View Full Version : Love has its complications, especially when your're the man of steel.
C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 07:38 PM
From an observer's perspective, this small town in the middle of Kanasas looked like it was attacked. The skies were grey with smoke and dirt, the many once green fields were ablaze and there were deep craters scattered everywhere.
A young woman of 19 lay on the ground, breathing, but not moving. Her skin was covered in deep gashes filled with dirt. Her left leg was twisted a an odd angle, obviously fractured. A round metal object lay near her. Many people would assume that it was a spaceship, and they would be right. But what people wouldn't know was that it was from Krypton, a planet far in space.
In a blur of light,a dark haired man of a muscular build appeared and bent over the woman.
"Lana?" he whispered, tears streaming down his worried face.
thats it for now, do youl like it? it is clana, but i have to go now... i'll post later today
LoisNClark
07-16-2005, 07:58 PM
please continue
great start
ppms
SmallvilleMan
07-16-2005, 08:26 PM
Yeah, continue. I wish people would give us a little more in the beginning though.
booze_is_me09
07-16-2005, 10:19 PM
please continue. great start!
EyeluvTom
07-16-2005, 10:22 PM
Great start, hope you write more soon!
C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 10:33 PM
sorry, i had to leave, anyways:
"Clark?" Lana said in a raspy voice.
" Don't worry Lana, it'll be OK" he said giving her his best Kent smile, and for a second she seemed to relax.
" Thanks" her fluttered at the sight of him.
Clark looked around to make sure no-one was looking and bent down to pick her up. With one last check, he super sped to the hospital with Lana in his arms.
" How did you..." but Clark was gone.
5 hours later in the artic.
Clark arrived at his new Fortress of Solitude. He was tired from his trip back to Smallville, but he had to go, Lana had been in danger. But thats the part that he was having trouble understanding. Why had Jor-El warned him about Lana being hurt. Why this sudden change of heart? It was if Jor-El was a different man. Clark knew there must've been an alterior motive, but what? He ran his hands through his hair pondering over Jor-el's new attiditude. 'Well at least Lana's safe' he said to himself, as a smile crossed his face at the thought of Lana.
Lana was the one and only girl he had loved. He had been devasted when he found out about Jason. But now she had claimed his love for him, so he could rest in peace.
*piercing ring*
"AHHHHHH" Clark knew this sound anywhere. It was the noise Jor-El used to summon Clark...
back in the hospital...
Lana looked around wondering where she was. And then it came to her, Clark had brought her here. But how was that possible? Hadn't one of the hosipital staff found her outside. And didn't everyone say that Clark was somewhere like Metropolis.
Before her thoughts went anyfuther, Chloe burst through the door.
"Lana! You're OK! I was so worried, everyone said you were dead. You scared me to death." She said in one breath.
" Hey Chloe, yeah I'm here, but in pain."
" Why don't you come home with me? The doctors said you could be realeased." Chloe said in a concered voice.
" Chloe, I'm fine, but could you give me a ride to my apartment?"
"Sure no problem, its the least I could do. And bye the way, how did you get here?"
"I..uhhh...err.." she stuttered, searching for an explanation," this old couple found me and brought me here." she lied to her best friend.' why the heck am I lying to Chloe? I just don't know what to think anymore...' she thought to herself as Chloe stared at her.
"Uhhh...OK, cool. Lets get you home"
"Thanks, I really appreciate it."
sorry its so short...i'll post somemore tomorrow...
SmallvilleMan
07-16-2005, 10:39 PM
nice, need more.
EyeluvTom
07-16-2005, 10:42 PM
Hope you write more soon! Love your story. :)
C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 10:42 PM
hey, i've never done this before... and i'll have more time tomorrow... it'll be nice and long and i won't post unless more people post!!!!!!!
NYC300Z
07-17-2005, 12:12 AM
Nice start!! I wonder how Clark is gonna explain that too Lana, what Jor-el has instore for him and what's in the space ship!! Can't wait to find out! PPMS!!
SVsleuth
07-17-2005, 07:16 PM
PPMS - Good start :)
peaches4cream
07-17-2005, 09:46 PM
kewl keep going
C.A.chick
07-18-2005, 03:30 PM
Clark's FoS
The piercing noise increased as Clark loooked around for the source. Suddenly the noise stopped.
" Kal-El, I see you have returned." Jor-El's voice rang out.
" Its Clark Kent, and I only returned to find out why your attitude towards Lana has changed." Clark said coldly.
" Son, I have come to realise that I should help you instead of destroy your life." Jor-El said, lying through his teeth.
" If there was one thing I learned from you making me destroy my spaceship, it was that anything from Krypton is allergic to green Kryptonite. That means your essance is too." Clark said, pulling out a lead box." Its time for me to take control of my life"
" Kal-El! NO!!!!!" Jor'El screamed in panic.
Chloe's car-
" So Lana, you never really explained how that old couple found you. I'm amazed it wasn't another Clark Kent saves the day moment" Chloe said with a hint of jealousy in her voice.
" What's that supposed to mean?" Lana said, detecting Chloe's jealousy.
" Nothing, nothing. Its just that Clark is always there to save Lana Lang, the love of his life" she muttered bitterly.
" Chloe, how many times have I told you? Its not my fault Clark used to love me." Lana said, looking away, wishing he still loved her.
"Lana, you got it wrong. Its not your fault he STILL loves you. But it is your fault that you hurt him badly this year." Chloe remarked, forcefully.
" What do you mean he loves me? And how did I hurt him this year?" Lana said trying to sound confused, but secretly smiling to herself on finding that Clark still loved her.' Lana, geta grip, Chloe's just trying to make you feel better. Clark got over you a long time ago.' She said to herself.
" I mean he still loves you. And you hurt by keeping Jason a secret and then parading him around in front of Clark." Chloe said, angerly.
" I, uhhh....err.." Lana said.
" Don't bother. Lets just go home."
Chloe said.
yeah that's it for now.... sorry
SVsleuth
07-18-2005, 03:37 PM
Short, but nice update. I'll watch for more. You might try double spacing the lines of dialog, to make it easier to read. It also makes it seem longer ;)
C.A.chick
07-18-2005, 03:49 PM
here's some more....
Clark's FoS-
"Jor-El, I will do what I want, when I want" Clark said, forcefully. He opened the box and threw the greenK as far as he could. He then ran as fast as he could without looking back.
When he got far enough away, Clark turned around and saw his one place of peace blow up.
"Goodbye Jor-El, and Kal-El. I'm now Clark Kent for good." Clark whispered to himself. Then in a blur, he was gone.
Chloe's house
Lana lay on her bed thinking. There was only one thing on her mind: Clark.
' Why would he still love me after everything I did to him? Like when I was with Jason, Clark always acted like he didn't care.' Lana thought to herself.' But why do I love him? Didn't he always pull away right when we got close. But he always was there for mel. I guess thats love. And did I really see him before I was at the hospital? Did he really bring me there?' Lana mused, not knowing that she had been talking aloud and that Chloe heard her.
" Lana, when Clark comes, just take a chance." Chloe said. Lana jumped and turned towards her.
"Chloe, Clark has too many secrets, I can't stand it any longer." Lana said, tears streaming down her face, as she thought of how much she loved him.
