View Full Version : Now or Never (Clana)
clana4ev3r
07-13-2005, 03:39 AM
Summary: Lana and Clark went through there freshmen and sophmoore year being best friends. but after those two years of college Clark was about to make a move but it was too late.... Lana was engaged to Jason Teague.
Met U
I couldn't believe the news that I just found out. I was heartbroken. Even though me and Lana were just friends i secretly loved her so much more then she will ever know.
But little did Clark know that Lana felt the same but resist because she didn't want to get hurt again. Everytime Lana got close he pulled away....
OKAY.... This must be the shortest first part post you have ever read but I'm still thinking..... :confused: :( :D :\ Please forgive me??
NYC300Z
07-13-2005, 06:42 AM
Don't worry ur idea shows promise....better get working on it though so we can see what's really good iight?
LOL great start... now think fast so you can give us a longer update soon!!!! :D:D;)
booze_is_me09
07-13-2005, 07:57 AM
GREAT BEGINING! hope to hear more soon!
SmallvilleMan
07-13-2005, 12:19 PM
I like the title, need more though to make a judgement.
clana4ev3r
07-13-2005, 04:23 PM
Just then Clark sees Lana in the hallway and Clark walks up to her.
Clark: Hey.... Lana...
Lana: Hey Clark! How are you??
Clark: Great.... he lied.... Congratulations on the engagment!
Lana: Yea.. thanks
Lana was hoping for a more sad part of Clark to show her that he still cared but realized that he could be lying.... Lana wasn't sure.
Clark: Have you guys decided when to have the wedding yet?
Lana: Yea.... three weeks from now....
Lana and Jason have been engaged for 1 month.
Clark: Thats great.
Lana: You don't seem too happy about it.
Clark: huh? me no I'm just a little sleepy.. He lied
Then it turned into a silent moment...
Lana: Well I better get going I have to meet Jason for Lunch.
Clark: Well have fun...
Then Clark watched Lana as she left and then he went back to his dorm.
Chloe: Hey CLark why the long face?
Clark: Lana is engaged....
Chloe: Oh.. you found out huh?
Clark: yea... I did..
Chloe: Clark I don't know what to say.... I'm sorry...
Clark: Just say that you know some club we can go to with Lois and Pete?
Chloe: Are you sure you want to go out?
Clark:Yea I'm sure its the only way i can keep my mine off Lana..
Chloe: okay.. I think I have smething in mine she said with a big smile.
Pete, Lois, and Chloe all went to Met U with Clark.
So Chloe called up Pete and Lois to meet them in front of the university.
Then Chloe and Clark got ready and went to go meet them there.
Clark: Pete!
Pete: Hey Clark!
Lois: hey Lois how are you.... i'm doing great thanks for asking.. she was joking
Clark: Hey Lois....
Lois: Whats up Smallville
Chloe: Hey Pete.. Hey Lois.
Lois: So where are we going?
Chloe: Club Atlantis.
Pete: Sweet!
Clark: Alright lets get going.
Pete: What about Lana?
Chloe: Pete! shoosh! xnay on the Lnay!
Pete: Oh.. oops...
Luckily CLark didn't hear anything.
But someone by the window did.... Lana...
She couldn't believe it.. they were going out and they didn't invite her because Clark doesn't want anything to do with me?? So many things were going through her mind.. Then a tear came down her cheek.
Clark, Pete, Lois, and Chloe all got in the car and headed toward Club Atlantis.
When they got there it was a long line and they knew they couldn't get in...
Chloe: How are we going to get in?
Pete: I know.. Clark?
Clark: Yea I got it.
Clark went up to the security guard.
Security Guard: Hey Kal! Long time no see
Clark: Yea.. listen some of my friends and me want to get in.
Security Guard: Bring'em in..
Clark went back to Pete.
Clark: alright lets go!
they all went in following Clark.
Lois: How did you get us in?
Chloe: There's a lot of things Clark can do and this is n't even half of it...
Clark told Chloe his secret to her and she was amazingly okay with it.
Once they got in they started to dance and have a few drinks... but Lois was mostly the one who drank the most.
Meanwhile....
Lana was in Jason's car going to lunch.
Jason: are you okay Lana?
Lana: Yea I'm great... Listen Jason could i ask you a question?
Jason: Yea sure.
Lana: And don't take it the wrong way okay?
Jason: Lana what is it?
Lana: How would you feel if I was engaged to Clark?
Jason: Well... I would be heartbroken.... and hurt because I loved you som much... and well the only way to get that of my mind was to go do something else...
Jason: What is this all about??/
Lana: Nothing its nothing i was just figuring out something. she lied.
Club Atlantis
Chloe: hey Clark why aren't you dancing?
Clark: I'm just thinking..
Chloe: Clark, If you love her that much then dont' let her go.
Clark; but i want her to be happy and all i cause her is pain....
Chloe: Well why dont' you be honest and tell her aobut your secret.. you told me and i was fine.
Clark; i don't know Chloe...
Chloe: Clark its now or never....
Then she went back to dancing..
Then Clark had a flashback of when he was on red K and he was with Lana at Club atlantis.
Fashback
Lana: Why did she call you Kal?
Clark: its my secret identity
Clark pulling lana to follow
Lana: Clark! Clark! I've been worried about you for 3 months and you've been hanging around in night clubs?!?!?!
Clark: You're so cute when your angry.
Clark pulls her to follow to the bar.
Clark: Lana you keep talking about hicksville you are going to be on the next bus goign back..
Lana gives him a mad look..
Clark: now i thought you were here to have fun..
Lana: your right.. sorry.. i'll go freshen up
Clark: hey why? I think you look great
Clark leans in to give her a passionate kiss
Clark/kal: I'm glad your here
a second of silence..
Lana: me too.
Then walks away...
*end of flash back
Pete: hey you guys want to go swimming in Crater Lake?
Clark: yea sure lets go..
Chloe: I'm in..
Lois: Count me in..
so they drive off to crater Lake..
In the car
Lois: but we don't have anything about swimming suits
Chloe: who said anything aobut swimming suits?
Clark: skinny dipping!!
Lois: are you serious??
Pete: yep
Chloe: and believe me this isn't clarks first skinny dipping per say
Clark: CHLOE!
Lois: What is she talking about??
well tell me what you guys think....
SmallvilleMan
07-13-2005, 04:30 PM
Much better than your first story. Well written too, i just would lana smarter than you did. I'm sure she would know why clark would have a long face and so on. But good job.
clana4ev3r
07-13-2005, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by SmallvilleMan
Much better than your first story. Well written too, i just would lana smarter than you did. I'm sure she would know why clark would have a long face and so on. But good job.
YEA.....still working on it....
smallvillewolf17
07-13-2005, 06:56 PM
very good. keep posting
booze_is_me09
07-13-2005, 09:00 PM
this is great! PPMS!
binkys711
07-13-2005, 10:16 PM
awesome start!!!PPMS!!! ASAP!
very interesting!!! please keep going and post more soon!!!! :D
NYC300Z
07-14-2005, 04:22 AM
Great Start....liked how u put the name of the story into the story with Chloe telling him it's now or never and I hope he takes the advice!! PPMS!!
C.A.chick
07-14-2005, 11:22 AM
hey that was great! keep going! just make sure that clark and lana end up together in the end!!! PPMS!!!!!!!!!!
clana4ev3r
07-14-2005, 04:00 PM
Originally posted by C.A.chick
hey that was great! keep going! just make sure that clark and lana end up together in the end!!! PPMS!!!!!!!!!!
Don't worry about it!
Here is some more!
Clark: Nothing!
Lois: Smallville what is she talking about?
Holding up a fist
Clark: Okay... Okay.. I had a dream...
Lois: Go on...
Clark: I went to Crater Lake to "swim" Clark emphazing on the word "swim"
Lois: Let me guess you weren't alone?
CLark: for the moment no until Lana came...
Clark then looked away....
Chloe: the classic dreaming of the girl next door...
Lois: oh my god! you went skinny dipping with lana?!?!?!
Clark: In my dream...
Lois: does Lana know about this?
Clark: sort of...
Chloe: Whoa hold on you didnt' tell me this! What do you mean sort of?
Clark: well she came up to my loft and asked me if I wanted to go swimming at Crater Lake....and
Chloe and Lois: and?
Clark: Well I said that skinny dipping wasn't such a good idea.
Lois: how did she take it?
Clark: she said maybe in my dreams...
Chloe: so you mentioned it?
Pete: yea something like right Clark?
Chloe: you knew about this?
Pete: Yep.. anyways aside from the story we're here.
But when they got to the lake Pete spotted Lana and Jason making out!
Then Pete quickly went back to the car before clark would come.
Pete: Hey guys you know what maybe we should go swimming later I mean it is a chilly.....
