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SuperNes
11-06-2005, 09:23 PM
Ha LOL good one Mrs Sleuth!

Sorry Rick it doesn't work.. It say this poast has blah blah character.. you are only aloud 10000 SO there is no going back now :( unless I were to repost the whole thing way over here :(

SVsleuth
11-06-2005, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
Mrs.Sleuth I could edit it but the post is so huge it won't let me repost it :(

THAT's why we use buffers! :D
Here's the trick: Never post more than one 10,000 character post in a row, without having someone else put a buffer post in between your two parts. Then, you can always go back to edit.

akuma
11-06-2005, 09:27 PM
See remember my comments about buffers Nessie?? And thanks for finding those SV, now i remember them talking bout it but that makes rereading it much easier!!

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 09:27 PM
Ya but I didn't want to wait around for some one to post :( Maybe you all can help me with that next time :)

akuma
11-06-2005, 09:29 PM
Well just tell me when to be ready and ill be there!! Unless its like 3 in the morning, then well i probably wont be there...., or if im at school, then i wont be there...., or at karate, then i wont be there, other than that ILL BE THERE!!:D

SVsleuth
11-06-2005, 09:32 PM
I usually look for someone I know who is online & PM them asking them to come buffer for me. Works like a charm - even at 2 a.m. - you can usually find Matt around at that hour. LOL ;) (You sure I can't use that LOL smilie in your thread?) Darn! :p

akuma
11-06-2005, 09:35 PM
SV, Nessie updated, its ur turn!! And dont use the LOL smile, Nes will run away and not update, DONT DO IT SV!!

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 09:36 PM
LOL Ya what Ricky said!

rosewolfe87
11-06-2005, 10:23 PM
I've been told that your last update was a good one, but also a tear jerker. I'm not sure if I want to cry, but, as I want to be one of the cool kids, I'm going to suck it up. I'll comment as soon as I'm done reading.

NYC300Z
11-06-2005, 10:30 PM
yeah it really was a tear jerker how could they both think that! So sad!

PPMS!

oh and thankyou for adding that just to give me a laugh! i feel so special now!

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 11:23 PM
My pleasure Matt :) I like trowing little things in foe people to catch.. but I never mention them first :D We could call it a little game that I play with my readers :) Only ya'll don't know it unless you look for it! *wink*

Janaa how did you find that out? Ha cool huh?! Well I guess I'm pretty dorky if I was the ne writing it and crying at the same time!

rosewolfe87
11-06-2005, 11:27 PM
akuma sent me a PM. We're cool like that! And I haven't read it yet because I hate to cry, but since how everyone else has, and I've already updated for the night, I'm reading it now.

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 11:37 PM
Well then my fuuny one, enjoy :)

rosewolfe87
11-06-2005, 11:38 PM
lol, i'm so very funny. And quite perky too.

Anyways, I've finished it, and let me just say..SNIFFFF!!!!! You can't do that to us Clananators! We live for this fic and you can't make us cry, it's very bad!

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 11:40 PM
Whoa! :eek: T.M.I.!!!!


Bad! :eek: You said bad! Oh my I am quite shocked! lol no one said I was trying to be nice :D

Did you really cry too?

rosewolfe87
11-06-2005, 11:42 PM
lol, I had a few tears in these eyes of mine. Now i'll have to be all depressed and stuff in my fic too! (not that it already wasn't depressing.)

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 11:44 PM
Is there not a single person who did not cry?!

Wait wait what part made you depressed?

rosewolfe87
11-06-2005, 11:45 PM
Umm....the part where Clark is sad! Sad Clark, is not a good Clark. (Although sad Clark is a SEXY Clark.)

SuperNes
11-06-2005, 11:55 PM
LOL

Ya he was sad a lot in that update :( Did you read any of my spoilers? the y migh help you get.. *Ahem* Perky *snicker* again :D

rosewolfe87
11-06-2005, 11:57 PM
lol, I don't like reading the spoilers, I like to be surprised. And depressing is always a good thing to read, because I know that somehow it'll get all happy again. At least, that's what I do in my fics, I'll keep them on the edge of their seat until the very end!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 12:01 AM
ha well they are very tiny spoiler. Doggone Clananators tried to put me to the question but I think I held off most of their eager questions for the most part :) ... I hope... well I'm out! See ya Janna!

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 12:03 AM
G'night, I'm off too, I have to be at work by 10:00 a.m. It's already after midnight!

dreammaster
11-07-2005, 03:50 AM
that was awesome

SVsleuth
11-07-2005, 08:38 AM
Wah! I'm instinctively coming here for the daily update - And then remember that we're all caught up & won't get one today. Oh, Nessie, that last update was SOOOooooooo good, I know you deserve a break - but I hope you are as eager to write what happens next as we are to read it & it will come sooner rather than later.... Please keep us posted on your progress. Thanks.

MOOman0618
11-07-2005, 10:23 AM
Yes, we definitely understand that we have to wait a little longer for updates...but that doesn't make me any less impatient! heehee Can't wait for more!!! :)

Evil Dr. Smurf
11-07-2005, 10:58 AM
Oh, dear. I really have to get on the computer more often! I keep missing all of these fantastc (though quite sad) updates.

I'll admit, this latest update made me cry...but that's nothing new, because stories written as wonderfully as this usually do make me cry.

I hate scenarios like this, where one person in a relationship feels he/she doesn't deserve the other and pushes them away without an explanation. It always leads to both of them getting hurt! Lana should know by now that Clark will love her no matter what! Oh well...if the story was nice and happy all the time, it would be much too boring to read!

Great update, as usual. Can't wait for the next!

linn
11-07-2005, 02:20 PM
*sniff*sniff*sniff*.........i almost cried when i read the whole chapter....poor Clark and Lana....PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 02:38 PM
Dr. Evil.. I mean Smurf :D I'm glad you liked it and join the rest of us with a tissue :)




Wow! We have a winner! Linn your the first to not have cried!

linn
11-07-2005, 02:53 PM
Well i do intend to cry if im in the mood too,....

akuma
11-07-2005, 03:09 PM
Just dropping by to see how everyone is doin in aftermath of the sad update:(, but very good update!!:D I zoned out in school trying to figure out next twist of fic based on my guesses and what ive squeezed out of Nes, im still thinking!!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 03:13 PM
Oh NO! Please don't let this inturrupt your schooling! And knock it off with the guessing :D

akuma
11-07-2005, 03:17 PM
Im keeping my guesses private, i promised i wouldnt tell and i intended to keep that promise:D as for school, i have senioritis very bad and my grades r good enough i can afford to zone out, ur fic is worth it!!

Dr. Jeckyll
11-07-2005, 07:16 PM
I'm at Chapter 5 and your story is amazing. Now I'm gonna stay awake all night reading this. Oh well, I've had worse nights ;) Lots of good reading ahead of me :D :D

NYC300Z
11-07-2005, 07:17 PM
PPMS!

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 07:18 PM
Oh geez, I just got to a very good part of my DWTD fic, I haven't posted it here yet, but...*gasps* It made me cry! Now I cry in my fic and yours Nes! Congrats, now I'm just a depressing person!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 07:32 PM
Noo deat Janna, Here maybe this will cheer you *Ahheem , clears throat*

*Myyyy funny Crackertine... Sweeet funny Crackertine! You maaaake meee smiiile with alll my heart...*

No more tears :)



Welcome Jecky I almost envy you! Nothing like reading it the first time :) Enjoy! But please get some sleep it will be here when you wake up :)

sorry Matt no update yet :) but I have had enough time to absorb the last post and formulate the small details of the next one so I will start writing tonight :)

patience my Dear Clananators :)

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 07:33 PM
Crackertine?!?

...............you're kind of a freak aren't you?

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 07:41 PM
Rolls eyes No it was a joke! about the crackers! Never mind

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 07:48 PM
I KNOW!!

Geez....computers and sarcasm suck.

NYC300Z
11-07-2005, 08:06 PM
oh thankyou good to hear that your writing!

PPMS!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 08:36 PM
Arg! Sorry janna glad you don't really think I'm crazy :) Hope you feel back to your chipper self soon.

Yes yes Matt Work me to the bone! LOL

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 08:42 PM
I am very chipper........and perky.

DURR!!

NYC300Z
11-07-2005, 08:47 PM
well I don't want you to start bleeding or anything like Lex when he didn't stop hitting the piano keys....(you know you with computer keys) but yeah I got to make sure your working hard!
:lol:

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:13 PM
Felt like saying hey to everyone, so well HI!!:D
Hows everyone doin tonight?

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:14 PM
Workin hard my friend... workin hard

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:15 PM
On an update??:D LOL u want some help??:D

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 10:15 PM
I'm updating like CRAZY tonight!

SVsleuth
11-07-2005, 10:15 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
I have had enough time to absorb the last post and formulate the small details of the next one so I will start writing tonight :)

Oh, that's great news! :):):):):) :):):):):)

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:16 PM
My interest is piqued... how exactly do you expect to help?

