View Full Version : Love On the Beach (Clana)
clana4ev3r
06-26-2005, 12:12 AM
This is my first time so please be honest of what you think of it...
BEEP.... BEEP... BEEP
Clark: O god..... time to get up...
Martha: Clark get ready for school come down and eat some breakfast.
As Clark got up he supersped downstairs to grab some breakfast.
Martha: Good morning Clark
Clark: Hey Mom...
As clark looked at the clock he supersped away while saying goodbye to his mom.
And clark Left for school.
At School: Clark sees lana in the hallway as he passes by and also sees Jason going up to her with a bouquet of flowers. Clark got real sad real quick as if somebody had just took his heart and stepped on it......
Chloe: HEY CLARK!
Clark didn't answer as he was mezmerized by lana's beauty.(of course blocking out jason) he thought of him and lana in the loft gazing into the sunset.. Clark loved lana so much that he felt like he could just lift her from her feet and and kiss her.
HEY CLARK....... EARTH TO CLARK ANYONE HOME? Chloe asked again
Clark: Oh hey chloe... sorry was a little distracted... clark said in a low voice.
Chloe: Really i didn't notice.. .chloe said jokingly.. .anyways uhmm... I was hoping you could do a huge favor for me.
Clark:exactly what kind of favor?
Chloe: Well I have to go to an internship in Metropolis and I don't wanna leave Lois alone in the house.. So i was wondering if you could.. i don;t know... hangout with her?
Clark: uhhhh..... i don't know chloe.... you know how me and lois get along plus where am i goin to bring her?
Chloe: come on clark pleasssseeeeee??
Chloe said with puppy eyes and and a pout
Clark: eh... alright... but where am i goin to take her?
chloe: THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!! and i don't where to bring her think of soemthing plus you always seem to have bright ideas.
As chloe left, Lana walked up to Clark with a big smile on her face as if she wanted to kiss him.....
well thats some of it i'll post more later
SmallvilleMan
06-26-2005, 12:24 AM
Little too short to get what's going on, but cool, need more.
NYC300Z
06-26-2005, 02:27 AM
Yeah let's see what's really good update soon.
clana4ev3r
06-26-2005, 02:59 AM
okay heres some more... this is a short story just to see what you guys think
Hey Clark.... lana said shyly
Clark: hey Lana.. how are you?
Lana: good... listen i couldn't help over hearing that chloe asked you to hangout with lois and you didn't know where to go so...
Clark eyes widened
Clark:So..... what?
Lana: So maybe you'd like to hangout at the beach with me and jason?
Clark: Uhhhh.... yea sure i'll ask lois.... hopefully she doesn't get beach sick.... he said jokingly
Lana: Well alright then see you then.
Clark watched Lana walk away to her classroom until he couldn't see her anymore.
Loft:
Lois: Hey Smallville
Clark: Hey Lois.. i was wondering if maybe we could...
Lois: Hangout?
how did you know? clark said with a confused look
lois: Chloe told me.. so where we goin to a football game?
Clark: hahaha.. very funny i was thinkin maybe to the beach?
Lois: Whoa! hold up there Smallville! we are not goin to the beach okay? its like a roman- clark stopped lois before she could say another word.
Clark: You didn't let me finish.... I was thinkin goin to the beach with lana and jason....
Lois: Oh...... well then thats okay with me.
you guys probably think that its about lois and clark but its almost getting to the clana part
:)
BriannaD413
06-26-2005, 09:48 AM
Can't wait for more Clana! Please Post soon!
Oh Yeah...I just wanted to let you know that you could talk to me any time for advice. I remember when I was new to this site, it was confusing. I thought that maybe I could help you. You can talk to me on a thread or you can e-mail me.
spacewalker_33.3
06-26-2005, 10:25 AM
keep posting, wanna read more :D
Clana-follower06
06-26-2005, 12:07 PM
Good start, keep up the good work.
