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clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 04:40 AM
Valentine's Day was a special day wheresecret admirers and lovers reveal there feelings for other people anonomously or straight foward. Every Valentine's Day Clark would receive a poem from a secret admirer. But always the same one, althought Clark could never find out who sent him these poems.

Clark was walking towards his locker to get his biology book. When he got to his locker he found a pink envelope. He took it off and opened the envelope. Inside held a pink piece of paper, he unfolded it

It read:

"Your beautiful blue eyes,
make me so warm inside,

You fulfill my heart's desires,
I am your secret admirer. "

Clark then searched for a name that came with the envelope but didn't find one. So he went over to Chloe hoping that she could help him find out who gave him the poem.

"Chloe read this" Clark said practically shoving the poem in her face.

"Hey Clark, nice to see you too." Chloe responded taking the paper.

Clark: Sorry about the rude intrusion I'm just a little distracted by the poem.

Chloe: Not exactly Shakespear but its pretty good. Who wrote it?

Clark: I wish I knew.

Clark squinted at Chloe.

Chloe: Whoa! I did not write this.... I'll tell you that write now..

Clark: Okay... glad to get that cleared up.

Chloe: So what are you going to do?

Clark: Find out. Do you think....

Chloe: Well she does like poetry

Clark: No it couldn't be...

Chloe: She's always hiding behind a book.

Clark: True.

Chloe: But it doesn't hurt to ask.

Clark: Alright I'll drop by later.


Comments appreciated! sorry its short.

Tell me what you think

NYC300Z
08-09-2005, 04:44 AM
i'm guessing there talking about Lana?? Post more so we can see what's really good iight??

PPMS!!

binkys711
08-09-2005, 12:49 PM
I'm liking the start! PPMS!!!

lanaland
08-09-2005, 12:52 PM
Good start...PPMS!!!

MOOman0618
08-09-2005, 12:58 PM
Lana being Clarks secret admirer...I like that.

ClarksGirl21
08-09-2005, 01:30 PM
aww.. it's very cute.. usually it's Clark that does things like this.. it's nice to see Lana doing them too.

linn
08-09-2005, 01:43 PM
i think dat was cute too.......and i think dat its Lana too...but what if it wasn't her who could it be...........

EyeluvTom
08-09-2005, 02:11 PM
Can't wait for more!! ;)

4EverSmallville
08-09-2005, 02:35 PM
I'd love to read more :).

LoisNClark
08-09-2005, 04:15 PM
Great start
ppms!!!

clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 04:47 PM
Then leter after school Clark dropped by the Talon.

Lana was behind the counter writing on a pink piece of paper when Clark came in. She quickly hid the paper.

Lana: Hey Clark.

Clark: Hey Lana

Lana turns around to pour a cup of coffee for him. When she turns back she sees him holding the pink piece of paper.

Lana: What's that?

Clark: Oh this..... it's a poem... I think I have a secret admirer.

Lana: Do you have any ideas of who it might be?

Clark: Well sort of.....

Then he looks at Lana as if she wrote it.

Lana: What? No I didn't write it!

Clark: Well then I have no idea.

Lana: Talk to Chloe?

Clark: yea she told me to ask you....

Lana: Well sorry not me.

Clark could tell Lana was hiding something. But he let it go.

The Next Day

Clark found another envelope on his locker.

It read:

" I fell in love with you,
I hope you did too,

I am closer then you think
because my favorite color is pink"

Clark smiled and knew who it was.

He then went to a flower shop and ordered a dozen tulips to be sent to the Talon. Clark walked out of the flower shop with a smile.

Later that afternoon......

A delivery guy came in with a dozen tulips.

Delivery Man: I have a delivery for a Lana Lang?

Lana: Right here.

The man handed her the dozen tulips.

Lana: Who are they from?

Delivery Man: Uh.... from a...... Clark Kent.

Lana smiled with joy.

There was a card with the tulips.

It read

"Roses are red,
Violets are blue,

I know who you are
because I love you

See you at seven in my loft
To hear your voice so soft. "

Lana put the card to her heart.

Then at one table in the Talon, sat a long haired blonde girl by the name of Alicia Baker. She has just been realeased from Belle Reve cured. But when she saw Lana with the tulips and heard who they were from she got jealous and angry.

