to go away in that exact moment. He wanted me to leave Lana, my parents, Smallville, Caracas and everything I’ve seen and loved to “fulfil my destiny” God I do not know what my fate is! I just know I’m from Krypton and I’m not human and that Lana might not forgive me for hiding the truth from her so many times when she asked me to give her the whole reality. I just couldn’t take that chance. I loved her way too much to be at risk of losing her. I absolutely refused to go away. He tried to drag me into the caves with a power beam only me could see. Lana didn’t noticed this because she was asleep in my arms. God, she is so beautiful. Her features just become even more beautiful and gorgeous when she's asleep. I, reluctantly, woke her up. I wanted to leave and never come back. In the end, Jor-El tried to make me get into the Phantom Zone. I had to speed away so Lana and I could be safe from that incarceration. Then, she found out who I actually was and freaked out. I chose to come back home, to my new home at the north, and leave her all broken and her heart shattered in pieces. What she didn’t know is that my heart was even more broken than hers. Why did we end that splendid relationship? Because I am who I am.

Now, I’m afraid that she might react the same way she once did. This time I told her because I didn’t want to live a lie. Not anymore! I’ve lied and lived in one eternal lie my whole life. I don’t want that for me. Not any longer. I trust her judgement. I know that what she will do is the right thing. Whatever she decides to do with me I’m willing to accept that. I just can hope that she might accept me for who I am. Yet, I’m not sure that will be her reaction. She has already showed me how she might act. She asked me to give her time to see if her parents’ death can be forgiven. That she knows the void will be filled by my love. But that she still needs to fight her demons that had chased her since she was a toddler and that she refused to do it because she was afraid. I have to trust her. I did when I told her twice. Now that I’m lonely, I need to do it again, to hope that she will return to me. That’s all that matters to me. She’s everything to me.
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here's another update. This is written from clark's point of view as you can see. This is supposed to be a part of Clark's journal. Weird idea, I know... :rolleyes: I post more soon. I'm in a really creative fase!

PS: feedback's appreciated!
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Chapter fourteen - school again

Clark was walking towards his first hour class, Spanish studies, among the faded-coloured school walls, chirping cheerleaders, students and teachers when abruptly someone caught his eye and nothing else mattered. It was Lana, she was more beautiful that ever before. Her long raven hair was going down her back like rain among the trees, her eyes sparkling with emotions, her clothes marvellously fit to her petite body. All Clark thought was that he was so lucky to have, or had, her with him once. His eyes became watery just thinking of the happy times they had, his emotions started to flow as freely as never before inside him, his blood boiled just at the thought of having the next Class with Lana and that Ms. Betancourt had assigned them to be seated together in the classroom. He walked towards Lana, not hiding his feelings for her anymore. He didn’t even noticed Daniellah was watching him from afar.

Lana was just there, standing in her locker, just staring to a picture of her an Clark that was taken in Smallville by Nell. In that moment, her eyes became glittery with emotion and her thoughts start racing. She wanted so badly to be with Clark in that precise moment. She was thinking of Smallville and her happy times with Clark when suddenly she felt a breathing in her neck. A familiar one. Clark’s. Clark stood there, just standing behind Lana so close he could hear her heart beat. It became faster and faster, just like his.

Lana: “Clark, what are you doing? We could get caught!”
Clark: “I don’t mind, not anymore. I just want to be with you now”
Lana: “I want too. But we will be in the upcoming classes. You know we can’t do this here. What about Daniellah?”
Clark: “I just care for her as a friend. You’re the one I love. You always have been. When I left the Fortress of Solitude and came here, I needed someone to try to get over you. Yet, I couldn’t. Your memory was just too strong in me” As he was saying these words he became closer to her face. “God I want to kiss her so badly!” now he said:“ Lana, I don’t care what the future bring. We can work it out together” Lana didn’t even try to move away. She was just too lost in his eyes, in these simple yet complicated words. Clark put his hands around her back, held her closer. “All you need to tell me is to go away and I will never, ever, bother you again” Lana just put her arms on his shoulders and with one hand she lowered his head to hers. Well… Less than an inch. At first, it was a small kiss. After a few seconds, they both showed their suppressed love to each other. “God how I missed his lips!” was Lana’s last thought. Then, they both zoned out, lost in the overwhelming feelings.

Daniellah was watching from afar. She started to cry. She, for moths, had felt like Clark wasn’t hers anymore. And she was right, her doubts became reality just with the look in his eyes in the second he saw Lana. The sobs began when the kiss became more and more passionate. Alesia was beside her, watching with wide eyes what these two lovebirds decided to do. She thought it was premeditated so she couldn’t use that information against them. What Alesia didn’t know is that she was totally wrong. It hadn’t been set up. It had been the love between them what made them reveal their secret relationship in that exact moment

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter fifteen – Retaliation
Clark and Lana continued kissing until the bell rang. Everybody was watching, staring and gossiping about their relationship. The wave of whispers sounded like the rumour of the breeze among the trees in a dark, desert forest. Nothing could be distinguished yet everything could be understood. It didn’t troubled them to be the school’s new gossip source. All they cared about was to be with each other and never let go. They walked hand in hand to their classroom and the grin in their faces was the most brightly you could ever see. From miles away you could see that they were on cloud nine.

Daniellah, in contrast, felt really, really depressed. She never thought the other girl was Lana. She knew this day would come, however she never felt like this in her whole life. It was like she had been betrayed. Wait a minute. She had been deceived, betrayed, cheated on, whatever you want to call it. She knew she should have her revenge on Clark and she had Alesia’s and Juan Pablo’s help. They all skipped class and hid on the girls’ bathroom.

