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Blairwtchprogct
05-09-2005, 09:15 PM
Fatherhood (An Evan Story)

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Title: Fatherhood
Summary: It starts out a week after Clark and Lana fund Evan in Evan’s field. But this time there is no disease to kill him, and Clark and Lana take to raising him on their own.
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“Clark Kent! Wake up! The meeting with the lawyer is in twenty minutes and you haven’t done you chores yet!”

On the other side of the house, a groggy teenage boy started to wake up. Clark Kent had spent the night up with his new boy. Evan had been up crying all night, only falling asleep sometime after dawn, leaving Clark to collapse into bed fully dressed and exhausted.

“Five more minutes, mom!” He yelled back, even though he was already standing up next to his bed. “Oh no you don’t! How are you supposed to get custody of a child when you can’t even get out of bed in the morning?” Clark smiled at this and supersped into clothes and downstairs. Hs father was feeding Evan a bottle, and his mother was heating up some leftover waffles.

“Long night?” They greeted him. “You have no idea. He was up all night and didn’t sleep until the sun came up. The only time he’s calm is when I hold him…” He glanced at the baby boy. Evan was half asleep, dangling in Jonathan’s arms, sucking on a bottle. Clark smiled. So now he felt like sleeping?

“It’ll get easier. You’ll get a rest when the girls take him shopping later for clothes and other baby stuff. Lex called. He says that because of your record it shouldn’t be any problem getting Evan register as your son.” Clark grinned. He wanted to cry. He just loved the little boy so much…. “Lana will be known as his mom. Legally anyways we’ll just have to have her sign the papers when she stops by later today. Until then; off to the lawyers we go!”

Clark grabbed the baby bag off the Chair and leaned down to hold Evan. He was ready for a nap, or else he would get cranky. Luckily one of his mother’s friends had given them a baby-sized car seat to carry the little tyke in. It was hard to believe that in merely a few days Evan would be his…
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Okay. New idea. I'm serious though. I Need your comments!

Blairwtchprogct
05-10-2005, 06:02 PM
The trip to the lawyer’s office was pretty uneventful. Lex had everything taken care of. They just needed Lana to sign the papers. As soon as they got home, Clark put Evan in his playpen and hit the couch.. He was on baby duty until Lana got there and he could probably get some much needed sleep in the time before then. But as soon as he lay down, Evan started to get fussy.

“Oh come on little guy. Just let Daddy sleep for a little while okay?” He held him in his arms and the crying instantly stopped. Evan gazed at him curiously. “Fine. Why don’t you sleep with Daddy?” Holding him in the crook of his arm and letting his head rest on his elbow. “Comfortable?” Evan closed his eyes. “Good boy.” He closed his own. A voice soon woke him.

“Oh Clark do be careful. You know how restless you can get….. Lana will be here in a few minutes. Cant you wait?” It was his mother.

“We’ll be fine. I’m too tired to move anyways.....” Martha smiled and left them to rest. Clark rolled his head over laying it on top of Evan’s. He was asleep before Martha had completely left the room.
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“Oh he’s sleeping!” Lana exclaimed. Clark was still out cold, his head still resting on the baby’s. Chloe soon walked out of the kitchen and gasped aloud at the two boys on the couch. They looked adorable. “Should we wake them?”

Lana reached down to brush the hair out of Clark’s eyes. “No. Martha told me Clark was up all night with him. I bet we can just take Evan and go...” She reached down and pulled the boy out from Clark’s limp grasp. Clark moaned quietly and rolled on to his side, grabbing one of the couch cushions to hold on to. The girls shared glances before breaking into a fit of silent giggles. The giggles intensified when they heard his barely audible but obvious snoring.

“Oh poor baby...” Chloe mumbled, between giggles. It wasn’t that often that Clark let his guard down like this. Lana snorted and Clark shot straight up. His confused gaze soon when to the pillows to the girls; who only laughed harder. “I’m sorry, Clark.” She coughed out and they ran out of the room.