" Clark belongs to me" Alicia said to herself.

MOOman0618
08-09-2005, 04:52 PM
Holy Crap! Where did Alicia come from! Moving from secret admirer to stalker from hell!

clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 05:09 PM
Originally posted by MOOman0618
Holy Crap! Where did Alicia come from! Moving from secret admirer to stalker from hell!

HAHAHAHA!!!! Thats so funny! :lol:

4EverSmallville
08-09-2005, 05:12 PM
Is it just me, or is it that every fic has a supersweet moment and then just shoots it out of the air with a killer dart, for instance Alicia Baker. I know full well that nothing good will come from that :lol:.

binkys711
08-09-2005, 05:23 PM
OH NO! not Alicia! friggin psycopath!ALICIA BACK AWAY FROM THE CLANA AND NO ONE WILL GET HURT!!!:p...great update! PPMS! I'm liking this story;):cool:

SmallvilleMan
08-09-2005, 05:25 PM
I'd like to throw out an idea with the authur would let me.

clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 05:27 PM
Originally posted by SmallvilleMan
I'd like to throw out an idea with the authur would let me.

I'm listening.....:)

SmallvilleMan
08-09-2005, 05:27 PM
I'll PM it to you, i don't want any of these people to get any ideas:p

clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 05:39 PM
I got it.

EyeluvTom
08-09-2005, 05:50 PM
This is a great story, I'm really enjoying it!!

Ketchup
08-09-2005, 06:06 PM
Hey I loved Alicia! =P Hmm these notes... not at all what I'd expect from Lana.

clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 08:04 PM
*Alicia goes to Clark's house and knocks on the door.*

Clark: Hello?

Alicia: Hi Clark, it's alicia.

Clark: Alicia! What are you doing here?

Alicia: I came to see you, i'm cured.

Clark: You're cured? How am i suppose to believe that?

Alicia: I'm standing right in front of you?

Clark: You could have escaped, teleporter out.

Alicia: Then i would have the whole town looking for me, which they clearly aren't.

Clark: Fine, what do you want?

Alicia: A second chance, i know we're meant to be together.

Clark: You tried to kill me and Lana, why would i give you a second chance?

Alicia: Because i wasn't right when i did those bad things and you know we're the same. And i never told anyone your secret, not a soul.

*Clark realizes she has a point.*

Alicia: I just wanted to tell you that, i'll leave now.

Clark: Wait. How do I know your really cured?

*Alicia flashes her bracelet*

Clark: What is that?

Alicia: It's a special bracelet that prevents me from teleporting.

Clark: How did you get here?

Alica: I drove.

Clark: Oh...

Alicia: Clark you don't have to trust me right away... I want to earn your trust.

*Alicia leaves.*

Then at 7...


Clark is gazing into the night sky waiting for Lana when he hears someone coming up the steps. Clark turns around and sees Lana.


Clark: Wow! You look beautiful!

Lana: Thank you.

Clark: Have a seat.

They both sit down.

After they ate they talked and talked. But Clark couldn't talk to Lana about Alicia being back. It would hurt her. So they just stayed off the topic.

Lana: Well I had fun Clark.

Clark: Me too. I'll walk you to your car.

They both walk downstairs and to Lana's SUV.

Then they were silent looking in each others eyes. Clark then gave her a kiss.............on her cheek.

Then Lana drove off wondering why he didn't kiss her.

The Next Day....

Clark talks to Chloe about Alicia.


Chloe: Okay so Alicia is back and cured?

Clark: yea...

Chloe: and she wants to be with you?

Clark: yep..

Chloe: and you have feelings for both Lana and Alicia?

Clark: Yup

Chloe: Gee... sounds familiar...

Clark: Sorry.... Well I just don't know who to choose. I mean Alicia and I are like the same people and I've always been in love with Lana, but I have to keep my secret from her.

Chloe: Clark, you don't have to be the same to be in love.

MOOman0618
08-10-2005, 11:25 AM
I like Alicia and all, but NOOOOO! Bad Clark! Lana sent you pink poems and all Alicia has done is try to stab people!

binkys711
08-10-2005, 01:17 PM
jejeje:rotfl:^^^^I'm agree with MOOman!:pPPMS!!!