Daniellah: “Ale, Juampi, what should I do? Should I make him jealous with someone?”
Alesia: “I don’t think so. Clark seems to be so in love with that b*****”
Juan Pablo: “I think it’s a great idea. You know, guys always get jealous when their former girlfriends have a new relationship” He said with a naughty grin.
Daniellah: “I don’t think so either. He’s so laid back. And he’s so damn in love with that B*****”
Juan Pablo: “well… It seems that you girls have it under control. What do you have planned?” He said, remembering Clark can fly. “Danni, do you know any secret Clark has that you can share with the world and make him embarrassed?”
Daniellah: “No. He was just too hush-hush with his private life.”
Juan Pablo: “yeah… Why don’t we spy on them so we can find something to blackmail them with?”
Alesia: “Sounds fine. But I’ve already done that.”
Daniellah: “YOU WHAT?!?!?”
Alesia: “um… I kinda had the suspicion he had been cheating on you so I decided to figure it out on my own?”
Daniellah: “I can’t believe you didn’t tell me!!!”
Alesia: “I was just protecting you!”
Daniellah, was now screaming and moving closer to Alesia, but Juan Pablo jumped in between, but he was too short to keep them away from each other: “You’re as b***** as that Lana! You were hiding this from me! You were an accomplice!” She tried to hit her but Juan Pablo was the one who took the worse part. She broke his nose and started bleeding.
Alesia: “I am not! I was going to tell you when I had enough proofs!” She screamed back to her and evaded a punch that was aimed to her nose. “ OH COME ON! CALM DOWN! IT’S NOT LIKE IT WAS MY FAULT YOU LOSE HIM!”
Daniellah: “so you’re telling me it’s my fault?!?!” She aimed to Alesia’s head now and hit in the target.
Alesia: “OK you need to calm down! NOW” She said as the pulled her hair. Daniellah did the same and were screaming and slapping at each other.

Clark heard this in the Spanish classroom and became unquiet. Lana noticed this and asked him “Clark, what’s going on?” “It’s Daniellah and Alesia. They’re having a catfight in the bathroom. Lana it’s about us. Alesia was spying on us the night I told you about my powers!” “WHAT? Is that why you speeded away that night?” “Yeah, it is.” “Clark go and ask Ms. Betancourt if she might let you go to the bath and then speed towards the bath you heard them screaming in!” “OK… Love you.” “Love you too. Now go.”

Alesia and Daniellah were having the fight of their lives. They had knocked Juan Pablo unconscious and they were bleeding and screaming and throwing each other’s books to the opponent, hoping that like that one could win. It was incredible no one heard them. Only Clark.

Clark: “STOP RIGHT NOW!!!”
Daniellah: “ Clark! It’s so good to see you! Thanks for coming here or else this b***** could have killed me!” She threw herself to his arms. Clark didn’t hug her back. He had promised Lana that once they had broken up nothing could make him wrap his arms around another girl that wasn’t Lana, except for his mom, of course.
Clark: “What had happened in here? Why is he unconscious?!?!?!”
Alesia: “Your little ex was plotting to make you go back to her and I just listened. At the moment Juan Pablo tried to make her see that you love Lana and nothing could change that she became aggressive. And we ended up like this.”
Clark: “poor guy. Knocked out by Daniellah.”
Daniellah: “It didn’t happen like that!!!! You liar b********”
Clark: “ So tell me your side of the story.”
Daniellah: “I got angry because she knew what was going on with you and Lana and she didn’t even bother to tell me!!!!”
Clark: “Sorry. You girls will have to explain that to the principal.”
Daniellah: “It’s her fault!!!”
Alesia: “it’s hers!!!!”
Clark: “I don’t care. You could have been hurt. Or seeing this scene you could have killed someone!” He said, and got to his knees and screamed for help when he felt that he had no pulse. “GO AND GET HELP! IMMEDIATELY!!” As he started to do CPR, Daniellah got to the principal’s office and told him to call an ambulance. He did as he was said and then came to see what happened.

At this point Clark and Alesia were doing CPR. He was afraid he wouldn’t survive. The haemorrhage that came from his nose was really dark. Once in school they had been told that when that happened it meant that the brain had suffered a major trauma and it was getting bleed dry, literally. Lana came to see what happened, as most of school did. She got scared when she saw what happened and was glad Clark came to the rescue. There could be two persons lying in the floor if it wasn’t for him. The paramedics got there soon. When they saw what happened they called the police. There had been a murder in a school.

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Hope you enjoy this other chapter!
PS: If I get 4 or more replies I'll get posted the next update!

[happycamper]

I see that everyone takes their love life seriously in Caracas...:(

Poor Juan Pablo. He actually died because of Daniellah's uncontrollable jealousy - I guess that he received the just rewards of spying?

So what happens now?


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by happycamper
I see that everyone takes their love life seriously in Caracas...:(

Poor Juan Pablo. He actually died because of Daniellah's uncontrollable jealousy - I guess that he received the just rewards of spying?

So what happens now?


:D :D

We do not take our love lifes way too seriously here... Just that Daniellah went crazy about finding out Clark was actually cheating on her. It was an accident, juan pablo's death i mean. Guess you'll have to wait until tomorrow and see what happens;)

[maitriniazngurl]

Whoa!! I can't believe I missed all of those updates!! They were all so Great!!

I can't believe Juan Pablo died!! He sounded pretty cool!! How could he die?? I'm starting to not like Daniellah... but she has a rigth to be mad! I would be so mad too!

Anyways Great updates! Sorry I didn't see them earlier!

PPMS!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

mai, jp died because he got an really hard punch in the nose. If someone hits your nose in the bottom then there's a big chance you might get an internal brain bleeding and, if it's too hard, your brain can lose some of the grey stuff that's inside of it (sorry, I don't remember the way it's called in English!!)

Btw... My biology teacher explained that to me ages ago and decided to use it to make this story kinda better...

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm going to update tomorrow. I can't today. Something came up and need to take care of it... Sorry readers!

[maitriniazngurl]

Wow?? I didn't know that?? I knew about weak points in your body.. and pressure points. Along with internal bleeding but a punch in the nose??

Thanks now I know not to punch anyone in the nose! I wouldn't want to be sued!

Btw.. take your time on the update. You did a very good job on the last one. :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm working on an update right now... I'm not sure it will be ready before midnight... so stay tuned!!