" Lana, Clark hasn't told you because he loves you. I found out from Alicia. I have a long story to tell you..."
IF YOU POST, I'LL CONTINUE,BUT PLEASE POST!
SVsleuth, thanks for the advice, I'll try it on my next update.
peaches4cream
07-18-2005, 04:27 PM
post post post post post post pospt
now update and chloe isn't ssuppost to tell lana or is she?????
C.A.chick
07-18-2005, 05:08 PM
hey i posted twice today..... and i guess i'll post later today too
Chloe's house-
"Lana, you know how Clark was
adopted the day of the meteor shower?
there's
a lot more to that story than you think-" but Lana cut Chloe off.
" Chloe, I'm gonna wait for Clark to tell me his secret when he's ready. Thanks for offering, but I know Clark will tell me when he wants to. And I can wait for him, because I love him." Lana said, looking suprised at herself.
"Lana, I've known you love him for a looooooong time. Don't worry about it." Chloe, trying to make herself feel better about Lana loving Clark.
" Look, I'm really sorry about this Chloe, its just that well, yeah..." Lana searched ofr the words.
" You love Clark and he loves you." Chloe finished for her, with a sigh.
" Yeah, thats it." Lana said smiling.
"Friends?" Chloe said.
"Best friends" Lana said with a smile on her face.
The Artic-
Clark ran as fast as he could, trying to forget about his troubles. He needed somewhere to go and only one word came to mind "Lana". He would have to tell Lana everything, she of all people would help him.
5 minutes later at the Talon-
" Hey Mom! I'm back." He said with fake enthusiasm. Luckily Martha didn't notice.
" Hey Clark. How are you doing?" She said happily.
" Fine, but have you seen Lana?" He said looking around.
" Clark, she broke her leg and is staying at Chloe's. Why?" But Clark was already gone.
Chloe's House-
*Ding Dong* Clark rang the doorbell. He stood outside impatiently.
"Hey Clark, you're back!" Chloe said happily.
" Hi, Chloe. Is Lana here?" He said looking around inside.
" Yeah, she's on the couch." She said unhappily.Clark rushed in and found Lana.
"Lana! How are you?" He said worriedly.
"Clark, I'm fine." she said pausing as if she was thinking," But I'm better now that you're here." She added with a smile on her face.
"I, uhhhhh, errr," Clark turned red. "I need you to come to my house. I need to talk to you."
"Wow, Clark Kent is asking me to talk?" Lana said.
thats it for now
SVsleuth
07-18-2005, 05:18 PM
Great updates. And the spacing really helps. Great job! I know the talk will be worth waiting for. :)
NYC300Z
07-18-2005, 11:25 PM
wow looks like I missed quite a few updates! Been really busy, but hoping for an update soon!!
C.A.chick
07-19-2005, 01:26 AM
Outside of Chloe's house-
" Clark, how are we gonna get to your house, your truck's not here." Lana said, with a confused look on her face.
" The same wayI got you to the hospital." Clark replied as a grin spread across his face.
"What? You did that-" but before she could continue any futher, Clark swept her off her feet and raced to his loft.
" Clark! Whats going on? How'd you do that?" Lana gasped, staring at Clark. And then she thought thought she knew. " You're a meteor freak. Well you're not a freak, but yeah"
"No, I'm not a meteor freak." Clark said, as he picked Lana up again and brought her to the couch and sat her on the couch. He sat next to her.
"But then how did you... well do what you did." Lana whispered with a puzzled look on her face.
"Before we get there, I want you to know a few things. First, you must see me as you've always see me to feel ok with this. And second, you must know that I love you." He said, leaning in towards Lana, with a hopeful look on his face. Lana began to pull away, but before she knew what she was doing she was leaning in towards Clark.
As their lips met, Lana felt a shiver of happiness run down her back. After a minute or two, Clark began to be braver, as he pulled Lana's body into his. As she felt Clark making a move, Lana decided to make hers, she put her hand up his shirt and started rubbing her hand against his warm chest. She felt Clark shudder and then bite at her lip, and she let his tongue in.
7 minutes later-
As Lana started to try to take Clark's shirt off, he pulled away.
"Lana, I want it as much as you do, but I think I should tell you the rest of my story." Clark said. Lana looked lustfully at Clark .
" I'm amazed that the truth is finally coming out. And Clark, I love you too." Lana said as she settled into Clark's body.
"Lana, I'm not from around here. In fact, I'm not from Earth. But before you comment, I want to say that I feel more human than Kryptonian." Clark looked at Lana.
"Wow, that is sooooooo cool!" Lana half shouted, half laughed.
" You mean you're not freaked out?" Clark said confused.
"Of coarse not, I always knew you were different." Lana siad, gaining control of her laughter.
"Well cool. Anyways, I'm from Krypton, a planet that exploded with my parents and everyone else on it. I was sent here by my parents. I came in a spaceship in the meteorshower. Lana, I'm so sorry, but I caused your parents death." Clark's face was full of sadness. Lana stared in anger and confusion.She pulled away from Clark so she could see his face. She saw the painful expression and became more confused.
" You...you killed my parents? But you were so young..." Lana gasped tears streaming down her face. She threw herself into Clark, sobbing.
"Shh,shh, its ok." Clark whispered, comfortingly.
"Sssooo, wwhhaat otherr things can you do Clark?" Lana said, pulling herself together.
" Well, I have super speed, super strength, heat vision, x-ray vision, Ican fly, and I can't get hurt by anything. Na I'm deadly allergic to green meteor rocks." Clark said in one breath.
" Clark, this is a lot to process, but while I process this, I thought you'd like to know that I think another spaceship has landed on Earth." Lana whispered, as she tried to process what she had just been told.
'What am I going to do?' Clark thought to himself.'I'll stay with Lana for now, tomorrow I'll deal with the space ship.'
" Clark?" No reply, " Clark!" Lana said loudly.
" What? Oh sorry..." Clark muttered.
" Clark, I'm done processing. But we were in the middle of something." Lana said seductively.
"Well, my dad did leave a note saying that he and my mom are going to stay at the Talon tonite. I guess you could stay in my parents room." He said teasingly.
" And where would you sleep?" Lana asked, raising her eyebrow.
" Well, it depends, but probably on the floor in my parents room."
He whispered, as a grin spread over his face. He stood up and picked Lana up and and ran to the house.
thats it for now..what do you guys think? POST OR I WON'T WRITE!
NYC300Z
07-19-2005, 03:58 AM
wow that all seemed a little too easy for Clark...she didn't care for a second that he said he was a Kryptonian. Did she think he was joking? And with her parents death she didn't seem to question it or care too much....ionos just seemed kinda rushed. Let's see how things progress PPMS!!
SVsleuth
07-19-2005, 08:58 AM
Yeah, it seemed like Lana was hardly even surprised. Maybeahe had almost figured it out already, from all the things he's done?
And maybe the Kents would be more likely to stay in Metroplolis?
Overall, though, good update. I'll keep reading to see what happens next.
EyeluvTom
07-19-2005, 10:53 AM
Lana took it a little easier than I thought she would. Maybe she already suspected. Anyway, loved your update.
C.A.chick
07-19-2005, 02:31 PM
oh, yeah sorry about the lana thing. but i have it all figured out, don't worry.
Matha & Jonathon's room-
Lana is lying in Clark's arms, her eyelids closed.