Chloe: Pete what are you talking abo- then chloe saw lana and jason and knew what Pete was talking about.
Chloe: yea you know what it is getting a little chilly...
Lois: Okay, Chloe, are you okay?
Chloe: Great just great.. so how about we go grab a bite to eat?
Lois: Wh- Oh yea you know what your right lets go grab a bite to eat. Lois then saw Lana and jason and knew whta chloe was talking about.
Pete: Yea alright lets go he said pushing Clark toward the car.
Clark: What? Come on guys what the worst that could happ-
Then Clark then saw Jason and Lana... and looked down.
Then when Jason and Lana wer done Lana saw Clark look down and everybody getting in the car along with clark.
Pete: Lets go buddy....
They all got in the car and left.
Lana was speechless and confused. What did shedo to make everybody avoid her?
Meanwhile in the car
Pete: so how we go to the Talon to get some caffine?
Chloe and Lois: PETE!
Pete: did i say Talon i meant uhh..
Clark: its okay Pete.
Pete: hey how about we go visit your parents I haven't seen them in a while..
Clark: yea that would be great.
Chloe: Lets go!
SO they drove off to Smallville and arrived at the kent's house.
Lois: Mrs. kent! Mr.Kent!
Jonathan and Martha: hey Lois!
Clark: Hey MOm! hey dad!
They hug.
Pete: Mr. Kent, Mrs. Kent
Chloe: Mrs. KEnt! Mr. Kent
Martha: Chloe! Pete!
Jonathan: Pete! Chloe!
Clark went up to the barn without saying a word.
Martha: Whats wrong with Clark?
Chloe: One word.. Lana
Martha: Oh dear.
SmallvilleMan
07-14-2005, 04:16 PM
:rotfl: "Lana and jason are engaged and it had an impact on him."
A little too obvious;) , nice job.
NYC300Z
07-14-2005, 04:54 PM
Great Update!! So is Lana gonna go ask everybody why they avoiding her?? Can't wait to see if they lie to her or tell her the truth and see how she takes it!! PPMS!!
smallvillewolf17
07-14-2005, 05:08 PM
more more more more
booze_is_me09
07-14-2005, 09:36 PM
PPMS!
clana4ev3r
07-14-2005, 10:11 PM
Chloe: yup lana strikes again.
Martha: What happened?
Pete: one word... engagment
Martha: oh i see..... with who?
Chloe: Mrs.Kent again I say one word....
Pete: Jason..
Martha: oh well i'm sure he will recover.
Meanwhile
Lana: Hey Jason I'm gona go visit the Kents..
Jason: okay then see you later Mrs. Teague
they kiss good bye..
When Lana go into her car she wondering why everybody was avoiding her. She couldn't think of another reason but Clark.
So many things were going through her mind. She knew Clark was going to smallville because she had a feeling he would. She wouldn't know what to do when she got there.
At the Kents
Martha: Chloe why don't you go see how Clark is doing?
Chloe: Sure Mrs. Kent
Chloe went over to the loft.
Chloe: Hey Clark...
Clark was looking at the sunset and turned around to se Chloe
Clark: hey chloe
Chloe: So how are you doing?
Clark: okay... i guess.
Chloe: Wanna talk about it?
Just then Lana pulled into the driveway of the Kents.
Pete: Lois look
Lois: What are we going to do?
Martha: What are you two talking about?
Pete: well you see Mrs.Kent ever since Clark found out about the engagment he's been avoiding her...
Lois: Pete she coming this way.. we can't let her see smallville like this...
Martha: Its okay you two just let her do what she needs to do.
Just before Lana could knock on the door Lois opened it.
Lana: Well hey Lois
Lois: hey Lana, what brings you here?
Lana: I need to talk to Clark.
Lois: Well he's no-
He is in the loft martha interrupted.
Lana: Thanks Mrs. Kent.
just when Lana was about to head to the barn
Martha: uhh... Congrats for you and Jason
Lana: Thanks Mrs. Kent.
Then she headed to the barn.
when she got there she heard Chloe and Clark talking and could help but listen in.
Clark: I accepted that she was engaged i really did but theres just a part of me that says that i should fight for what i love.
Chloe:Then why don't you?
CLark: you know why Chloe
Chloe: Just because Lana doesn't know your secret doesn't mean you shouldn't fight for what you want.
Lana was suprised to hear what Chloe said.
CLark: its not that simple Chloe.. I can't just walk up to Lana and tell her how I feel she engaged.. i mean you saw her a crater lake she obviously loves him.
Lana thought to herself they saw that? I can't believe they saw us and didn't say anything. but Lana knew why.
She continued to listen...
Chloe: Come on Clark your stronger than this all those times when she was with Whitney, how is this any different???
Clark: I don't know it just is..
Chloe: Tell me Clark what do you know?
Clark: I know is that I love Lana and I would do anything to be with her I would give anything to be with her for just a minute.
Chloe: then do it.. tell her how you feel... like i said before its now or never..
Lana heard everything that clark said. She started to cry and realized how much Clark loved her. At this moment she didn't care if he had secrets she just knew she loved him too. Clark her someone crying and when he went to go look Lana had already been running to her car and leaving.
Clark: Lana.......
SmallvilleMan
07-14-2005, 10:36 PM
nice, but you get straight to the point has well. Try to drag it out more.
yeah, clark just tell lana how much u love her already!!!! it's now or never!!!! :D PPMS!
clana4ev3r
07-15-2005, 01:36 AM
Originally posted by SmallvilleMan
nice, but you get straight to the point has well. Try to drag it out more.
drag it out?
NYC300Z
07-15-2005, 03:49 AM
Originally posted by kewl
yeah, clark just tell lana how much u love her already!!!! it's now or never!!!! :D PPMS!
My feeling exactly!!
binkys711
07-15-2005, 04:39 AM
awesome!!!PPMS!!!
smallvillewolf17
07-15-2005, 04:49 PM
PPMS!
clana4ev3r
07-15-2005, 08:03 PM
Chloe: At least she knows how you feel now.
Clark: But I didn't want her to find out that way....
Three Days Later......
Lana didn't know what to do about what happened and what she heard. So she decided to go back to the Kent's.
When she got there she went straight to Clark's loft.
Martha: Isn't that Lana's Car?
Jonathan: Yea it is should i go talk to her?
Martha:No. Let her do what she needs to do.
Jonathan: Is Clark even there?
Martha: but he is coming later.
Jonathan: Does she even know that Clark isn't there?
Martha: Probably no but I have feeling she does.
The Loft
Lana went upstairs to find a bunch a papers scattered on the table.
She went to pick one up that said "Lana"
She read it out loud
Dearest Lana,
I don't know what you heard that day you came to my loft but I hope you did hear it because everything that I said was true but I know that I could never have you. Lana started to tear..I wish I knew what happened to us. But I just need you to know this. I'd never imagined sitting here beside myself, I never should of let you go, The feeling that I'm feeling now that I don't hear your voice or have your touch and kiss your lips. Cause I don't have a choice. What I wouldn't give to have you lying by my side. I can never love anyone the way I love you and nobody can take your place because there isn't nobody better who can take your place. At this point Lana was crying and couldn't stop to think how much she meant to Clark. She continued, Lana I could never stop loving you even when I was five. And I been loving you to this day and the dance that we shared at the prom will be the closest thing I'll have left of you. Lana Lang, I love you.
Love Always,
Clark Kent
Then a voice said: I really did mean everything thing in that letter.
Lana turned to see Clark standing there with red cheeks looking like he has been crying.
Lana: Clark.. I-
Clark: Don't worry Lana I know I can't be with you cause your in love with somebody else.
Lana: No Clark don't say that because
Then Lana took of the ring and threw out and walked over to Clark and gave him a passionate kiss.
Lana: because I still love you.
Just then Lana woke up and it was only a dream. She started to cry because it was only a dream and nothing more. But she decided to make it real and went to Clark's dorm.
She knocked on the door and Clark opened it.
Lana: Clark?
Clark: Lana?
They both looked like they have been crying all day.
IF YOU WANT TO HEAR MORE THEN UPDATE YOUR STORIES AND POST MORE COMMENTS! DEAL?