“What....?” He looked around. No baby was in sight. Whatever... He lay back down, wrapping a blanket around him, and fell back to sleep within seconds.
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He was out for an easy two hours, maybe more. When he finally did wake up, it was getting dark. He stretched before walking to then kitchen, although he probably slept right through dinner. His parents were sitting at the table. They stopped talking when they saw him.

“Hey there sleepyhead. Do you feel better? You’ve been out all afternoon.” Clark walked over to the fridge, trying to smooth his bangs back to his face. “Yeah. I have a feeling I’ll be taking many more naps lately. Where is Evan anyways?”

“Shopping with Lana and Chloe. They should be back soon. You hungry? You slept right through dinner. We didn’t want to wake you....” Clark sat down at the table with his soda, rubbing his eyes. “Thanks. You probably wouldn’t have been able to if you tried. But I remember you mentioning chicken this morning..?”

The two parents smiled and Martha headed over to the fridge to get the food, mid way there the door opened reveling two girls and a baby. They stopped when they say him, and burst into giggles again. Clark stood up and walked away. They stomped after him.

“But Clark; My sleeping beauty!”
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OKay. I need your comments.

Tell me your thought.

Renee28
05-10-2005, 06:42 PM
You have a good writing style, and I like the way you write the characters and the interactions between them. The only problem is, it's not believable that an unrelated, unmarried teenage boy and girl would be allowed to adopt a baby together. I wonder if that might be the reason you haven't got a lot of reviews yet, because I know as soon as I saw that part, it set up a kind of mental block for me. I know this is fanfic -- and "Smallville" fanfic at that -- so lots of weird things can happen, but just speaking for myself, I always like a dash of realism in there with the fantasy. :)

I wonder if you might consider rewriting it so that Clark's parents adopt the baby and we see him really getting into the older brother role, or else some other adult they know adopts him and they get to see him all the time. I know it's a pain to have to rewrite when you've already started, so you may not want to. But it's just a suggestion.

smallvillewolf17
05-10-2005, 08:04 PM
more more more more

Renee28
05-10-2005, 08:32 PM
Oh, I forgot to say I liked the part with Jonathan holding the baby. :D Man, I would have loved to see that in "Ageless."

smallvillewolf17
05-11-2005, 11:28 PM
i agree with you, Renee28.

Clark&lana4eva
05-17-2005, 03:41 PM
post more

Kal-El & Me
05-21-2005, 10:37 AM
I agree with Renee 28 a bit. But I did enjoy reading it. Besides you're just suppose to have fun.

for some reason I couldn't stop laughing. I think it had something to do with Lana and Choe's giggling.

spacewalker_33.3
05-26-2005, 08:51 AM
really nice...u have a nice way to write...keep going!!can't wait for more!!!

Blairwtchprogct
06-05-2005, 05:18 PM
i have seven other chapters that i've posted on my other website but it seems as if it wouldn't really be wanted here.


the other websites loved it. so i really don't get what the problem was.

NYC300Z
06-06-2005, 04:59 AM
Hey I wanna read it I don't have a problem I think it's really cute Clark and Lana Mom and Dad....

Clark&lana4eva
06-07-2005, 05:20 PM
i dont have a prob either its called fanFICTION for a reason its doesnt have 2 make sense if ur not gonna keep going tell me where i can read the complete version u posted

spacewalker_33.3
06-09-2005, 01:13 PM
yeah, i agree with Clark&lana4eva and with NYC300Z , cause its reawlly good so far... and having clark and lana as parents is a nice idea ^_^

binkys711
06-11-2005, 03:28 PM
I LOVE IT IT'S REALLY SWEET!!!!!!KEEP POSTING!!!!!WHY HAVEN'T YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!! POST! POST! POST! POST! POST! POST!!!!!

binkys711
06-15-2005, 10:51 PM
DUDE IT'S BEEN LONG ENOUGH!!!!PUT AN END TO YOUR LAZINESS AND START WRITING FOR YOUR ADORING FANS!!!!CLANA SHALL LIVE!!!!!!!!

peaches4cream
06-17-2005, 08:16 PM
were are the other seven chapters at?????????????????????????