ClarksGirl21
08-10-2005, 01:34 PM
Let me see pink princess who you've always been in love with .. or .. crazy syco killer who does this weird thing with her eyes..
Hmmm.. i don't know.. that's a tough one.

EyeluvTom
08-10-2005, 03:58 PM
Originally posted by ClarksGirl21
Let me see pink princess who you've always been in love with .. or .. crazy syco killer who does this weird thing with her eyes..
Hmmm.. i don't know.. that's a tough one.

You make an excellent point.

clana4ev3r
08-10-2005, 06:34 PM
Clark was dwelling on Chloe's words for the past few days in his loft avoiding Lana and Alicia. So if he heard someone coming up the steps he would superspeed out. He didn't really care who it was, he just wanted to be alone.


"You don't have to be the same to be in love."

" You've been a very hard person to find lately" a voice coming from behind.

Clark turns around and finds Alicia but doesn't say anything.

Alicia: Clark I know you have feelings for Lana but its just not meant to be.

He still doesn't say anything.

Alicia: You and Me we're the same people and you and lana are just not.

Clark: Thats not true.

Alicia: Of course it is.

Clark: No its not Alicia..... we aren't meant to be together.

Alicia takes a step back.

"you don't know what your saying." she said glaring at him

Clark comes to realization.

Clark: Yes I do Alicia, you may know my secret and we might be similar but I'm not in love with you.

Alicia: NO... NO... your suppose to be with ME.

Clark: I talked to a friend and she said that you don't have to be the same to be in love. I'm sorry Alicia, but there someone else in my life... someone I really care about.

Alicia: Clark.

Clark: Alicia..... Lana and I may be in a strange place right now but I'm still hoping we can work it out.

Then Clark superspeeds to Lana's apartment.

Lana hears a knock on the door.

Lana: Who is it?

"It's me." Clark said nervously.

Lana opens the door.

Lana: Clark what are you doing here?

Clark: I'm doing what I should have done the other night.

Lana's heart was beating so fast that she could hear it.

Clark gets closer to her and kisses her lips tenderly and passionately. Lana returns the kiss. Then Lana pulls him in and closes the door still kissing.

Sorry its short...

LuvClana
08-10-2005, 06:37 PM
yippie for Clana! PPMS!

Ketchup
08-10-2005, 06:41 PM
Thigns are moving fast! And I like it of course =) PPMS!

LuvClana
08-10-2005, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by Ketchup
Thigns are moving fast! And I like it of course =) PPMS!

I agree completely! Accept for the whole thigns thing lol j/k Ketchup. We all love you ;)

Ketchup
08-10-2005, 06:50 PM
Of course you do :D

MOOman0618
08-10-2005, 11:49 PM
Originally posted by clana4ev3r

Clark: I'm doing what I should have done the other night.


And so many other times before! Great update...but how will Alicia react to this turn of events?

clana4ev3r
08-11-2005, 02:46 AM
Then after there long passionate kiss... they went to the couch.

Clark: Lana before we go on with this... uh...

He didn't know what they were right now.

Lana: relationship?

Clark: yea I just didn't know what to call it right now.

Lana just smiled.

Clark: Before we go on you have to know who I really am.

Lana: What do you mean?

Clark: My secret Lana.... the thing that you've been trying to get me to open up to you about.

Lana: Oh right... well I'm ready.

Clark: First Lana I want you to know what you see is just a mask and that if I tell you this I'm afraid that it will change the way you feel about me so this is going to be hard for me.

Lana: Nothing could ever change the way I feel about you.

Clark: I hope your right because.... just be open minded okay?

Lana: Yes Clark I got it.

Clark: Okay... well lets see I'm not like other people.... I have special abilities.

Lana: What are you saying?

Clark: Well I'm saying that I can do things that nobody in this world can do.

Lana: Like what?

Clark stands up in front of Lana and then superspeeds behind her.

Lana: What the ?

Clark: behind you.

Lana: Clark how did you?

Clark: I have super speed.

Lana: Clark..... .thats... thats... amazing!