ClanaLover
06-26-2005, 02:25 PM
I like it so far keep goin
great start.... u got me intrigued on what's gonna happen next, so plz keep em coming :)
NYC300Z
06-26-2005, 03:42 PM
Yeah can't wait for the Clana so PPMS!!!
binkys711
06-26-2005, 05:31 PM
This is sounding interesting!!!PPMS!!! i wuv Clana!!!Keep posting!!!and soon!!!plz!!!
clana4ev3r
06-26-2005, 11:35 PM
okay here is more... enjoy
The day at the beach wasn't so far away and CLark couldn't wait to see lana at the beach in a suit. Clark and lois were getting ready to meet lana and jason at the beach.
Hurry up Lois! yelled clark We were suppose to meet jason and lana at the beach 20 minutes ago!
lois: Hold your horses smallville! Plus what is your rush?
Lois comes downstairs with a beach towel and sunglasses.
And clark only had on a white tee and shorts
Clark: Come on let's go!
Lois: Alright ,Alright!
They both jump in the truck and head off to the beach. When they got there Clark was instantly attracted to Lana like they had just met.
"She's so beautiful" I wisH i could be with her he whispered to himself.
But what clark didn't know was that Lois overheard what he had juSt said.
Lois: then why aren't you there with her instead of with me?
Clark: Huh? No, Lana and I are just friends
Lois: right........ Well lets go!
Lana: Hey Clark!, hey lois
Clark : hey Lana!, hey jason
Jason: hey lois hey clark
Lois: hello to everyone besides clark she joked
Jason: well whose up for a game of volleyball?
Lana: I'm in
CLark: same here
Lois: sure why not
it was lana and jason against lois and clark. As Clark took off his shirt lana was mezmerized by his bare chest. Lana loved clark but what she didn't know was that clark loved her too.
Jason: Are you alright lana?
Lana: Huh? oh yea.., great.. lets get the game started!
Lois to Clark: Looks like your not the only one checking someone out
Clark to Lois: What are you talking about? Like i said before Lana and I are just friends .
Lois: Sure you are.....
After a few games here and there Lois and Clark were winning. Then jason's phone rang.
Jason answered it: Hello.. yea... okay.. i'll be there in a few minutes...
Then hungup....
Jason: Sorry you guys i gotta go.... Lana do you want to stay or come with?
Lana: uhmm.... I think i'll stay..
kisses lana goodbye...
Jason: bye guys see ya later!
Clark: So what do you want to do now?
Lois: i don't know about you guys but I think i'm goin to go with jason see if he could drop me off.... Hey Jason! can you give me a ride?
It was an awkward moment for lana and clark.
Lana: So.......... What are we goin to do now???
Clark: How about a walk? The sunset seems nice to take a walk..
Clark didn't believe what he had just said he was going to walk wit the girl who he is in love with...Lana was glad that Clark had asked to take a walk....
" sure why not... lana said with a smile..
Clark: Okay lets go...
binkys711
06-26-2005, 11:54 PM
YAY CLANA!!!KEEP POSTING!!!! I'M LIKING IT!!!GETTING TO THE GOOD STUFF!!!PPMS!!!
Clana-follower06
06-27-2005, 12:46 AM
Is there even a beach in Kansas? Oh well, it could be the shore of a lake, right?
NYC300Z
06-27-2005, 01:56 AM
Who cares where the beach is were finally getting some Clana!!
PPMS!!!
spacewalker_33.3
06-27-2005, 03:50 PM
nice update, keep em coming soon
clana4ev3r
06-27-2005, 05:36 PM
a good friend gave me some advice for this part of the story so thank BriannaD413!! GREAT FRIEND!
Clark and Lana go for there walk in the beautiful sunset
Clark: So how are things goin with you and jason?
Lana: Good.... HOw are things with.... uh.. you?
Clark: Great.... so are you hungary?
Lana: Yea lets go bring the stuff to the beach house and go out for some food.
Clark: SOunds great... he said with a big smile.
Lana couldn't help but smile back.
so they brought their things to the beach house and went out for dinner.
At dinner Lana begins to flirt wit Clark, but he holds back knowing she has a boyfriend. Then Lois calls and says that she and jason were having problems were there transportation and won't be back for a day or two and Lois mentions: Smallville, this is your chance with Lana, Jason was flirting with other girls and got phone numbers!