Blairwtchprogct
06-20-2005, 01:18 AM
The next morning Jonathan walked down the steps quietly. It was time to do his chores. Trying not to creak any steps, he tiptoed past Clark’s room, only to find him sitting up in a rocking chair holding what appeared to be a mass of blankets. His eyes were closed but his mouth was moving. Jonathan inched closer, trying to hear the words. Clark was softly; singing a song from his childhood.
Little child, my baby sweet
I play your loving lullabies
As we caress and rock to sleep
Now close your angel eyes
Sleep my baby fair.
as we hold each other tight
Rockabye sweetheart
a kiss…..sweet dreams good night.
The song ended. Evan must have quieted down. Clark stood up and walked over to the crib and placed Evan in it. He turned around rubbing his eyes. When he opened them he found himself face-to-face with his father.

“I didn’t think we had an audience.” He mumbled. Jonathan chuckled and walked over to put on a hand on his shoulder. “Why don’t you let me take him for awhile? Today you stay home from school. Get some things done. I’ll have Chloe pick up your homework...” Clark moved so that his head rested on Jonathan’s shoulder. This whole thing with the baby, and school... It was overwhelming. Not to mention that he was running on three hours sleep and no food in his system. He felt his father wrap his arms around his middle, squeezing him tightly. Soon there were tears rolling down his face. Why am I crying? He thought suddenly. At the moment he really didn’t care; he just wanted some rest and relaxation. And maybe some pancakes......

“How long have you been up Clark?” Jonathan asked, pulling away. Clark looked at the floor, wiping away his tears. “I haven’t been to sleep yet.” Jonathan’s eyes widened and he pushed Clark towards the bed. Clark lay down gratefully. Sleepy eyes watched the man bend down, picking up a baby, and head towards the door.

“I’ll wake you up for breakfast.” Clark smiled at him. “No you won’t” And rolled over. Sleep was coming fast. Jonathan watched him; flashing him a fond smile he didn’t see.

When Clark woke up it was nearing two in the afternoon. He felt better then he had in days. Slipping on a pair of sweatpants over his boxers, he headed downstairs in the pursuit of food. His mother greeted him; his father had started his chores long ago. She greeted him warmly with a plate of food.

“It’s a little cold; but I expected you to wake up a lot earlier. But it’s still good.” Clark sat down at the table and his mom brought him a plate of pancakes and eggs. How did she know?

“Now; you’ve got errands to run. As soon as you wake up a little and take a shower you can take Evan to the store and buy the things that Lana forgot.” Clark nodded and swallowed. He read the list: formula, baby carrier, pacifiers, diapers, bottles... The list went on and on. When he was finished he headed up the stairs to the shower. By the time he was out Martha had the baby cleaned and dressed.

“Thanks mom. We’ll be back soon.” She smiled and they left.
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i forgot about this website.

silly me.

smallvillewolf17
06-20-2005, 02:22 AM
please keep it coming.

peaches4cream
06-20-2005, 10:05 AM
what will happen next when clark goes to the store?and did he misss at school??did lana ever sign the papers??? poor clark has to stay up at all times in the night what a shame........

binkys711
06-20-2005, 11:23 AM
YAY FINALLY IN UPDATE!!!WE WANT MORE!!!PLZ!!!

ILoveSmallville4ver
06-20-2005, 12:52 PM
That is a really cute story

kewl
06-20-2005, 01:26 PM
really cute... plz keep em going

NYC300Z
06-21-2005, 03:49 AM
wow that was a long time...don't forget about us anymore ok?

Hope the next update doesn't take nearly as long!

Blairwtchprogct
06-22-2005, 07:04 PM
“Realistic breast milk... We don’t need that do we little guy?” Clark was at the grocery store. They were halfway down the list. This whole shopping-for-baby thing was a lot harder then he had thought. Evan was watching him, giggling every once in awhile. “Ooooh this one is on sale. You don’t mind store brand do you?” he glanced down; Evan had fallen asleep. Typical baby. “I guess not.” He threw it into the cart.

