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smallvillewolf17
12-02-2004, 09:54 PM
Clark - In the Caves - After School
Part 1

Clark enters the caves. He looks around to try and find the symbol that is on Lana's back. He sees it. He walks towards the keyhole in the cavewall.

"Why did you do this to her? Why did you do this to the woman I love? Change her back!! Do you hear me, Jor-El?"

Clark starts to walk away. He stops and turns. As he faces the keyhole, Lana walks in. She sees Clark staring at the cavewall, and pasues.

"If you think putting that symbol on Lana's back will make me accept you as my father, then you are wrong. Jonathan Kent is my father!! You are not my father!! You are a monster!! I will never accept you as my father!! Never!!"

A flash of light shoots from the keyhole and into Clark.

Lana gasps

Gasping and groaning, Clark feels the light go through his body. His eyes turn red. As the light goes back into the keyhole, Clark's eyes turn back to their original color. Clark falls to the cave floor.

Lana runs over to Clark.

30 MINUTES LATER...

Lana is sitting next to Clark's motionless body. Tears running down her face.

Clark's eyes start to open.

Lana looks at Clark.

Lana - Clark, are you alright?

Clark - Yeah, What Happened? How did I get on the floor?

Lana - A flash of light went through your body and it knocked you unconious.

Clark - Oh!, You saw that?

Lana - Yep, Could you tell me why you were talking about my tattoo to a cavewall? You sounded like you were talking to your brith father.

Clark - You heard that?

Lana - Yep, Can you tell me?

Clark - Lana, You weren't believe me if I told you.

Lana - Try me.

Clark - Come by my loft tomorrow and I will tell you why.

Lana walks out of the caves.

End of Part 1

The story gets better. I promise. Tell me what you think. Part 2 will come if I get repsonses.

K4L--3L
12-02-2004, 10:08 PM
u got my attention

UWOCheerJason
12-02-2004, 10:10 PM
more more, i need more :P

smallvillewolf17
12-02-2004, 10:11 PM
if three more people reply, then i will

K4L--3L
12-02-2004, 10:13 PM
even if they dunt u shuld..wuld be a waste to start n then give up

smallvillewolf17
12-02-2004, 10:20 PM
i'll give you part 2 tomorrow after I get home from school

UWOCheerJason
12-02-2004, 10:22 PM
common please dont make me wait, i will get my friends to beg on her knees for you if you want ;)

clarkoholic
12-02-2004, 10:43 PM
Promise of KAL=I'm HOOKED

i'm not sure if its kal or kal'el...either way...i'm excited!!

smallvillewolf17
12-02-2004, 11:03 PM
Clark - The Loft - Afternoon
Part 2

Clark is staring in the sky, looking at the stars. He hears a noise.

Lana is coming up the stairs.

Clark - Hey, Lana! Right on time.

Lana - Wouldn't miss your explanation for the world.

Clark - How should I start?

Lana - You could start off by telling me why you were talking to the cavewall.

Clark - Instead of telling you, I was going to show you.

Lana - Show me? How?

Clark - Could you stand right here, by the stairs?

Lana - Okay (puzzled)

Clark - Watch where I am at.

Clark super speeds to his telescope.

Lana looks around.

Clark - Over here.

Lana(shocked) - How did you do that?

Clark opens a drawer from his desk. He takes out a lead box. He gives it to Lana.

Clark - Open it towards me.

Lana - Why?

Clark - You'll see.

Lana opens the box towards Clark. Clark starts to get weak. He falls to knees on the floor.

Lana - Isn't this a piece of the meteor rock?

Clark(groaning) - Yes, It's really called kryptonite.

Lana - How would you know that?

Clark(groaning) - Because, it is from a planet called Krypton as I am. Please! Lana, close the box. That stuff makes me weak.

Lana closes that box quickly.

Lana(shocked) - You are from another planet?

Clark - Yes, I came he on my ship the day of the meteor shower.

Lana(shocked) - Your Ship?

Clark - I would show it to you, but I destroyed it. You know that hole where my storm cellar was?

Lana - Yeah?

Clark - That was where I blew up my ship.

Clark - That's the reason I was talking to the cavewall. I was talking to my birth father. He is the reason you have that tattoo on your back. I know this is a lot to take in but, I hope we can still be friends?