Clark: Really? but i can't do that its just not me.....
Clark didn't realize that Lana heard everything Lois had said and had a huge smile on her face but tried to hide it. The truth was that Lana did love jason but only for a while. Then it started to become clear to her why things didn't worked out between her and jason because she was still in love with Clark. Lana was so hoping that Clark would take the chance with her again.......
Lois to Clark: Tell her how you feel!!
Clark to Lois in a whisper: we are just friends!
Lois: Friends my foot you don't think I see the way you look at her go for it!
Then Lois Hung up.....
Lana: Who was that?
Clark: Lois she said that they were having transportation problems and they won't be back for a day or two....
oh, thats too bad, Lana lied
So you finished with dinner? Clark asked
Lana: Yup, done..
Clark:So you wanna go to the pier and talk?
Lana with a big smile : Yea sure......
Clark being a gentlemen pulled Lana's chair and held hand walking to the pier.
Clark: Lana, I......................
if you wanna hear more post more comments!
binkys711
06-27-2005, 05:39 PM
MF!!!YOU CUT US OFF JUST WHEN IT GOT GOOD!!!!KEEP POSTING!!!!!MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!
SmallvilleMan
06-27-2005, 05:53 PM
nice, always leave people wanting more, just dont do it all the time;)
Rain88
06-27-2005, 06:01 PM
Please post more please please please
Clana-follower06
06-27-2005, 06:06 PM
nice update... PPMS!
julie08
06-27-2005, 06:15 PM
PLEASE POST MORE!!! IT WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART!!
ClarksGirl21
06-27-2005, 08:47 PM
I wanna hear more! I wanna hear more! haha
spacewalker_33.3
06-27-2005, 08:53 PM
i do wanna hear more, a lot more, so plz u need to post quickly~~~
wesley_wyndam_pryce
06-27-2005, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by binkys711
MF!!!YOU CUT US OFF JUST WHEN IT GOT GOOD!!!!KEEP POSTING!!!!!MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!
Binkys is right. I'm not a big Clana fan. But that was a good story.
BriannaD413
06-27-2005, 11:15 PM
Where'd you think of that plot? LOL! I'm glad you liked my idea. PLease post more! I'll be looking forward to it!
I'm glad I could be a friend to you. Have you read my new story? It's called, Effects of Clear Kryptonite. Hope you like it!
NYC300Z
06-28-2005, 01:59 AM
I wanna hear more too! PPMS!!
Karen26
06-28-2005, 05:08 AM
come on you cant leave us hanging i want more i think we all do
yeah clark, go for it!!! lol... wanna hear more, plz post more and just don't leave us hanging like this.... PLLLLEEAAASSEEE??? :D
asmville15
06-29-2005, 06:04 PM
that was great!!please post more!!!:)
peaches4cream
06-30-2005, 03:35 PM
post post post post post post post
clana4ev3r
07-01-2005, 07:46 PM
Clark: I.... uhhh.....
Lana saw how clark was struggling and she smiled.
Lana: you what?
Clark: i lo... or still lo.. clark finally got it out I still love you lana!
Lana was so happy to here those three little words.
Clark was very embarrassed and anxious to see lana's reaction.
Lana: Oh CLark! I love you too!!
*They hug and kiss passionately
Clark: Lana I need to tell you something...
Sure clark what is it? lana said
Clark: There's one little big thing that you need to know about me....
Lana: What is it?
I'm not exactly from here... clark said nervously
Lana: what are you talking about?
Clark: you know how you say that i'm always there and you can't explain things that happen around me?
Lana: yeah....
Clark: well i have special abilities....
sorry guys i gotta end it here because i got to go to work it'll probably be a long time before i start posting again.. but i'd be happy to check out your ideas for the next part because i'm still thinking about what could happen next ;)
binkys711
07-01-2005, 07:48 PM
A LONG TIME 'TILL YOUR NEXT POST!!!:mad::( oh well next time make it wwwwaaayyyy longer! :) ppms!