[maitriniazngurl]

Cool!! Can't wait!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter sixteen – Shock
Alesia started crying silently. She was going to grieve this death for a long-lasting time. After all, he was her boyfriend and she kept tender memories of the both of them. Danni was in incredulity. She couldn’t accept as true that her anger made her kill one of her greatest friends ever. Just a little punch was just enough to send someone to spend the rest of the time six-feet under the ground, encircled by others whose doom was the same. Lana just stood there, lost in her thoughts, her facial expression unreadable. Clark was talking to the police. He hoped that he wouldn’t be considered the cause of the murder, taking into account that he was the one that made the action that sparked off Daniellah’s hostile actions. Juan Pablo’s body laid there, rigid, icy, waterlogged in a dark-blood lagoon, and with a petrified look tattooed on his eyes. No one dared to close them, the scene was just too crude.

Blood everywhere. Tears flowing freely from everyone’s eyes. Two girls covered in blood from each other. Books ripped open, their pages missed all over the bathroom. A guy lying on the floor, rigus mortem taking over him already. Unseen hearts that were reaching their breaking points in that split second. The minute when someone looked at the picture, the minute a quantity of dark pain was tattooed on your mind, harming you deeply. Cheerleaders, teachers, football players, normal people. Everyone was there, leaving childhood and becoming suddenly aware of reality. A reality no one want to accept, whatever age you were: you have to live each split second as if it’s the last, you don’t know when your time comes.

Lana started to cry, to sob. Not because she knew Juan Pablo too much, she barely met him as “Alesia’s boyfriend”, but because the memories the lying body on the floor waked up inside of her. Her mother’s face, a happy expression within it, lying in the footpath in front of Nell’s flower shop. Lewis Lang’s features, closing his eyes shut, a fear flicker appearing barely in his face that was going to be his appearance forever. Lana got to the floor, now crying out loud “mommy!!! Daddy!!!” then sobs took over her whole body. Clark couldn’t help it and got to his knees, didn’t caring about the blood being stained in his pants, and hugged Lana tightly and whispered in her ear “why don’t we get out of here and go get something to drink and try to feel a little better?” He said, gulping back the guilt he felt about all this. This panorama was because of him not telling Daniellah. Lana’s unending soreness was because Jor-El’s self-centredness and his necessitation to make him the last survivor of Krypton. And now everyone was paying for the sins of his father. ‘God, sometimes I feel so lonely in here although I’ve got Lana, my parents, my friends and all the other people that loves me. It’s just that they don’t know what it’s like to be a BDA!’

Lana nodded back to tell him that it was OK for them to go to the cafeteria and get something to drink. As they walked outside the scene, everyone watched Clark and his now blood stained body. They were whispering about this, speculating that he might have killed Juan Pablo. All that Lana did was wrap her right arm around his waist and hold him close, just for him to know that she was there, with him. Clark’s culpable expression didn’t help the rumours. Everyone assured that he was the one that took the mortal punch to Juan Pablo, because he was mad at him for trying to take Danni away.

When Clark and Lana made their way outdoors, walking towards the cafeteria, suddenly Clark fell to the ground, now crying. He felt vulnerable, dumb, unworthy because he was crying in public. Lana sit down next to him.

Lana, whispering: “My love, this is not your fault. If someone’s to blame is me. I shouldn’t have waited so long to make things right with you”
Clark, coming closer to her face and touching her forehead with his own, looking straight to her soul: “Lana. It’s my fault. I should have pre-seen that Daniellah was watching from afar. And although you do not blame me for your parents’ death, I still feel guilty for the sins of my father” His voice began to break yet he continued “I absolutely believe this planet would be happier if I wasn’t here” Now he took his gaze from hers and closed his eyes, choking back his tears.

Lana put her face in his cheek and lifted up his blood stained face so if he opened his eyes all he could see was her eyes. He did after a while. Just then she said “Maybe it’s true. Maybe it’s not. I don’t want you to ever and I mean EVER think like that again. Without you I would be incomplete, no matter under what stars you were born. Understood?”

Clark: “understood!” He kissed her gently.
Lana: “So… do you want to go to the cafeteria or to go for a swim at the pool so we can get that blood stain out of you?” She gave him a mischievous look. Then Lana raised to her feet and guided Clark towards their new destination. Nothing mattered in that moment. They were too lost on each other's eyes. And that was only the beggining.
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ok... there it is... if I get at least 4 replies then I'll post the next chapter...:rolleyes:

as always, feedback's appreciated.

[happycamper]

Great update!

I guess it's just natural to think Clark was the one to to kill Juan Pablo - one never thinks a woman capable of beating a man to death. I just hope that the police don't think the same (or are told that by a spurned girlfriend).

I hope that the death doesn't affect Lana and Clark too much...


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm working on an update right now... I don't know if I'll post it today or in the morning...

Ok... I will definitely post tomorrow.... I'm having a really heavy writer's block... :S

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'll post tomorrow in the evening... I'm too tired to think anything good today...:D

[Venezuelan Lana]

i'm sorry I haven't updated in a while... I've been busy as hell in here... I think I'll post the next chapter later today if ppl are still interested in this fic... tell me what you think and then I might post it if ppl want me to...

[maitriniazngurl]

Yeah!! Of course.. your story is really good!!

[clana1fan4ever]

Just caught back up the story is reallie good!!

[Jersey Girl]

its fantastic
keep up the good job :)

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm sorry guys I haven't posted yet the chapter... it's just that my inspiration left me and I've got a major problem with what I want to happen after the few ideas I have right now for this fic... I'll post as soon as I can, but not today, I'm having a pool party in my house so I'll be busy for the rest of the day...:(

I hope this break in the continuity of the post don't make my readers think I've abandoned this fic, I really haven't...

[maru11]

update when u can!!!!!!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

well no update in a month can do that do a mind.....

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
well no update in a month can do that do a mind.....

I'm sorry, Clanafan99210... Do you know what had happened to me this past month? No, you don't, right? So don't be so harsh on me because all I feel when someone talks like that is that he or she doesn't want me to do what I was doing...

So if you do not want me to continue this fic come here and tell me that on my face, otherwise don't be so hard with any writter, it really makes some of us believe that our fics aren't appreciated enough to wait for the writter to have inspiration or to solve their personal problems :\

Personally, I like to accept constructive critiques coming from any of my readers or from anyone. But when someone's that harsh with no specific reason... All I want to do is stop writting.

I don't write my fics so a reader can have their "Clana fix". I write because I want to. If you do not like a fic, just stop reading it! No one is making you read these fics, are they?