Clark moves towards Lana.

Lana moves backward, hits the railing and falls backward.

Clark super speeds and catches her at the bottom of the stairs.

Clark - I'll always be there to catch.

Lana smiles.

Lana - Clark, I need to let this sink in. I'll call you.

Lana leaves the loft.

Clark thinks to himself (I hope I did the right thing.)

End of Part 2

If you want part 3, i'll have tomorrow after school.

UWOCheerJason
12-02-2004, 11:05 PM
ok, but i want it now lol, i wish you could just have a 60page story for me to read :P lol

goMIKE&TOM!
12-03-2004, 06:35 PM
this story is awasome! please read more. (just to let u know im KGDRUMMERGRL) lol...ok peace out

clarkoholic
12-03-2004, 06:53 PM
more!! and when do i get kalel???? lol...*whispers to self* 'have patients sarah!!'

Great update!! cant wait for more

smallvillewolf17
12-03-2004, 07:12 PM
Clark & The Kents - The Kitchen - Dinner Time
Part 3

The kitchen door opens. CLark comes through the doorway.

Jonathan - Where have you been?

Clark - I went for a walk.

Martha - Well sit down at the table, Dinner is almost ready.

15 MINUTES LATER...

Clark - Mom? Dad? There is something I need to tell you.

Jonathan - What is it, Clark?

Clark - It's about my secret.

In that moment, Both Martha and Jonathan drop their forks onto their plates.

Martha - What about it?

Clark - I told Lana about it.

The color of both Martha's and Jonathan's faces turn to white.

Jonathan(shocked) - You did what?

Clark - I didn't have a choice.

Jonathan - You always had a choice, Clark!

Clark - Dad, she saw me talking to Jor-El.

Jonathan - And why were you talking to him?

Clark - He was the one who put that symbol on Lana's back. I was trying to convince him to take away.

Martha - You told Lana your secret because she saw you talking to the cavewall?

Jonathan sees a guilty look on Clark's face.

Jonathan - There's something else, Isn't?

Clark - Jor-El shot a flash of light through me and Lana saw it.

Martha - Are you ok?

Clark - I'm ok.

The phone rings.

Clark goes over to the phone and answers it.

Clark - Hello? You did? Yeah. Bye.

Clark hangs up the phone.

Martha - Who was that?

Clark - Lana. She said she wants me to come over to the talon tomorrow.

part 4 will come if you like it so far.

smallvillewolf17
12-03-2004, 08:29 PM
part 4 will come if people send replys

mysticsilver86
12-03-2004, 08:33 PM
um...i replied. can part 4 come now?
jk
seriously, this story is interesting. i wanna see Kal. update please!

clarkoholic
12-03-2004, 08:33 PM
REPLY REPLY REPLY

MOREMOREMORE

smallvillewolf17
12-03-2004, 10:06 PM
The Kents - The Kitchen - After Dinner
Part 4

Clark yawns

Martha - You going to bed, sweetie?

Clark - Yeah. Night, Mom. Night, Dad.

Both - Night.

Clarks goes up stairs to bed.

Martha - I'm still a little worried about this.

Jonathan - Clark did say that he wanted Lana to know his secret.

Martha - I just can't believe it happened so fast.

Jonathan - After the fear toxin, I believe anything can happen.

Martha - What if Lana slips up. What if the FBI try to get it out of her like that FBI agent did with Pete?

Jonathan - Sweetheart, Calm down. I don't think that is going to happen. I believe we can trust Lana.

Martha - I do to. I just hope she'll be there to help us anytime that red kryptonite gets near Clark. Do you think Lana knows about both kinds of kryptonite.

Jonathan - Probably. Let's just get some sleep and worry about this tomorrow.

Martha - Ok.

Jonathan and Martha head upstairs to bed.

End of Part 4

tell me what you think so far. i can say for a fact that, there will be a glimpse of Kal-El in part 5

clarkoholic
12-03-2004, 10:26 PM
YAY....Kal is soon!!! i can't wait...