C.A.chick
07-15-2005, 08:23 PM
PPMS!!!!!!! this stroy totally rocks... hurry up!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! don't stop..... this story rock..... i have a broken foot so all i can do is sit here and read clana stories so hurry up!!!!!!!!!!
clana4ev3r
07-15-2005, 09:03 PM
Originally posted by C.A.chick
PPMS!!!!!!! this stroy totally rocks... hurry up!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! don't stop..... this story rock..... i have a broken foot so all i can do is sit here and read clana stories so hurry up!!!!!!!!!!
but you can still type can't you? :p :D
SmallvilleMan
07-15-2005, 09:21 PM
Yea, just to want if she's getting married to jason, she probably does have some feelings for him. So i dont think she'd just throw the ring away. But nice update, continue on.
clana4ev3r
07-15-2005, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by SmallvilleMan
Yea, just to want if she's getting married to jason, she probably does have some feelings for him. So i dont think she'd just throw the ring away. But nice update, continue on.
you have so many things to pick at my story... why my stories???? :confused:
SmallvilleMan
07-15-2005, 09:27 PM
Just trying to help, would you prefer if i said nothing or it's great all the time?
booze_is_me09
07-15-2005, 11:48 PM
nice update! wonder what will happen? can't wait! PPMASAP!
smallvillewolf17
07-16-2005, 12:17 AM
PPMS!
hey, u got me fooled with the dream part there... lol!!!! awesome update!! so in the next chapter, will both lana & clark open up their feelings to each other??? can't hardly wait, PPMS!!!!
C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 12:54 AM
PPMS!!!!!!!! i love it... hurry up!!!!!!!!
NYC300Z
07-16-2005, 01:41 AM
Yeah like kewl said the dream fooled me too! Can't wait so see what happens now that their finally confronting one another....PPMS!!!
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 01:50 AM
Originally posted by SmallvilleMan
Just trying to help, would you prefer if i said nothing or it's great all the time?
well i'm not a very great writer so yea... i don't pay attention to every single little detail...
SmallvilleMan
07-16-2005, 01:51 AM
You don't have to really, just try to use common sense.
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 02:14 AM
i thought this was fiction???????
SmallvilleMan
07-16-2005, 02:17 AM
It is, but personally i like stories that would seem believeable. Obviously they're not, but almost all fanfics could be real. That's what makes them good in my opinion, but you can go anyway you want. Unless you really believe if lana would do that.
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 02:56 AM
It was an akward silence.
Lana: We need to talk....
Clark: uhmm.... yea sure... come in..
Lana: Have you been having strange dreams lately?
Clark: No... i don't think so... what kind of strange dreams?
Lana: Uh... nevermind
Clark: Lana what is this all about??
Lana: Us...
Clark:There's an us?
Lana: Just shut up and listen.
Clark: Okay...
Lana: I'm getting married in a few days and I don't know if I should go through with this because of my dream..
Clark: Well Lana this dream must have been something but it was just a dream nothing more.
Lana: Thats thing I think its more than just a dream..
Clark: Well if you dont' mind me asking what kind of dream was this?
Lana looked at Clark with a weird face.
Then Clark thought for a minute....
Clark: Oh.... I see... us?
Lana looked away..
Lana: yea.. ...
Clark: Ummm.... I..I.. I don't know what to say....
Lana: Could I ask you something?
CLark: yea..
Lana: After I told you I was engaged to Jason were you trying to avoid seeing me?
Clark looked away....
Uh...... Why would you think that?
Well because I saw you at Crater Lake with Pete, Chloe, and Lois. And all of you were getting in the car.
Oh.... you saw that.. .CLark said scratching his head.
Yes I did.. Lana replied giving him a mad look..
Clark: Lana.. I-
Lana: Clark if your going to say something say it before I get married...
Umm... we just thought you two could use a little privacy... he lied.
Lana: Then why were you looking down?
Uhh... Well you know thats funny because there was something on my shoe and I didn't know what it was so I was just standing looking at what it was.... and Pete-
Lana: Clark don't lie to me.... I am not stupid...
Clark blew out......
Lana: I'm going to ask you one question and I want you to answer honestly.
Clark: okay...
Lana: Clark, Are you still in love with me?
CLark: Lana-
Just then Chloe came in.
Chloe: hey Clark- Was I interrupting something?
Lana: Its okay Chloe we're done..
Chloe: Are you sure cause i can wait outside...
Clark: yes but I can't have you.. my life is to dangerous for you to be in...
A tear came down Lana's cheek
Chloe then tip toed outside and closed the door.
Lana then walked up to Clark
Lana: I don't understand why it has to be like this.
Then a tear came down clark's cheek and he put one hand on Lana's cheek
Clark: you can't have it both ways Lana.... you can't marry jason and love me at the same time... I think you and I both know why you said yes to him..
Then Clark walked out of the room and before he was going into the hallway he turned to chloe
Clark:I guess its never....
And left Lana in tears....
Chloe to Lana: He loves you but he doesn't want to hurt you because of who he is.
Lana: What are you talking about Chloe?
Chloe: Clark is probably to chicken to tell you his secret but i just can't see you two in pain so I'm going to do it. Clark isn't from here Lana...
Originally posted by SmallvilleMan
It is, but personally i like stories that would seem believeable. Obviously they're not, but almost all fanfics could be real. That's what makes them good in my opinion, but you can go anyway you want. Unless you really believe if lana would do that.
well some people are just better writers than others (better writing being you)
damn it clark!!! get on with it chloe, if clark is too chicken to tell lana, then u better should!!!! :D:D great update!! PPMS!!!
NYC300Z
07-16-2005, 05:13 AM
iono that's kinda messed up for Chloe being the one to tell Lana Clark's secret he should just man up......well iono see how this goes it does give us a diferent angle to look at things I guess....u got me curious at least......PPMS!!!
SVsleuth
07-16-2005, 01:13 PM
It doesn't seem right to me either for Chloe to tell Lana. Alicia betrayed his trust, but Chloe shouldn't. Maybe Lana will interrupt her, insisting that Chloe not tell her anything that Clark wasn't willing to tell her himself. Then she could go back to see Clark again???? That's just my opinion, though. I'll wait to see where you take the story. :)
SmallvilleMan
07-16-2005, 01:21 PM
clana4ev3r, i'm not a good writer, all you have to do understand the characters a little. I mean you do really think lana would just jump on clark and throw jason away like nothing? You can understand that she wouldn't.
C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 02:18 PM
i don't think lana really loves jason... i think he's the rebound that she told herself she loved... now she's just getting second thoughts and realising that she loves clark.... it could happen you know... PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 03:16 PM
Originally posted by C.A.chick
i don't think lana really loves jason... i think he's the rebound that she told herself she loved... now she's just getting second thoughts and realising that she loves clark.... it could happen you know... PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree with you there ca chick that is what i am talking about thank you for saying that! :D
Originally posted by SVsleuth
It doesn't seem right to me either for Chloe to tell Lana. Alicia betrayed his trust, but Chloe shouldn't. Maybe Lana will interrupt her, insisting that Chloe not tell her anything that Clark wasn't willing to tell her himself. Then she could go back to see Clark again???? That's just my opinion, though. I'll wait to see where you take the story. :)
Well yea i was trying it at a different angle but your opinion is really good do you mind if i use it???:D
oh god i don't know what to do now.....
SmallvilleMan
07-16-2005, 03:37 PM
I know it could happen, but do you really think she would just throw off her ring like it meant nothing. Obviously she loves clark more, but it's not like jason meant nothing.
Karen26
07-16-2005, 03:42 PM
update soon i lie this story
spacewalker_33.3
07-16-2005, 03:46 PM
ppms!
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 03:50 PM
hey should i let chloe tell lana clark's secret or no? please tell me so i can post the update soon! :D
SVsleuth
07-16-2005, 03:52 PM
Originally posted by clana4ev3r
I agree with you there ca chick that is what i am talking about thank you for saying that! :D
Well yea i was trying it at a different angle but your opinion is really good do you mind if i use it???:D
oh god i don't know what to do now.....
I don't mind if you'd like to use my idea. But you are free to write it however you like. It is YOUR story, after all. :) :)
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 03:55 PM
yea but now i don't know what to do....
SVsleuth
07-16-2005, 03:57 PM
Just write it the way you originally planned, then. Maybe you had a twist to it that we'll like after all. :)
clana4ev3r
07-16-2005, 05:23 PM
Lana: yea i know Chloe he was adopted.
Chloe: Not like that Lana.
Lana: I don't understand..
Chloe: gee this is harder than i thought it would be.
Lana: what is it chloe?
Chloe: He is not from earth..
Lana: is this some kind of joke?
Chloe: No its not. He's from Krypton.
Lana: What?
Chloe: Yep.. that was my reaction too.
Lana: so what he's an alien?
Chloe:No lana he's not he's more human than an alien.
Lana: how?
Chloe: because he uses his abilities to save people especially you and me.
Lana: special abilities?
Chloe: yea.. thats how he's always there when were in trouble.
Lana looked at chloe in disbelief.
Lana: I don't believe you
Chloe: well then seeing is believing...
Lana: How did you find about his secret.
Chloe was hoping Lana wouldn't ask that question but she did.
Alicia....showed me...
Lana: Oh..