[Clanafan24/7]

calm down!all of us readers actually read these stories because we want to!no1 made us read these stories,only ourselves!.now i hope i'll calm done a few ppl or else we will have the same scene in the barthroom!anyways i love ur story!

[maru11]

yeaahh!!!!!!
calm down everyone love your fic!!!
so just update when u feel like u are prepared we will be waiting

[Venezuelan Lana]

guys... I'll try to update tonight... I'm working right now in a philosophy paper then I'll have time to work in the update... I'll try to make it long for trying to make up for the lost updates... g2g.. stay tuned...

Emily

[Clanafan24/7]

yippeee!uppdates coming!i feel like celebrating!any ideas on how to celebrate on the net?

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter seventeen – Police
The police officer called Carlos was entering the silent and dark school. Parents everywhere asking him ‘what was that? What happened? Can I go inside?’ He just nodded his head no as he walked by, confusion and nothingness taking over every inch of his strong body, making him shiver just by the thought of a murder in a school. His partner was not in a very different situation. His name was Ricardo and was short, with short, curly dark hair, intense hazel eyes that had seen most of the crimes occurred in Caracas during his 25 years of service. Ricardo’s face was stained with all the wrinkles that policemen usually have because of the stress they tried to handle everyday.

This was one of the most tragic scenes they have seen in many years. Mothers crying, sons and daughters pleading to leave the school, teachers and professors sitting silently in the sidewalks, each one lost in their thoughts. They walked, head filled with emotions, those only things like this could bring to your head. Past loves, deaths of some familiar, things like that… They finally reached the crime scene. Daniellah and Alesia were crying their eyes out, redness taking over all their face as well as their bodies, stained with blood. Carlos’ first impression was that a boy killed him and framed both girls. Ricardo’s was different, he somehow knew that a girl, one of those that were in a fight, took the mortal punch.

Clark walked, hand in hand with Lana, towards the school pool. His thoughts were concentrated in ‘this is all my fault’ and ‘nothing would have ever happened if I wasn’t here at first’ Lana, on the other hand, was determined to make him forget his ‘fault’… She would do whatever takes, she just want him as happy as she is right now.

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I'm sorry, I know this is too little too late... I'll post more tomorrow or before friday... I still don't know if I'm going to have tennis tournament tomorrow or not...:S

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

hey do you like jojo or something cuz that is a name of her song .way short but overall good update!

[maitriniazngurl]

good update!! kinda short but nice. :D

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
hey do you like jojo or something cuz that is a name of her song .way short but overall good update!

Jojo? I like just one song, the one called leave... My favorite music group is mudvayne and lifehouse...

Anyways... thanks for the feedback.. I can't update tonight... I got a muscular problem in my lower back during a tennis match I had today and have to go to the doc to get my back allright before Sat because I play the finals of the tournament...

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm sorry guys... I won't update today or tomorrow.... I'm too tired and tomorrow I have to do homework, SORRY!!!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

its cool!

[Venezuelan Lana]

i'm so sorry that I haven't updated in a loooooooooooong time... I do have the ideas, i just don't have the time to write them down and post them... School sucks! specially the ones with international baccalaureate progam!! :(

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

i agreee!!!!!!!!!!!!

[maru11]

well we will be waiting for your update!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

OOOOOK... gals and guys... i think i might have some time tonight to update... i've already started it... so if it isn't ready today... it will be ready on thusday cuz that day we won't have school *partying!!!*

[maru11]

can´wait!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

i'm sorry guys! i know u hate me already for the absolute lack of updates!!! this is my excuse: on wednesday night, in the middle of a nightmare, i hitted my head against the wall and had a mild contussion on my head. Besides, on thursday night my internet died and I got it back today and I'm doing a lot of homework and my position paper for the Model Of the United Nations that will occur this weekend... :(

Again... i'm SO SO SO SO SO SORRY!!! I'll try to update ASAP... but I cannot promise anything, just in case something else happens and you start throwing tomatoes at me!

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

its kool

[maru11]

update when u can!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

i'm sorry... i seriously doubt i can update today or tomorrow... i'm in the middle of the model of the united states of one of my country's most important universities, the Universidad Simon Bolivar...

I know that it sounds like a lame excuse, but I really enjoy this and wanna do this right, so i haven't had a free weekend in the last month or so...

Hope u don't hate me... I haven't abandoned this story, i swear, i just don't have enough time to work on it like i did on summer vacations :(

[Clanafan24/7]

why should we hate u?it will be like saying we hate this story(which i don't hate).no pressure! just uppdate when u can,coz i'll be waiting patiently:D:D

Also i don't even know the meaning of the word"free weekend" anymore coz my HSC coming up.....

[maru11]

don´t worry about it
update when u have time

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

yea when you have time................

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter eighteen – Problems at paradise…

Clark and Lana, after spending all day in the school’s pool decided to go back inside. The blue ambient had ceased, the students already made their mind about Clark being the assassin. As they both walked by, the people started to turn away from them. Clark knew why this was happening. Lana was oblivious, she zoned out, thinking about a lot of things, her lone time with Clark, the murder, Daniellah, Alesia, her parents.

The eyes of the people started to become watery. Finally, a girl named Sophia claimed: “ASSASIN” and pointed towards Clark. He immediately lowered his head and hugged Lana. For everyone, this reaction made him become even more suspicious.

Clark: “Lana, I cannot stand to be here. Not right now”

Lana: “Why is that my love?”

Clark: “Because… I do not want to be considered a suspect. The police will start to look in my past, and my family’s past. And you know that it’s not good, they can discover that I am from Smallville… and everything else” His eyes began to become even more watery and began sniffing.

Lana: “My Clark. No one here considers you an assassin”

Clark: “Are you sure about that? Or it’s what you want me to believe, so I don’t blame myself for his death? I COULDN’T SAVE HIM!”

Lana: “You cannot save everyone!” At this point, their discussion was a matter of public business.

Clark: “That’s because I’m not good enough to save everyone”

Lana: “You’re better than good enough and you know that. You know that you’re my own personal superhero. But part of being a superhero is that you have to accept that you cannot save everyone, my love” The people around them started to get really noisy. ‘Is Clark a real superhero? Why? Why couldn’t he save JP if he’s a real hero?’ Clark noticed this and decided to have this conversation somewhere quieter.