As he walked on he realized something; people were staring. He stared back giving them a look hat said: What? They quickly went on with their shopping. What was that all about? He thought. He glanced down at the baby. Oh. They think he’s mine. Maybe this adoption thing isn’t such a good idea after all. I’m not sure if I’m ready to be a daddy... Taking one last look down at his little passenger, he walked on. This was going to be a long shopping trip.
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“Come on baby. Up to the house we go.” Clark mumbled. He may have super powers but carrying a baby and several shopping bags was not an easy task. He wasn’t allowed to use supersped with Evan in tact unless it was absolutely necessary. Who knows what it would do to him?

He ended up taking two trips. This time his father was the one to greet him. He took the bags and Clark set down the baby carrier, Evan still in tact.

“Clark. How long has he been sleeping?” His eyes were wide. Clark at him: What did he do now? “A couple hours. Why” Jonathan gave a nervous laugh. “He’s not going to sleep at all tonight. And you’re on baby duty. Nice going, Champ.” He patted him on the shoulder. He was kidding right?



Jonathan’s guess was eerily accurate. Evan cried for the majority of the night. Clark sat in the rocking chair rocking him back and forth, trying to stay vigil at his side. Eventually the sun rose up and Evan dozed off. Great; Clark Kent and his nocturnal baby..... He thought groggily. Even worse it was Monday, and he was due at school in a few hours.

Setting Evan in his crib, he started to get dressed. He picked his baggiest jeans and his comfiest sweater. He walked downstairs into the deserted kitchen and slid into an empty chair, holding his head in his hands. His lack of food was making him dizzy and he grabbed a box of cereal and milk and sat back down. It was going to be a very, very long day.
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well. these parts have been written for awhile.

so updates shouldn't be that hard to come by as long as you kepe the comments coming.

julie08
06-22-2005, 07:29 PM
great update please update as soon as you can!!!

Smallville'sChick1989
06-22-2005, 10:04 PM
Aww... This story is so sweet! I love it so much! I hope you update it real soon! ~Stacey~ :)

binkys711
06-22-2005, 11:41 PM
YAY!!!!I LIKE IT!!!POST MORE & SOON!!!PLZ!!!

NYC300Z
06-23-2005, 01:15 AM
Yeah sounds good!! Keep the updates coming!

Blairwtchprogct
06-27-2005, 03:04 PM
School was... Weird I guess you could say. Clark heard the whispers behind his back. He heard the rumors that he had gotten some girl pregnant. They couldn’t believe that he had taken some random baby off the streets. But then again: Who would? It wasn’t very natural. Chloe tried to stop them, but the rumor mill was just too strong.

Clark got a note 6th period. It said clearly:

Clark-
I called your mom. Tonight it’s you me and the boy for movie night. We need to talk about those papers though. After movie night I am taking Evan, no matter what you say. It is my turn. I found him too you know. Meet me at the talon at the 9th period bell, okay? We’ll go back to your house.
-Lana

Ninth period he went over to the Talon. Lana wasn’t there yet. Chloe was typing away at her computer, typing away at some news story. She greeted him without taking her eyes off the screen.

“Well if it isn’t Papa Kent stopping by the old’ Torch for a visit. When do I get to see the little devil? I must say that he grew on me fast” Clark smiled. Monster was more like it.

“Actually, Lana’s taking him for the night. You’ll have plenty of time to see him. All night in fact....” Chloe’s eyes widened.

“What do you mean by that?” Just that second Lana walked in carrying a backpack and her own version of Clark’s baby bag.

“Ready to go?” Clark nodded and flashing one more smile at Chloe, walked out the door.

“Clark Kent get you farm boy ass back here! What did you mean by that?” She started to scream. “I need my eight hours!!!!”
They arrived at the Kent Farm around five, after a little stop at the store for more formula. When they walked into the kitchen hey were greeted with an sight. Martha had Evan lying butt naked on the dining room table, trying to feed him a bottle and change his diaper at the same time. Clark was sure that if the diaper wasn’t lodged in her mouth, there would be some swear word coming out of it...