Chloe: But thats not the point Lana, the point is that Clark loves you very much and that the only reason he pushes you away is because he will always have enemies and the enemies will always go after the ones he loves. So you have to understand why he can't have you.
Lana: But-
Chloe: but you love him.. well Lana isn't there someone else your in love with?
Lana: i need to think .
then Lana walked out of the dorm into her car and drove off to the beach.
meanwhile.
Chloe calls Clark to see how he is doing
Chloe: Clark?
Clark: Hey... Chloe..
Chloe: how are you holding up?
Clark: good.. is lana still there?
Chloe: No she left she needed to think.
SVsleuth
07-16-2005, 05:54 PM
Nice update. I'll keep watching for more.... :)
C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 06:26 PM
GREAT!!!!!!!!!! as much as i think lana loves clark, and jason is a rebound, i still think she has a few feelings for jason, so thats why she doesn't just claim her undying love for clark, she needs to think about who she really loves.... this is totally awesome.
NYC300Z
07-16-2005, 11:34 PM
Great update! So Chloe told her after all....well I hope Lana doesn't need to much time to think.....PPMS!!
clana4ev3r
07-17-2005, 02:18 AM
Clark: oh.. i see.
Chloe: she doesn't know who she loves Clark..
Clark: well chloe after all thats happened i don't blame her.
Chloe: well okay then i talk to you later.
Clark: bye chloe
Chloe: bye.
Meanwhile...
Why am I so upset with this? Why can't I just choose just like that? Come on pull yourself together Lana. There's no doubt about it that you love Jason. I mean come on clark keeps pushing me away. but still he does it to protect me.
Then Lana went over what chloe said before she left:
Chloe: But thats not the point Lana, the point is that Clark loves you very much and that the only reason he pushes you away is because he will always have enemies and the enemies will always go after the ones he loves. So you have to understand why he can't have you.
How could it be true? How could anything that Chloe says be true? Cause she's your best friends dummy and she wouldn't lie to you.
Lana was tackling herself with questions and answers. Then Lana looked at her ring.
I have feelings for Jason she thought but now I have feelings for Clark. But these feelings for Clark just seem different and stronger.
Should I go for the ever loving and protective Clark Kent or the Only loving Jason Teague?
Okay thats it for now I'm going out so won't be back in about a week or so...
Sorry its short..
NYC300Z
07-17-2005, 02:27 AM
A week?? Where are u going?? Did I miss something? When u get back u better have a real long update to make up for being gone a week and leaving us with a short one! PPMS!!!
EyeluvTom
07-17-2005, 07:09 PM
NO! Don't leave! Just kidding! I have to go on a trip in about a month as well. Hope you have an extra long update for us when you get back!
LoisNClark
07-17-2005, 09:11 PM
wherever you're going have fun.
you better have a really long update when you get back;)
yojimbo
07-19-2005, 10:59 PM
Update and hurry back.
clana4ev3r
07-24-2005, 06:59 AM
I'm back and i just updated hope you enjoy it!
Lana made a decision and got in the car and drove towards Met U .
Clark's Loft
Clark watched the sunset go down. Clark thought back of what happened when he came back from metropolis
Flashback
Clark walks into the Talon.
Clark: Hi
Lana: Hi... I don;t even know what to say to that Clark.
a moment of silence
Clark: I'm sorry for the way i acted in metropolis.
Lana: I keep telling myself that it wasn't you but then i think back on all things you've done and i realized i don't know who you really are.
Clark: I know you need an explanation.
Lana: No I don't, you warned me there were things about you that i wouldn't understand, i guess i didn't want to believe it.
Clark: I was protecting you.
Lana: from what? because Clark the only thing that keeps hurting me is you!
Lana is about to cry
After everything you said before you left, did you even miss me?
Clark: I missed you every second, but i can't keep doing this to you.
Lana walks up to Clark: then don't
end of flash back
just then martha comes in..
Hey son how are you doing?
Clark: fine i guess.
Martha:Clark do you want to know what you said to lana when you were little? you said that you loved her and promised her tha if anyone was going to take her away from you, you wouldn't give up without a fight. and you were only five.
Clark: I said that?
Martha: yup i was pretty amazed too.
Clark: wow.
Martha: Clark if you promised that to her that why are you here instead of fighting for Lana?
Clark:Mom I just want her to be happy.
Martha: I know honey but are you happy?
then Martha left the loft
Clark then gazed into the sunset for an answer am I happy?
Meanwhile...
Lana arrived at Met U and went straight to her dorm to find Jason.
Jason:Hey where have you been.
Lana: out thinking
Jason: thinking about what?
Lana: This marrige.
Jason: What do you mean?
Lana: Jason I will always care about you.
Jason: i dont' understand
Lana; Jason do you know why i went to paris?
Jason: To see whats outside of smallville.
Lana: Yes but also to get over CLark.
Jason: Oh i see.
Lana: Jason this marrige will never work if i'm in love with someone else. Can we be friends?
Lana took off her ring and gave it to jason.
Lana: There's someone out there for you and you will find her.
Jason: thanks lana
Lana: I have to see Clark now
Jason: go for it.
then lana was off to the kent's house and soon as she got there she ran to the barn and found Clark sleeping on the couch.
She thought to her self, he so cute when he's sleeping! then she walked over to Clark and snuggled next to him and fell asleep.
the next morning Clark woke up to find someone sleeping next to him.
Clark: Lana?
He thought to himself, she's so beautiful when she sleeps.
Clark: Lana wake up.
she didn't budge.
Clark gave her a kiss on the cheek.
she smiled but didn't wake up
Should I?
Then Clark leaned in and gave her a kiss on the lips and she kissed him back. Then she turned around to him and slipped her tongue in his mouth and put her hands on his chest. Clark gladly slipped his tongue into her mouth too. Then when Clark was about to pull away Lana put her hand behind his head and pulled him back in. Clark wasn't expecting this not that he didn't mind but he just wanted to give her a quick kiss. then Lana rolled over on top of Clark kissing passionately tongue and all. Lana was kissing Clark like she was under the nicodemus flower and there was no tomorrow.
then Lana pulled away.
Clark: That was nice...
Lana; Nice? we have been making out for about 15 minutes and all i get is a nice?
Clark then smiled.
Lana: You liar!
Lana gave him a playful slap on his chest.
Clark:I'm not the one who sneaked in for a nap.
Lana: Oh, sorry about that.
Clark: Its okay, it was the best morning wake up call in my life.
Lana: Glad to see i made an impression.
Clark: But i bet i can make a better one.
Lana:Oh really?
Clark: Do you really want some of this?
Lana: I don't think you could do bet-
Clark gave her a passionate kiss. Clark bit her lip and Lana gladly opened her mouth to allow access for his tongue and Lana slipped her tongue in his mouth too. Just like Lana when she was about to pull away clark pulled her back in.
Then Clark pulled away.
Lana's cheeks were red and her eyes were still closed.
then she opened them and stated to fan herself.
Lana:WOW.
Clark: I told you i could do better.
Lana: You sure did prove it.
Clark: I love you lana
Lana: I love you too Clark.
Clark: My parents are going to Metropolis for the week and I- we have the house to ourselves...
Lana: I like this sexcy Clark I'm hearing.
She found this very attractive.
Clark: What would you like for breakfast?
Lana: Banana Pancakes?
Clark: A stack of Banana Pancakes coming right up.
Lana: Clark?
Clark: Yes?
"Do you think you could help me up my legs feel kind of numb," she teased.
Clark: Your lucky i love you so much.
So Lana wrapped her arms around CLark's neck and Clark carried her to the house and set her down on a chair in the kitchen.
Clark: better get to work on those pancakes.
Lana watched Clark making pancakes but then after a while Lana started to look a other things such as his behind and everything he turned around Lana looked at his muscular chest. Clark did notice that she was looking at him but he didn't mind. Sometimes Lana would drop things on purpose to see his butt because sometimes he went behind something and it block the view.
Clark: Lana you don't have to drop things just to look at my butt.
Lana's eyes widened.
How did he know I was checking him out? probably because i dropped so many things. she thought to herself.
Lana: I'm not looking at your butt Clark!
Clark:YOu know you were i mean who wouldn' t?
Lana: I wasn't!
Clark: Lana, Lana, Lana, if you were up here making these pancakes i would be looking too you know.
Lana: I guess i was lucky today then huh?
Clark: yeah today but tomorrow you'll be up here!
Lana: but you will have to get me out of bed and its not going to be easy.
Clark: You have underestimated me Lana Lang, I have my ways.... pancakes are done! ready to eat?
Lana: I have been ready.
Great lets dig in. After breakfast they sat down on the couch and started to make out for a while.
Clark: Lana are you up for anything right now?
Lana: Sure.
Clark: SO... are you up to listening to my secret?