Clark: “Yeah, right” He took Lana’s hand and started to walk towards the school church. It’s the most private place where you can go to have a real private conversation.

They walked by, not saying a word, yet their holding hands said everything to them. Clark’s hand was loose, not paying too much attention to where he was going, but it reminded Lana how much he claimed to love her. Lana’s hand was firmly attached to Clark’s, trying to remember him that she was going to be there for him, forever and always, reminding them both how much she loved him.

Neither of them had an idea about what was going to happen in a few minutes…
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If i get 3 or more replies, then I'll post the next chapter... Sorry it took me sooooooooo long... thanks for being still reading my attempt of a fic... :)

[happycamper]

Cries of "assassin" - definitely a different culture. Americans would have said "murderer" or "killer" or just said nothing at all (except for whispers behind their backs) in an attempt to avoid any direct involvement... :lol:

But Mai, "Neither of them had an idea about what was going to happen in a few minutes…" is most certainly a very mean way to end an update. :(

Bad, bad, bad! ;):p


:D :D

[maitriniazngurl]

Very Nice update!!

Clark is soo... denial.. I'm not good enough?? I like the update. PPMS!

:confused:, HC I know I have a record of leaving things in cliffes... but I think ur confused. ;)

[happycamper]

Yes I am! :lol:

Sorry to you both!


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter 19 – One moment more…

Clark and Lana walked trough the halls, their faces and clothes still stained with Juan Pablo’s blood, a stain that will remain in their faces, in their conscience. They weren’t paying much attention where they were going to, they just held each other’s hand and walked, thinking about nothing, but thinking about everything at the same moment. How their lives had changed since that kiss in the hallway. How a person died in the middle of his ex’s jealousy attack. How not right it felt to be together in that mere moment. Lana didn’t blame Clark for the death, but Clark did hold responsible himself for that.

He didn’t feel worthy of Lana. He didn’t feel worthy to be living. He felt absolutely responsible for Juan Pablo’s death. His standpoint would never let be taken down, not even for Lana. He would always blame himself for the fatality. “With all my abilities I still cannot save someone that was right in front of me. I didn’t get there in time. It’s not fair someone died because I wasn’t good enough to be there to save him. I’m guilty for his death” Was all Clark though about. Lana, on the other hand, was really worried about him. His expression was blank, she didn’t feel him with her. Even if he was holding her hand and walking trough the halls with him.

They walked like that about half an hour, lost in their thoughts. Finally they got into the school’s church and sat on the first row of seats. Lana’s eyes started to get watery. She knew where this conversation was going to, and she didn’t want that to happen, not in a million years! She let Clark start the conversation, even though she knew she wouldn’t like what she would hear.

Clark: “Lana… I do not know where to start. You know I love you like an insane person, don’t you?”

Lana: “I do know that. And I also know that you’re about to say”
Clark: “No, you don’t… I’m not breaking up with you… I just wanted to let you know something…”

Lana: “If you’re not breaking up with me, then why are we talking in the church, your fortress of solitude here in school?”

Clark: “Because… I need you to promise me something right in front of God…”

Lana: “And what would it be?”

Clark: “That you will wait for me…” He said, holding her close, looking her right in the eye

Lana: “Wait for you?” She said, almost starting to cry. This wasn’t what she expected this conversation to lead…

Clark: “Yeah… Wait for me…” His voice was cracking with pain. He was at unease, yet he was absolutely sure that he had to do what he had to do

Lana: “Why?”

Clark: “Jor-El called me. He wants me to come to the Fortress of Solitude to complete my damn training”

Lana: “Can I come with you?” She said, sincerity filling her wet eyes.

Clark: “Don’t you think it’s too risky? If people know that you’ve gone away with me, they will start searching for us”

Lana: “Maybe. Maybe not”

Clark: “What do you mean maybe not?”

Lana: “Nell could tell people that I’ve gone to a trip in Europe”

Clark: “I do not know how much time I have to be in the north, that’s the problem”

Lana: “You do not what?!?”

Clark: “Yeah. I don’t know how much time I’ll have to be there”

Lana: “oh… I see…”

Clark: “It’s not like that, my love. You know that I would kill to be with you” He said, now hugging her, trying to seize their last moments together “But please remember we’re just 16, we cannot go away and expect people to think it’s ok”

Lana: “I know. But you do not know how much time you’ll be there. That’s the problem”

Clark: “I know”

Lana: “I would love to be able to say to you that I will wait forever for you. But, even though I love you so much that only God understands the strength of it, no one is able to wait forever”

Clark: “What are you saying?”

Lana: “That maybe when you return I might not be here”

Clark: “Then I will not go away”

Lana: “You have to do what you have to do. You have to go as far as you can with your training, you’re the only saviour this world has, and I’m not attempting to steal you from the world. I do understand what this means. I also understand that time in the fortress passes faster than in real life. As you’ve said to me before, you can think you’ve been in there for a year and you have been there for 12 years. All I can promise to you is that I will TRY to put my life on hold, as long as I’m able to do so” She said, crying her heart out, just thinking of the possibility of losing Clark forever.

Clark: “I will go away then. Your promise is good enough for me. I hope you’ll be able to wait for me, because I’ll be waiting for you forever, my love.” He said, kissing her for the last time.

Hold me
Even though I know you're leaving
And show me
All the reasons you would stay
It's just enough to feel your breath on mine
To warm my soul and ease my mind
You've got to hold me and show me now

Give me
Just one part of you to cling to
And keep me
Everywhere you are
It's just enough to steal my heart and run
And fade out with the falling sun

Oh, please don't go
Let me have you just one moment more
Oh, all I need
All I want is just one moment more
You've got to hold me and keep me

Tell me that someday you'll be returning
And maybe
Maybe I'll believe
It's just enough to see a shooting star
To know you're never really far
It's just enough to see a shooting star
To know you're never really gone

Oh, please don't go
Let me have you just one moment more
Oh, all I need
All I want is just one moment more

Oh, please don't go
Let me have you just one moment more
Oh, all I need
All I want is just one moment more
You've got to hold me and maybe I'll believe

So hold me
Even though I know you're leaving

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Hope you liked this one... Comments are appreciated! :D

[happycamper]

Sorry Em - paying too much attention to the story and not the individual... :o :p

Breaking them up? If Lana was so worried that Clark wanted to break up, why is she almost pushing him away emotionally? Clark responded the right way, though. Sigh...