"Lana? You awake?" Clark whispered gently. No answer. He set Lana down on his parents bed, and pulled the cover over her fragile body. He took one last loving look, and walked into his bedroom, got in bed with his clothes on, and fell asleep.
Marth & Jonathon's room-
Lana opened her eyes, and looked around to see if Clark was still there. After finding that he was gone, she stood up and walked down stairs to the kitchen.
' He killed my parents, its not fair.' Tears of anger streamed down her face as she saw her parent's faces, but she also saw the man she loved.
' Clark's not really in love with you, he's just pretending.' she muttered to herself, as she grabbed a knife. Lana slowly walked up the stairs, making sure to be quiet. As she reached the open doorway to Clark's room, she took a deep breathe, and stepped inside.
Lana slowly crept through the room to Clark's bed. As she hovered over him only one thought passed through her head: ' He killed my parents'. She raised the knife and struck. *Crack* The knife expoled into tiny pieces as it hit Clark's unbreakable body. Clark's eyes flashed open, as he saw the girl he loved standing over him holding the remains of the shattered knife in her hands, sobbing.
"Lana?!" Clark's jaw dropped.
"You kkkillllled myyyy parents." She sobbed. " But I love you, oh Clark, I don't know what to do." She collapsed on the floor, and Clark rushed over.
"Its ok, it'll be alright. The main thing is that both of us are still here and alive.' Clark said as he pulled Lana's body into his. Lana tried to pull away, but she loved CLark too much to pull away from his loving grip. Lana lay in Clark's arms sobbing, thinking of the parents she had been robbed of, but also about the new person to replace them. Clark held Lana, resting his head on her's, he didn't know what else to do. After a few mintues, Lana's breathing returned to normal. She turned towards Clark and gazed deeply into his eyes, and all she saw was pain, and agony, and she realised that he had suffered so much more than she had. So she stopped crying, and leaned in and kissed him full on.
" I love you Clark, but it'll take a while for me to get used to you being an alien." Lana said, a smile spreading across her face.
" Lana Lang, will you go out with me?" Clark asked, giving the biggest Kent smile he could muster.
" Well Mr.Kent, I suppose I shall have to, now that i know your deepest darkest secret." Lana laughed happily.
" Which secret would that be?" he said with a mischievious smile.
" That you're the sexiest, best kisser, thats ever lived in Smallville." Lana said wit ha coy smile. She leaned in towards Clark to his him. But he playfully pulled away.
" Now how far do you really want to go with this, its almost morning and my parents will be home soon." He said as his hand reached up to Lana's face, and pulled her in.But it was her turn to pull away.
"Mr.Kent!" she said in fake amazement,"You didn't give me time to answer your question. My answer is, as far as we can get without your parents cathcing us." She leaned in and kissed Clark, one hand around his neck, the other unbuttoning his shirt. Clark pulled Lana in, and as he felt her taking his shirt of, he tried to find her shirt, so he pull it off. After a minute or so, Clark was only in his boxers, and Lana in her bra and underwear, their mouths locked together.
"Clarl?!" Martha's voice rang up the stairwell.
"My mom!" he said pulling his shirt on. " Yeah mom?!" he yelled down.
"Come on down, breakfast is almost ready." Jonathon shouted.
"One sec!" he said to his dad,"Lana, get dressed and pretend to be asleeep, I'll deal with my parents."
"Wait,Clark, my leg. I've still got a cast on. Help me." Lana whispered nervously. Clark leand over and gave her a quick kiss, and supersped around, getting her clothes on and his. He then went down staris.
"Mom,dad, Lana's here. She broke her leg yesterday, and needed someplace to stay. We slept in seperate rooms"it was pretty much true.
" OK, Clark, why don't you go wake her up and bring her down for breakfast."Martha said, but Clark was already gone.
"Miss Lana, time to wake up," He said leaning in and giving her a passionate kiss." Breakfast awaits your Highness."
" Well Mr.Kent, you'll have to carry me." Lana whispered playfully in his ear.
"OK, I can deal with that." As he leaned down to pick her up, they both her a scream come from down stairs.
"CLARK! HELP!" it was Martha.
"Gotta go Lana, it could be bad." And Clark was gone in a blur.
PLEASE REPLY!!!!!!!!!
SVsleuth
07-19-2005, 02:44 PM
You surprised me there! A Lana flip-flop. Nice job. Wonder what's wrong in the kitchen? I'll watch for your next update.
C.A.chick
07-19-2005, 03:09 PM
SVsleuth- do you think i should update once a day, twice a day, every two days..or what? cause lately i've been posting at least twice a day.... what do you recommend?
SVsleuth
07-19-2005, 03:12 PM
Whatever you want. I started my thread yesterday, & posted three time. Today,. I only had time for one, but may do another later. Whatever you have time for. I like to wait for several (5 - 10) people to respond to my last post before posting again. That way, they don't end up getting too far behind in their reading. I write my fic in WORD & save it. Then, I can post the next part any time I choose, when there are enough responses. Hope that helps.
binkys711
07-19-2005, 05:14 PM
YAY!!!JUST READ THIS STORY!!!WHY DOES STUFF KEEP HAPPENING WHEN THINGS START TO GET GOOD!!!:P:D;)
NYC300Z
07-19-2005, 07:21 PM
I can't believe Lana tried to stab Clark?! Wonder what Martha will think when she realises Clark used his super speed in front of Lana? Maybe he'll be like I thought it was an emergency mom...and she'll be like did Lana see? and Clark will be all like omg i think she did and play a joke on his mom....lol iono i'm just messing do what u think best and update soon k?
peaches4cream
07-19-2005, 09:00 PM
wtf......... how can you leave the story right there ????? do u have no soul (yeah i know that that is like an oxymoron and i was only bening dramatic)
SmallvilleMan
07-19-2005, 09:10 PM
That was the weirdest thing ever, but cool.
C.A.chick
07-19-2005, 11:23 PM
SmallvilleMan- why is this story the wierdest thing ever?
peaches4cream-its called a cliffhanger
NYC300Z- you'll find out soon enough.
binkys711- one of these days something won't happen when things get good.
SVsleuth-thanks for the help.
Everyone reading this- I'll update tomorrow I think, if my parents allow me to get on the computer. (I'm noly 13 and I don't get andy control over my life, and my parents are sick and tired of Smallville, so they don't care if I miss updating)
NYC300Z
07-20-2005, 01:40 AM
I will? Will I? well I sure hope so! I hope ur able to get online and update soon!
peaches4cream
07-20-2005, 12:43 PM
parents suck and i know it is cliffhangers mine don't care ether
that doesnt mean they can stop me though long live the revolution!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SmallvilleMan
07-20-2005, 12:49 PM
It was weird that all of a sudden Lana tried to kill Clark.
NYC300Z
07-20-2005, 02:57 PM
Yeah I thought that was odd too....
Long Live the Revolution??? lol
C.A.chick
07-21-2005, 10:09 PM
lol, i can't post my story today.... sorry...i
ll post tomorrow, and i'm leaving to San Diego for a week on sat, so i'll make it long
binkys711
07-21-2005, 10:31 PM
yay!!!hey..... i live in san diego!!!awesome!!!:D can't wait 'till ya update!!!