Lana was so relieved she finally was going to know Clark Kent's secret.
Lana: I'm ready.
Clark: Alright, where should i start?
To be continued
Originally posted by clana4ev3r
Clark: Lana you don't have to drop things just to look at my butt.
yay, lana & clark finally making up!!!! lol, so funny lana purposely dropping things just to look at clark's butt!!!!! lol!!! great update, although i don't understand how come jason let lana leave out of his life just like that?? i mean they were supposed to be getting married, right???? anyway, PPMS!!! :D
clana4ev3r
07-24-2005, 02:10 PM
Originally posted by kewl
yay, lana & clark finally making up!!!! lol, so funny lana purposely dropping things just to look at clark's butt!!!!! lol!!! great update, although i don't understand how come jason let lana leave out of his life just like that?? i mean they were supposed to be getting married, right???? anyway, PPMS!!! :D
theres going to be a little something about Jason later on.
clana4ev3r
07-24-2005, 05:25 PM
Well Lana I'm a special person.
Lana: Yes you are now.
Clark out a giggle.
No.. not like that... i'm not exactly like other people
Lana: I know Clark
Clark: (surprised) how?
Lana: Chloe filled me in. Your from a planet called krypton.
Clark: And your okay with it?
Lana: Yes I am I think having a boyfriend from another planet is hot because then there's nobody to match up to your unique personality.
Clark: But Chloe didn't tell you when I came Lana,
I came during the meteor shower, the meteor shower that killed.... your parents.....
then clark looked away from lana with pain on his face like he was being weakened by kryptonite.
Lana: You came during the meteor shower?
Clark: Yes... my biological father used the meteor shower to mask my arrival.
Lana saw the guilt in Clark's eyes.
Lana: Clark its not your fault you were young you had no control over it. Don't blame yourself blame your father.
Clark: How could you be so calm abut it but still if i hadn't been born i wouldn't have came to earth, and the meteor shower wouldn't have happened, you parents would still be alive, the people infected by the meteor shower wouldn't be out to kill you. Lana the instant I came down to earth you were in trouble and pain already.
Lana: Clark! don't say that! when you came into our lives you gave us love and safety. That five year old boy had no control over what happened. The five year old boy acted like a kid and was in love with the young girl next door and that young girl next door gave love back to the five year old boy and now we are here today, happy because if that little boy didn't come into my life I wouldn't have been so happy like I am right now.
Clark took in what Lana just said and also touched by it too. He was speechless.
Lana: i don't want you to blame your self for my parent's death i don't wnat you to blame yourself for everything bad that has happened.
Clark:Okay.. Lana I think you can calm down a little bit now....
Lana:Sorry I just don't like to see you in guilt and pain.
Clark: Its okay it's called tough love.
Lana leaned in and gave him a kiss.
So Chloe said you have special abilities huh? Lana said in a teasing voice.
Clark: Special Abilities? Chloe told you that too?
Clark was a little upset but was glad that Lana took everything well.
Lana: Yes.. and i was very intrigued because maybe we could use these special abilities for special things.....
She lifted an eyebrow..
Clark: Why must you do this to me lana?
Lana:because i love you so lets see what you can do.
Clark:Okay then.. what kind of flowers do you like?
Lana: Tulips.
Clark; Watch very closely Lana.
then in an instant her supersped to a flower shop and back in seconds.
Lana: WOW! I could get used to that!
Clark then handed her the flowers.
Lana: There beautiful.
Clark: Your welcome.
Lana: I think your super speed is pretty hot.
Clark: Really you could feel the heat? I'm really that fast?
Lana: Clark, Not that kind of hot.
Clark: Huh? oh... OH! that effect on you huh?
Lana: yea its really sexcy.
Clark blushed and Lana saw that he was and thought it was cute
Lana: what else can you do?
Clark: well i have super strength ,I'm bullet proof. heat vision and x-ray vison.
Lana was suprised by the last thing he said.
Lana: I'm sorry i didn't catch that last one.
Clark: X-ray vision?
Lana: X-ray vision.
Clark knew she was feling a bit uncomfortable.
Lana: Clark... you never.. uh.. looked at me with that ability have you?
Clark: Well.....
Lana: Clark!
Clark: but i have a perfectly good explanation.
Lana: How many times?
Clark whispered to himself hoping that Lana didn't hear him.
Clark: Two.
Lana: When?
Clark: Well the first time was when i couldn't control it when i first got it and i x-rayed the girl's locker room and you were there. the second time was when i was on red k.
Lana; red k?
Clark: Red kryptonite is what we call it at our planet. The meteor rocks or green kryptonite makes me weak and if i am exposed to it too long i could die and Red makes me act-
Lana: Different?
Clark: Yea. how did you?
Lana: Well the class rings were made out of it and i noticed that ever since you had it on you acted different.
Clark: Yea it makes me free so i could do what ever i want just like the nicodemus flower did to you.
Clark then smiled and remembered what she wore that day at school.
"God she was hot" Clark said out loud without even noticing
Lana: WHAT?
" I can't believe I said that out loud"!
Lana: Clark!
Clark: I'm sorry you were just so hot!
Lana: i guess I made quite an impression on you then huh?
Clark: Yea.
Lana: Well you did too.
Clark: When I was on red K?
Lana : yea you walked into the talon gave me my first kiss and asked me out.
Clark: that wasn't exactly our first kiss lana.
Of course it was.
No it wasn't.
When???
Well you know the nicodemus flower?
Lana: What did i do?
Clark: Well you brought me to the school swimming pool, stripped down in front of me, jumped into the pool, we made out, then you pushed me into the pool, which by the way got me detention.
Lana was shocked she didn't believe it. Strip down in fornt of CLark? Made out with him?
Lana: Wow, i did that?
Clark: Yep.
Lana: I guess we had our days then huh?
Clark: Yeah we did.
So what do you want to do now? Lana asked
Clark: I have one idea...... he said with a huge smile.
Lana:Clark Kent!
Clark: NO! No, Lana.. nothing like that.
Lana: Oh.
How some movies and dinner?
sounds like a plan.
Alright I'll be back in a few minutes
The Clark supersped to the video store and grocery store and came back in 5 minutes.
Clark: I'm back.
Lana: Show off. what movies did you get?
Clark: Lord of the rings.
Lana: Great! I love that movie.
Clark put in the dvd and sat down.
Lana: Why are you sitting all the way there?
Clark: Well I thought you might need some space to stretch your legs.
Lana scooted all the way next him and whispered in his ear "your such a gentlemen." and bit the top of his ear.
Lana didn't you want to watch a movie? I mean not that i dont' mind where you are going with this...
Lana: Well i'm just trying to find your sensitive spot.
Lana then slid her hand down to his knee knowing that that was his ticklish spot.
Clark then jumped and lana started to giggle.
Hey!
Clark: You know what i've noticed to day lana?
Lana: What?
Clark: You are very touchy today not that i don't mind it just that i never thought i'd see you act like this ever again after the nicodemus incident.
Lana: Are you accusing of touching you too much?
Clark: Maybe.....
Lana: guilty as charged.
Clark: Shouldn't we be watching the movie now?
Lana: Yea.... Sure
Then Lana sat on Clarks lap and Clark felt a little uncomfortable because he didn't know where to put his hands. Even though Lana was his, he was still respectful.
During the movie Clark always changed th positonsof his hands and Lana noticed that he didn't put his hands on her during the movie. She smiled and loved that he was always trying to be respectful.
So then Lana took both of his hands and wrapped it around her waist.
Lana: feel better now?
Clark: Yeah.. thanks
During the next few hours of the movies Lana and Clark were making out and both of there shirts were already off!
Lana: Lets go to your room CLark.
Clark then carried Lana and supersped to the room.
Lana: Show off.
The next morning
Lana woke up to find Clark still sleeping and Shelby sleeping on the floor.
Lana:Shelby come here.
Lana told shelby to do something to Clark.
Lana: Go get'em!
NYC300Z
07-24-2005, 09:48 PM
Nice Lana is ok with Clark's secret he finally told her himself and their getting along perfectly! What could go wrong? What does Jason have instore for them? can't wait to find out! PPMS!
clana4ev3r
07-25-2005, 02:04 AM
Theres not a lot of people commenting on this story.... it must be pretty bad then huh? maybe i should stop posting since almost nobody is posting comments.......
NYC300Z
07-25-2005, 02:11 AM
No don't stop! i'm here! Update update update!!
clana4ev3r
07-25-2005, 02:26 AM
well thats only you wheres the rest of the crowd?
NYC300Z
07-25-2005, 02:39 AM
iono I wish they would come so u'd update though! Hello Hello where ever u are!