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:16 PM
Originally posted by rosewolfe87
I'm updating like CRAZY tonight!

Yes i noticed im very excited, and i have no school tomorrow so i plan on staying online little longer than usual!!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:17 PM
Whoa the entire Clananator Gang is here! :eek:

That's alota smilies! :eek: LOL

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
My interest is piqued... how exactly do you expect to help?

What kind of help would u like?:D

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by rosewolfe87
I'm updating like CRAZY tonight!


Hmmmm *Nes is tempted to go read instead of working on chapter9...* Hmmmm updates!

See Rick that is my question! Cause I don't see how it is possible!

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:21 PM
Well lets see u have whole story in ur head, so i cant help write.
I could help with music selections if i find something good or proofread ur stuff before u post, um what else is there?

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 10:23 PM
NOOOO!!!

Hey, I don't mind if you read my fics, but if you read instead of write, people are going to get mad at ME!!!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:23 PM
YA!!! Sweet! I would luuuve some assistance with Music selection! I have a lot of them already predetermined for certain events... but I am always needing fresh stuff so any ideas would be most welcome! :D

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:24 PM
Originally posted by rosewolfe87
NOOOO!!!

Hey, I don't mind if you read my fics, but if you read instead of write, people are going to get mad at ME!!!

Ahem well i know some people who would be sad if SOMEONE was chatting with other people instead of posting an update!!:D

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:26 PM
Aha AHa You made me snort laugh! LOL Yes I can always use that as an excuse if I miss an update time slot! LOL I'll just say I got tangled in your FF's *evil laugh while rubbing hands together*

Originally posted by akuma
Ahem well i know some people who would be sad if SOMEONE was chatting with other people instead of posting an update!!:D
Fine Fine Fine! Thanks for the break! You guys R>O>C>K> !!!!! back to the slave driven Wordpad for me :)

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
YA!!! Sweet! I would luuuve some assistance with Music selection! I have a lot of them already predetermined for certain events... but I am always needing fresh stuff so any ideas would be most welcome! :D

Sure i have some stuff from.. oh my god i cant believe im gonna say this.. some cds i made for.. holy crap.. ex-girlfriend that has good songs on them, but that girl just recently screwed me over so i also have very angry cd!!:mad:

No stay NESSIE I was talking to Janna she promised an update like 20 minutes, u can stay and talk Nessie!!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:30 PM
OMG!!! I am sooo sorry! What a {4 star * word inserted here}

okay really, back to the board for me! I am at a really fun spot ! :) Ahh I love writing this Fic :)

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:30 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
OMG!!! I am sooo sorry! What a {4 star * word inserted here}

okay really, back to the board for me! I am at a really fun spot ! :) Ahh I love writing this Fic :)

Thanks Nessie, yeah that was not a fun day this weekend, double argh and gar!!

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 10:32 PM
Geez, fine. I'm not even allowed to TALK.

It's always "update, update, update."

Y'know, all work and no play makes Janna a dull girl!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:33 PM
Poor baby :( here have a Cracker... :)


later Clananators ha ha that is a lot of doggone a's and n's! Can I shorten it to the Clanana's :ROFL: I crack me up!

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:34 PM
Originally posted by rosewolfe87
Geez, fine. I'm not even allowed to TALK.

It's always "update, update, update."

Y'know, all work and no play makes Janna a dull girl!

Ur not dull at all, we enjoy talking u just gotta throw in an update ever once in a while, Wow i love my position i just talk and beg for updates, I dont have to worry about a story! What fun!:D

Yummy a cracker from Nes, im so excited!! That helps bunches!

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 10:35 PM
LOL!!!

Clanana's. That is too close to my name......

And Cracker is my work you Cracker!

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:36 PM
U know what maybe i should just take Cracker away from both of u and leave it to me, that would solve that problem!!:D

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:36 PM
No I'm the cheese for ya Cracker you Cracker!

Here Rick haev another one just to spite Clanana over there *evil laugh with hunched shoulders* :D

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 10:38 PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm offended!

*goes to own thread*

Y'know what, you're lucky if I don't CUT the cheese!

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:38 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
No I'm the cheese for ya Cracker you Cracker!

Here Rick haev another one just to spite Clanana over there *evil laugh with hunched shoulders* :D

LMAO:rotfl: Awesome another cracker!!

U cant escape Janna we will just follow u to ur thread, there is no escape!!! Muhahahahahahaha, wow got a little carried away there!!

SuperNes
11-07-2005, 10:43 PM
LOL see ya later Craka heads :)

and Janna if you dare slice the cheese in here I will run for the exit holding my breathe and I will not return until the air is 100% purified!

That's right I am threatening! :D

akuma
11-07-2005, 10:44 PM
Not the evil threat of abandonment, dont leave us Nes, ill make sure Janna doesnt cut the cheese!! :D

See ya later!

rosewolfe87
11-07-2005, 10:47 PM
HEY!! That was a metaphor, she said that SHE was the cheese!!!!!

...um...not that...that was...a threat...or anything.

NYC300Z
11-07-2005, 10:57 PM
keep up the hard work!:D

SVsleuth
11-07-2005, 11:00 PM
I loved reading that you love writing this fic! :) That's how it should be.

Rick, don't you feel guilty? Reading & reading, taking & taking, but not giving a story back to your friends? So, I challenge YOU to start a fic! You can even just do a short funny one for the SLAPSTICK thread. Even binkys is doing that! I think Matt even did that, if I remember correctly. Try it, Rick. It's fun to read AND write. :D

akuma
11-07-2005, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by SVsleuth
I loved reading that you love writng this fic! :) That's how it should be.

Rick, don't you feel guilty? Reading & reading, taking & taking, but not giving a story back to your friends? So, I challenge YOU to start a fic! You can even just do a short funny one for the SLAPSTICK thread. Even binkys is doing that! I think Matt even did that, if I remember correctly. Try it, Rick. It's fun to read AND write. :D

DO I FEEL GUILTY? Well...um...No not really i like to think my humor and compliments make up for no fic!:D, BUT i have been thinking of doin a fic once i get the whole idea in my head planned out, but dont expect it anytime soon.

SVsleuth
11-07-2005, 11:20 PM
Well at least you're thinking about it, Rick. That's a start. :)

akuma
11-08-2005, 09:27 AM
Thats right SV, im thinking bout, but what if no one likes it?!?!
This is the part where yall were SUPPOSED to come and say 'of course we'll like ur fic Rick!' come on now!!
If enough people ask i might even tell u what my planned fics premise will be!! :p

akuma
11-08-2005, 12:04 PM
Fine no comments then no one gets to see my fic, i was gonna post the first chapter today, but now i dont know!!:mad:

SuperNes
11-08-2005, 12:23 PM
Originally posted by akuma
Thats right SV, im thinking bout, but what if no one likes it?!?!
:p

Yay!!!!!!! how exciting ! :) can't wait Rick!

SVsleuth
11-08-2005, 02:42 PM
Rick, I'm sure we will LOVE your fic! Sorry I wasn't here earlier to say so. I am eager to see what you have in mind, Get on with it, please. Oh, I hope he really posts it. I'm so glad I asked you!! Post soon, Rick!!

Dr. Jeckyll
11-08-2005, 07:05 PM
I'm starting to catch up. I'm now at Chapter 8 Part 9. I think that'll do for today. I need something to look forward to :D And btw your proposal was beautiful!

SuperNes
11-08-2005, 07:28 PM
Well thank you Dr. :D The ring is my favorite :) hopefully there will be chapter 9 ready for you before you catch up... it's quite a sad moment to be left hanging on... *Ahem* soory Clananas :)

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 09:40 PM
Okay Nes. Me and Rick have officially split from the Clananators. We are now the Clarmy.

I've been thinking, that the Clarmy will have 4 leaders. Me, you, Matt, and Rick. We are seperate from the Clananators, but we fight for the same cause. What do you think?

I am the "grand-master" of course. Rick the the burninator. (funny isn't it?)

What do you and Matt want to be?

akuma
11-08-2005, 09:41 PM
'Trogdor the Burninator' yes its an amazing rank name i know!!:D

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 09:44 PM
We are so very weird.

akuma
11-08-2005, 09:44 PM
Weird but hilarious!!:D

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 09:48 PM
Hell yeah!

akuma
11-08-2005, 09:49 PM
Gosh where is Matt and Nes, they r usually on by now?

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 09:51 PM
Matt usually gets on in about 8 minutes. I'm not sure if Nes will be on tonight though.

akuma
11-08-2005, 10:15 PM
Ha maybe we should appoint Nes as the Cracker of the Clarmy, what do u think Janna?:D

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 10:18 PM
lol, sounds good to me!