:D :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

hc...she's not trying to push him away, neither emotionally or physically... She knows that he's the only person who can save the world from external influences, and she wants him to be well prepared to do that... She doesn't want to hold him back...

What do u mean by "payin too much attention to the story and not the individual"? I didn't get that... :S

btw... thanks for the feedback ;)

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

hopefully, next update's coming friday or saturday night... hope you're all still interested in this attempt of a Clana fanfic... :D

[maitriniazngurl]

hey, great update!

I understand Lana wanting to put Clark's abilities and life b4 her's... I guess. Loved the update and I hope she realizes that he emotionally needs her to be at his full potential. :)

[maru11]

can´t wait!!!!!!!!!

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm sorry I couldn't finish the update for this weekend... now this week I'm full with exams and homework... i seriously doubt i can update before saturday... :(

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

dont woory

[maru11]

don´t worry about it
just update when u can

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter twenty – Regrets

Six months later.

Lana’s POV

“God how much would I give to be with you now. I haven’t heard a word from you in six moths already. I’m worried, what if you’re no longer in this world? What was the mission Jor-El wanted you to accomplish? Why did he take my love away from me? *she groaned out in frustration*

The words you said to me the day JP died are still in my mind, tattooed with permanent ink: I hope you’ll be able to wait for me, because I’ll be waiting for you forever. Oh Clark, I only said the awful things I said because I wanted you to achieve whatever your father requested you to without any attachments here on Caracas. You’re the only person that can save this world from all the menaces that are trying to take us down. What you don’t know is that I will always be here, sitting on the bench where we almost kissed the day we ‘met’, waiting for you to come and take me away to a place we would both only know where it is. An ice palace that I keep dreaming about, I don’t know why.

I would want you to know that my heart has been shattered to pieces the day you left. So many times it has been broken that I don’t know if I can take one more hit, but I’m willing to take it if it’s for you… I love you more than you’ll ever realize, my Clark” She jumped out of bed, looking for her IPOD so she could listen to certain song that reminded her of him; Everytime we touch, slow version of Cascada.

I still hear your voice,
When you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch,
in my dreams
Forgive me my weakness,
But I don't know why,
Without you it's hard to survive

'Cause every time we touch,
I get this feeling
And every time we kiss,
I swear I can fly
Can't you feel my heart beat fast,
I want this to last,
Need you by my side
'Cause every time we touch,
I feel the static,
And every time we kiss,
I reach for the sky,
Can't you hear my heart beat slow
I can't let you go,
Want you in my life.

I still hear your voice,
When you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch,
in my dreams
Forgive me my weakness,
But I don't know why,
Without you it's hard to survive

Your arms are my castle,
Your heart is my sky.
They wipe away tears that I cry
the good and the bad times,
We've been through them all.
You make me rise when I fall..

(chorus)
'Cause every time we touch,
I get this feeling
And every time we kiss,
I swear I can fly
Can't you feel my heart beat fast,
I want this to last,
Need you by my side
'Cause every time we touch,
I feel the static,
Every time we kiss,
I reach for the sky,
Can't you hear my heart beat slow
I can't let you go,
Want you in my life

'Cause every time we touch,
I get this feeling
every time we kiss,
I swear I can fly,
Can't you feel my heart beat fast,
I want this to last,
Need you by my side.

What our little Lana didn’t know is that somewhere in the Artic, in an “ice palace”, was a handsome guy thinking of her, listening to the same song, one of their songs.
His eyes were somewhat older than everyone that has met him can remember. His hair was still an unruly mess of black and curly hair. He was way stronger that anyone can recall, every muscle of his body has tightened and has become bigger. His powers have developed a much bigger variety that they have ever been able to experience. His mind was changed, now he was a human-kryptonian sort of person. He was Clark Kent but also Kal-El of Krypton. He was still a farm boy, even though he has barely lived in a farm, but also an alien.

The best part of everything is that he has been able to stop his inner fight between his two identities. He was now as balanced as the Chinese ying-yang, a part cannot live without the other, the balance is absolutely perfect between his two faces. He had finally balanced the coin, not face, not tails, but balanced in the middle. According to a point of view what they see of him was the tail face of the coin. According to another person’s point of view he was Clark Kent, the face part of the coin. According to everyone who has met him, he was an unwavering and mature person, they saw the border of the coin. He no longer thought or referred to himself as the Big Dumb Alien.

He was now ready to return home.

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sorry this chapter's so weird... I have been involved this last weeks in a emotional vortice and thought this was the perfect moment to let it go :rolleyes:

As always, comments and feedback are appreciated, that way you readers can get what you want from this story...;) ;)

[*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*]

very good!! well needed! ppms

[happycamper]

Very nice!

So Lana was trying to be noble at their separation and wasn't actually expressing any doubts about their future together.

That's certainly better...but still, whatever happened to Lana's typical thoughts about secrets and lies?

(although to be honest, I think Lana has certainly been lying to herself in the Smallville world at the end of season five, and from I've read here, even more so in season six!)


:D :D

[maru11]

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[Venezuelan Lana]

thanks for the feedback, guys. I think I might be updating today or tomorrow afternoon, I feel like writing :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

I'm sorry I haven't updated... This weekend was a total mess, I didn't have even time to study. Next weekend is my 16th b-day so I think I might not update, but the week after that my december vacations start and I'll have plenty of time for update... So I guess I'll see ya later...

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey guys!!! I hope u haven't forgot bout this fic... i know it's so last year, but i found time to work on it... and i am right now... i'll be updating tonight if anyone's interested... please all comments are accepted...

[clana1fan4ever]

cool!!! i miss this story!! glad your back :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter twenty one – Closed doors

Lana was in the school, listening to the math classes, waiting really excited to get into Art class. It was her favourite lesson because there they painted, a thing she always had done to get though emotional hard-stuff. And it was really cool she had to be graded for it!