Clark rushed over and grabbed the diaper and Martha moved out of the way, trying her best not to move the nipple out of Evan’s mouth. He gurgled happily and kicked up at Clark. Clark laughed in response.

“I’m getting pretty good at these..” He muttered slapping on some baby powder and strapping a diaper over him. He held him out to Lana, who had finished putting away the groceries. She took him and started to talk to him. Clark could hear him giggle from the other room. Clark walked into the living room to join them. They had some time to kill, after all.

spacewalker_33.3
06-27-2005, 03:21 PM
cant wait for more, plz post soon~

binkys711
06-27-2005, 03:25 PM
Originally posted by Blairwtchprogct
Clark rushed over and grabbed the diaper and Martha moved out of the way, trying her best not to move the nipple out of Evan’s mouth.
ewww martha breast feeding that's a picture i would like to avoid!!!:rolleyes: :eek: oh well i guess it's only natural :p :\

BTW POST LONGER!!!AFTER MAKINGUS WAIT THIS LONG!!!YOU MUST POST LONGER!!!PLZ!!!FOR THE SAKE OF MANKIND!!!well maybe not mankind but for us readers at least!;):D
PPMS!!!

NYC300Z
06-28-2005, 01:46 AM
Hey it could be a bottle nipple right? that's what i was thinking, but yeah post longer k?

Blairwtchprogct
06-28-2005, 04:51 PM
As night fell, Clark sat down to set the VCR. They would be watching some eighties cowboy movie that he had never heard of. Lana claimed it to be a classic. It was nearing eight o’clock and Evan was passed out for a few hours. It was close enough to night that he could sleep a little.

They settled on the couch. Clark wasn’t exactly sure what to do with himself. He wasn’t even watching the movie; it seemed like forever that he had done anything with his friends. This was just a movie with two really good friends, nothing more. With that thought Clark relaxed a little.

He found himself laying down an resting his head on the armrest across from Lana’s lap, his shoulder slightly digging into her thigh. What am I doing? He thought. He tensed up, not sure what he should do. Lana put her hand on his back and forced him to settle down. He did, and started to stare at the movie. He wasn’t really taking any of it in. His mind was sort of blank. He yawned and nuzzled his head further into the armrest. It was such a pretty night.....
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He was riding on a horse, his hair flying back in the wind. He felt strangely at ease, the gallops of the horse coming in tune with his heartbeat. He had never felt this alive. He looked around. He seemed to be in an empty clearing. There should have been dust flying in his eyes, the wind was blowing, but nothing came. He looked to the right where a young boy was riding long with him, his feet barely fitting into the stirrups. Clark stared. Why was this random kid at his ranch? The boy stared back, and shot him a big toothy smile.

“Hi daddy!” He called. Clark stared. Was this Evan in a few years? “Evan?” He asked the boy stopped smiling. The horse’s footsteps grew quicker and were taking Clark away. He didn’t want to leave. The boy started screaming.

“Daddy. Daddy.” His voice morphed into something more manly. His words changed. What was happening? “Clark. Clark. Clark!”

Clark opened his eyes. It was dark. He lifted his head slightly. The clock on the VCR read two-thirty in the morning. He was in his living room, curled into a ball on the couch. Glancing down he saw that he had been lying in a rather large drool spot. Groaning he looked at the voce who had woken him, his father was leaning over him.

“Welcome back, Champ. Nice spot you have there.” Clark didn’t laugh. He had fallen asleep his and Lana’s movie night. Even worse he had fallen asleep in her lap. Had he drooled on her, too? He sat up. “I don’t know what happened....” He mumbled.

“You were tired. It’s fine. We can talk about this in the morning. Go to bed.” Clark stood up, but soon turned around. “But....” Jonathan pointed to the stairs. “Bed.” Clark retreated upstairs.
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Last one was a bit of a free-bee.

2 websites and noone ever thought it was an actual nipple

You have to be either pregnant or recently pregnant ot produce breast milk.


Nice imagination, though.

binkys711
06-28-2005, 05:53 PM
jeje!!!oops!!! my bad!!!

thanxz for the update though!!!PPMS!!

spacewalker_33.3
06-28-2005, 06:42 PM
keep em coming soon!!