CLARMY:

Janna- grandmaster
akuma- First mate (Trogdor the burninator)
Nes- Cracker of the Clarmy
Matt- (undecided)

akuma
11-08-2005, 10:20 PM
If u or ur friends would like to join Clarmy PM rosewolfe87 or akuma or simply post a request on our threads and be sure to have a rank name ready to go!:p

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 10:25 PM
lol! That's right, you can have any rank you wish, just let us know and we'll be grateful to give it to you!

In the Clarmy, you are guaranteed at least 3 square Clana fixes a day and a generous good-night!

akuma
11-08-2005, 10:27 PM
Yup, yup well im off to bed its late here and unfortuanately back to school tomorrow, argh:mad: See ya later Janna!!

rosewolfe87
11-08-2005, 10:30 PM
See you, I'm off too! I'll be on tommorrow (hopefully) after I get off work. I get off at 5:00 p.m. (central time.) See you Rick!

SuperNes
11-08-2005, 11:09 PM
Whoa! What happened! And who's wise idea was to to name me the Cracker of the Clarmy!!!! What's the big idea! I am the least crackerish of all you crakerheads! That's it! Atention Company! Face front! Comence butt chewing!... ahem I mean cracker chewing... or whatever :D LOL See ya tommorrow Knuckleheads!

NYC300Z
11-09-2005, 02:55 AM
Yay! I'm in the crew! Now I need a title/rank huh? oh Iono think of something good for me Janna! Sorry I wasn't on earlier i've been having internet problems! My internet just started working so that's why i'm on so late!

PPMS!!

I'm the Colonel under Binkys but iono that doesn't seem appropriate here....

Dr. Jeckyll
11-09-2005, 11:19 AM
WOW! I actually caught up! This fic is fantastic! Your last update was really sad though. I can't wait for you to answer all these questions. The 'present' updates will sure be interesting!

MOOman0618
11-09-2005, 03:35 PM
So when are we getting an update here?? I didn't miss one did I?

NYC300Z
11-09-2005, 04:41 PM
I'm going with Zeus Ammon the title give to Alexander the Great when he was voulntarily made Pharoh of Egypt!

PPMS!;)

linn
11-09-2005, 06:58 PM
Hey nes when r we gonna get a update..this story is awesome...PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!

SVsleuth
11-09-2005, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by linn
Hey nes when r we gonna get a update..this story is awesome...PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, I was just poking my head in here to ask the same question. When do you think, Nes? (Don't worry, I'm not putting pressure. How can I when I just told my readers mine won't be before Friday night?) Just want an idea. :)

baldy92
11-09-2005, 08:55 PM
this story is great PPMS!!!!

rosewolfe87
11-09-2005, 10:57 PM
OKAY!

Clarmy:
Janna- grandmaster
Rick- first mate (Trogdor the burninator)
Nessie- CRACKER
Matt- Zeus Ammon

C'mon Matt! You can't be in both! You have to choose!

NYC300Z
11-09-2005, 10:59 PM
What were taking sides now? I thought we were all fighting for the same cause? I'm a bit confused let me know what's good?

rosewolfe87
11-09-2005, 11:02 PM
Well, we are on the same side. We're just different armies.

As you know, I was the inventor of the Clananators, and I was suddenly demoted (as was Rick) to Commander! Under a whole butt load of people! So I invented the Clarmy, where we fight for the same cause, but we are friends!

If you join, you'll automatically get 3 square Clana fixes a day AND a generous goodnight!

NYC300Z
11-09-2005, 11:22 PM
Zeus Ammon it is...that way i'm an all powerful god;)

rosewolfe87
11-09-2005, 11:26 PM
lol, yay!

Together, Janna, Rick, Nessie, and Matt will rule this Clana board with no competition!

NYC300Z
11-10-2005, 08:39 AM
:lol: let's a go!;)

SVsleuth
11-10-2005, 09:25 AM
Nes, when do we get an update? Or at least an update on the progress of your next chapter....

NYC300Z
11-10-2005, 12:57 PM
yeah please let us know what's good! I'm really looking forward to an update!

rosewolfe87
11-10-2005, 01:08 PM
Please let it be soon, i'm dying with anticipation!

akuma
11-11-2005, 03:27 PM
Im not gonna let this go to 2nd page Nessie, come back soon!!!:D

cufcchic
11-11-2005, 04:27 PM
i need an update soon! PPMS!

akuma
11-12-2005, 07:43 PM
NO, this WILL NOT go to second page, come on Nes, come back to us!!

rosewolfe87
11-12-2005, 09:19 PM
NESSIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HEY!!!

Considering you've decided to call me Clanana, when you get in a mean mood, I'm going to start calling you Nissan. You gotta update soon Nissan!

linn
11-12-2005, 11:08 PM
Lolz...rosewolf87

rosewolfe87
11-12-2005, 11:16 PM
Yes..*blows on knuckles* I am known as funny in these parts.

SVsleuth
11-13-2005, 01:05 AM
Where are you Nessie? Are you busy writing it? Dying for an update here! PLEASE post more soon!!!

akuma
11-13-2005, 03:01 PM
Originally posted by rosewolfe87
NESSIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HEY!!!

Considering you've decided to call me Clanana, when you get in a mean mood, I'm going to start calling you Nissan. You gotta update soon Nissan!

I want a funny name to be called when i dont update!! Huh never thought id be asking to be called a name, oh well, come on Janna, show us some of ur funny!!:p

NYC300Z
11-14-2005, 01:08 AM
Nissan Power!:D

SuperNes
11-14-2005, 10:15 AM
Can I start by saying SOOOOOOOOOOO so so so so sorry! I have had a intersting week! LOL Oh and the 11th was my b-day! I am now officially old! :p Yeah 25! :D

I am hopinmg to get the next update posted tuesday or wednsday night. :)

Love ya guys, Nes



Wow Janna! I have had a lot of nicknames in the past so it's rare that some one comes up with anew one! but you did! :o LOL funny though!

SVsleuth
11-14-2005, 10:53 AM
Belated Happy Birthday, Ness!

Happy Birthday!


Will be looking fwd to your update this week! :)

NYC300Z
11-14-2005, 01:37 PM
yes Happy Birthday then! Hope to hear from you soon!

akuma
11-14-2005, 03:57 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
Can I start by saying SOOOOOOOOOOO so so so so sorry! I have had a intersting week! LOL Oh and the 11th was my b-day! I am now officially old! :p Yeah 25! :D

I am hopinmg to get the next update posted tuesday or wednsday night. :)

Love ya guys, Nes



Wow Janna! I have had a lot of nicknames in the past so it's rare that some one comes up with anew one! but you did! :o LOL funny though!

Welcome back Nessie, cant wait for the next update and Happy B-day, ur 7 years older than me now:p

linn
11-14-2005, 04:32 PM
Hey ur older than mi Aunt......HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY...............ppms!

SuperNes
11-14-2005, 04:32 PM
Well thank you! :) :love: And I an't wait for the next update either! :D I am going through and rereading the whole thing right now and It is making me excited for what comes next! :) SO here is a note to self... " Hurry up and update self!!!" :D

NYC300Z
11-14-2005, 05:03 PM
:lol: that's funny Nissan! telling your self to update! oh well hope you get to it soon!

ps if you don't like that Nick Janna made up for you just tell me...i'll stop.

HP_DRAGON
11-14-2005, 05:09 PM
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY nessie PPMS

rosewolfe87
11-14-2005, 09:23 PM
No, no, no! Nissan is funny! It's better than cracker right?

Yeah, I thought so too!

Happy Late Birthday Nissan, every birthday is a good thing, because Nissan always comes out with a prettier model! Yay birthdays!

NYC300Z
11-15-2005, 08:59 AM
sorry to say Nissan hasn't come out with a nice sports car in the US since 1996.

Still Happy Birthday again Nissan and plese update soon!

akuma
11-15-2005, 10:18 PM
using my trogdor clarmy power i boost this thread back to top!

rosewolfe87
11-15-2005, 10:28 PM
I am the back up power!!

Matt, and Nessie, you guys need to get yahoo Messenger, so you guys, Rick and me, can talk together!

NYC300Z
11-16-2005, 01:39 AM
I have yahoo messenger....I just don't use it much....PM and I'll give you my SN.

PS Nessie PPMS!!:D

akuma
11-16-2005, 03:37 PM
*waiting patiently for promised update coming tonight*

SVsleuth
11-16-2005, 04:58 PM
Originally posted by akuma
*waiting patiently for promised update coming tonight*

DITTO!

SuperNes
11-16-2005, 05:47 PM
It won't be ready by tonight :( thanks for your patience though!

SVsleuth
11-16-2005, 06:50 PM
Awwwww.....Oh, well, let's see..... Hmmmm..... Cardinal said he might update tonight... I'll go check there...

This feels like such a long wait, Nes. I'm starting to get impatient...PPMS!