While her math teacher, Miss Angela, was giving them the lesson, Lana was staring into the space, lost in her thoughts. She didn’t care about sinus or cosines. She cared about art, about philosophy, about so many other things that cannot be expressed in mathematical formulas.
While Lana’s thoughts raced at the moment, she didn’t hear someone enter the classroom and sitting behind her. She didn’t care either, she was focused on whether or not a human’s perception of stuff is real or if it’s all a dream. Thinking of Clark, she remained sitting still in the chair.

Clark had left the artic that morning. He raced to Caracas at superspeed so he could go to school then and surprise Lana. He bought sunflowers at Kansas, in Smallville, and lilacs and red roses in Galipan, Caracas’ top of the mountain Avila. He left the sunflowers at her locker, the lilacs in her car, and he got the roses with him to the classroom.

He was wearing a black leather jacket, with black pants, boots and dark sunglasses. His black-curly hair was still messed up, besides, the trip had made it completely unruly. He sat behind the long-raven haired beauty he called his love, and she didn’t even notice it was him who sat behind her.

He put the roses in her backpack and sat still, thinking of her, of their times together in the past, and how they will be better as the time goes by. “I’ve stayed away too long already, I just wanna stay next to her, even though I couldn’t have her again, even though she’s moved on” Clark thought. “She seems so beautiful, her long raven hair. I love how it smells and rests easily in her back, wrapped up in a ponytail” The bell rang and Clark supersped away. He waited for her in her locker.

In the meanwhile, Lana found the red roses in top of her backpack. “wow… this is so Clark-like. But he’s in a mission and I’ll never see him again…” Her expression saddened and she got her backpack and ran away to the bathroom so no one would see her tears. She cried her eyes out for a long while, and then she heard a shoowsh and a bath door getting closed.

Clark hid himself behind the door. He wanted to much to hug her right now, but she could be some one else’s and he wouldn’t bear it if she told him to go away because she was with anyone else. He just loved her so much, so he closed the door’s knob. He cried silently, he wanted her to be with him.

“Clark, are you there?” There was no answer.

Lana’s crying intensified. And Clark could hear this. He blamed himself again. “It’s my fault. I shouldn’t have come down here. But when Jor-El said I could go home I thought it was time for me to come to Lana’s arms. Now I see I was mistaken. She’s someone else’s!” There was just a door between them. Just a door separating them from happiness. And Clark had it closed.

The second bell rang and Lana washed her teary eyes so no one could see she had been crying. Clark heard her leave, crashing his own heart against a stonewall. He remained there, sitting in the dark girl’s bathroom, crying for what he has done himself.

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he went to the girls bathroom?!!!!??!??!?!??!???!?!?!??!?!?!?AND CRIED?!!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!? amazing!

[Venezuelan Lana]

Originally posted by *#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
he went to the girls bathroom?!!!!??!??!?!??!???!?!?!??!?!?!?AND CRIED?!!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!? amazing!

lol... yeah... he wanted to see if Lana was crying for him again... so he went to the girl's bathroom and stood in a bath, with the door closed to hear Lana.

Maybe I won't post the next part today.. I have chemistry exam tomorrow and it's pretty damn hard

[Venezuelan Lana]

hey i'll be updating tomorrow... I'm still working on it.. I think it's a good one.. you tell me!

[clana1fan4ever]

update today? :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter twenty two – Art

Art Class, what an amazing place to be in! Everyone quiet, thinking, painting, listening to music. No loudness, the classroom was in the last floor of school, so you do not hear little children crying, or running or screaming. There’s only you and your thoughts, something our little Lana really needed right now. Thinking of Clark… Lana’s eyes went wet again, but she was decided that no one should see this weakness. It was enough that everyone thought her life has been crashed when her parents died, when she moved to Caracas, and, lately, when Kent left.

Clark was still sitting in the dark. He had no reason to have come down here, he had hurt Lana again and he knew that. He was in deep thought, he didn’t know how many time had passed. After a while, two girls entered the bathroom, also known as Daniellah and Alesia. They were talking about Clark and Lana and how in a bad shape she has been lately. This only made Clark’s heart crush even more, knowing that he has been the cause of all that pain.

Daniellah: “Hey Ale, did you see that ho’s face when she got those amazing roses? It was like ‘OMG, why can’t I believe this! And then she cries like a motherless kid! Un-freaking-believable”

Alesia: “Yeah, I know… It’s heart crushing to see someone you’d seen around so depressed because of a boy… Stupid boys!!”

Daniellah: “where do you think Clark is?”

Alesia: “Here you come again… Not over Clark yet, my friend?” She laid, half joking.

Daniellah: “I don’t think I’ll ever be…” she said, shrugging.

Alesia: “Oh.. Sorry if I said anything I shouldn’t have…”

Daniellah: “It’s ok. Now he’s gone and he can’t hurt me again” Clark’s eyes grew wider at the realization of how much he’s hurt Daniellah.

‘seems like the only thing I’m good at is hurting young ladies… Damn you Kal-El… Damn you Clark Kent. You need to do something and quickly. You need to talk to Lana and Danni, or at least little Lana. You need to make things right with her!”

Clark waited until the girls left the room, almost 20 minutes later. “Jeez, now I kno why they take so long in the bathroom! They use like 15 minutes of talking, 2 or 3 for personal affairs and the rest on checking their makeup!” He let out a chuckle. “ Now, let’s head to Art Class!” And with a swoosh he was gone.

Knocking on the classroom’s door, Clark entered. Lana was in Lala-land, just minding her own work. She didn’t care about the world anymore.

“Miss Brewer, may I talk to someone in your classroom?” Clark whispered.

“Yes, but make it quickly” was the response.

“I’m afraid this can take a while” He said, looking to Lana.

“Oh, I see. Well, honey, then take your time. You can go out”

He walked towards Lana, sitting in the pale yellow desk, surrounded by oil paintings, crayons, acrylic paintings, and all kind of artistical stuff. He looked longingly at her, thinking of the good times, as he approached from behind, wondering the best way to surprise her. Covering her eyes? No.. to cliché. Hugging her from behind? No… if she has a boyfriend he’d get mad. Tapping her in the shoulder? Maybe…

He tapped her in the shoulder, only to receive an angry “leave me alone” response. “Well, the little Lana I love wouldn’t answer anyone like that…” She jumped in her seat, turning around so fast. “Miss Brewer said we could go out and talk” Still in complete shock, she just followed him to an uncertain future… Their future


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short update, still working on the dialogue...
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[clana1fan4ever]

I liked it...Lana doesn't have a boyfriend right??