Rain88
07-01-2005, 08:38 PM
great update this fic is getting real good
Kal-El & Me
07-01-2005, 09:00 PM
Yeah I can't wait to hear your next post. Pleeeaaaasssse post ASAP.
peaches4cream
07-01-2005, 09:13 PM
not cool why did you have to leave us hagin' why why why why why??????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????
oh and great job woth the story by the way
NYC300Z
07-01-2005, 11:47 PM
that was so short! how could u do that, and not update for a long time?! oh well I can't wait hopefully by the time I come back from my trip u'll have updated!!
why did u cut it short??? and we're not gonna have an update for like forever???? waaaaahhhh!!!! lol ..... great story btw. ppms :D
clana4ev3r
07-04-2005, 03:40 AM
Here some more! :)
Lana: what do you mean special abilities?
Clark: HOw about we go back to my house and talk about it?
Lana: uh... yea sure.
So they drive back to the house and go to the loft
Clark: okay. here it goes... you see that unlit candle over there?
Lana: yes...
Then Clark used his heat vision to light up the candle
Lana: How did you? how? what? eh?
Clark: i can kind of shoot fire from my eyes...
Lana: Clark... thats... AMAZING!
Clark: you're not freaked out?
Lana:No i think the gifts you have are just great now we could have a romantic dinner without having to bring a lighter..
Then they both laughed
Then Lana walked up to Clark and gave him a long passionate kiss for about 10 minutes. After she pulled away clark was speechless..
Clark: Wow...
So what else can you do? she asked with her arms wrapped around his neck
Clark: Well....
then in a just a few seconds Clark super sped outside and Lana was confused then she looked out the window and she saw clark holding up the red truck.
Lana: You know you would be very useful to me.... she said with a smile.
Now come back here handsome she said
Clark smiled and in a blink he was in lana's arms again.
Lana: Anything else to show me?
Clark took a sharp object from the table
Lana: what are you doing?
Just then clark stabbed himself wit the sharp object
Lana: Nooooooooooooo! clark!!!!!
Lana couldn't look
Clark: its okay lana i'm okay.
Lana: what ?
Lana saw the sharp object was broken in pieces and clark didn't have a scratch on him
Lana: but how?
Clark: I'm unbreakable...
Lana: wow.. man of steel... anymore
Clark: Just one more...
Clark told lana to pick up something while he wasn't looking.....
Clark then squinted his eyes and x-rayed her hand
Clark: you may feel a bit uncomfortable after i say this... but your are holding lipsitck
Lana: does that mean you have x ray vision?
Clark: yep
Then lana gripped her jacket
Lana: you aren't....
Clark: No.... NO.. i would never...
Lana: always the gentlemen...
Clark: well thats chapter one of my secret...
Lana: Chapter One???
Clark: yea but if you aren't up to it... or tired or overwhelmed by all this maybe we should talk later...
Lana: No i'm fine I wanna know more
Clark: Well lets go on with the meteor rocks.....
waaaahhhhh, i want more!!!! please keep going! :D :D
binkys711
07-04-2005, 01:21 PM
IT'S GETTING GOOD!!!PPMS!!!
RedBullet
07-05-2005, 04:18 PM
Pretty good so far.....why would Lana be super calm? I would picture her crying and running away,oh well....let's get to the good stuff shall we?
clana4ev3r
07-05-2005, 05:23 PM
Originally posted by RedBullet
Pretty good so far.....why would Lana be super calm? I would picture her crying and running away,oh well....let's get to the good stuff shall we?
well Lana loves Clark very much that she doesn't care if he has special abilities becuz he uses them for good not bad. Plus Lana always wondered why he didn't open up to her and now he's opening up to her. Sorry if Lana didn't seem panicky!
alright here is some more....
Lana: Let me guess they gave you your powers?
Clark: No not exactly...
Lana: What do you mean? Then how did you get your powers? I don't understand??
Clark: We'll get to that later.... he said as he gulped
Clark: Meteor rocks make me sick...