NYC300Z
11-16-2005, 07:17 PM
PPMS!;)

SVsleuth
11-18-2005, 09:39 PM
Are you writing it, Nessie? I REALLY want an update here. Please?

PPMS!

SuperNes
11-20-2005, 11:35 PM
So sorry ya'll. My only excuse is that I have been sick all weekend. I am Dogg tired right now but I will post the first part of my next chapter tonight then hopefully I'll get the rest on tomorrow. Any body here to buffer this message for me?

Love and apologies, Nessie

superman_lives_on
11-20-2005, 11:37 PM
Here's your buffer, SuperNes. Sorry about your sickness--hope you're on the road to recovery.

SuperNes
11-20-2005, 11:59 PM
Chapter 9



Clark opened his eyes to see Jimmy's desperate face pleading with him, "Wake up man!" "Get your friend out of my cab or I'll do it myself," growled a threatening voice from just behind Jimmy. Clark blinked hard as his friend tried to pull him out by the shoulders, "Jimmy? What are you doing here? Wh..." His body went limp as he realized he wasn't in Europe at all... 'Another flashback... why does this keep happening? I have to do something about it.' Please... please get out of this nice man's cab." Clark glanced away from Jimmy's worried face, noticing the fumes that were begining to steam off of the red faced Cabby.

Clark slid out of the back seat and paid the man, "Jimmy my life is a walking Nightmare... (Jimmy stepped quickly onto the side walk eager to put some distance between himself and the cabby who still staring daggers at him) I am dying inside, I mean really dying. How can I feel so miserable for so long and still be able to breath?" Jimmy tried to pull him towards the large glass doors of the entrance to Luthorcorp Plaza, "I don't knoow but in my opinion you were almost dead meat back there! Come on lets go, if I am late... well I don't even want to think about what Mr. White would do!"

Clark looked at his friend, seeing the desperation in his eyes he shook off his own painful thoughts and strode toward the reception desk. "Mr. Kent? (The receptionist barely waited for his nod before stepping out from her desk) This way please." She led them into a waiting elevator, inserted her key and pressed the button for the top floor. As the doors closed she made sure Clark noticed her checking him out. When the floor jolted upwards Jimmy shook his head in wonderment, "A guy never has a chance with you around... She was licking her lips since the moment you walked in those doors! I could have been holding a pink basket full of Hundred dollar bills with her name on it and she still would not have realized I was there! I'm not that bad looking am I?" Clark raised an eyebrow at his friend, "A girl would be lucky to get to know you Jimmy, your a stand up guy." Jimmy straightened his shoulders and stuck out his chest, "Ya I knew that! But If it's all the same to you, since you never seem interested, maybe you could do the rest of the male species a favor and glue a large rubber wart to your lip or something." This finnally broke through Clarks mood, letting out a tremendous guffaw, he slapped his buddy on the shoulder, "Good one." Jimmy's face turned down in a slight frown, and he mumbled quietly, "I was serious." Clark nearly doubled over in laughter, "You are dilusioned my friend, I never see girls checking me out." Jimmy shook his head, 'Then you must be blind!'

Both men's faces turned up as a security camera buzzed around in the corner, it focus in on Clark briefly before moving on to Jimmy. The elevator came to a halt, opening up to a large man with a suspicious bulge under his Purple Armani Suit jacket. The man gave them a once over before grunting towards the looming double oak doors almost two stories high. Clark walked around the man and pushed his way into the next room. He had been here several times following a lead on one story or another, but the place never ceased to amaze him. His eyes took in every last detail from the stuffed skins of near exticnt animals to the even rarer portraits adorning the walls, the room would have made the nations finest museums and galleries look like a garage sale.

Clark turned when a stony voice spoke up from his left, the words slicing like they were carved out of glacier ice, "Mr. Luthor will be with us shortly, can I get you gentlemen a drink?" "Hello Mrs. Ving, No I'm fine... (Clark peeked at Jimmy who vigorously shook his head) Were fine, but Thank you." Her snake like figure revealed itself as she stood from the large plush Italian sofa, she made a bee-line for the bar and began to pour herself a glass of Glenfiddich. Jimmy elbowed Clark in the side, "Now there is a woman I wouldn't want checking me out," He gave a visable shiver as he watched her bony arms lift the scotch to her thin lips, "She frightens me," he whispered.

"I can ask her to leave if you prefer," Chuckled Lex from behind the men. Jimmy spun on his heels, "Mr. Luthor.. no.. I mean uh... sorry.." he stuttered out of the path of the young billionaire as Lex extended a hand to Clark. Clark shook it reluctantly, "Mr. Luthor," He mumbled quietly. Lex clasp a hand on Clarks shoulder, "Well then shall we get the photo shoot out of the way first? I have a feeling your little friend here would prefer to be spending his afternoon elsewhere." Clark glanced at Jimmy's pale face and tipped his reporter's hat back a little, "Ya, that's fine." He watched on as jimmy took several photos of Mr. Luthor. When they had wrapped things up Clark clapped Jimmy on the back, "I'll see ya back at the office." Jimmy nodded and fled out of the large doors.
Lex waved Clark over to his desk, offering him a cigar, "Come, have a seat." Clark shook his head as he removed his notepad from his briefcase, "No, thank you." Lex sat on the ornate cherry oak desk and bit lightly on his cigar then looked over to Clark again, "You are surely the most envied reporter in the nation today Mr. Kent." Clark nodded his head, "I suppose your right. If you don't mind me asking, why did you choose me for your exclusive?" Lex waved his cigar dismissivly in the air, "Consider it a gift from my new girlfriend." Clark's brow knit together as he tried to puzzle together what that meant. He waved off the thought and got down to business, "So Mr. Luthor, The property you were just granted for the Orphanage, It has been rumored that you have been trying for some time now to get it deeded to you. Was sponsoring this prestigous endeavor your way of getting the state to hand it over?"
***

Clark ferreted as much information out of the self proclaimed Aristocrat as possible, but Lex proved, as usual, to divulge only what he wanted to be revealed. Three hours later he found himself at his desk putting the finishing touches on his report.

Clark pushed his chair back and headed towards Perry's office. He raised an arm to knock on the door but Perry beat him to the punch. The door swung wide to reveal a haven for all things Elvis, "What are you doing standing around, come in, come in Kent." Clark sat heavily on the worn, yet amazingly comfortable, old leather couch. When Perry passed by he handed him his report. Not even glancing at it Perry tossed it on the center of his desk and sat down into his chair slowly, "Kent I'm sure it will be through the roof spectacular, I'll send it straight to the press, but first we need to have a little talk... (He stopped to loosen his already loose tie) Your moral around here has always been a concern to me, i have had several of your Coworkers voice concern over you mental stability, and as of late you have really been putting my blood pressure to the test... " Cutting off his boss, Clark sat forward letting his elbows bare his weight atop his knees, "I know sir, I am sorry... I was hoping to talk to you about that..." Grabbing a bobbing head Elvis from his desk Perry cut back in, "I want you to take a few days off... I have been working you hard, not that I don't pay you enough to compensate for it, but I understand the need for an occasional break." Clark nodded, "Thank you sir, I was going to ask you myself... I think I'm going to head home for a short time... I need to take care of some things there..."

Perry watched with growing concern as his star reporter's face clouded over with pain and dread, "Okay son, you do that, Just be home by saturday for the Govenor's ball, okay?" Clark nodded and headed for the door. He stopped just before exiting and turned back around, "Oh and sir... I didn't add this to my report... yet, but Luthor is up to something, I am conviced his involvment with the Orphange is a facade to hide some new sceme of his." Perry nodded thoughtfully, "Yes... yes good work Kent, I will have Lois... (remembering she no longer worked for the Planet, he changed thought mid course) We need more help around here... I'll get someone on it Kent. Take care of yourself now, and I'll see you day after tomorrow." Clark grabbed his classic reporter's hat, (it had been a gift from Lana when he landed his first reporting job in Spain. She had thought it a joke at first but it ended up looking so good on him that he wore it to work every day since) and pulled on his Coat before heading for the elevator. 'It's Thursday, I had better put in my order for my Penguin suit, then I'll get some sleep. Tommorrow I'll finnally go home... tomorrow...'

LanasLover16
11-21-2005, 12:13 AM
AMAZING!!!!!!! I just cant wait til Lana and Clark can meet again!!! it better be soon nes!!!!

SuperNes
11-21-2005, 12:17 AM
LOL Yes Soon :) glad it was liked 'LL16' even without any Clana :(

Thanks 'Smanny lives on' for the buffer :)

MOOman0618
11-21-2005, 01:54 AM
Yea!! We got an update!! And we are finally back in the present...but what has happend. Why didn't Lana ever come back to Clark? Because she thought he left her? And he still thinks she is dead? This is terrible!! Oh my goodness, their meeting will be very interesting.