IamWalrus
12-03-2004, 10:54 PM
Keep going, your story is cool

smallvillewolf17
12-03-2004, 11:19 PM
to make it clear. Kal(Clark with R K) is not coming. Kal-El from Kryptno is coming.

clarkoholic
12-03-2004, 11:45 PM
OH....hmmmm....well, i still like it! either way he's hot and bad right?

tejdog1
12-04-2004, 12:00 AM
Kal-El is one cool dude! Nothing gets in his way, he wants something, he gets it. I like him, no-nonsense person.

smallvillewolf17
12-04-2004, 12:05 AM
Clark - Talon - Morning
Part 5

Clark knocks on the door of the unopen Talon.

Lana opens the door.

Lana - Come on in, Clark.

Lana shuts and locks the door behind.

Lana - You're kind of wondering why I called?

Clark - Actually, I was kind of shock to hear from you.

Lana - Well, You gave me a lot to think about.

Clark - I did'nt mean to put all of this on you. How else was I gongi to explain to you why I was talking to the cavewall.

Lana - Can I ask question?

Clark - Sure

Lana - Do your parents know you told me your secret?

Clark - Actually, Yes. I told them right before you called.

Lana - Oh.

Clark - Speaking of that, My parents want you come over at the house for dinner. Can you make it?

Lana - Yeah, Are they worried that I might tell Jason?

Clark - I really don't know.

At that moment, Clark's head starts to hurt.

Lana - Clark, What's wrong?

Clark - I don't know.

Lana - I thought you said you were invincible yet from the meteors.

Clark - I am. Must be a side effect of that light going through me.

Clark removes his hands from his head.

Lana - Is it gone?

Clark - I think so. Anyway, Lana can I ask you a question?

Lana - Sure.

Clark - Now that you know the truth, Are you ready to be friends again.

Lana and Clark start walking to the door.

Lana - Yeah. I want you to know that I don't blame you for my parents' death. You had no control over the meteor shower. I don't care that you are from another planet. You are still my friend.

Lana unlocks the door.

Clark - I'm glad to hear you say that.

Lana opens the door.

Lana - See you tonight?

Clark - See ya.

Lana closes the door behind Clark.

Clark starts to walk on the sidewalk.

The pain in his head starts to come back but much worse.

Clark(groaning) - What's happening to me?

Clark moves into the alleyway beside the Talon.

Clark falls to his knees.

In that moment, the form of Kal-El enters out of Clark's body.

Clark - Kal-El?

Kal-El - Clark Kent.

Clark - I thought I had gotten rid of you.

Kal-El - You did. I came back through that light in the caves, that went through you. I have come to take back what is mine.

In that moment, the form of Kal-El went into Clark's body.

Kal-El takes control over Clark's body.

Kal-El - It is good to be back.

Kal-El/Clark starts walking.

A minute later, Kal-El/Clark starts groaning and falls to his knees.

Kal-El - You are not strong enough to beat me.

Clark - Wanna bet?

Kal-El - Soon, I will take over completely.

Clark takes back control over his body.

Checking to make sure no one was looking, Clark supersped to his house.

End of Part 5

reply if you like so far.

UWOCheerJason
12-04-2004, 12:17 AM
i really like like it, i need more as soon as possible

smallvillewolf17
12-04-2004, 12:20 AM
i need to see if other people like it too

UWOCheerJason
12-04-2004, 12:24 AM
i know they do, but if you dont wanna post here could you send me the story?, i really wanna read it

jen
12-04-2004, 12:27 AM
i like it! when can we have an update? i wanna read more... hehe ;) :)

smallvillewolf17
12-04-2004, 01:37 AM
The Kents - Kitchen - Night
Part 6

Clark tells his parents about Kal-El.

Jonathan - So what you are saying is,Jor-El has brought Kal-El back to take over your body again?

Clark - Yes.

Martha - Is that even possible?

Clark - Anything is possible with Jor-El.

Martha - Should we tell Lana this?

Jonathan - She is going to have to know.

There is a knock on the door.

Clark - That's her. Dad, You should let me tell her after dinner.

Jonathan - Ok.

Jonathan opens the door.

Jonathan - Hey Lana. Come on in.

Lana walks into the house.

Lana - Hi Mr. Kent. Hi Mrs. Kent. Hi Clark. I'm not late, am I?

Jonathan - No, you're right on time.

Lana - Thanks for inviting me.

Martha - Thanks for coming.