Lana: Oh my god! Clark I'm so sorry!
Clark: For what?
Lana: My neckalace it was made out of metor rock!
Clark: its okay.... really he lied
I wasn't okay he couldn't even get within two feet of her because of her neckalace and the fact that he really liked her..... but he let it go because her parents died from the meteor shower and well that was the only part of her parents that she had left with her.
Lana: but....
*Then Clark gave her a kiss and she kissed him back
Clark: Just be glad your with me now...
Lana couldn't help but smile. She felt guilty for wearing the neckalace because it kept Clark away from her and she didn't want that she wanted to be closer to him and now she is..
Clark: And well red k makes me act different..
Lana: What do you mean act different and what do you mean red K?
Clark: Well remember how you were infected by the Nicodemus flower and you acted different?
lana: yes
Clark: Well red k is like that but works differently on me..
Lana was speechless with her mouth open...
Clark was nervous to continue so it was a quiet moment for a while...
Lana: Metropolis.... That date.... that wasn't you was it?
CLark: No it wasn't me... I was on red k....
Lana: That time you asked me out on the date and had our first kiss that wasn't you?
ClarK: no it wasn't me... i'm sorry if i caused you pain when i was under the influence of red k...
Clark put his head down and started to tear... He always felt guilty for causing people around him pain he wished he could turn back time and take back everything he did... Lana was relieved...
Lana lifted his chin kissed him and hugged him
Lana: its okay i forgive you for everything.....
Clark thought to himself "Don't forgive me for everything yet"
He didn't know how to tell Lana that he came during the meteor shower and it was his fault that he parents died...
Alright i gotta say that i'm goin to hawaii tomorrow and i won't be bak till MOnday! so this is the last post till monday! SORRY!
:rolleyes:
binkys711
07-05-2005, 06:31 PM
WHAT!!!! OH MAN!!!! oh well have fun in Hawaii nut when you get back YOUR GONNA POST LIKE CRAZY!!!:lol:
WHAT!!!!! we'll get the next post on Monday??? it's gonna be like eternity, u know!!!! :D:D:D oh well enjoy ur stay in Hawaii!!! just make sure u give that update to us on monday... :D
NYC300Z
07-06-2005, 03:17 AM
oh well have fun and don't forget about us ok?
spacewalker_33.3
07-06-2005, 09:42 PM
hawaii that sounds fun, i'll try that.
just post soon plz :D, and take surf a big wave 4 me!!~
ClanaLover
07-07-2005, 12:16 PM
MONDAY?!?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great update by the way
clana4ev3r
07-10-2005, 06:44 AM
OKAY CLANA LOVERS I'M BACK!! I WAS GONNA START TO POST MONDAY BECAUSE I WAS GOING TO REST BUT I'M GOING TO POST NOW
Lana: so whats this red k?
CLark: red kryptonite
Lana: krypton what?
Clark: Kyrptonite thats what we call it in our planet Krypton
Lana: your not from here?
Clark: NO... I came during the meteor shower that killed your parents my father jor el did it to hide my arrival... and i blame myself everyday that your parents died... it was my fault i'm sorry..
Lana: It's not your fault....
Clark: How could it not be?
Lana: because you had no control over it jor el that sent the meteor shower not the little five year old Clark Kent...
Clark: Why are you so calm over all these things i 've just told you?
Lana: because I love you and thats all that matters....
Clark: What should we do now?
Lana: i don't know about you but i'm tired ..
Clark: would you like to sleep over?
lana: sure but only if we are in seperate rooms..
Clark: of course... you could sleep in my room and i'll sleep on the couch...
Clark went to grab some extra blankets and pillows just in case it got cold.. .
Clark walked lana to his room ...
Lana: Good night Clark Kent
Clark: Good Night Lana Lang Kent...
Lana: what did you say???
"Nothing good night" then clark quickly closed the door nicely
Then when Clark was just about to sleep the phone rang...
Clark: hey Chloe
Chloe do you know what tomorrow is?
Clark: of course i do... she's sleeping over she is really tired.... any ways Chloe I have an idea....