Will we have to wait so long for the next update?? I hope not. :)

SVsleuth
11-21-2005, 02:12 AM
Oh, so glad to find an update. This is so good. Can't wait for Lana & Clark to meet. Did Lex mean Lana when he said his "new girlfriend"? I hope not! PPMS! We love ya, Nessie. Hope you feel better.

dreammaster
11-21-2005, 05:26 AM
awesome

HP_DRAGON
11-21-2005, 08:37 AM
great update but i am confused PPMS

SuperNes
11-21-2005, 09:24 AM
Wow I thought for sure people would guess who the girlfriend is! :eek: I'll post a little reminder... I think the line went something like.... "They are my favorite for Snug..." :D I have to jet for a while I have a T-day party to attend :p See ya tonight

Nes

SVsleuth
11-21-2005, 09:59 AM
Originally posted by SuperNes
Wow I thought for sure people would guess who the girlfriend is! :eek: I'll post a little reminder... I think the line went something like.... "They are my favorite for Snug..." :D I have to jet for a while I have a T-day party to attend :p See ya tonight

Nes

Oh! NOW I remember. Now I know who it is. Ha-Ha! Good twist.
PPMS!

SuperNes
11-21-2005, 11:54 AM
Atta Girl!!! Now were eating crackers!

SmallvilleMan
11-21-2005, 11:57 AM
Not sure I follow, i'm just going to go with who i think it is.

SuperNes
11-21-2005, 12:17 PM
Welcome Smallvilleman :) Don't be thrown off by our chatter :p Who do you think it is then?

SmallvilleMan
11-21-2005, 12:41 PM
Lana

NYC300Z
11-21-2005, 02:18 PM
I hope it's Lois :lol: but that's just because it's too scary to think of Lana with Lex... I don't want to see any Lexana it might be funny though to see Lexana broken off as soon as Clark and Lana meet!

PPMS!

linn
11-21-2005, 05:23 PM
Please don't have a Lexana im really tired of it cause of hearing about Lexmas i hopes that his new g-friend is Lois then we have Lexis....:D....awesome update Nes....PPMS!:D:D:D:D

SVsleuth
11-21-2005, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
... hopefully I'll get the rest on tomorrow.

So will you be able to get the rest up today, Nes? :)

rosewolfe87
11-21-2005, 09:17 PM
Okay, sorry I've been gone the last couple of days, I've been overloaded with work. I'm almost afraid of who is girlfriend is, please, please, PLEASE don't let it be Lana. We have enough foreshadowing on the show as it is. Talk about *gag*. Update again soon!

SuperNes
11-21-2005, 09:38 PM
Oh ye of little faith! Havn't you been paying attention to all the clues?


Yes I am hoping to have the next part up in a few huors, I am writng right now but the scenes are so touchy I am crying and I keep having to take breaks! :eek: sorry!

rosewolfe87
11-21-2005, 09:46 PM
lol, I cry sometimes when I write too, I think it's normal when you're attached to the fic you are writing.

LanasLover16
11-21-2005, 10:27 PM
Please hurry, and if there's any Lexana, i think im gonna barf!! having it on the show is hard enough!! and i dont know if im going to love lex-mas or hate it because Lana is looking sooooooooooooo beautiful and hot in it, but shes with Lex! oh well, cant wait for the update!!!!

SVsleuth
11-21-2005, 10:36 PM
Think Lexois not Lexana....

rosewolfe87
11-22-2005, 12:18 AM
Nessie couldn't update because she was too busy talking to me and Rick on Yahoo....

Wait...was I supposed to tell that?

Mwahahaha! I did the same thing to rick in his fic. How fun.

SuperNes
11-22-2005, 12:28 AM
yOU ARE PURE EVIL cRACKER!!!! lol

rosewolfe87
11-22-2005, 12:31 AM
lol, and hey, I didn't stop responding, I was commenting to you the entire time, I guess you couldn't see what I was typing.

SuperNes
11-22-2005, 12:38 AM
it said something like "rosewolf is being ignored" what was that?!

NYC300Z
11-22-2005, 01:02 AM
update soon Nessie!;)

ps sorry I missed your last PM my inbox was full could you please resend it? Thanks!:)

akuma
11-23-2005, 07:43 PM
Ahhh!! :eek: What is this doin on the second page?!?! Time to move this thread back up, hoping to get an update soon! Love ya Nes!:D

SVsleuth
11-24-2005, 04:48 PM
Please update soon, Nes! :)

baldy92
11-24-2005, 04:58 PM
PPMS!

akuma
11-25-2005, 03:42 PM
Just to let yall know i won a friendly little bet with our favorite writer Nessie. and the wager? An update, thats what!! so hopefully that update is comin soon, lets go Nessie

SVsleuth
11-25-2005, 04:27 PM
Way to go, Rick! Come on, Nessie, we NEED an update here.

NYC300Z
11-25-2005, 04:42 PM
yeah come on Nessie update!;)

HP_DRAGON
11-25-2005, 07:15 PM
we need a update PPMS :)

nellie2
11-25-2005, 08:23 PM
wonderful fic. PPMS

IluvCLANA
11-26-2005, 09:46 PM
Now that I'm finally caught up I can tell you that I think you are an amazing writer Nes, even though I know many people have probably already said the same. I've only found a couple of ABSOTIVELY POSOLUTELY SUPERPERLLY AWESOMELLY TERRIFICALLY WONDERFUL fanfics's on k-site, yours Nes, is one of them. Thank you for writing such a story. Please update soon so I can once again be awed by the emotions that it brings.
Sincerely,
IluvCLANA

akuma
11-26-2005, 09:48 PM
Muhahah yall can thank me now or later for winning that bet, but nessie has almost finished her update! Hooray!!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 09:51 PM
Okay!!! I for one am Desperate for some more Clana on the wb!!! reruns :(

Okay well here is an update for all you loverly people :) I was going to put more but I like the cliffhangar this creates especially since I know what's coming! so Don't hate my *EvilNess* lol

and here you go!! :)

akuma
11-26-2005, 09:55 PM
BUFFER!!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 09:56 PM
Chapter 9 con't

Clark kicked off his shoes and fell into bed. He dreaded the memories he knew would haunt him in his sleep, but it was still better than the pain he endured every waking minute. His eyelids heavily sunk closed...

***

"Mom?" Martha gasped at the whisper of a torn voice coming through her phone, "Clark! Oh honey!! Oh!! Where are you? Are you okay? Honey please come home." Clark began sobbing into the phone, "I can't.. I can never go back to Smallville... It would kill me all over again." Martha desperate for her son spoke confusedly, "But Clark La.." "NO Please don't ever talk to me about her... Just please, It has taken me six years to take this step forward. And any mention of her, sends me reeling back." Martha nodded to herself, "Okay.. okay whatever you want... just please, Your father and I... can we see you?" There was a few seconds of silent static before he spoke up again, "Yes... will you come here? I... I need Superman's suit back..." Martha's tears began flowing freely, "Yes of course... where are you, we'll come right up." Martha scribbled down the address quickly, hoping she had understood him... his voice was so broken. "And Mom... please tell dad my only rule... I don't want to leave again, (Martha shivered at the coldness that entered his voice) but if I am reminded of her... I will die all over again..." Martha hung up the phone with a vow to never let anything come close to pushing her son away again...

***

*Ding- Dong*.... Clark pulled the door open slowly, his eyes blinking against the harsh noon sun now pouring into his apartment. "Son? Oh My God, Jonathan go open his curtains." Martha rushed in through the door, taking her son's face into her soft hands, "Son you look like you havn't eaten in weeks!" Clark's body began to heave in what would have been tears had there been any moisture available for the task, "It's been more like 6 years," he stated through his gasps for air. Martha nearly fainted, but the sudden flood of light as the curtains were pulled brought her back into focus, "Clark how... Come sit." She led him by the arm to the only seat in the apartment. She hurried into the kitchen only to return a moment later holding a box of baking soda, "Jonathan this is the only thing in the entire apartment!!! And I suspect that it came with the place." Jonathan shook his head sadly, "Son you.." Martha gave him a sharp look of warning, "Jonathan. would you please bring up the food we brought." He nodded, feeling the burn of her none-verbal chastisement, he knew she was just trying to keep him from breaking Clark's rule, as much as it bothered him, he knew she was right, 'Better to have him in our lives again then to risk scaring him away.'