C.A.chick
07-21-2005, 10:34 PM
binkys711, is it hot down there? im in the bay area...its nice weather here, what's it like down there?
binkys711
07-21-2005, 11:18 PM
well...it's kinda hot....yeah....i guess it is....but i'm mostly indoors.... i usually have the fan on:D....but be prepared to bring lot's of sunblock because if your out to much you WILL get sunburned....my shoulders can prove it:p:\ i love san diego!!!:D it's awesome!!!:D:cool:
C.A.chick
07-22-2005, 12:03 AM
thanks, any ideas for a new post anyone? im kinda having writers block....
peaches4cream
07-22-2005, 12:43 AM
she could have seen one of the support beams craking and about to fall over as clark runs over to stop it after he set lana in a chair and cought it before it hit the ground and minded it back in its place with his heat vision and lana just looks at him very prod of her new bf and then martha is surprised that clark used his powers in front of lana and totaly frwacks and lana laughs at him when he uses heat vision remembering how he got that ability
NYC300Z
07-22-2005, 03:42 AM
yeah play a joke on Clark's mom like I said b4. that would be funny! Don't forget b4 u leave u said u'd post a long one!
C.A.chick
07-22-2005, 09:44 PM
As Clark arrived in the kitchen, he saw his father with tape over his mouth, tied to a chair, and his mother lying on the ground shaking.
"Mom! What happened?" Clark's face full of worry.
"J-j--jor-El." Martha gasped, her face sheet white.
"Jor-El? How'd he do this?" Clark said, confused. Martha took a breath and explained.
"It was another person like Kara. He took over a tall guy who now calls himself Jap-Lek. He just came in here and introduced himself. Jonathon told him to leave, and before I knew what was happening, he tied him up. I screamed and he hit me, then he ran away." Marths explained, as Clark untied his now unconsiensious father.
" Thank goodness I was able to superspeed down quick enough."Clark said to his mom.
"Wait, you supersped in front of Lana? How are you going to explain it?" Martha was claerly upset.
"Explain what?" Lana had managed to get down stairs." Sorry, I couldn't help but overhear what you said." Before Martha could reply, Clark supersped over to Lana and picked her up. Even in her confusion, Martha could see the way they looked at each other lovingly. Clark put Lana down and disappeared. Martha was silent, obviously stunned. Before Martha could try to say anything Clark retuned, and put down the candles he was now holding. He than lit them with his heat vision. Martha stared and simply fell to the ground. Clark picked her up.
"Mom, don't worry, I told Lana last night." Martha's eyes opened. She looked relieved and slightly upset.
"Why didn't you tell me earlier?" She said angrily.
"Ms.Kent, that is my fault, I was going to tell you this morning."Lana interupted.
"Look, Lana, mom, I know you guys would love to discuss this,but right now, dad's unconsious, and someone under Jor-El's control is wandering around. Lana, I'll be back later, but now I have to go find this Jap-Lek guy. But I'll get you up stairs again." Clark picked Lana up and brought her up stairs, and left Martha to wake Jonathon up.
"Clark?" Lana whispered in his ear as they reached his parents bedroom,"Kiss me."
"Well..." He leaned over he and kissed her passionately, his tongue, finding its way into her mouth. Lana pulled Clark towards her and threw him on the bed, unlocking their lips.
She straddled him, and ran her finger down his chest towards his pants.
"Its too bad we'll have to continue this later." She said.
Ok, i'll post more later tonite. but only on demand.
to state the obvious, Jor-El isn't dead... just if you were wondering... you'll find out later...
I ONLY POST ON DEMAND!!!!!!!
SVsleuth
07-22-2005, 10:55 PM
Nice update. Keep it going.
peaches4cream
07-23-2005, 12:28 AM
fine post now or some thing will happen to your favorite uhmmmmm......... something and it will be all your falt for not updateing and what does she mean countine this later
clana4ev3r
07-23-2005, 03:45 AM
PPMS!!! now!
NYC300Z
07-23-2005, 04:41 AM
Yes PPMS!! like now! lol
clana4ev3r
07-23-2005, 02:39 PM
PPMS NOW!!! NOW!
binkys711
07-23-2005, 11:54 PM
PPMS!!!PLZ!!!:D
clana4ev3r
07-24-2005, 12:54 AM
come on we're demanding like you asked... now where's the update?
superrocker05
07-24-2005, 01:02 AM
I definately want to know more.....no i demand to know more.
clana4ev3r
07-24-2005, 06:02 PM
We are demanding why aren't you posting?
NYC300Z
07-24-2005, 09:50 PM
yeah where's the update??
clana4ev3r
07-28-2005, 02:09 AM
anytime to day would be great.... getting wrinkles here...
C.A.chick
07-29-2005, 12:25 AM
hey hey hey!!!!!!!! i just got back from S.D. on a flight!!!!!! i'll post ASAP!!! and it'll be extra long, i promise...either today or tomorrow
NYC300Z
07-29-2005, 03:50 PM
oh ok wondering what happned to u! today or tomorrow?? I vote today! PPMS!!
C.A.chick
07-30-2005, 01:34 PM
sorry everyone, my parents sprung a suprise trip to echo lake for my b-day.... they didn't tell me until like 5 minutes ago. we're leaving in like 10 minutes but i'll try and post what i can...
The Kent's Kitchen- Jonathon just woke up and Martha is explaining the recent events that have just occured.
"...and all I saw was a flash of light and then you were on the ground and this guy was standing there. He said he was Jap-Lek from Krypton and Jor-El sent him-" but Jonathon intterupped her.
"I thought Clark killed Jor-El." Jonathon said as a confused look crossed his face.
"I guess he didn't. Anyways, this Jap-Lek guy was standing there over your body, then he turned and faced me, so I screamed for Clark, but he was gone by the time Clark had supersped down." Martha said, finishing her story.
"But what about Lana? How did Clark manage to hide his superspeed.?" Jonathon gasped, his face was now full of worry.
"Clark told Lana, they seem to have gotten a lot closer now that he told her." She said with a smile on her face. " I think that almost srippping counts as closer," She added, then she laughed, as she remebered how she and Jonathon had met. She remembered his charm and his grace and...
"Martha?" Martha snapped out of her daydream.
"Sorry, so what are we going to do about the situation with Jor-El?" Martha said, changing the subject from her daydreaming towards the problem at hand.
"I suppose we'll leave that up to Clark, right now, I'm going to fix the chair that idiot broke when he came." Jonathon remarked, and then swooped Martha into his arms.
The Kent's room-
"Well, Lana... I guess we don't really have to continue this later. I could put off the search for-" But he didn't get any farther, because Lana had just unbuttoned his jeans, and he felt a shiver run down his back.
"You're right Clark, we don't need to wait any longer." Lana said, as she pulled Clark's pants off. Clark lay there for a second, bewildered, then he reached up and started pulling Lana's shirt off. As they undressed each other, they took kissing break.
"Lana? Before we go any further,"Clark said as he finshed removing Lana's last clothing item,"I love you, and always will, even if we don't do this now."