*Tells Chloe the idea*
Clark: okay see you tomorrow at 10am
Then Clark hanged up the phone and as he went to sleep he had a big smile on his face and couldn't wait till tomorrow...
very sorry that its short i posted it at 4:00 in the morning!
wow that was short. thanks for the update though. PPMS!!!
lanaland
07-10-2005, 12:13 PM
Wow..very great uptade...post more
NYC300Z
07-10-2005, 02:53 PM
At least we got an update!! :) PPMS!!!
clana4ev3r
07-10-2005, 07:59 PM
the next morning.... AT 10AM
Clark:Hey sleepyhead time to wake up
Lana didn't budge
Clark: Come on birthday girl time to wake up!
No movement
Maybe this could work
Clark leaned in and gave her a kiss and she kissed him back
then clark pulled back
Lana: if its my birthday you'll keep on kissing me she teased
So then clark gave her another kiss and they were there kissing for about ten minutes.
Clark: Chloe is coming over to pick you up to go shopping
Lana was very curious...
Then there was a knock on the door....
KNOCK KNOCK
Clark: that must be chloe.. so get up and get ready...
Clark ran downstairs to get the door
Hey Chloe
Hey Clark!
Chloe: so how did it go with lana
Clark: Just great she's getting ready.... you have the dress for later?
Chloe: yes everything will be great.. i can't believe you are going to do this...
Then lana came downstairs
Chloe:you ready Mrs kent?
Lana: haha very funny
Chloe: i'll wait for you in the car.. giving a wink at clark
Clark: Lana before you leave
Lana: yes clark
Clark: i just want you to know that i love you very much and happy birthday....
Lana: I love you too clark
*hugs and kisses*
Lana: see you later
Clark: bye
Now clark had to get ready for the suprise gift for lana..
Now it was 6:00 pm
Chloe had dropped off Lana at Clark's house with a beautiful dress on.. Clark couldn't wait till she came through the door and when lana was just about to knock Clark opened the door..
CLark: Ms.Lang he said as he put his arm out to come in
Lana: always the gentlemen
Then they went arm in arm to the dinner table..
Lana: You made all of this? she asked in shock
Clark: of course not i had a little help from my mother
they both sat down for dinner..
after they finished dinner "So how do you like your birthday so far?" Clark asked
Lana: Well planned and perfect...
Clark: great then you'll likethe last part of your gift...
Lana: theres more?
Clark: Yup wait in the living room i'll meet you there..
as Lana went to the living room Clark ran upstairs to get her present and came back down in a few minutes ( not using his super speed)
Clark sat next to Lana
Lana:I really had a great time Clark
Clark: Glad to hear that
*Then Lana leaned in to give him a kiss*
So whats this suprise that you have for me? Lana asked curious of what it was
Clark: Lana I've loved you the moment i laid eyes on you and i was only five years old. I'm sorry for not telling you my secret sooner because when i did tell you, you still loved me . No matter what happens i will always love you. thats why i want to give you this gift
Clark cleared his throat
Then Clark stood up and got down on one knee.......
opened the box and when Lana saw what it was
Lana started to tear up...
ClanaLover
07-10-2005, 11:04 PM
OOOOOooooohhh I know what it is!!!!!!! But I'm not sayin... PPMASAP!!!!!!!!!!!
ILoveSmallville4ver
07-10-2005, 11:52 PM
Great story, I have a really good idea of whats inside the box. I wrote a chapter just like that for my story! That is a coincedence. You're a really good writer, update soon!