Martha served up the Steak and potatoes with a large side of roasted veggies and Jonathan sat on the low window sill next to Clark, "Son... where have you been?" Clark settled in on his back with an arm draped over his eyes to block out the sun-light. He mumbled back in response, "I was in My Fortress Of Solitude... I didn't know what to do... I just found myself there, Jor-El took me in, I have been studying all the knowledge he left behind for me... He finnally told me it was time to embrace my future, and sent me here... What choice do I have but to focus on my abilities... If I don't ... Well there is a darkness waiting to swallow me, everytime I lose focus I can feel the abyss callling me. All I want to do is fill the void, but it is impossible... I'm already dead... My physical body just refuses to accept it... So I go on, trying to lessen the misery the only way I know how... helping other people... that takes so much focus, that it kid of allows me to seperate from my mind. It's almost like I have an alter ego and he takes over, allowing me a modicum of peace, a short time to hang in a place of nothingness." Jonathan, a deep sadness apparent in his eyes, looked his son over, "I'm just happy to see you again... we didn't know where you were... the stress nearly killed your mother..." Clark sat up slowly and glanced at Martha putting the final touches on their dinner plates, "I'm sorry... I'm back now... as much of me that is left at least." Clark's sunken eyes closed heavily as his shrunken frame settled back onto the ragged old couch he had found in the Alley... 'I guess I need a job,' He thought vaguely.


***

Clark moaned in his last throws of sleep. Finnally his eyes fluttered open to reveal himself lying on the soft blue carpet, 'Hmm must have fallen out of bed.' He scrubbed at his eyes as he recalled his dream. 'No that's not me anymore,' He thought as healthy skin met his finger tips, he gave a sigh and hefted his large frame off the floor. Walking slowly to his window, he pulled back the drapes and inhaled the crisp morning air. He let his ears search the vast city, 'Strange.. not a single distressed citizen in reach of my ears... well other than old Mrs. Casry on 23rd blvd. But that old bat yels at her poor husband every minute of every day, No nothing there for me to do... It seems fate will allow me a day off after all.' He pushed back the tremble in his belly, he had secretly hoped there would be some excuse, that would allow him a way out of going bacck home. He trudged through his morning routine slowly, half enjoying the chance to just be slow, the other half terrified of what lay six feet under in the Smallville cemetery.

Clark realized he hadn't ordered his Tux the day before, so after a morning full of preperations he grabbed his hat and took a slow walk through the crowded streets. After an hour or so he arrived at Trodelli's Tuxedo's. A thin man with slick black hair and a glowing smile floated over to Clark, his clucky little voice started up with obvious pleasure, "Ah! Mr. Kent!!! It has been a while! I was wondering if you had maybe gotten a new tailor?!" His eyebrow raised in questioning, until Clark laughed him off gently, "Of course not!" The fragile little man snapped his fingers flamboyantly, sending his employee's scurying in every direction. "Wine Mr. Kent?" asked a mildly pretty young lady garbed in what Clark thought must be the latest fashion. "He smiled distractedly as Trodelli podded him towards a changing room, "No thank you."

Clark finnally emerged from the shop just as the sun disapeared behind the tall buildings surrounding him. He climbed into the Cab one of Trodelli's workers had called for him, and settled in for the 3 hour ride home.

Clark peered around the queit farm. The last rays of sunlight glitted off old Betty, 'I wonder if that tractor is still working... Who am I kiidding! She'll probably be around when I am an old man!' He gave the rusty old thing a pat as he climbed the stairs to his home. He tapped hesitantly on the door, sending some peeling paint falling to the porch, *knock knock...knock* The curtain pulled back revealing his Father's weathered face. "Clark!!!!" He tore the door open in a hurry, unbelief plastered across his eyes, "Martha it's Clark!!!!"

Jonathan clutched his son in a trembling embrace, "Son, your home!" Martha came hurrying down the stairs as fast as her old legs could take her. She almost pushed her husband out of the way to get to Clark. She fell into his arms holding him desperatly, her thin voice trembled amidst her sobs, "Son I never thought you'd come back home! Oh come in come in!" Martha hurried him over to the couch, "Are you hungry? Is everything okay?" Johnathan led Martha gently to the recliner, "Martha just let him talk would you!"

Clark sighed heavily, "I'm sorry I have been so distant, I just well, I've been busy," He lied. In truth every thing about home brought memories flooding into his head. "I hope to come home more often to vist, but I need some closure first. I've come.. to.. to visit.. (His voice broke as swirls of memories flooded through the gate that he had held shut for seven years.) Lana," he ended just above a whisper.

Martha and jonathan shot eachother looks of shocked disbelief, 'What are the chances.' Clark looked at his hands, this was going to be hard, "After the... the accident... she was brought back here?" Not knowing how much he wanted to know his parents agreed silently to stick as close to Clarks rule as possible, 'No need to scare him away because we told him more then he wants to hear, no just answer his questions directly.' Martha spoke through her shock first, "Yes." Clark squeezed his eyes shut against the flow of tears that threatened to break his resolve, "Was she ahh... is she ... with her parents?" Martha's eyes shot back to Jonathan, 'how does he know!' "Yes, she is there." Clark's shoulders heaved upwards as he stealed himself, "Okay, okay... thank you... I ahh... I have to go... I'm sorry.. I'll be back... maybe in a few weeks..." Martha and Jonathan hugged him goodbye, but Clark was numb to the world, he didn't notice their tentative glances or hear their warm wishes of good luck. He stepped out onto the porch and was surrounded by the fresh farm smells of a Kansas evening. And so he began his slow walk to Smallville's Cemetery.

SVsleuth
11-26-2005, 09:56 PM
1st! Hey, Nessie, I was so excited that you were updating, so I saw Rick's Buffer, & I posted another, but by that time, you had posted - so I changed it - but still had to go read.... Anyway, that was great! Can't wait to find out what happens. Why would his parents say Lana was with her parents? Doesn't make sense. But I'll be patient. Just PLEASE don't make us wait long for the next update. We really LOVE this story. PPMS!!!

UPDATE!

IluvCLANA
11-26-2005, 09:58 PM
!!!!!yay!!!!! *runs around room and yells happilly "an update, an update!" everyone looks at me funny and I go back to my seat and read the update*

edit:
wow!!! that was awesome!!! Grrrrr..... Its bugging me so bad that Clark doesn't know she's alive. Well, I REALLY hope they meet at the cemetary and he doesn't run away from her. If only they would have shared their thoughts in the hospital instead of them thinking of what the other was thinking.....AHHHHHHH!!

PPMS NES

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 09:59 PM
Originally posted by SVsleuth
1st!
lol what are you waiting for?!

hey you cahnged it! lol Oh well


Man you guys are funny! lol I hope you enjoy! and don't hate me to badly for the cliff I left ya'll on! I have to have a little fun!

akuma
11-26-2005, 10:02 PM
I KNOW WHATS GONNA HAPPEN!! I FIGURED IT OUT!! THAT WAS AWESOME, HOLY CRAP THAT WAS GOOD!!:D times a really big number! Love ya Nessie

LanasLover16
11-26-2005, 10:11 PM
OH
MY
GOD!!!!
I don't even know what to say, except amazing... PPMS!!!

SVsleuth
11-26-2005, 10:13 PM
I edited my earlier post, nes. Go back to see it :D Oh, and THANK YOU for updating!!! :D :D :D

dreammaster
11-26-2005, 10:13 PM
that was awesome and sad hurry post the next chapter

akuma
11-26-2005, 10:13 PM
Nes is ur inbox full, i sent u some pm's and u havent responded!

I have my next update ready for u to edit so please clear ur box so i can pm it to u!!

IluvCLANA
11-26-2005, 10:14 PM
so, do you update every day Nes? I was really involved in the story the whole way through and didn't pay attention if you do or not.

akuma
11-26-2005, 10:22 PM
Ahem nessie, this is the part where u answer the questions above and thank ur adoring fans!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 10:27 PM
Sorry! Had drama at home for a minute!!

oaky so lets see!!!

Mrs. Slueth!!! How are ya!!! And You don't get it!!!! Come on the clues are every where!!!!

SVsleuth
11-26-2005, 10:28 PM
Yes? The answers please...

Oh, they are? Well maybe it's because it's been SO LONG since I read them I can't recall! :D

akuma
11-26-2005, 10:31 PM
I Know SV, I Know!!

And Nessie, ANSWER my pm's por favor!! Come on, my latest pm has my awesome update! please write me back, ya cracker!

maroon09854
11-26-2005, 10:35 PM
ok ive just caught up with all the updates i cant believe that clark is going to Lana's grave that update is gonna b so sad PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!!

NYC300Z
11-26-2005, 10:37 PM
Oh so why does Clark think Lana is dead? What do Martha and Jonathon know that the Clark doesn't? Another misunderstanding!

I hope Clark finds Lana and they live happily ever after!:D

PPMS!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 10:47 PM
I luvclana welcome :) I used to update daily until I got you caught up, now I update as they are ready :)

Hey turkey head! Shhh!!!!

lanaslover long time no see glad you liked :)

Dreammaster :) hello :) yes I will hurry for the next one!
Maroon Welcome to the Clana thread :) Glad you caught up!

So any of you new-comers have any favorite spots or chapters? I would love to hear them!

Hey Matt :) How is that cracker head of yours? I hopee it is still intact?! :D :P You don't know why Clark thinks she is dead?! I'll Im it to ya later :)

akuma
11-26-2005, 10:48 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes

Hey turkey head! Shhh!!!!