Clark: I'm not freaking you out?

Lana: No...

Clark: Well okay thats only ability no. 1.

"Well I'm up for anything now." Lana said folding her arms.

Clark: Okay you see that candle?

Lana: Yes.

He then used his heat vision and lit the candle.

Lana: Whoa! how did you do that?

Clark: With my eyes I can shoot heat.

"Thats why I just want to melt everytime I look in those eyes." she mumbled to herself.

Clark: So you just want to melt in my arms huh?

Lana: what? how did you know I said that?

Clark: Super hearing.

Lana: Well then I can't keep anything from you now can I.

Clark: No not really.

They both laughed

Lana: So anymore abilities that could come in handy?

Clark: well I have super strength, x-ray vision and I'm invincible.

Lana: Impressive... .so how did you control your powers when you were young?

Clark: Well I didn't... you see when I was young I didn't know how to control them so I either ended up in the woods or lifted something that was twice my size.

Lana: You were quite the child.

Clark: But the most embarrasing part of my other powers were that you were involved in some of them.

Lana: involved?

Clark: Well my heat vision and x ray vision I didn't know how to control them yet when I first got it so it sort of went on and off.

Lana: The x-ray vision.. you never... did you?

Clark: Did I tell you I didn't know how to control some of my abilites when I first got it?

Lana: Clark? what happened?

Clark: Well I was climbing the rope in gym and then I had a headache and then my x-ray vision kicked in and I turned to Pete and then I saw through his skin. Then it freaked me out and thats when I fell..... and my eyes happened to turn towards the girls locker room and....

Lana: AND?

Clark: I saw you with a towel wrapped around you.... and then you... dropped it......

He then smiled.

Lana: CLARK KENT!!!

Clark: I told you I didn't have any control over the ability at that time!

Lana threw a pillow at him.

Clark: Its not like I didn't see you like that before....

Lana: what do you mean?

Clark: Remember the Nicodemus flower?

Lana lifted an eyebrow

Yes......

luckykentcharm21
08-11-2005, 03:31 AM
wow he's going to tell her about the flower power!?!?!?!? That is awesome, and I definately can't wait for the update

NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 04:18 AM
I wonder what Lana's going to think now!! lol
I wonder what Alicia is plotting too...

PPMS!!

Kryptonite Spear
08-11-2005, 05:06 AM
Awesome Story!!! Alicia Is Back!!! Damn, things are gona get Crazy... No Pun Intended... Ok, just a little... :lol:

clana4ev3r
08-11-2005, 05:33 AM
I need your opinion I'm working on a story... so what do you think Superman in Paris???? something different? superman roaming the streets of Paris????? give me your opinion!! please!! :)

NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 06:13 AM
Everybody's all into Paris why not NYC?? lol just do u!!

lanaland
08-11-2005, 10:15 AM
Yeah Nicodemus ;) ....Keep posting!!!

MOOman0618
08-11-2005, 10:47 AM
I love it when Lana finds out about Nicodemus! I think they should revisit that in the actual show!

binkys711
08-11-2005, 12:50 PM
jejeje...Nicodemus flower! this is gonna be good!:p PPMS!!!

luckykentcharm21
08-11-2005, 02:15 PM
superman can't stay in America, he has to save the world too... yeah send him to Paris

clana4ev3r
08-11-2005, 02:57 PM
alright Superman in Paris it is!!! thanks guys!

LuvClana
08-11-2005, 06:08 PM
hehehe its Lanas turn to blush :D

clana4ev3r
08-11-2005, 06:11 PM
Clark: Well... you asked me if you did anything embarassing to me that made me uncomfortable and i said no.... but......


Lana: I did?? what did I do?

Clark: Oh it's nothing really.... you just stipped down in front of me.....


Lana: WHAT!!!! I WAS NAKED????

Clark: No.. you were in a bra and underwear....

Lana: Oh... what else did I do??

Clark : Jumped in the school pool and made out with me.....

Lana: Wow.... I didn't think I was capable of doing that...

Clark: Well you were because the nicodemus makes the desires that you want come true...

Clark smiled...

Lana blushed..

Clark: So you really wanted to do that to me huh?