Lana - I had a feeling you wanted to talk to me about what I know.

Jonathan - We'll talk about that during dinner.

Martha - Dinner will be ready in a minute. Why don't you three go and sit yourselfs at the table.

Jonathan, Clark, and Lana head towards the table and sits down.

Martha goes into the kitchen, gets the food and puts in on the table.

Martha - Everybody, Help yourselves.

All four of them gets some mashed potatoes, mac & cheese, stuffing, and turkey.

Jonathan - So Lana, What did Clark tell you?

Lana - He told me he was another planet called Krypton and he came here during the meteor shower in his ship.

Martha - What do you know about his powers.

Lana - He showed me he has super speed. He told me he is invincible, has x-ray vision, heat vision, super hearing, and flight.

Jonathan - What about his weakness?

Lana - He showed me the green meteor rocks make him weak.

Jonathan - What about the red?

Lana - He did'nt tell me anything about red meteor rocks?

Martha(shocked) - Clark?

Clark - Lana, you know that day I went into the Talon and kissed you?

Lana - Yeah?

Clark - I was under the influence of red Kryptonite.

Lana - So, the red meteor rocks make you do things you wouldn't normally do?

Clark - Yeah.

Lana - Were you wearing red meteor rock when you left?

Clark - Yeah, I am the reason my mom lost the baby.

Martha - Clark, you are not the reason I lost the baby. Jor-El made you destroy your ship.

Lana - Jor-El?

Clark - He is my birth father.

Martha - Everyone finished eating?

Everyone - Yep

Martha gets up from the table.

Martha - Hand me your plates.

Lana - Mrs. Kent, let me help you with the dishes.

Martha - You don't have to.

Lana - But I want to.

Lana gets up from the table and ges into the kitchen with Martha.

Clark gets up from the table.

Clark - Hey mom, I'm gonna go out to the loft.

Martha - Okay Sweetheart.

Clark goes outside and into the barn.

End of Part 6

Hint: Kal-El will be in part 7

part 7 will be on tomorrow

clarkoholic
12-04-2004, 02:04 AM
oooh...great updates!!!!!

jen
12-04-2004, 03:01 AM
yay- an update! thanks!!

mysticsilver86
12-04-2004, 08:23 AM
hmm...lana being in a room with Kal-El, that's gonna be interesting

UWOCheerJason
12-04-2004, 10:06 AM
yea, i need more, need it soon

Clarkieisahottie_000
12-04-2004, 05:59 PM
more please. this is really good

whiteflag
12-05-2004, 07:30 AM
I like this! Please, more.

Tom_Welling1390
12-05-2004, 09:42 AM
I just read this story. The plot is great, but the interactions and how things are told could use some work. I love this story anyway!! It's an original idea, and I like the way it's going so far. :D Can't wait to see more of Kal-El!!

smallvillewolf17
12-05-2004, 03:48 PM
Clark - The Loft - After Dinner

Part 7

Clark is seating on the couch with his hands over his head.

Lana starts walking up the stairs.

Lana - Hey Clark.

Clark - Hey Lana.

Lana - Did you want to be alone?

Clark - No, You can stay.

Lana - You ok, Clark?

Clark - Yeah, It's just been a weird day.

Lana - Oh.

Clark - Lana, Do you regret ever finding out my secret?

Lana- No, You told me at just the right time.

Clark - Why is that?

Lana - Jason is leaving.

Clark - Do you know why?

Lana - He really didn't explain it to me very well.

Clark - I hate to put more on you, but there is something else I need to tell you about my secret.

Lana - What is it?

Clark - It's about that light that went through me.

Lana - What about it?

Clark - Well, Somthing else went through me besides the light.

Lana -What was it?

Clark - My other half, Kal-El.

Lana - Kal-El?

Clark - That is my real name. The name my real parents gave me.

Lana - How is that possible?

Clark - It's hard to explain. A couple hours after you got on the bus to the airport, I went into the caves and a wall opened. I heard a voice. It was Jor-El telling me that I had to fulfill my destiny. Somehow I got sucked into that wall. 3 Months later I came out of the wall and crashed into a cornfield. But it wasn't me. It was Kal-El. I could see what he was doing but I couldn't do anything.