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[Venezuelan Lana]

update tomorro... if anyone's interested...

lately ppl haven't been readin this fic very much and as a consequence of it i'm thinking of closing it, tell me what cha think...

[clana1fan4ever]

no don't close it!!!

not much people are on this board anymore....

i like your story :D

[Venezuelan Lana]

Chapter twenty tree – Chat

Lana was amazed. She couldn’t describe what she felt in the moment she looked up to his greenish eyes, in the moment he tapped her shoulder she felt like a million of thunders went through her, and she knew it was Clark. How was it possible? She didn’t know. And didn’t care either. She was just so happy that he was back.

Clark was taken back because of her physical appearance. She looked the same from behind, when he saw her in the classroom. But now that he looked into her hazel eyes, he could see how much he had broken her. She had grown up in a second because of how much he hurt her. He could see that she didn’t care anymore. That she didn’t care about anything else than him, and, as he was away, she just stopped doing the things she loved. And she looked unfastened.

They were just walking side by side, not even holding hands. They headed automatically to the church, they knew that if there was a place where they could have a private conversation it was there. They were thinking exactly what were they going to say to each other, because both didn’t want to seem so desperate to be together. They didn’t want to break down either, but they could feel the tears forming in their eyes.

Clark: “I’m sorry.” He said, without looking at her, just trying to maintain a straight face.

Lana: “why?”

Clark: “Because… You seem broken” He said, hiding the tears forming in his eyes “And it’s because of me, I know that”

Lana: “It’s not like that…”
Clark: “Yes, it is. I was the one who killed your parents. I was the one that went to your life yet again and destroyed it in my summer in Kansas. I was the one who left then. Then you came here and I was the one who flew again. I was the one that broke you.”

Lana: “Clark…” He cut her off… Her warm tears flowing now profusely from her hazel eyes.

Clark: “No, Lana. Let me finish. I cannot blame you if you’re holding back from me. I was in the bathroom while you were crying earlier. I cannot bear it to make my angel suffer like that.” He said, truthfully. “I’m the one to blame…”

Lana: “You… are… not…” She said in between sobbings.

Clark: “Yes I am. I’m making you hurt in this very moment. Don’t you see that I’m only a Kryptonian who’s making earth people suffer. ‘Conquer, my son. They’re a weak race’ I was sent here to conquer Lana. I cannot be the one for you.”

Lana: “Even.. If you… are… it doesn’t… mean you… have to con-… conquer”

Clark: “Maybe. But until the moment I find out, I cannot keep hurting you, Lana!” he said, a lonely tear coming from his eye. “I love you so much to do it… I’d better let you go and let you live your live with a real love. Not this parody of human”

Lana: “Can’t you just see that the only thing hurting me was the sight, the thought of losing you?” She stopped to get some air between sobs. Then continued: “You do not want to hurt me, right?”

Clark: “I don’t. but…” She cut him off.

Lana: “But nothing. Be with me instead. You don’t want to hurt me? Be with me. It’s that simple”

Clark’s mind: “She’s right. You know you want to be with her. But… You’ve made her hurt so much before. What can assure you that you won’t make her hurt later?”

Clark: “What can assure you that I won’t make another mistake and hurt you again? You’ve already told me many times how much tired are you of picking up the pieces of your shattering heart. What can make you think I won’t make it again?”

Lana: “Because I’ve got faith in you, Clark. Because we’re more humans that we think and we all make mistakes. That’s what life’s about: having the courage of fighting the mistakes” Lana inched closer to him, but he was still keeping a straight face with a noticeable frown, not looking at her.

Clark: “I’m not human…”

Lana: “You are, indeed. More than myself even. Humanity’s not defined in the genes. It is in the moral, Clark” She tried to caress his face, but he pulled away, resisting her.

Clark: “Sooner or later you’ll see your mistake. I’m not the one for you. You deserve better! You deserve someone that can love you the way I have, but also someone who you can have babies with, someone that can give you a normal life.”

Lana: “Clark, please don’t shut me out. Don’t let your protective side take over my little Clark boy. Don’t shut me out. Please. I’m begging you.”

Clark: “But you deserve better…” He said, finally cracking his voice.

Lana: “ You’re the best catch I’ll ever get. I’m completely in love with you and I accept you for who you are. There’s no one better than you for me out there” Lana said, finally able to caress his cheek. He leaned into her touch, feeling how she always sent electricity through his nerves, if he ever had ones.

Clark: “Why, Lana? Why are you like kryptonite to me?” He said, looking at her, for the first time in more than 6 months. “Why every time I get around you my knees become jell-o?” Now, inching closer: “How do you do it? I’m invulnerable to most things, except kryptonite and Miss Lang.”

Lana: “I don’t know… Maybe because you always do the same to me?”

She tilted her head and went to kiss his lips, meeting him halfway. They put all the passion they had in them in that lone kiss, like it was the last one. It felt like it lasted for ages. It just felt right. They had to break the kiss because of lack of air. “Clark, I love you. I’m glad you’re back.” She said honestly. Then she leaned in and deepened the kiss. They broke it about 3 minutes later.

Their foreheads were touching now, their eyes closed. Her hand in hi cheek, his hand in hers. “Lana, I love you too, more than you’ll ever know.” It just feels right to both of them to be together. It just felt right for both of them to be near each other. It just felt right. Even if they were from different galaxies, from different planets, from different cities. They hugged each other and then it all made sense. They were home again.


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Hope you like it... An scape valve is always a need, so I won't close this fic. At least for no ;)

[Clanafan24/7]

That was a really good uppdate! :D:D

Can't wait for more!

[clana1fan4ever]

Wow that was great!!!

So glad they are back together again??

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[maitriniazngurl]

Yay!! They are back together again!!

Oh... and the kryptonite line was great!!

The update was really good!! I'm glad you decide to update soon