PPMS!!
wow that was such a sweet update!!! can't wait to find out what jason's move would be! PPMS!!!
binkys711
07-25-2005, 11:32 AM
hey you left out some details of the night!!!;)*cough*clark and lana in bed*cough*:p (details are good!:lol:)PPMS!!!
MOOman0618
07-25-2005, 12:13 PM
Hey! Just caught up on this story...its going great. I loved your last two updates. And yes...what about those details??
NYC300Z
07-26-2005, 01:01 AM
Originally posted by binkys711
hey you left out some details of the night!!!;)*cough*clark and lana in bed*cough*:p (details are good!:lol:)PPMS!!!
Yes yes Details are good! PPMS!!
clana4ev3r
07-26-2005, 02:42 AM
Shleby jumped on the bed and started to lick Clark
Clark: Ack! Shelby down boy!
Clark saw Lana layign down laughing and he decided to get he back.
Shelby go get her!
Shelby then went to lick Lana on her face and Lana screamed and laughed at the same time.
Lana: AHH! okay... I surrender!
Clark: good boy!
Lana: good morning Clark!
Clark: good morning
He gave her a kiss.
Lana: so what do you want for breakfast?
Clark: Something sweet.
Lana: I don't know if I can find any...
She went along with the game.
Well.. Clark got closer.... more like someone....
Really could you describe this someone? she got closer to Clark
well she has black hair... he got closer... beautiful brown eyes... she got closer... most beautiful sweet lips i have ever kissed.... he got closer.... and her smile just makes me melt inside... she got closer and finally they were in a kiss.
Clark started to kiss her neck, then up to her cheek, and back to her lips. Lana rubbed her hands on his muscle body. She then rolled on Clark kissed his neck and his ear and then kissed his nose and back to his lips. Then he rolled on Lana and kissed her stomach and up to her chin and back to her lips. He started to kiss her neck again.
Clark... Clark... we should... Lana then gulped for she was in a trance..... really get... out of bed...
Then Clark kissed her lips again.
Okay, then.
So.. uhh.... what do you want for breakfast? she said still trying to snap out of her trance.
Waffles would be great!
Lana: Alright waffles coming right up.
They both went downstairs holding hands as Lana was leading the way.
This couple was very much in love that they couldn't let go of each other.
Lana got started on making breakfast........
These are... mmmmm... are good! Clark said stuffing his mouth with waffles.
Lana: slow down clark!
Clark: There just so good!
Just then the phone rang.
Clark picked it up. It was Chloe.
Clark: Hey Chloe!
Chloe: Hey Clark hows everything?
Clark: Great!
Chloe: Glad to hear.. listen is lana there?
Clark: Yea.. hold on.
Lana: Hey Chloe!
Chloe: Hey Lana you want to go shopping today?
Lana: Sure I'll make sure Clark doesn't come!
Chloe: haha... well then I'll come pick you up at 2:00?
Lana: yea that would be great. okay see you then bye!
Clark: So what did chloe say?
Lana: I'm going shopping with her at 2.
Clark: Okay I just stay here and do my chores.
Lana: I need to go to my apartment and get ready do you thing you could give me a lift?
Clark: Don't you have a car?
Well I think I need to get there faster she gives him a wink
Okay hop on Clark said putting his arms out and Lana jumped in. In just a few minutes there were at her apartment but someone was waiting in the dark.
Hello Lana... said the person in the darkness...
Clark then started to feel sick...
to be continued
NYC300Z
07-26-2005, 03:03 AM
oh no! who's hidinig in the darkness? And why is Clark feeling sick? Must be kryptonite! Is that Jason hiding with kryptonite!? Can't wait to find out! PPMS!!
LoisNClark
07-26-2005, 08:51 AM
I HATE EVIL CLIFFY'S but awesome chapter. i also think it's jason
ppms
MOOman0618
07-26-2005, 10:29 AM
Great update. WHO IS IN THE ROOM!?!?!
binkys711
07-26-2005, 10:58 AM
AHHH!!!WHO IS IT?!!!PPMS!!!stupid cliffys!!!:mad:
peaches4cream
07-26-2005, 11:43 AM
i bet its lex with his meteor ring from onxy
clana4ev3r
07-27-2005, 07:12 PM
The person in the dark and a voice vaguely familiar to Lana.
La- Lana clark said getting weaker by the moment.
Then the perosn in the dark came out and it was no other then Jason Teague.
Lana: Jason??? What the hell are you ding in my apartment?
Jason: Well i came here to steal you back.
Lana: But i thought i made things clear that we are only friends.
Jason: i lied.
Clark was getting weaker and weaker but Lana never heard his call to her.
Jason: Whats the matter clark feeling a little sick?
Lana then looked at Clark on the floor dieing by the minute.
Lana: CLARK!!!! STOP IT JASON!!
Jason held out a green rock that was glowing.
Lana knelt down beside Clark putting his head on her lap and started tearing.
Lana: Clark everything is going to be okay...
Th- the ro-rock get it away from me.... clark said barely in a whisper.
Jason:Lana see him for what he is!! he's not even human!
Lana: Clark is more human that you'll ever be! and i care if he's not human i will still love him!
Jason: NO!!! You will be in love with me!!! The Jason pulled out a gun and pointed it at Lana.
Clark saw what was going on but couldn't do anything because he was so weak. he forced himslef to get up but everytime he did the pain got worst. All his energy was draining out by the minute.
Jason: If I can't have yo unobody will!
Jason pointed the gun at Lana and was about to shoot...
BONG!!! Jason fell down to the ground and as soon as he did Lana grabbed the rock ran to the window and threw it as far as she could. BUt Clark was still loosing consciness cause he was exposed to the kryptonite too much.
Chloe had a broken mug in her hand and bleeding.
Chloe: Are you two okay?
Lana: Yea.. I'm fine.. we have to help clark... he's not waking up!
Clark now was out cold.
Lana cying heavily: CLARK!! DON'T YOU DIE ON ME!
Chloe also was crying heavily as the two girls were hovering over clark crying and urging him to come back to them.
Chloe: CLARK! come on come back to us!
Lana: Lets bring him to my couch.
Chloe and Lana dragged him to the couch and because of there adrenaline there were able to lift him up to the couch.
Lana: Clark please come back to me! i love you! please come back!
Chloe: come on clark we have to go through college remember? come on don't let me go through it alone
Chloe: Lana what are we going to do? He's hardly breathing.... what if he won't-
Lana interruted: NO!! he'll make it don't you dare say that he won't! Chloe call the kents there in metropolis.
Chloe took out her phone and dialed
Chloe: Mr. Kent its clark!
Jonathan: What happened chloe??
Chloe: Jason he hand a meteor rock and clark was exposed to it to long and now he's hardly breathing!
Jonathan: Where are you right now Chloe?
Chloe: Lana's apartment come quick!
Jonathan: Okay will be there as soon as we can hang in there.
Lana: What did they say?
Chloe: There coming.
Lana: Chloe lets take care of your wound.
She ran to the bathroom and came out with antibiotics and nadages.
Lana: thanks chloe if it weren't for you clark and i wouldn't be here.
Chloe: Sure no problem i'd knock somebody over the head any day.
Lana: What about Jason's body is he still alive?
Chloe went over and checked his pulse.
He's still breathing. Sunddenly Jason grabbed chloe arm and she screamed.
Jason: you think you killed me? not yet!
He got up and picked up the gun pointing it at chloe
Lana: Jason let her go!
Jason: So my plan worked? good. that meteor rock was no ordinary one it was a special one that i made to make the effects last longer.
Lana: WHAT DID YOU DO!
Jason: Simply really. I just took one meteor rock and made its effect 100 times stronger on Clark! And i only have one antidote. Until then he's going to die in 10 minutes!
Lana was angry and furious but she didn't know what to do. Jason was holding chloe with a gun to her head and clark was dying and she was losing time, in about 10 minutes the man she loved was about to die!
Jason started to feel dizzy but fought back against it. His blow to the head was bleeding so much.
Jason: So here's the deal i'll give you Chloe but you lose clark or you lose Chloe and save Clark.
Lana: THAT'S NOT FAIR! I will lose someone either way!
Jason: Well its your choice or you could just lose both of them. time is running out lana clark is about to die a painful death in about 7 minutes.
Lana didn't know what to do. Time was running out....
Her best friend chloe who was like a sister to her or Clark her ever loving boyfriend?
TICK- A- TOCK TICK- A TOCK!
TO BE CONTINUED!