Lana - What ever happened to Kal-El?

Clark - My mom had found a black kryptonite stone and put it to his chest. Our top halves split apart. He almost destroyed me. But, I used the stone to get rid of. Somehow Jor-El has brought him back to take over my body again.

Lana - Why?

Clark - He is mad that I won't fulfill my destiny he has planned out for me.

Lana - So he sent Kal-El do make you do it?

Clark - Yes, that's why my head started hurting in the Talon. He was trying to break through.

Lana - Did he?

Clark - After I left the Talon, He had control over me for a minute but, I fought back.

Lana - Thank Goodness.

Clark - There is something I got to ask you.

Lana _ Yeah?

Clark - Would you be willing to use the green Kryptonite on me if Kal-El breaks through for good? He might kill you if you don't.

Lana - Yes.

Clark - Good, I will ask my parents to get another lead box and green Kryptonite for you. When they do, keep it with you at all times.

At that moment Clark's head starts throbbing.

Clark(groaning) - Not Again.

Lana(scared) - Clark?

Clark(groaning) - Lana, Get the Kryptonite!

Lana rushes to the desk, opens the drawer and gets the lead box.

Clark - He's coming. Get ready.

At the moment, The form of Kal-El comes out of Clark.

Lana hides the lead box behind her back.

Kal-El - Hello again,Clark. And who's this? I don't recall seeing you before.

Clark - Stay away from her. I'm the one you are after.

Kal-El - Indeed you are right.

The form of Kal-El goes back into Clark. Kal-El takes control over Clark's body.

Kal-EL/Clark - Much better. Now for you.(He looks at Lana.)

Lana pulls out the lead box and opens it in front of Kal-El/Clark.

Kal-El/Clark - No!

Clark resurfaces for moment.

Clark - Lana, Go get my parents.

Lana rushes to the house to get Martha and Jonathan.

End of Part 7

send replies and I will write Part 8

Smallville'sChick1989
12-05-2004, 03:59 PM
I love this so far! Can't wait for more! Update ASAP! ~Stacey~

clarkoholic
12-05-2004, 04:00 PM
OOH goodness!!!!! crazy crazy!!!!! what will happen?!?!?!!

Great great update!

but please dont Clana me to death!! lol...jk...but not really. lol

smallvillewolf17
12-09-2004, 06:32 PM
I will have some more soon.

UWOCheerJason
12-09-2004, 06:40 PM
i need more very soon, really good story, keep it up

Tom_Welling1390
12-09-2004, 11:16 PM
Ohh!! I've replied, other's have replied... get writin'! :D

smallvillewolf17
12-31-2004, 05:22 PM
sorry I haven't written in a while

haven't had the time.

here is Part 8.

Part 8

The Kents - Kitchen


Martha and Jonathan are sitting at the kitchen table.

Martha - I hope Clark will be happy with Lana knowing his secret.

Jonathan - I'm sure he will. We just have to have faith.

Jonathan puts his hand over Martha's

Martha smiles at Jonathan

At the moment, Lana comes rushing into the house.

Lana(loudly) - Mr. Kent! Mrs.Kent!

Jonathan(puzzled) - Lana?

Lana rushes into the kitchen.

Martha(puzzled) - Lana, What's wrong?

Lana(scared) - Kal-El is Back!!!

Jonathan(shocked) - What?

Lana - He came through Clark while Me and Clark were talking. Clark told me to come get you two.

Martha - Where is Kal-El now?

Lana - In the loft.

Jonathan - Do you have the kryptonite?

Lana - No, I left the kryptonite in there so he couldn't get away.

Martha(puzzled) - What do we do now, Jonathan?

Jonathan - Call Pete. Tell him to bring the kryptonite he has.

Martha - Ok.

Martha rushes to the phone and calls Pete.

Pete(on the other end of the phone) - Hello?

Martha - Pete, we have an emergency. Come over and bring the kryptonite.

Pete(over the phone) - I'll be right over.

Martha hangs up the phone.

Martha - Pete's coming.

Lana - What do we do in the meantime?

Jonathan - We better chech on Clark.

All of three of them rush to loft.

End of Part 8

reply if you want more.

kryptonmandi
12-31-2004, 05:37 PM
Please post more! It's a great fic.