NYC300Z
06-29-2005, 01:55 AM
LOL yeah oh well

PPMS!

peaches4cream
07-01-2005, 01:57 PM
keep it comin'

NYC300Z
07-12-2005, 07:32 PM
Hey What happned to u!! Come back!!

Blairwtchprogct
07-13-2005, 01:36 PM
By nine that morning, Clark was in the shower. He was in a surprising good mood, considering the circumstances. His radio was on high, and he was silently singing along. He slipped a towel around his waist and went into his room. His bed was unmade, and he had his own clothes and Evans thrown around the room. He slipped on a pair of boxers and sped around the room tidying up.

He searched for clothes. Almost all of his jeans were missing. He walked into the hallway and towered over the stairs.

“Mom?” She yelled that she was in the living room. He walked toward her voice, scratching an area near the waistband of his boxers. “Where are my jeans?”

“They’re in the... Clark!” He glanced up from where he had been looking. His mother and Lana had been talking in the living room. Lana was staring at him, giving him the once-over. Her eyes rested on a spot a little lower than his mid-section. He had known that he was almost naked, but he was unaware that there was company. His eyes widened as he stood there.

“They’re in your closet. Go put them on!” Her urgent voice seemed to snap him out of his trance and he hurried up the stairs. How had he not looked in his closet? He slipped on the first pair he saw and ran a comb through his hair. After he was fully dressed he walked downstairs and took the empty seat in the armchair.

“I think I’ll go make more coffee now” Martha muttered. Clark and Lana exchanged glances. After a few moments Lana spoke.

“Nice boxers.” Clark turned four shades of red. “How did I know they would be blue?” Clark shrugged he’d never been that naked in front of a girl before. A small part of him was happy it had happened. Practice? Lana spoke again, breaking his train of thought. “Well. Whether we get custody or not, we have a parenting class to attend in twenty minutes. You just had to choose today to sleep in didn’t you?” Clark had barely enough time to mutter an apology before she dragged him out of the house.

As Clark was putting the keys into the ignition his vision got blurry and he was dizzy enough to have to rest his head on the steering wheel. Lana put a hand on his back. “Are you okay, big boy?” she asked using her little pet name. Clark rose his head up and nodded. The attack had left as fast as it had come. “Yeah, I think so.” They drove off.
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The car was silent on the way there, both lost in their own thoughts. Clark couldn’t help but feel embarrassed about the night before. He tried to break the uncomfortable silence.

“I’m sorry about last night” he mumbled turning his attention towards the floor mats. Lana grinned at his embarrassment.

“I’m just glad you got some good sleep.” Clark smiled at her. He opened his mouth to say something when she continued. “Even if you did drool all over my favorite jeans...” Clark punched her playfully on the shoulder. A low whimper in the back seat; he had forgotten that they had brought Evan along. He let him suck on his finger.

“What’s the matter, baby? Did mean ol’ Lana scare you?” Evan giggled and Lana pretended to be offended.

“You know? I think I like you better when you’re sleeping.” Clark grinned and they drove on.
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chatroom + parents + conversations about their daughters love life = grounding

sorry.

dreammaster
07-13-2005, 07:36 PM
that was awesome

binkys711
07-13-2005, 10:21 PM
YAY!!!GREAT UPDATE!!!PPMS!!!:D

NYC300Z
07-14-2005, 04:09 AM
Great Update!! Continue soon!!

NYC300Z
07-14-2005, 04:09 AM
Great Update!! Continue soon!!

NYC300Z
07-14-2005, 04:09 AM
Stupid Computer....sorry about that my comp has problems....

clana_never_give_up
10-16-2006, 12:53 AM
Hey I think you should update this story........it's so good.

It's got all the parts to a great fanfic.

If your not could you PM me the other website where you are posting it, so I can read the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sakura
10-16-2006, 10:47 AM
keep it up :)

clanalove101
11-15-2006, 10:39 PM
GREAT PPMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!