Lana: Shut Up! I'm just glad it was you.....

She got up and kissed Clark.

Clark: Maybe I should pick up a nicodemus flower sometime....

Lana: Clark!!

Clark: I'm just kidding.

Lana: What other embarrasing stories do you have.

Clark: There was my heat vision.... there was sort of a trigger....

Lana: a trigger huh?

She had her arms around Clark's neck.

Clark: When ever I became... aroused or turned on... you get the point... .My heat vision would turn on...

Lana: Is that why there was a fire at the Talon? You started that?

Clark: Yea... because you... y-you... uh..

Lana: I made you feel that way?

Clark: Yea you have that effect on me...

He started to blush.

Lana: What about now?

Clark: Now I can control or else if I didn't this place would probably be burned down already!

"that good huh?" Lana said as she got closer to his lips.

Clark: yea....

then they were in a long passionate kiss for quite a while......

Clark: Lana! okay thats enough! I've hardly go to the surface.

Lana: Well okay go on..

Lana still in front of Clark...

Clark: well meteor rocks... they make me sick.. and then there's red kryptonite... kryptonite is what we call it at our planet. I'll explain more later.. okay so red k it makes me a completely different person. A more risky person but also dangerous..

Lana: Is that why you acted so different that one time you asked me out?

Clark: Yup... I'm so sorry about that...

Lana: So it makes you a whole different person?

Clark: Yup...

Lana: So whats this krypto- something?

Clark: Kryptonite.. Its what we call it at our planet Krypton.

Lana: Wow my boyfriend is out of this world.... literly.

Clark: Yup but... you might want to sit down....

Lana sat down while clark stood.

Clark: Lana I came during th meteor shower... the one that killed your parents... .I'm so sorry... if i knew it cause you pain I would have never came....

Lana: Clark its okay.. you were just baby... how could you do it... you weren't the pilot.. you didn't make the meteor shower happen.

Clark: But-

Lana: No buts... the meteor shower may have taken something from me but now I have someone who cares and protects me and won't let anything hurt me.

Clark: lana I am sorry..

Lana: I know that Clark... but its not your fault...

Clark: But I still feel guilty for just coming here.... I caused so much pain with my presence here....

Lana: NO Clark thats not true.... you had no control...

Clark: So do you still accept me?

Lana: Yes I do... every part...

Then she walked up to him and tipped her head and kissed him.

LuvClana
08-11-2005, 06:16 PM
'Lana blushed..'

I knew it! :D

Great update! PPMS

NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 07:17 PM
So Lana knows and she accepts Clark! That's great!!

PPMS!!

LoisNClark
08-11-2005, 11:25 PM
Yeah!!! She accepts him!!! A lot of blushing going on in that update!!
ppms!!!

clana4ev3r
08-12-2005, 02:33 AM
After there lingering kiss they sat down with Lana in Clark's arms..

Clark: So these poems....

Lana: What about them?

Clark: Fulfill your heart's desires???

Lana blushed.

Lana: What about your poem?

Clark blushed.

Clark: what about them?

Lana: Hear your voice so soft??

Clark: oh yeah? what about you fell in love with me??

Lana: I did fall in love.

Clark: Really? with who?

Lana: You.

Clark: Lana Lang falls head over heels for Clark Kent.

Lana: Clark Kent asks Lana Lang on a date.

Clark: Miss. Lang would you like to show your presence with me tonight at 8?

Lana: Will that be on foot, horseback, or a carrige?

Clark: It's a suprise.

Lana: Now your getting me very curious.

Clark: Well I'll go home and get ready and pick you up later. Dress casual... nothing special.. regular clothes.

Lana: Okay see later my Prince Charming.

Clark: I shall see thou Juliet and 8. oh yeah.. make sure you eat before you leave.

Lana: No dinner??

Clark: Sorry but this Prince Charming isn't a King's son.

Lana just smiled.

Just when Clark was about to leave Lana pulled him back and gave him a kiss good-bye that lasted for quite a while.

Then Clark supersped to back to the farm to plan the transportation. By 7:30 she was ready and went downstairs to find Clark waiting there.

Lana: My Prince Charming has come to sweep me off my feet.