Smallville'sChick1989
12-31-2004, 07:20 PM
Post more ASAP! Have a Happy New Years! ~Stacey~

smallvillewolf17
01-01-2005, 06:14 PM
Part 9

The Kents, Lana, and Kal-El - The Barn

Jonathan, Martha, and Lana walk in the barn to find Kal-El on the floor in pain. The Kryptonite a few feet away from him.

Martha(shocked) - Clark!

Martha rushes to Kal-El side but Jonathan stops her.

Jonathan - Martha, It's not Clark. He's Kal-El.

Lana - What do we do?

Martha - I don't know, Lana. Jonathan?

Jonathan - I guess we wait until Clark comes back.

They all look at each other.

Kal-El/Clark turns his head towards Lana and the Kents.

Kal-El/Clark(in pain) - Mom? Dad? Lana?

Martha(happy) - Clark?

Jonathan(happy) - Son?

Kal-El/Clark - It's me, Dad.

Lana looks around and sees the kryptonite. She gets it and puts it in the lead box and closes it.

Kal-El/Clark regains his strength. He stands up and looks at The Kents and Lana.

Jonathan - How did you beet Kal-El, Clark?

Kal-El/Clark- He didn't beat me.

Martha(puzzled) - Kal-El?

Kal-El/Clark - You are very smart, Martha Kent? But I'm afraid Clark is not strong enough to beat me again.

He sees the lead box in Lana's hand. He super speeds in towards her and snatches the box.

Kal-El/Clark - You thought you could weaken me again. You are clearly mistaken.
He super speeds up to the loft and throws the box into the field and super speeds back to where the Kents and Lana are.

At that exact moment, Pete was driving down the Kents lane and had seen Kal-El throw something into the field.

Kal-El/Clark - I didn't think it would be this easy to kill his parents(Kal-El looks at the Kents) and his girlfriend(Kal-El looks at Lana).

At that moment Pete walks into the barn with a lead box behind his back.

Pete - Think Again.

Pete takes the lead box and opens it in front of Kal-El.

Kal-El/Clark - That's impossible.

Jonathan - Nothing is impossible when you have family and friends behind you.

Kal-El/Clark - We will meet again, Jonathan Kent.

Kal-El rips open his shirt. The Kents, Pete, and Lana all see the glowing 8 symbol on his chest. A flash of light surrounds the symbol and the symbol disappears.

Clark falls to the ground.

Pete closes the lead box.

They all rush to Clark.

Martha(scared) - Clark?

Jonathan(scared) - Son?

Clark's eyes begin to open.

Everybody sighs in relief.

Pete - You had us worried for a second there.

Clark - Pete? When did you get here?

Pete - Just a few minutes ago. Kal-El was about to kill you parents and Lana. And I saved by using kryptonite.

Clark - It's good to know that we have another superhero in the family

End of Part 9

reply if you want more

Smallville'sChick1989
01-01-2005, 07:27 PM
Update ASAP! I am really enjoying this story! ~Stacey~ :)

PATMAN
01-02-2005, 04:29 PM
please post more

smallvillewolf17
01-27-2005, 11:31 PM
i will post more tomorrow

smallvillewolf17
04-18-2005, 11:07 PM
sorry i haven't posted lately. i've been having computer problems

Part 10

Clark - The Loft - The next afternoon

As Clark leans against the loft and stares at the stars, Jonathan and Martha walk up the stairs.

Martha(worried) - Clark, Are you alright?

Clark - Yeah, mom. I'm oKay. I'm just worried that Kal-El will come through permantly.

Jonathan - Son, we will not let that happen?

Clark _ This is all my fault ?

At that moment, Lana enters the barn and hears the Kents talking.

Martha - Why would you say that?

Lana hides beside the post so the Kents won't see her.

Clark - If I hadn't gone into that cave to talk to Jor-El, Lana wouldn't have found out the truth and I would have to protect her from Kal-El.

Jonathan - You didn't know all that stuff was going to happen.

Clark - I wish my parents would have sent me to a different planet so I wouldn't ruin your lives and Lana's.

Lana(whisperiing) - I didn't know he felt this way.

Martha - You can't mean that.

Clark moves towards the opening in the loft.

Clark - I shoud have stayed in Metropolis.