"I can't wait any longer, Clark, its you I want to be with, not anybody else." And she threw him back on the bed.
sorry its soooooooo short, my parents are literally waiting at the door, i get a couple more mintues...:( :mad: :eek: :D
NYC300Z
07-30-2005, 11:47 PM
oh it's okay...wish u would have posted sooner....don't forget about us on ur trip! PPMS!!
binkys711
07-31-2005, 12:02 AM
PPMS!!!cool update:cool: (too bad it was so short but you can make it up to us next time you post by making it really long;):p)
clana4ev3r
07-31-2005, 03:50 AM
PPMS!!
just read ur story and it's so cool!!! please keep going and PPM the soonest!!! :D
Schfifty-five
08-09-2005, 06:36 PM
keep the story coming!!
C.A.chick
08-09-2005, 06:45 PM
are you sure????????? i can't really think of anything......i'll try and post by tomorrow
clana4ev3r
08-09-2005, 07:22 PM
KEEP GOING!!!!
C.A.chick
08-09-2005, 09:45 PM
hey thanks for the support..... those few of you who actually read this piece of crap writing(oops i guess im not supposed to say that...hehe)
C.A.chick
08-10-2005, 11:37 AM
The Kent's kitchen-
"Well, I suppose that we should go talk this whole situation over with Clark," Martha said, and then giggled because as Jonathon had put her down, he had quickly brushed her stomach with his hand, tickling her.
"Now honey, is this really the proper time to be doing this?" Martha managed to gasp in a mock stern voice, as she rolled around on the floor laughing, as Jonathon tickled her playfully.
"Well....... we could just go upstaris and see what our son is up to, but I have a feeling we know whats in store if we go up there now... I don't really want to see my son making out with Lana Lang, if you get my gist." Jonathon said, becoming serious.Martha stopped laughing, and stared at her husband.
"Wait one minute, you don't think they are really, well you know, going all the way?" She said as if the thought had just struck her that her son may not be as much of a goodie-two-shoes as she had imagined.
"Well, honey, I think Clark knows between right and wrong and he'll use his best judgement to ascess the situation, but I'm more worried about Jor-El. Maybe we should just go up there so that Clark can start dealing with this problem. I'll call him down, CLARK!!!!!!! Come on down!" Jonathon shouted to Clark.
In the Kent's bedroom-
"Oh, crap" Clark said, getting up off the bed." I, umm, wait on second Lana. DAD! I 'll be down in a second. Let me just help Lana finish brushing her hair." Clark yelled, lying to his parents.
sorry its so short, i was ready to write a lot, but i just ran out of time, i gotta go....i'll post really long niext time,i promise
binkys711
08-10-2005, 01:21 PM
dang jonathan and matha ruined the clana fun:mad::pClarks is gonna be busted!PPMS!!!:D
C.A.chick
08-10-2005, 11:15 PM
hey, anybody who reads this at all....... could you post something... i don't really wanna post if only like two peple are reading it, not that i don't care about those few who read it, but yeah...i should update tomorrow, i have to smallville disks to watch..
clana4ev3r
08-10-2005, 11:27 PM
PPMS!!!! this is a great story!
C.A.chick
08-10-2005, 11:58 PM
THe Bedroom-
"Look, Lana, I have to go now... but I love you, and I thik that we can continue where we left off later." Clark said, seriously. Lana couldn't helo from laughing at Clark. 'He's so funny when he doesn't mean to be' She thought to herself.
"Lana?Why are you laughing?" Clarks said in a confused voice.
" Oh, its nothing, its just that you were being so serious, but your face is as red as a tomato, and your hair is really messed up. I couldn't hep laughing, sorry.' She said, suppressing her giggles.
"Oh, erm.." CLark said blushing even more as he attempted to staighten his wild hair. " I'm gonna go down now." And he super-sped down stairs.
When he was gone, Lana laid back down and smiled to herself as she thought 'I must be the luckiest person on Earth. I have the hottest guy ever, and he's invincible, practically.'
The kitchen-
"Hey mom, hey Dad," Clark said, trying to appear as casual as possible, without turning red at the thought of his parents knowing what he was just up to."Whats the matter?"
'Well Clark, we need to deal with the situation at hand," Clark blushed even more, if that was possible. " Jor-El is still alive and well, so we need to deal with him." Clark sighed a deep breath of relief and turned a few shades less red.
Sorry.........i'll post more in literally two minutes.......i gotta check something though...
The kitchen- (continued)
"Mom, while I go look for this guy who attacked you, could you look after Lana please? She's still getting used to walking with her cast, but she learning pretty quickly."
"Sure Clark, maybe I can take her over to the talon too." Matha said.
Oh crap..gotta go...i'll post more in around an hour...sorry.......i gotta watch smallville though
clana4ev3r
08-11-2005, 01:11 AM
don't worry i was watching smallville too
NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 03:31 AM
what happned to posting more in an hour??
oh well so where is Clark off too??
PPMS!!
PPM the soooooneessssstttt!!!! :D
C.A.chick
08-11-2005, 11:21 AM
sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my dad got all pissed because he missed the last part of a stinkin ball game while i watched Jinx on the WB20...he made me go to bed right after with the quote "no buts." i have to go to a soccer camp, won't be back until 3:30 pacific ( i have no idea what time this site runs by) and then i'll post as long as i can!I promise
binkys711
08-11-2005, 12:55 PM
the site goes by different times zones...all depends on were you live.....good thing your in the pacific...so am i....i really didn't want to calculate from another time zone:p...can't wait 'till your next post:D
NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 06:34 PM
This site is on Eastern time Zone so 3:30 Pacific would be 630 Eastern right? So that's now!! PPMS!!
C.A.chick
08-11-2005, 07:17 PM
hey just to let you know... i =m typing right now!!!!!! it'll be here in about 5- 10 minutes.. can you wait that long?
NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 07:22 PM
Yeah no problem...i'll be waiting!
C.A.chick
08-11-2005, 07:48 PM
The Bedroom-
As Lana lay in the Ken'ts bed, she was so deep in her daydream about Clark, that she didn't hear the man in the room approach her until she felt him breathing on her. She woke, startled. Her first reaction was to scream for the one person she knew would save her-
"CLARK, HELP!" SHe managed to scream before the man at the bedside picked her up roughly and shoved a hand over her face. Lana's gasp was stifled by the man's hand, but her face showed her amazement. This man had moved as fast as Clark could. Before the man got any further in his attempt to kidnapp Lana, Clark was there, throwing the man across the room.
"Who are you?!" Clark questioned, roughly, as he picked the man up and pinned him up agaisnt the wall.
" Jap-Lek from Krypton." At that, he supersped across the room and grabbed Lana by her hair. She screamed. " You will fullfill your destiny, or she will die." He said menacing. But before Jap-Lek could do anything else Clark had picked him up, forcing him to drop Lana. Jap-Lek struggled, failing to escape Clark's firm grasp.
"It's too bad, Jor-El didn't teach you all his tricks, maybe you wouldn't have lost all your powers if he had. But for now, I'm perfectly happy that he didn't." Clark said coldly, his voice full of anger. Lana couldn't conceal her gasp, she had never seen Clark like this before. But Clark continued as if he hadn't heard her. " I don't care who you are, or what my father did to you, but if I ever find you near Smallville, let alone this house, I will make it my personal goal, to kill you." Clark said threateningly. He than supersped to Metropolis, and set the man down. "Good bye, and I hope for your sake that we never meet again, he said watching the now powerless man, quiver in fright, he was no longer was under the control of Jor-El, but he remembered everything that had happened.