Clark: This Prince Charming isn't capable of flying yet.

Lana laughed.

Clark: So Cinderella, our carriage awaits us.

Lana: You are full of suprises.

When they were out the doors of the apartment, awaited them was an actual carriage.

Clark: So Princess, here is your carriage.

Lana: I feel like I'm in a fairy tale.

Clark: You are for tonight.

Lana: How did you get a carriage?

Clark: that is for me to know and for you to find out

Clark opened the door to the carriage and when Lana was in he followed and closed the door.

Lana: So where are we going?

Clark: You'll find out in a minute.

They stopped at a Horse stable.

Clark opened the door and helped Lana out of the carriage.

Clark turned around to the carriage driver.

Clark: Thanks dad.

Lana: Mr. Kent??

Jonathan revealed himself.

Jonathan: You two have fun now.

Lana: You are full of suprises.

Clark led her to the horses where a lady was standing.

Then he helped Lana up to the horse and then he pulled himself up on to the horse.

Just when they were about to leave Clark turned around.

Clark: Thanks Mom!

Lana: Mrs. Kent?????

Martha revealed herself.

Martha: You two ride safely....

When they got to there spot, their was a screen, a movie projector, and a truck. Lana then realized where she was.

Lana: We're at your farm..

Clark: Yup... not what you expected?

Lana: It's better then what I expected.

There were two people waiting on each side of the door and they both opened it for Clark and Lana.

Clark: Thanks Chloe, Thanks Pete.

Lana: I'd figure it was them.

Chloe: I told Clark to stop at the stables but he didn't listen.

Pete: Yup.. so her is your popcorn and drink Lana.

Chloe: and here is your popcorn and drink Clark.

Clark: Thanks guys. I will pay you back.

Pete and Chloe: Hope so.

Then Pete and Chloe left.

Clark: So Lana, has your fairy tale come true?? transportation on foot, carriage, and horseback and bring back a good memory of a real birthday from when you were 2 years old, a Prince Charming that sweeps you off your feet without flying.

Lana pulled him in for a kiss.

Lana: It's perfect.

luckykentcharm21
08-12-2005, 02:51 AM
"Lana: It's perfect"

I couldn't have said better... That was so awwwwwwwwwww

NYC300Z
08-12-2005, 03:01 AM
yeah real cute update can't wait to see the rest of thier date!!

binkys711
08-12-2005, 12:43 PM
awww...that was soooo sweet!!! I loved it!!! very cute!!!PPMS!!!

LoisNClark
08-12-2005, 01:45 PM
awww i loved that update. soo cute
ppms!!!!!

clana4ev3r
08-12-2005, 05:46 PM
Here's the ending...


As the night went on Clark and Lana enjoyed the movie and then after Clark led her to coffee and cookies.


Lana: Wow.. the sky is so beautiful.

Clark: Yea I thought this place would be a great place to watch the sky.

Lana: You have really got me in this whole fairy tale thing..

Clark: I try.

Lana gave him a kiss.

Clark: I love you Lana.

Lana: I love you to Clark.


They both sat there in the night sky watching the full moonlit sky.. Then a shooting star passed by.

They both made a wish...

This was a start of something amazing that only comes once in a lifetime.




THE END

Kryptonite Spear
08-12-2005, 06:27 PM
Good Ending, But What Happened To Alicia?

LoisNClark
08-12-2005, 06:59 PM
aww that was a really cute story. but what did happen to alicia!

clana4ev3r
08-12-2005, 09:00 PM
Well since Alicia is trying to be a good new person she's just moved on.... :D

NYC300Z
08-13-2005, 02:20 AM
LOL that's funny!! oh well nice ending!!

kewl
08-13-2005, 06:55 AM
just read the whole story. it was cute but u should've put a bit of a twist there, u know..... so alicia just moved on like that, huh? oh well......

Kryptonite Spear
08-14-2005, 01:57 AM
It would have been better if Clark had Defeated Alicia again... kinda like watching "Obsession" all over again... :lol:

binkys711
08-16-2005, 04:33 PM
yeah i agree with what they said^^^^ more twist would'e been better...but great ending anyways:\;)

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 04:12 PM
mna yall need to update sooner or later