Hey!! ill shush when someone aswers my pm! or i can just keep doin what im doin, ur choice! muhahahahah! dont make me use the 'face'!

HP_DRAGON
11-26-2005, 10:49 PM
Yay you updated that was great PPMS!!!!!!!!:)

maroon09854
11-26-2005, 10:52 PM
i liked the chapter when they had the date at the club and no offense but im not new i was lik ur first post ive been tryin to keep up with everything u posted but i eventually got lost jus looking 4 updates lol :)

hey did u get the idea for the name of ur fic from the song they sang in the background at whitneys dads funeral?

akuma
11-26-2005, 10:56 PM
Originally posted by maroon09854


hey did u get the idea for the name of ur fic from the song they sang in the background at whitneys dads funeral?

Ohh i can answer that one! No, she got it from the Title from the Eva Cassidy version of "Time after Time"

Ha i feel useful!

maroon09854
11-26-2005, 10:58 PM
o0o b/c i saw that episode today and im lik wait this is the name of nessie's fic i wondered if thats where she got it from thanx for clearin that up akuma glad u felt useful :)

superman_lives_on
11-26-2005, 11:00 PM
Really looking forward to when Clark and Lana FINALLY see each other again and the whole truth is revealed... All this tragedy can only last so long, am I right? PPM--and SOON!

SplitCold
11-26-2005, 11:01 PM
please update soon, i cant wait to see what happens next

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 11:04 PM
Originally posted by akuma
Hey!! ill shush when someone aswers my pm! or i can just keep doin what im doin, ur choice! muhahahahah! dont make me use the 'face'!
*GASP* NOw if you use the face every one here will break your cracker head!!! Cause I'll run outta here so fast and then they'll all have to wait for an update!!!!

akuma
11-26-2005, 11:05 PM
Holy crap i was kidding!! Please dont leave, u dont wanna see me cry!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 11:07 PM
Originally posted by maroon09854
i liked the chapter when they had the date at the club and no offense but im not new i was lik ur first post ive been tryin to keep up with everything u posted but i eventually got lost jus looking 4 updates lol :)

hey did u get the idea for the name of ur fic from the song they sang in the background at whitneys dads funeral?

Ooops sorry!!! lol I forgot! :P And sorry about the clutter back there! maybe me and the clananas need to have a cleaning day and delete most of it!

Ya I did! the eva Cassidy version! I thought I posted that in the first post... hmmm I'll have to go check on that!

oops! haha looks like Rick already answered that :P Thanks turkey head!

akuma
11-26-2005, 11:08 PM
yes u did put in first post Nessie, and whats this talk of cleaning day? everyone loves our rambling!

Yes i did answer Nessie and ur welcome cracker!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 11:09 PM
Originally posted by superman_lives_on
Really looking forward to when Clark and Lana FINALLY see each other again and the whole truth is revealed... All this tragedy can only last so long, am I right? PPM--and SOON!

Yes yes only for so long! but there is one last grrreat twist I have lined up!!! :D Oh yeah!!!! Sooo goood! HEHEHEHEHEHE

And Rick I have seen you cry ! It ain't pretty! but it is nicer then that smilie face! so don't even think about it!!!

akuma
11-26-2005, 11:11 PM
Yes me crying is not pretty, last time that happened somebody had just written a really sad update *points at Nessie*

superman_lives_on
11-26-2005, 11:11 PM
Originally posted by SuperNes
Yes yes only for so long! but there is one last grrreat twist I have lined up!!! :D Oh yeah!!!! Sooo goood! HEHEHEHEHEHE

HEY! No witch cackling now!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by akuma
yes u did put in first post Nessie, and whats this talk of cleaning day? everyone loves our rambling!

Yes i did answer Nessie and ur welcome cracker!

I hereby declare it clean up week!!!! In honor of all the people who can't stand wadining through hundreds of clutter post! to find a update!

Clanana's you want more? then we have to go back and delete some posts! anything not update related!!! So yes cracka's and clanana goes!!! Let's save it for Yahoo! :)

Whenit's done I will give you an update :P

take your time cause it's not ready yet! :P

akuma
11-26-2005, 11:13 PM
Holy crap r u serious!? U know how long thats gonna take, we have pages of random posts!

SuperNes
11-26-2005, 11:19 PM
Evil laugh inserted *here* :D

Oh and HP Your Posts are always so smal!! In a cute way :P I always lose track of them!!!! Sorry! I'm glad you liked :) And yes I hope to update soon!

akuma
11-26-2005, 11:19 PM
See look at this, were gonna have to delete this soon, b/c this it totally random, *evil laugh*

HP_DRAGON
11-26-2005, 11:26 PM
i don't talk much so thats why my posts are so short

maroon09854
11-26-2005, 11:28 PM
wait i didnt mean 2 cause trouble i dont want another update in WEEKS lol j/j we love all of ur random stuff b/c its funny and ur posts are normally really sad so its good 2 get in a good laugh once in a while when ur not posting and since im the one who mentioned it ill offer to help but youll hav 2 tell me how to do it lol :)

akuma
11-26-2005, 11:38 PM
ha yes now we can keep our random stuff hooray!!

IluvCLANA
11-27-2005, 05:01 AM
Hello? Oh I get it I'm the new girl on this thread so everyone's ignoring me fine! j/k but yea I wanna know.

cufcchic
11-27-2005, 07:01 AM
welcome to this thread!

IluvCLANA
11-27-2005, 09:00 AM
hey! and can you answer my question? No one else will

SVsleuth
11-27-2005, 09:18 AM
Originally posted by IluvCLANA
so, do you update every day Nes? I was really involved in the story the whole way through and didn't pay attention if you do or not.

Is THIS the question you want answered, IluvCLANA? If so, this is what she answered:

Originally posted by SuperNes
I luvclana welcome I used to update daily until I got you caught up, now I update as they are ready


Nes used to update every day, until we caught up to where she was currently writing. Now we have to beg for days & days before getting an update. I HOPE that won't be true anymore. I HOPE we can get more frequent updates again. Love ya story, Nes! PPMS!

If that wasn't the question in question, what is? I don't see any other question of yours. :confused:

rosewolfe87
11-27-2005, 10:51 AM
Yoo-hoo! Nessie, it's me, Janna. You remember me right? Y'know, we've talked on Yahoo with Matt and Rick and all that jazz?

Well, Rick made me sign up for the Yahoo message boards, and he says now you have to update. So do it already!

SuperNes
11-27-2005, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by rosewolfe87
Yoo-hoo! Nessie, it's me, Janna. You remember me right? Y'know, we've talked on Yahoo with Matt and Rick and all that jazz?

Well, Rick made me sign up for the Yahoo message boards, and he says now you have to update. So do it already!

You mean the Wb. ?

rosewolfe87
11-27-2005, 11:11 AM
Yes I mean the WB.

SuperNes
11-27-2005, 11:12 AM
DANG!!!!! Foiled again!!!!!


*Nes walks away from the cliff, dragging her wooden sword trailing behind her, and lets out a defeated... "hardy.... har ....har"

akuma
11-27-2005, 11:22 AM
Bwahahaha I AM THE GREATEST, u have to update again because of me!

PS- get on yahoo!

cufcchic
11-27-2005, 11:38 AM
please update!

IluvCLANA
11-27-2005, 11:15 PM
yea that was the question in question. I guess I didn't see her answer...oops. Thanks for answering it

NYC300Z
11-28-2005, 02:10 PM
So where's the update Ness?

linn
11-28-2005, 04:19 PM
That was awesome update.....ppms!:D:D:D

SuperNes
11-28-2005, 04:53 PM
Can I get a buffer? :)


Okay this is one of my most treasured chapters, I hope I did the story in my head justice... anyways here is the music for this section ...



(*1) I'm With you By: Avril Lavigne

I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
No footsteps on the ground
I'm listening but theres no sound

Isn't anyone tryin to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Wont you take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I dont know who you are
but I... I'm with you

im looking for a place
searching for a face
is anybody here i know
cause nothings going right
and everythigns a mess
and no one likes to be alone

Isn't anyone tryin to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Wont you take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I dont know who you are
but I... I'm with you

oh why is everything so confusing
maybe I'm just out of my mind
yea yea yea

It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Wont you take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I dont know who you are
but I... I'm with you

Take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I dont know who you are
but I... I'm with you
I'm with you

Take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I dont know who you are
but I... I'm with you
I'm with you
I'm with you...

sandy
11-28-2005, 04:55 PM
yeah, here's a buffer!

linn
11-28-2005, 04:56 PM
yes buffer!:D







That my first time saying that here!

IluvCLANA
11-28-2005, 05:08 PM
yay! good timing Nes I just got home from school.