*******
The Kent Kitchen-
" I guess that solves the problem of having to look for that guy. He is now just a normal guy, who will wake up tomorrow free of Jor-El, and will think it was all a very bad dream." Clark said, as he passed the plate of ham to Lana, who sat with her crutches next to her, at the dinner table.
"Glad to hear it. But now I'm a little more worried about your parents finding out about what we were about to do." Lana said, darting a glance at the door, as if suspecting someone might walk through it. Clark, noticing her anxiety, soothed her.
" My parents are gone for the weekend Lana, don't worry about. They must not think we're up to anything if they don't mind leaving us alone for three days," he said reassuringly.
"I know, I know...." she sighed, as she poured Clark some cider." Is there any chance we could continue what we were up to?"
" Well, Miss Lang, when we finish our dinner I would be delighted to escort you to your bed, but til then I guess you'll ahve to be satisfied with this-" And he leaned in and kissed her more passionately than he ever had.
That's it for now...i promise there will be more. maybe some even later tonite ( pacific time around maybe9:00 if my dad isn't pissed about me watching smallville again.)
p.s. NYC300Z, i hope you like it ( you're the only person that will read it now...) hope you like it!
NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 08:13 PM
Yeah I just read it during the first commercial break for Smallville! Great Update can't wait to see if they finish where they left off.
Oh Smallville just started again so...PPMS!!
C.A.chick
08-11-2005, 08:40 PM
wait, what smallville are you watching?
NYC300Z
08-11-2005, 09:13 PM
Spell just finished at 9pm sorry but maybe it comes on later where u are u know diffrent time zones
C.A.chick
08-11-2005, 09:39 PM
oh yeah! im watching it at 8 tonite.. i hate how lana never trusts clark about jason getting fired until she finds out...
i think i'll post after i watch it... sometime around 9:00 pacific
NYC300Z
08-12-2005, 12:50 AM
well where are u then? it's 12 45 Eastern so isn't that 9 45 pacific?
oh well update as soon as u can!!
clana4ev3r
08-12-2005, 12:58 AM
what does the sign mean on the cave wall that Lana has on her back?
C.A.chick
08-12-2005, 11:40 AM
i have no friggin idea, but it has to do with lana's destiny and clark's destiny... and sorry about not updating...i was typing right after the episode of smallville and the was a poweroutage...but I WILL UPDATE WHEN I GET HOME FROM SOCCER TODAY.....(my dad won't be home so he can't tell me not to)
binkys711
08-12-2005, 11:50 AM
yay! can't wait!!! great update BTW:)PPMS!!!
cool update!!!! PPMS!!! :D
C.A.chick
08-12-2005, 07:17 PM
The dinner table-
" Welll thank you Mr.Kent," Lana said after she pulled away from their kiss."But I"m afraid that I'm too hungry to keep going until after I've eaten dinner."
" Ok Ms. Lana, but I could've sworn that only two mintues ago we
were on a first name basis, Lana." Clark said as he picked up his fork and continued to eat. Lana giggled but said nothing and started eating.
*Ding Dong*
"I'll get it," Clark said as he got up and walked to the door. He opened it and almost jumped in shock.
"Hi Chloe, I haven't seen you recentley." He said as he hugged her.
sorry, i just had to stop because i have to check something, i will contineu in two minutes.
that was short. :D next update hope it will be a little longer though?
NYC300Z
08-13-2005, 02:30 AM
Yeah I hope so that was real short! What happned to two minutes?? lol
PPMS!!
C.A.chick
08-13-2005, 10:31 AM
computer died...can't write for two days while they fix....please check in 2 days...SORRY!
waaaahhhh.... :D hope ull get ur PC fixed within the next couple of days. just can't wait!!!
C.A.chick
08-28-2005, 01:06 AM
well, after finally deciding that this was such a lame story, i decided to continue.
"Good to see you Clark!" Chloe said sqeezing Clark tightly."How's my favorite farm boy?" SHe said, leaning and kissing him softly on the lips.
Lana walked in just to see Chloe kissing Clark.Chloe turned to see Lana and pulled away quickly.
"L-lana...It's not what it seems." Chloe gasped, nervously.
"Really?" Lana questioned angrily." Are you sure? Because I could've sworn that you were just kissing my boyfriend." As Lana said this, Clark backed out of the room, deciding to let them sort it out.
"Lana, it was just a friendly kiss." Chloe said,in a fake reassuring voice.
"And I'm supposed to belive this?" Lana yelled, her face turning red. "I'm leaving, and I hope you do too, for your own sake." Lana said as she stormed out of the house.
~Upstairs~
'Hmmm, I wonder how Chloe and Lana are?' he thought to himself, he had heard shouting, but had blocked it out.
i gotta go now because my dad thinks im a pysho person who is too obsessed with Smallville. He just told me that i won't be allowed on for at least two days. binks, could you hold up my fort while im gone? thanks
bye
NYC300Z
08-28-2005, 01:14 AM
wait what huh? Why did Chloe just kiss Clark? and why did Clark let her? Was it just a kiss on the check or what? I hope this doesn't cause any more problems for Clark and Lana! PPMS!!
binkys711
08-28-2005, 02:22 AM
*holds up fort*
We shall await anxiously for your return!;)
(for the record my mom always says the same thing....she says the computer is off limits on the weekends.....that's why I usually don't post on the weekends.....but sometimes I'm just to sneaky:p)
great update!....there's gonna be a...GIRL FIGHT!!!:p....PPMS!!!
WTF just happened??? did chloe just kiss clark on the lips?? WTH did she do that????? and why on earth did clark just let her do that when lana is there??? ok, girl fight, girl fight!!!! PPMS! :D
C.A.chick
09-29-2005, 07:09 PM
YOU GUYS, IF YOU HAVEN'T FIGURED IT OUT, I HAVE GIVEN UP ON THIS STORY SINCE IT IS THE LAMEST STORY IN THE UNIVERSE. JUST TO LET YA KNOW. UNLESS ANYONE REQUESTS OTHERWISE, I WILL NEVER UPDATE THIS STORY AGAIN!
NYC300Z
09-29-2005, 08:42 PM
No wait you haven't answered my question at least wrap it up come on!
clana4ev3r
09-29-2005, 08:55 PM
i KNOW WRAP IT UP!
binkys711
09-29-2005, 09:58 PM
yeah, plz at least you could finish it:(
u started this story, so u can at least wrap it up?
C.A.chick
09-30-2005, 10:45 PM
As Clark sat, waiting for Chloe and Lana to stop fighting, he started thinking about why Chloe had kissed him. She had promised him that it was a thing of the past, but she seemed so into the kiss. He shuddered.As much as he like Chloe, he just didn't like her in the way she liked him.'Oh well, I'm sure Lana will knock some sense into her.' And he let his eyes shut.
DOWNSTAIRS
Chloe watched a furious Lana storm out of Clark's house, she almost followed in suit, but the realized that this might be her last chance to be alone with Clark. 'He didn't resist my kiss, so I guess he was interested' she thought to herself, but little did she know, Clark had never felt the same way towards her.