Don't you just love cliffies???? :lol:
dreammaster
07-27-2005, 07:36 PM
awesome chapter
binkys711
07-27-2005, 07:36 PM
NOO!!!NOT ANOTHER DANG CLIFFY!!!YOUR SO EVIL!:p PPMS!!!DON'T LEAVE US HANGIN' FOR 2 LONG!!!;)
LoisNClark
07-27-2005, 11:20 PM
EVIL PERSON!!!! HATE THE CLIFFY'S!!!!;) awesome chapter but you BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!;)ppms
NYC300Z
07-28-2005, 12:46 AM
How'd Jason magnify the effects of the kryptonite?? HOw the heck and why did he make an antidote?? oh well nice update! PPMS!!
clana4ev3r
07-28-2005, 01:57 AM
Originally posted by NYC300Z
How'd Jason magnify the effects of the kryptonite?? HOw the heck and why did he make an antidote?? oh well nice update! PPMS!!
to answer you first question Some scientific way..... :D
and you second question because he's wierd? :D
NYC300Z
07-28-2005, 02:58 AM
oh well that clears it up perfectly!! lol
PPMS!!
awesome update but with another cliffy??? awwwww!!!! :D will clark survive??? PPMS!!!!
MOOman0618
07-28-2005, 11:06 AM
That is a mean cliffy!! Post more soon!
clana4ev3r
07-29-2005, 03:34 AM
Just as lana wasa about to decide, clark wakes up but still is a little weak, he had heard what Jason had said.
"Lana" he whispered... Save chloe....
Lana: NO! I'm going to save both of you! I'm not going to lose you or Chloe.
Clark: SAVE CHLOE!
Jason: This is ridiculous, its taking too long, i'm just going to kill you instead!
Jason fired and with every strength left with Clark, he jumped out of the couch using his hands and took the bullet.
Lana: CLARK!!!
Chloe: YOU BASTARD!
Then chloe broke free and punched Jason hard in the face and ran over to Clark.
Chloe then saw what the bullet was.
CHloe: Lana, its a kryptonite bullet!
Lana: Call 911 and Pete!
CHloe called pete first.
Chloe:Pete, its Chloe, Clark's been shot with a kryptonite bullet meet us at the hospital quick!
Pete: Okay I'll be there in 5 minutes.
Then she called 911!
CHloe : Hello? Clark kent has been shot please come to the talon and the body of Jason Teague is here.
Person on the phone: Okay we will be ther right away!
Lana: Lets bring him to the car!
They both carried Clark to Lana's car.
Chloe was in the back with a cloth putting pressure on his wound.
They arrived at the hospital with pete waiting there with a bed.
Pete: Quickly! I'll take it from here.
Lana was about to follow but Chloe held her back.
Lana was crying in fear and so was Chloe.
They waited for housrs for Pete to come out of the E.R
3 hours later.....
Pete: Lana, Chloe.
Lana: How is he?
Pete: He's fine now but..
Lana: But what?
Pete: he's in a very deep sleep and I tried everything to wake him but he just won't wake up.
Chloe: Is there anything we can do?
Pete: Nothing now.. but you could go see hi-
Lana ran into his room so fast that you'd think she has superspeed.
Chloe: She's really worried.
Pete: I could see that.
*Clark's Room*
Lana: Clark..... don't leave me... please... I love you.
Clark still in a coma: To be alone.
Lana: What?
Clark: My destiny is to be alone.
Lana: Clark I am not leaving your side. YOU WILL NEVER BE ALONE!!!
Clark still in a deep sleep: I love you Lana Lang!
Lana: Clark if you can hear me, I love you too. Why did you take that bullet? You were in enough pain already and now look at you, your in a hospital bed fighting for your life!
Clark's hand moved.
Lana: Clark?
Clark's eyes then suddenly opened.
CLark: Lana?
She went in a gave him a bug hug and kissed him all over his face.
Lana: Oh CLark I thought I'd lost you!
Clark: Well here I am awake and active.
Chloe came in.
Chloe: CLARK!!
Clark: CHLOE!!! are you okay?
CHloe: Yes, i'm fine, how are you doing?
Clark: Alive and running great.
Pete then came in
Pete: CLARK?
Clark: PETE!!
Pete: Man we though we'd lost you man! don't ever do that again!!
Clark: Thanks Pete! So when can i get out of here?
Pete: Let me just do a quick check up on you and getyour lease forms.
Later...
Pete: Well everything seems to be fine. I just need to know who's taking care of you.
Pete gave a quick glance at Lana.
Lana: That will be me!
Clark: Are you sure that you want me at your place?
Lana: Clark, I've been to yours so now lets go to mine.
Clark: Whatever you say.....
Chloe: ehmmm... what about me?
Lana: DOn't worry you come too and get your car.
CHloe: Thank you.
Clark got dresed and they all went to the car.
In the car Clark and Lana were fooling around in the back while CHloe was driving.
Chloe: Oh come on!! Can't you two love bords do that when I'm gone???
Clark: Sorry Chloe, but like i said before Lana can't keep her hands to herself.
Lana hits him playfully.
Clark: And when-
Chloe: And when she's not touching you she hits you. I got it! We are here finally!
they all got out of the car and chloe went straight to her car.
Chloe: good night!
Bye chloe!
When they got in Lana pulled CLark up to the apartment.
Lana: good they cleaned up i hope Jason goes to hell!
Clark: Maybe I should get shot more often....
Lana: Clark!
Clark: What?
Lana pulled him in for a long passionate kiss. Then after Lana pulled away.
Clark: So where am i sleeping?
Lana: On my bed.....
Clark: Then where would you be sleeping?
Lana: On my bed.....
Clark: your sleeping on your bed and i'm sleeping on your bed... whats right aobut this picture?
Clark raised an eye brow...
Lana: well if you don't want to....
Clark: I 'm not complaining....
Lana then pulled him in to the room and on to the bed.
She pulle him on top of her and CLark leanedin a kissed her. Lana started to unbutton his shirt and pants. Clark lifted her shirt off.
CLark then pulled away..
HOw far are we going with this?
far out!
and she pulled him in again.
Clark pulled how her pants. He started to kiss her neck down to her stomach and back up as clark did this Lana giggled a little.
Lana kissed Clark's muscle body.
amazing update!!!! u got me on the edge of my seat there at first, whew! glad that clark's made it :) and sweet at the end... but this is not yet the end, right? ;)
so what happens to jason now? PPMS!!!!
LoisNClark
07-29-2005, 08:07 AM
awesome update especially with the added TC;)
ppms!!!
MOOman0618
07-29-2005, 11:52 AM
Yeah for Clark living! Did Chloe kill Jason? hmmmmm...
binkys711
07-29-2005, 12:58 PM
don't leave out any details!!!;)and what happened to Jason?:confused:PPMS!!!:Dglad to see Clark's back in action:p;)
NYC300Z
07-29-2005, 04:37 PM
Yeah exactly what happned to Jason?? How long is Clark gonna be staying with Lana?? PPMS!!
clana4ev3r
07-30-2005, 02:35 AM
Jason is dead... really hard punch form chloe.... yea i should really check what i write....
NYC300Z
07-30-2005, 03:27 AM
lol it's cool! Don't hold out on us though! lol PPMS!!
clana4ev3r
07-30-2005, 03:38 AM
check out my new thread!!
clana4ev3r
07-30-2005, 08:47 PM
The next morning Clark and Lana were under covers on Lana 's bed.
Clark had woken up first and Lana was still sleeping. He decided to make breakfast for him and her. He made eggs, bacon, sausage, toast, and coffeeand then after he made a phone call to a friend.......
Lana was woken up by the smell of the coffee and smiled.
Lana got up and went outside. She went behind Clark and wrapped her arms around his waist.
Lana: Good morning handsome.
Clark: Good morning beautiful.
Lana: I see you made breakfast.
Clark: Yes I have and we have a great selection too, so dig in.
Lana went over to the counter and started eating and soon Clark joined in.
******
Lana: That was delicious!
Clark: Well having a mom that can really cook and bake really is cool
Then there was a knock on the door.
Lana:Who is it?
It's Lex...
Lana opened the door
Lex: Hey Clark...
Clark: Hey lex
Lex: I heard what happened are you two okay?
Lana: Yea
Lex: I can't believe Jason went at you two like that.
Clark: Yea I can't believe it either.....
Lana: So what can we do for you?
Lex: Well I came to see how you two were doing and by the looks of things there good but i could make them even better.
What do have in mind Lex? Clark pretending not to know because Clark had asked Lex for a favor.
Lex: Well I can see that you two obviously need a vacation from all this drama so, I got two plane tickets for you to Paris thats leaving tomorrow.
Lana: WOW! Lex thats great! Thank you so much...
Lex: Don't thank me just yet.
He then looked at Clark.
Clark: Thanks lex, thanks a lot.
Lex: Anything for my best friend and his girlfriend. Oh by the way Clark, the package that you ordered is with Chloe.
Clark: Thanks Lex.
Lex: Well I guess i should get going so you two can get packed. oh and everything is set so don't worry about transportation around Paris and hotels just relax there.