SuperNes
11-28-2005, 05:12 PM
~Music for this chapter~ (http://www.kryptonsite.com/forums/showthread.php?postid=1659652#post1659652)

Chapter 9 cont. again


(*1) Clark paused at the wrought iron fence, watching for a moment as it swung on it's hinges. The only sound in the night was the crunching of his boots as he dredged forward. Clark glanced at a gravesite to his left where a mouse tugged at a pile of dried flowers, noticing him, it scurried away under a nearby bush. He sighed into the growing wind, thinking that perhaps he should turn back after all, 'No come on Kent, Come on....' He froze midstep, as a familiar scent swept over his skin, taunting him, calling him forward. He walked with a purpose now, her fragrance leaving him just short of a trance. He came to a stop in front of the Familiar graves of Mr. and Mrs. Lang. His head swivled in confusion, 'Where is she?' He turned, thinking to go check the nearby plots. The hairs all accross his body suddenly stood on end as he came face to face with his greatest nightmare and greatest love.

Confusion etched itself over the young faces, neither seemed to breathe as they searched each others eyes. A silent wind swiveled around them sending the young girls flowing white skirts streaming through the air. Her raven hair, a stark contrast to her flowing white blouse, flowing across her gentle face was no barrier to the gentle eyes of her unexpected visitor. He delved into the depths of her soul with a gaze so penetrating it sent tremendous waves of comfort shooting through her entire being, 'a feeling I have missed and drempt about for so many years, and now he comes here, in the middle of the night... am I dreaming again?'

"Clark?!" Lana half reached for his face, before letting her arm freeze in mid air. Clark startled out of his unbelief at her movement, he watched as the white lace of blouse swayed in the breeze, "You, you look so, so real..." Lana sub-consiously touched the scar under her hairline, her voice was laced with sadness, "Not the first thing I dreamed of hearing from you." Clark shook his head in an attempt to shake her over whelming scent from his senses, 'How does a ghost have a smell? (he inwardly yelled at himself) Stop playing games with me! Stop trying to make her real!' Not sure how to proceed, he cleared his throat softly, "I am sorry I took so long to visit you... (he scrubbed a hand through his rough curls) I just, I guess I couldn't bring myself to face my demons, I'm sorry."

Lana stepped out of the shadows, where she had been hiding from the previously unknown visitor, into a ray of moonlight that was pouring from the branches of the overhead tree. She tried to push down the pain his words brought her. That he thought of her as someone he should avoid brought to her heart a fierce desire to break down and weep to her death. 'I won't waste this gift of his visit on my own tears,' she took a breath to steady her nerves, "I have been looking for you every where, I... we parted on such terrible circumstances..." Clark's eyes fell to the dusty path, "Ya we did, (he thought back to the look in her eyes that fateful night that he had showed her his abilities) I am sorry I... (tears began to leak from his eyes, but to him they went unnoticed) I feel responsible for taking away all your dreams. (He draped his large hands over his face and fell to his knees sending up a small dust cloud) I'm sorry Lana, I'm so sorry." All the built up pain of the last seven years poured out in tremendous sobs as he felt Lana's gentle arms surround him. Her tears blended with his as they touched cheeks, the fresh scent of wet dirt swam around them as their tears danced to the dry ground. "Clark my only dream was you, and when you left, It was more pain than I could endure, I felt my entire life slip between my fingers, I'm dead without you." Clark reveled in the softness of her skin, "Every where I turn you haunt me, I see you in the laughing eyes of a young couple, in every moon I see the brightness of your smile, You've never left me and yet I've never been more alone."

They desperatly held each other for an eternity wrapped in a few seconds before Lana pried away to look in his eyes, "I never told you... how amazing you are. Clark fidgeted uneasily under her gaze but her hands held him steady. "Clark your abilities... Why did you choose me? I mean... You could easily have any Woman in the world... Why me?" Clark shook his head in disbelief, 'Am I imagining all this?' He touched her soft hands gently, 'so warm.... how?' He stared at her hands for awhile in deep thought... "You were not afraid of me? I... I thought you sent me away because I was a freak... an Alien..." He looked up at her gasp. "I sent you away because I was ashamed of my appearance." She let her eyes fall from his abruptly, "I thought I would save you the trouble of breaking up with me." Clark frowned deeply, "You really thought I was that shallow? I have loved you my entire life! You I Love Lana. (He laid his palm over her chest) The way you made me smile at the smallest thought of you, the kindness you show to people, always putting your own needs on hold. I Love you for so many reasons... but mostly because in a world where I feel alone... You bring a home to my heart... You are home... you. Without you I feel so lost in this world, like I don't belong... like my only purpose is to save people who will turn around the next day and be back to their same problems... but you, you cared for me... I never was able to convince you that I was happy if I was really feeling forlorn, you always saw my sadness, and you didn't ignore it like the rest of this world. You embraced it, you took it away.. with you, there was no alone... I was simply home." Lana caressed the back of her hand over his red cheeks, "You came home to me Clark, I'm at peace now." Clark looked into her shining almond eyes, running a shaking palm over her glossy hair, "I understand... I'll leave you to rest then... I'll always Love you Angel Bear..." Clark stood in a swift motion and with one last glance into her confused eyes he supersped away into the dead night.

***


Clark checked his speed and lept from the dark Alley behind his apartment building up to his 11th floor balcony. He pushed his way into his apartment as he savored the evenings events, 'How real that felt.' His mind swam in the not so distant memory of her, the feel of her soft skin caressing his cheek. 'At peace now... She said she could rest in peace now....' He ran a hand through his hair as his subconscious berated him, 'Did you have to leave so soon?' ... 'Yes,' He thought back and headed for the shower. 'Yes, her ghost has been waiting all these years for rest, and now she deserves to get it.' He tried hard to convince himself that his abrupt departure was what was best for her. He climbed into the steaming shower, letting the hot water splash over his tense muscles. Sighing deeply, finnally feeling so much of his built up stress wash down the drain, he reasoned with himself further, 'besides I'll visit her often now, I don't have to hide from my guilt anymore.' Clark spent the rest of his evening in quiet contemplation, the urge to visit her again already pulling at his every thought, 'First the govenor's ball tommorrow, then I'll go back.... Will her spirit come again... or is she gone forever now?'

250 miles south of metroplolis, a bitter wind wrapped itself around a small figure, her confused tears splashing over the graves of her parents as she sobbed her lonley heart to sleep. (**)

linn
11-28-2005, 05:32 PM
stupid Clark!!!!!!!...SHE IS REAL....can"t wAIT for more...PPMS!

IluvCLANA
11-28-2005, 05:41 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

DITO TO WHAT LINN SAID


GRRRRR STUPID STUPID CLARK....... I HOPE HE GOES TO LIKE HIS PARENTS HOUSE AND SHES THERE AND EVERYTHING GETS SETTLED BC I REALLY NEED SOME CLANA FLUFF...... *WHIMPERS, THEN TURNS CAPS OFF*

ppms

LanasLover16
11-28-2005, 05:47 PM
GOD! Q#*$%& CLARKS AN IDIOT!!! Go back to her!!!

SVsleuth
11-28-2005, 06:33 PM
Ah! There's actually an update. Must hurry off to read it! Jumping for joy!!!!


SHE's ALIVE you BDA!!!! Arg!!! Go kiss her for crying out loud!!! Poor Lana. Oh PLEASE post more SOON!!!!

dreammaster
11-28-2005, 07:08 PM
that was awesome

pacifichic
11-28-2005, 07:31 PM
Man!!!! How could he think she was not real?!?!?
Clark was so sweet...great update!
Please post more soon!

HP_DRAGON
11-28-2005, 07:36 PM
Clarks an Idiot I can't bellive he still thinks she is Dead Great Update Nessie PPMS

nellie2
11-28-2005, 07:46 PM
omg clark is so stupid SHES ALIVE!!!!


PPMS

rosewolfe87
11-28-2005, 08:09 PM
That was awesome! But you should know, that two updates is obviously not enough!

MOOman0618
11-28-2005, 08:11 PM
BIG DUMB ALIEN!!! GO BACK TO HER!!! OH MY GOSH YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!

SVsleuth
11-28-2005, 08:22 PM
Rick, you need to hurry & win another bet with Nes so we can get another update right away! ;)

rosewolfe87
11-28-2005, 09:18 PM
I have a question, if I join the WB boards twice, do we get another update? Because I have like 12 screenames, this is just my favorite.

SuperNes
11-28-2005, 09:28 PM
LOL You are all soo funny :P

Does it make anyone feel better to know that this is just going to make the next update that much better!

Any guesses as to the scene of the next update? (Turkey head! No guess form you seeing as how you just about figured the whole thing out!)

Nice try j :P But eheh no :)

rosewolfe87
11-28-2005, 09:29 PM
Do we all have nick-names?

You're Cracker, I'm Clanana (or goth, but whatever.) and Rick is Turkey head.

OMG! Matt! We don't have one for him. Oooh, I know! We should call Matt Roadkill! (because of a certain accident.) NO, Don't that's too mean, I don't mean it.