NYC300Z
07-11-2005, 12:46 AM
Yeah great update can't wait to see what's in the box!! lol j/k I'm pretty sure i know what it is! PPMS!!
binkys711
07-11-2005, 01:04 AM
YAY!!!WHOOPY!!!PPMS!!!I WANNA SEE HER REACTION TO THE....you know what!;)
Originally posted by ILoveSmallville4ver
Great story, I have a really good idea of whats inside the box. I wrote a chapter just like that for my story! That is a coincedence. You're a really good writer, update soon!
yeah, i thought i've read a similar part of the story somewhere in this forum...... :eek: ;)
ILoveSmallville4ver
07-11-2005, 12:11 PM
Originally posted by kewl
yeah, i thought i've read a similar part of the story somewhere in this forum...... :eek: ;)
I wrote the same thing about the mom helping, the dress, the food, Chloe helping, it being her birthday and 6 p.m. I posted it about a week ago. Thats ok though. If you can get ideas from my work then go for it.
clana4ev3r
07-11-2005, 05:21 PM
yea sorry about that.. its just that after i read your story i got an idea... the idea of the story inspired me! :)
clana4ev3r
07-12-2005, 03:26 AM
Alright here is the ending...
I showed her the ring and
Will you marry me Lana Lang?
It was a very silent moment. I don't know what I would do if she said no. All I knew was that I would be heartbroken if she did.
I was so nervous of her answer.
Clark: Are you okay Lana?
Lana: Yea... I'm... fine
Clark: If this is too much and you don't want to marry me its okay... he lied.
So Clark got up and as he was about to walk away...
Lana:Wait
Clark stopped but didn't say a word.
Lana: Ask me again, please.
Clark: Lana Lang, will you marry me?
Lana: Yes!
Clark: Really?
Lana: Yes! Yes! I do!
Then Lana walked over to Clark, tip toed, and gave him a kiss like she did in Nicodemus.
After, Clark put the ring on Lana's finger.
They both sat on the couch gazing into each others eyes, both thinking about there wedding.
Clark: Lana.
Lana: Yes Clark?
Clark: I want you to have the wedding of your dreams, don't let anything hold you back.
Lana leaned in and gave him a kiss.
Then eventually during the night they fell asleep in each others arms.
The Next Morning
RING.... RING..... RING.....
Clark answered the phone before it could wake up Lana. It was Chloe.
Chloe: So how did it go!?!?!
Clark: It went great she said YES!
Chloe: Thats Great Clark! So have you decided when the wedding is going to be??
Clark: No not yet... Chloe calm down we been engaged for only 24 hours!
Chloe: I just can't believe my two best friends are getting married!!
Clark: By the way hows Lois? Did she get back from that transportation problem?
Chloe: Oh yea she's been great.. real great
Clark: What do you mean?
Chloe: Ever since she went with Jason they just got along so well. Now there a couple!
Clark couldn't believe what he heard Lois and Jason together???
Clark: Are you serious??
Chloe: Yes I am
Clark: Well in that case could you tell Jason about Lana and me?
Chloe: Sure but I don't think he will care much. Listen to this...
then Chloe held up the phone to where Jason and Lois were sitting....
Lois: heheehehe... stop it... hahahaa
Jason: No you stop it......
And they started making out ... again...
Chloe: Do you see what I mean??? they been at it ever since they got back!! it 's driving me nuts!
Clark: Its okay Chloe...
Whose that? Lana asked in the background..
Clark: Its Chloe.. you want to talk to her?
Lana: Yea
Clark: Well you have to get the phone from me first.
Chloe heard what was going on in the background and said to herself "Great now you two!"
Lana: Give me the phone Clark!
Clark was running around the kitchen like a five year old...Then when Lana wasn't looking he super sped behind her.
Clark: Over here
Once Lana turned around there lips met and they were kissing...
But then lana snatched the phone from Clark.
Lana: Hey CHloe... sorry for the wait.. my fiancee was playing games like a five year old...
Chloe: hahaha.. its cool... so How are you?
Lana: Great!
Chloe: Congrats Mrs. Kent!
Lana: I'm not Mrs. Kent just yet..
Chloe: Did Clark tell you about Lois and Jason??
Lana: Oh my god Jason.. I forgot aobut him.. i nee to tal-
Chloe: Lana don't worry Lois and Jason are quite happy...
Chloe again put the phone up to let Lana hear what was going on..
Lana:Well i guess that takes care of him...
Chloe: Your telling me its driving me nuts!
Lana: Just hang in there!