As Chloe headed towards the stairs, a sly grin slid across her face, and she pulled a hankerchief from her bag. She walked to Clark's room, opened the door, only to find Clark was asleep. 'Ah ha, this makes everything a lot easier.' She crept across the room, and when she reached Clark, she tied the hankerchief over his eyes.
Once he felt the hankerchief over his eyes, Clark woke up.
"Lana? Is that you?" He said groggily.
"Shhhh" Chloe murmed softly. She had to make sure to say as little as possible so Clark would continue to think that she was Lana.Before she continued with her plan, she smiled 'I really am a genius' She tought to herself.
Chloe climbed on top of Clark's chest, and started kissing his mouth playfully. She would go in for a kiss, then pull out, leaving Clark's lips in mid air.She played thisgame for a while, then she held one of her kisses. 'Its better than I imagined,'she thought to herself.she continued to kiss him, until their mouth's were locked together .
After a few mintues she broke the kiss. Clark had a smile on his face, and the hankerchief was still on.Chloe reached up underneath Clark's shirt and massaged his muscular chest, and slowly she unbuttoned his shirt, and took it off. The plan was going smoothly. As Chloe's hand inched towards Clark's pants, Clark grabbed her hand.
"One second Lana," and he pulled off his hankerchief. "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?!" He screamed, enraged. His face was burning red ,as his grip on Chloe's hand became like a vice grip. He firmly picked Chloe up, and put her on her feet.
" WHAT, IN THE HELL OF THE WORLD, DID YOU THINK YOU WERE DOING?!" He yelled."GET THE HELL OUT OF THIS HOUSE, AND DON'T EVER COME BACK!" Clarke screamed, and Chloe ran down the stairs, and through the front door, right past Lana, who gasped in suprise at the tears flowing down Chloe's face.
OK thats it for now... I do more in a little while
binkys711
09-30-2005, 10:57 PM
OoOoO.....great update! I can't believe Chloe did that! PPMS!!!
C.A.chick
09-30-2005, 10:59 PM
thanks but my writing is crap, thanks anyways.
NYC300Z
10-01-2005, 01:41 AM
good to see Clark tell Chloe off! Now hopefully Lana isn't too upset that she saw Chloe kiss him..
PPMS!
what has gotten into chloe??? oh well, we all have our dark sides :D PPMS!!!
C.A.chick
10-01-2005, 04:13 PM
you guys, i've been inspired to keep going with story for a couple more updates...do you aprrove?
Lana watched as Chloe ran towards her car, got in a sped away. With a confused look, she headed inside.
"Clark?!" She yelled.
"I'm up here Lana!" Clark shouted down.
"OK, well I'm coming up." As Lana headed up the stairs she forgot about her previous anger, she had sensed regret and sadness in Clark's voice. She entered his bedroom to find Clark sitting with his head in his hands. She crept across the room, and put one hand on his shoulder.
"You OK?" She whispered softly. Clark shook his head no. " You wanna talk about it?"
"No." Clark said shortly.
"Clark, I love you. You have to learn that I'm here for you no matter what. You need to open up." Lana said soothingly. Clark sighed.
"Chloe was my best friend, and she had promised me that her feeling were gone..." Clark told Lana everything that happened. Lana stood there with her mouth open.
"I...what... how? That doesn't sound like Chloe..." But she was cut off by the sound of the phone ringing.
Clark got up and answered the phone.
"Mom? Yeah, whats up?" Clark paused for a moment. A somber look spread across his face. " Yeah, I'll be there in a sec." He hung up the phone, and turned to Lana. " I gotta go, my dad just had another heart attack. He's in Metropolis. Sorry."
"Clark, its no problem. You go, I'll wait here." Lana said with a caring look. And with that Clark was gone.
~On the way to Metroplis~
Clark is superspeeding down the highway, when he sees 3 men with machine guns shooting at a truck. Clark ran to the 3 men and grabbed there machine guns, all in superspeed mode. He picked the men up and sped them to the nearest police station, dropping them each in a seperate cell. And then he was on his way again.
~Metropolis Hospital~
Clark walked up to the receptionist desk.
" Hi, I'm here to see my dad, Jonathon Kent." The lady sitting at the desk had a somber look on her face.
"Sir, he came in here for heart reasons, but he was released. But then after five minutes he came back in ambulance. I'm afraid to say, he was hit by a car. They say he will be paralyzed from the waist down. I'm sorry." But Clark was gone.
~The Torch~
Clark pulls something out from a drawer. It's a red ring, a class ring. As he looks at it, his face is contorted with pain ' If I hadn't stopped on the way to Metropolis Dad would've been on his way home with me. I can't stand to live with him, knowing his paralyzation is my fault.' Clark was about to pull on the ring when he remebered Lana. ' I can't do this to her again, I love her.'
' Why would she love a man who caused the paralyzation of his father?' his brain said.
'Because she loves me no matter what.'
'Yeah right.' And before he could contemplate any further, he pulled the ring on and sped out of the Torch.
~Luthor Mansion~
A porshe speeds away from the mansion, and Clark is driving it. He gets on the road to Metropolis, blasting loud music. He seems to be enjoying himself.
Clark pulls out an envelope, he opens it and looks at a large stck of 100's in it.
"Ha, I'll be well off for a while."
NYC300Z
10-01-2005, 11:06 PM
glad you've decided to write more!
PPMS!
uh oh, with clark on red-K he will really get into trouble!!!!
great update! keep it coming!!!
Lana102
10-02-2005, 05:09 PM
what the?!
C.A.chick
10-02-2005, 06:20 PM
I can't update til tomorrow, but do you guys approve of me taking like 5ish more updates to finish it up?
Lana102
10-02-2005, 07:23 PM
i'm not sure yet let me think about it......
C.A.chick
10-02-2005, 10:23 PM
ok well let me know when you know.
Superboy2
10-02-2005, 11:48 PM
Interesting, I'll try to figure it out before you update. Can't wait for it.
C.A.chick
10-02-2005, 11:49 PM
oh, any advice for how to improve?
Superboy2
10-02-2005, 11:53 PM
Well, it did seem a little rushed. Maybe show more of an internal sturggle, like Clark looking at the ring, thinking about, and then puts it on. Just a suggestion, but you're doing great.
C.A.chick
10-02-2005, 11:55 PM
well i could try to redo it somehow........
Superboy2
10-02-2005, 11:57 PM
I was using the redk thing as an example. Just try not to rush everything. I know in at least 1 of my chapters I rushed something. My story I actually focus more on the internal struggle, and I think that's what people like about my story. Keep up the good work.
C.A.chick
10-03-2005, 12:05 AM
EVERYONE: I actually redid part of my story. Its the second update on pg. 8..... check out the section at the torch.
Superboy2
10-03-2005, 12:09 AM
I like it. Definetly showing the internal struggle. I gotta use words like "contorted" more often.
C.A.chick
10-03-2005, 12:11 AM
hehe, i like "contorted" i also like lke "stupihisticated" it mean stupid but sophisticated...i made it up, but it works
Superboy2
10-03-2005, 12:12 AM
stupihisticated, love it
C.A.chick
10-03-2005, 12:15 AM
i actually said it on accident when i was trying to sophistacated but wutever..........
NYC300Z
10-03-2005, 03:25 AM
okay so when's the next update?
binkys711
10-04-2005, 07:31 PM
oh man! will Clark eve learn?! probably not:p great update! PPMS!!!