Lana: Oh lex thanks.
The lex left.
Lana: Can you belive it? We're off to Paris tomorrow!
Clark: Yea, can't wait...
Lana: Well call your parents and tell them and i'll go pack.
Clark: Okay.
Lana went inside and changed and packed.
Clark supersped to Chloe's apartment and picked up the package and supersped back to Lana's apartment. Then he went over to his house and packed. His parents already knew his plan and pretty much everybody else knew (accept Lana) what he was doing since they all helped. Then he went back to Lana's apartment before Lana even noticed and put his bags down and sat down on her couch and watched tv.
"Everything's set" he said to himself.
To be continued
MOOman0618
07-30-2005, 08:52 PM
I think I may see where this is going! Well I hope it is going that way anyhow... Great update, can't wait for Paris!
lanaland
07-30-2005, 08:57 PM
Great..PPMS!!!
LoisNClark
07-30-2005, 10:20 PM
I think i know what the plan is and if i'm right then.......:p
Awesome update
ppms!!!!
NYC300Z
07-31-2005, 12:03 AM
Well me being clueless like always have no idea what Clark is planning so PPMS!!!
binkys711
07-31-2005, 12:31 AM
i think i know what it is also!;) PPMS!!!:D
clana4ev3r
08-01-2005, 02:08 AM
Lana came out of the room with two full bags.
Lana: Well I'm all packed... now you have to-
She then saw two bags next to the couch.
Clark: Pack? I'm way ahead of you honey.
Lana: what about your-
Clark: Parents? I already told them.
Lana: didn't Lex say something about a-
Clark: Package? picked it up.
Lana: Can I finish my own sentences please?
Clark: sorry.
Lana: So whats in the package?
Clark: I don't know haven't opened it.
Lana: Why don't you open it then
Clark: don't want to now.
Lana: okay..... so what are we doing for the rest of the day?
Clark: I don't know.. you can do whatever you want... just not with another guy other then me of course.
Lana: Don't worry I have you to protect me from them
Then she went over to kiss Clark and sat on his lap with her head on his chest.
Lana: How about we just stay here the whole day?
Clark: I don't know... I mean it does get boring around here.....
Lana: Boring?
Clark: Yes, If you haven't notice its very quiet....
Lana: Shut up!
Then she slaps him playfully on the chest
Clark: Ouch!
Lana: I thought you were the man of steel?
Clark: yes I am but when your around my steel defense goes down...
Lana: That happens to me too when your around I feel safe with you...
Clark lifted an eye brow....
So if I happen to do....
Clark slowly moved his hand toward Lana's stomach where she was most ticklish....
THIS!
AH! hahaa!! Clark stop it!
Clark kept tickling Lana and she was laughing.
Okay!!! hahaah... I surrender!
She decided to get him back. She pulled him down for a kiss and slowly moved her hand down to his tummy and started to do the same.
Hey! thats cheating!
Well now it doesn't seem fair to you now does it?
Then after the hours went by they watched movies and ate dinner.
********
The next Morning...
The alarm clock went off and Clark tried to look for the button to stop it but he ended up smashing to pieces.
Lana is going to kill me.... Lana wake up, we got to get to the airport.
Lana then smiled but didn't wake up.
Clark: I will do whatever it takes to get you out of bed Lana....
Lana then groaned.
Clark: I know what your trying to Lana... but you know if i do it we'll never get out of bed and get to Paris.
Lana turned around to Clark with still closed eyes..
Don't worry... we'll get out of bed...
Clark: Nope... come on lana get up..
He then picked her up out of bed and brang her to the bathroom...
Come on I got you out of bed and I think you can do the rest while I'll take a shower.
Lana then opened her eyes in suprise.
Okay I'm up I'm up...
Clark: thats what I thought now get going.
Then Clark was about to walk out of the bathroom until Lana pulled his arm..
Lana: I thought you were going to take a shower while I get ready?
Clark: i just said that to wake you up..
Please? she said with puppy dog eyes
Clark: Lana don't make me go all mother on you now get ready.
Then after Lana got ready Clark went in and took a shower, Lana couldn't help but take a peek.
*****
Now they were off to the airplane and flying to Paris first class.
When they got there there was a limo there waiting for them to take them to the hotel.
**********
Lana: WOW! It's so beautiful!
Clark: I knew you would like it.
Lana: What?
Clark: Uhmm... I like it too.
Phew that was close... If I gave Lana any hint she'll think I planned all this... he thought to himself
Lana: Say how about we go out and explore the beautiful Paris?
Clark: Let's go! hey maybe we could go to the Eiffel Tower?
Lana: Sounds great!
The Eiffet Tower.... Perfect... he thought to himself.
NYC300Z
08-01-2005, 02:35 AM
Nice update! So what does Clark have planned?? PPMS!!
yay, this is so interesting!!! awesome update!!!! clark is really full of surprises!!! i just can't wait for ur next update, so PPM the sooooneeeeeeessstt!!!! :D:D
dreammaster
08-01-2005, 08:37 AM
awesome chapter
LoisNClark
08-01-2005, 09:05 AM
awesome chapter. I'm almost positive i know what he's going to do!!!!!:p
ppms!!!
SVsleuth
08-01-2005, 11:23 AM
Great couple of chapters. I finally caught up. I have a hunch about what he's going to do.......... :)
Karen26
08-01-2005, 01:41 PM
so do i keep posting
binkys711
08-02-2005, 01:55 PM
PPMS!!!cute update!!!
MOOman0618
08-02-2005, 05:18 PM
Very nice update! Lana sneeking a peek! heehee
clana4ev3r
08-02-2005, 07:31 PM
So then they went to the Effiel Tower but stopped by a small restaraunt for lunch. After they finished they went off to the Eiffel Tower.
Clark: You know I heard that a lot of girls got purposed to here.
Lana: Really? I wouldn't mind getting purposed to here.
Clark: So you would like getting purposed to here?
Lana: Yea I think its roman-
Clark: What's wrong Lana?
Lana: YOu aren't going to, purpose to me are you?
Clark: Is there something wrong with that?
Then he got down on one knee.
Clark: Lana Lang, Will you marry me?
Lana: I.. I ... I don't know what to say,...
Clark: Well then yousay yes or no.... hopefully I get a yes?
Lana: uh...
Clark: I don't know what it means...
Lana: Yes...
Clark: Yes?
Lana: YES! YEs! I will marry you!!!
Clark then slipped on the ring and hugged Lana, Then she kissed him,
Lana: Lets go celebrate!
Clark: Alright would you like to take a taxi or go super speed?
Lana: Lets take the faster way.
Then Clark picked up Lana and supersped all over the place . They had the time of there lives.
THen they went back to the hotel.
Lana then put a do not disturb sign on the door knob.
Clark layed on the bed looking at the ceiling.
Then Lana walked over to him and started to kiss his lips and his neck.
Clark: What are we doing???
Lana: I think you have an idea but if you don't want to....
Clark: No complaints here.
Lana was on top on Clark kissing him all over. Then Clark rolled over so he would be on top of her . Then he started to kiss her lips..... her chin.... cheek.... and neck and then again and again. Lana unbuttoned his shirt and pants while Clark pulled off her shirt and pants.
Soon all there clothes were off and they were under covers.
The both of them oved each other when they woke up.
2 months later......
The bride is walking down the isle with a beautiful veil over her face. The maid of honor was Chloe and the bridesmate was Lois. The best man was Pete.
The wedding lasted for about an hour.
"YOu may now kiss the bride" the minister said and Clark kissed Lana.
"I now give you Mr. and Mrs. Clark Kent"
It was official Lana is now Lana Kent. She couldn't believe she would end up marrying Clark. It was not a dream . It was the real thing and Lana was so happy. She couldn't ask for anyone better then Clark Kent.
The End
binkys711
08-02-2005, 07:35 PM
aww...it's over?! time flies!great ending!!!loved your story!!!:D
BriannaD413
08-02-2005, 08:09 PM
Nice story! It was cute, every girl's dream, right? LOL!
LoisNClark
08-02-2005, 11:20 PM
very cute ending. So to see that it's over, but that was a fantastic story. I'm going to miss it;)
dreammaster
08-03-2005, 01:28 AM
nice ending
NYC300Z
08-03-2005, 03:32 AM
Nice story! cute ending!
aaawww, the end already??? waaahhhh, i want more!!!!! lol!!! sweet ending, so i assume that they live happily ever after? :D ;)
MOOman0618
08-03-2005, 11:27 AM
Very nice ending! I'm glad they actually got married.
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-17-2006, 06:05 PM
yea me too i thought that was the best writing i have read in a while
happycamper
08-18-2006, 03:45 PM
A very sweet ending! And a proposal in Paris!! :)
Things actually can work out for the best...
:D :D
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