Chloe: well I got to go talk to you later.. If i don't leave now someone is going to get kicked out
Lana: hahha.. Bye Chloe!
Clark made breakfast and coffee during the conversation between Chloe and Lana.
Here you are Mrs. Kent..
Thank you Mr. Kent
After Breakfast
Lana: Well I better get changed and go out to plan our wedding..
Clark: You already picked out a date?
Lana: yes Sept 13 two months from now..
ClarK: Alright see you later then..
Kiss goodbye...
Clark where are you going?
upstairs and change?
Aren't you forgetting something?
CLark thought for a moment....
Oh yeah!
Clark remembered that Lana didn't drive here so he had to drop her off!
Lana: Yea
So Clark drove Lana to her apartment.
Lana got ready and went out to pick up Chloe for wedding planning....
*Two Months Later* September 13, 2005
Jonathan: This is a big day for you son.
Clark: Yea it is he said nervously..
Jonathan: Clark I want to give you something..
He hands it to Clark.
Clark: It's a compass
Jonathan: Yes it is... It's a Kent Family Tradition... My father gave it to me on my wedding day just in case i got lost walking down the isle...
Clark: Thanks Dad!
Clark hugs his father..
Lana's Dressing Room
Martha: I can't believe Clark is going to marry you Lana.
Lana: I can't believe it either..
Martha: I am going to love you as my daughter!
Lana: Thanks Mrs. Kent
Martha gives her a hug.
The wedding is beginnning
Chloe and Pete walk down the isle (yes pete)
Next comes Lois and Jason
Then comes Clark with his mom
Then everybody stands up as the bride song plays
Lana comes down the isle with Jonathan in a beautiful dress with a garter.
As the wedding went on for about and hour they finally came to the end. "You may now kiss the bride." Clark leaned in and kissed her.
" I now present to you for the first time Mr. and Mrs. Clark Kent.
I couldn't believe it. I was married to Lana Lang, I would never had thought this day would come but it did and its official. After all the things that we went through it came down to this.
Then the bouquet of flower was thrown.
Then Clark and Lana road off to there honeymoon in the beautiful sunset.
You'd never guess who caught the bouquet of flowers... the awsome incredible reporter CHLOE SULLIVAN!!!!! :eek:
NYC300Z
07-12-2005, 04:49 AM
Great Update! I really like how u remembed the compass!!
So it's over?? Why does it have to stop there??
clana4ev3r
07-12-2005, 04:52 AM
Originally posted by NYC300Z
Great Update! I really like how u remembed the compass!!
So it's over?? Why does it have to stop there??
Well because I'm all out of ideas and plus I'm working on another story :)
so lana is now officially Mrs. Kent!!!! great story!!! thanks!
NYC300Z
07-12-2005, 06:40 PM
oh ur working on another story? That's cool then can't wait!!
binkys711
07-13-2005, 12:26 AM
YAY!!!SO AWESOME UPDATE!!!AWESOME STORY!!!GREAT JOB!!!;):D
Clark&LanaObsessed
07-13-2005, 04:05 PM
that was awesome WOOHOO LANA KENT! great story!
peaches4cream
07-18-2005, 12:51 AM
to bad i is a great story
ClanaLover
08-09-2005, 11:22 AM
Originally posted by kewl
so lana is now officially Mrs. Kent!!!! great story!!! thanks!
She isn't a Mrs. Kent yet, she's only a Ms. Kent. :p ;) teehee great story!
... I still think Lana Kent sounds weird... I know! Lana El! :lol:
Cardinal
08-09-2005, 11:55 AM
If Lana's really "Lana El," Clark would still have an "L El" in his life! :D
ClanaLover
08-09-2005, 11:57 AM
lol SVsleuth was right, you are funny. lol
that was a great story..........
ClanaLover
08-10-2005, 01:54 PM
yeah...
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08-13-2006, 12:57 PM
that was great
emsfan
08-13-2006, 12:59 PM
I just done reading and it was really awesome update soon!!!!!!!:)
*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-13-2006, 01:41 PM
i thought the story is great
treker
08-15-2006, 04:28 PM
nice fic
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