C.A.chick
10-05-2005, 11:18 PM
wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll, i can try to update tomorrow... if i don't feel as crappy as i do now........im realy sick right now...
NYC300Z
10-05-2005, 11:31 PM
oh well hope you feel better soon! If you update early tomorrow i'll be able to check it out otherwise i'll have to wait til Friday...either way PPMS!!:D:D:D
C.A.chick
10-05-2005, 11:43 PM
ok, here's a short preview...
3 Months Later
~The Talon~
Lana bent over and picked up the last remaining piece of trash on the floor. It was just the end of another long, tiresome, lonely day. She sighed, recollecting the last time Clark had left.
"...then come with me..." Clark said.
"Smallville is my home. Your home..." she said. And before she could say much else, he rode away on the motorcycle
Lana shuddered, it still hurt years later, but maybe that was just because he was gone. ' Lana, its not the first time... maybe you should just give up.'
'NO! I can't give up on him.' She was torn, hurt and tired, and there was nobody to comfort her. And for the first time in months, she broke down and cried.
The tears came slowly, but soon turned into twin rivers running down her face. She felt a hand on her shoulder.
"Shhhhhh....Its all over now." THe voice said softly, lovingly...............
TBC ( maybe more if i have time in a ew minutes...)
Superboy2
10-05-2005, 11:46 PM
Sounds good so far, but now you're torturing us with that person who is comforting Lana. Lex? Clark? Henry Small? Please a little more of an update if you're up to it. Hope you feel better.
NYC300Z
10-05-2005, 11:57 PM
oh I sure hope it's Clark, but for some reason i don't think it is...how sad..PPMS!!
C.A.chick
10-06-2005, 12:01 AM
Lana jumped and turned around.
"Clark?" But the room was empty. Even more upset, Lana started sobbing.
"Why?" She whispered through her sobs. Once again a hand clutched her shoulder.
"Because I love you more than anyone else." This time when Lana turned around there was someone there. The man standing behind her pulled her to his chest and kissed the top of her head. " Its alright Lana, I'm here, and I'm not leaving you."
"Clark?" She whispered softly.
"I'm here Lana, I'm back." Clark said, holding her tight. " I watched you everyday. But it just hurt to much, but now I've learned."
" I c-c-can't bel-l-lieve you did it again." Lana choked on her tears. " You left again." She gasped, hitting his chest weakly. "You stupid fool.." she laughed hysterically, and started sobbing again. " I love you Clark. Don't ever do that again."
" I won't ever Lana. I love you too much to ever leave for good." And he picked her up and carried her to her room above the Talon.
NYC300Z
10-06-2005, 12:05 AM
ohh how sweet... is Lana going to forgive him so easily???
PPMS!!:D:D
C.A.chick
10-06-2005, 12:05 AM
not telling.
Superboy2
10-06-2005, 12:11 AM
Now you're just playing with our minds by torturing us like this.
Keep it up and I'll have to tickle you until you stop torturing us(LOL). PPMS!!!!
C.A.chick
10-06-2005, 12:13 AM
muahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Superboy2
10-06-2005, 12:15 AM
You'll get more tickle tortured than Lana did in my first chapter of Reassurance. If you've read it, you're probably hoping you can update A.S.A.P.!!!!
NYC300Z
10-06-2005, 12:25 AM
yes update!:D:D:D
great update!!!! so sweet but stop the cliffies!!!! it's killing me!!!! PPMS!!!! :D:D:D
Superboy2
10-06-2005, 12:37 AM
I say we all jump her and tickle her until she updates. Who's in?
NYC300Z
10-06-2005, 12:40 AM
I'm in!:D
Superboy2
10-06-2005, 12:41 AM
Cool, we gotta recruit some peeps for this. Who else is in?
hey cool new avi linn! likey likey! :D
Superboy2
10-06-2005, 07:37 AM
For people should do it, right? Alright. let's go find C.A. chick and tickle the hell out of her, unless she has her next update in hnad or close by. This will be fun. muahahaha!
C.A.chick
10-06-2005, 08:04 PM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!A tickle attack...... Well i'll tyr to update.......but i have two tests tomorrow, and mortal is playing tonite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YIPEE!anyhow, you can tickle me if i don't update tonite, but not now because then i'll die ( im very ticklish)
Superboy2
10-07-2005, 04:37 PM
I can forgive you for Mortal being on, but you've had plenty of time. I'll start off the tickling.
C.A.chick
10-08-2005, 12:33 AM
~Lana's Room above The Talon~
Lana woke up in her bed, with no memory of how she got there. She sat up, and realized that she still had her clothes on. Slowly, her memory of last night came back. There was crying. Disappointment. Clark.'Wait, Clark?' She looked towards the couch, and lying there, sleeping ever so peacefully, was Clark.
Lana got out of bed and walked over to Clark. She considered waking him up, but decided against it, she was going to make up for lost time. Lana sat by Clark's head and brought her face to his, and gently kissed him. After checking to make sure he was still asleep, she climbed onto the couch next to Clark, and fell asleep.
sorry its sooooooooooo short, but i had to avoid further tickling, and im not in the mood to write
awww.that was cute...ppms!
C.A.chick
10-08-2005, 03:23 PM
Luthor Mansion
As Lex woke up, he smiled to himself. 'I just know this is going to be a good day.' He got up and got dressed.
"Dirium," he called out for his new bodguard, " Go get my Ferrari, I'm going for a spin."
" Yes sir!" Lex laughed to himself, Dirium was so eager to be of assistance. It was nice for a change.
"Sir,"Dirium's voice snapped Lex out of his thoughts. " It seems that your Porshe has been returned!"
"What? The one that was stolen 3 months ago?" Lex was astounded. ' I knew this was going to be a good day!'
" Yes sir, the Porshe that was stolen. I already have people checking for prints."
"Get me the video footage. I want to see who did this." Lex said, even though he had a fair idea of who it was.
Lana's Apartment
Clark woke up to the fragrance of strawberry shampoo. He looked down to find the source, and smiled, Lana was lying next to him. He couldn't remember a time when he had been happer, even on Red K. ' Red K. Damn was I stupid! How could I leave someone so special to me? God I hope she forgives me.' Clark lay facing the ceiling, thinking of all the times he had let Lana down. Metropolis, the first time. Paris. Now. ' Its a wonder she doesn't hate me!' Clark leaned over and kissed Lana on the lips. Her eyes opened.
"Finally, I've been waiting for that since you woke up!" Lana said, and she leaned forward kissing passionatley.
That's it for now, i got a soccer game to watch. I might update later tonite. Sorry its always so short.
SpeedyKate91
10-08-2005, 05:40 PM
good update.
PPMS!!!
NYC300Z
10-08-2005, 10:54 PM
yes PPMS!!:D
Superboy2
10-09-2005, 04:26 AM
Great update. PPMS, or more tickling, and this time it will be double!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11muahahaha.
yay,finally!!!! :D PPMS!!!
Hey C.A.chick when r u gonna update ur story.?
hope we get another update soon! :D
binkys711
11-05-2005, 09:46 PM
awww.....sooo cute! Glad to see Clark's back! PPMS!!!
Smallvilecrazy
04-27-2006, 05:14 PM
u havent updated for a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooong time
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