Jonathan - You don't mean that, son.

Clark - Yes, I do. After we get rid of Kal-El, I'm gonna go back.

Martha moves towards Clark.

Martha - Clark, Running away from the problem isn't the answer. Do you remember what you told your father when you found that medallion in the cave wall that belong to Jor-El?

Clark - Yeah.

Martha - You said that your father and I were choosen to find you.

At that moment, Lana sneeks out of the barn.

Clark - If it wasn't for me, the bab would've been born.

Jonathan - We do not blame you. Jor-El made you get rid of the ship.

Clark - I know.

Clark moves towards the stiars then stops

Clark- I'm gonna go take a walk before dinner.

Martha - Ok, sweetie.

End of Part 10

please reply

tejdog1
04-18-2005, 11:58 PM
May I suggest humbly, you get a beta? That would improve this story, and also, run it through a spell check, either way...it's good, but there are a lot of misspellings. Keep up the good work, though.

Smallville'sChick1989
04-19-2005, 03:18 PM
I am really enjoying this fic more and more each time that you update it! Update ASAP! ~Stacey~ :)

smallvillewolf17
04-19-2005, 05:10 PM
Update will be soon. i'm sorry about the misspellings. i was in a hurry. and what is a beta?

Uffr
04-19-2005, 07:26 PM
I didn't notice too many misspellings so it went pretty smooth. Keep up the good work.

smallvillewolf17
05-10-2005, 11:45 PM
*The story continues right after Pariah. Lana still knows his secret. Chloe knows too but Clark does not that she know. Kal-El is still inside Clark. He just hasn't shown his face in two weeks.*

Part 11

~Two Weeks Later~

Clark & The Kent - Kent House - Morning before school

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!

BAM!

Clark slams his alarm clock breaking it into millions of pieces.

"Mom is going to kill me if she finds out I broke another alarm clock."

Clark gets out of bed and heads towards his computer. He grabs the pair of blue jeans on the computer chair and puts them on. Afterwards, he moves next to the laundry basket and pulls out a neatly folded red t-shirt and puts it on. After brushing his teeth, getting his bookbag and putting on his dark blue jacket, he walks downstairs and into the kitchen. Martha is in the kitchen making waffles and Jonathan is outside doing his usual farmwork.

Clark - Morning, Mom.(leans in and kisses her on the cheek)

Martha - Morning, Sweetheart.

Clark - Where's Dad?

Martha - Outside. Feeding the cattle. (hands Clark a plate with 3 waffles stacked on top of each other.)

Clark - Thanks mom. (grabs the plate and pours syrup on the waffles)

Martha - Clark, I did not make these waffles just so you could soak them in syrup. (Clark takes a big bite out of a waffle.)

Clark - Sorry, Mom. (takes another big bite and looks at his watch.) Oh man, I'm gonna be late. (takes another big bite.) Thanks for the waffles, Mom. Bye.

Martha - Your Welcome. Bye.

Clark superspeeds off to school

~Smallville High~

Clark walks down the halls of smallville high and accidentally bumps into a young girl.

Clark - Lana? I'm sorry. I didn't mean to bump into you.

Lana - It's okay, Clark. It's been awhile since I saw you. You haven't been by the talon lately.

Clark - Yeah. Well, I have a different way of dealing with a death then some other people do.

Lana - I know how much Alicia ment to you.

Clark - It's hard to believe she really is gone.

Lana - If you ever need someone to talk to, You can count on me.

Clark - Thanks, Lana. I better get to The Torch. Chloe might have a job for me.

Lana - Okay. See ya, Clark.

Clark heads toward the Torch and Lana heads towards her locker. As Clark enters the Torch, Chloe is glued to her computer working on a story.

Clark - Hey,Chloe.

Chloe - Hey, Clark. I'lll be with you in just second. (types very fast)I just need to finish this article and I will be DONE!

Chloe stops typing and heads towards the couch where Clark is seating. Chloe notices that Clark looks a little depressed.

Chloe - Clark, Are you okay?

Clark - And I'm fine. I just miss Alicia even though she was a meteor freak.

~You should talk.~ Chloe thought.

Clark - Well, I should get to class. See ya, Chloe.

Chloe - Bye, Clark.

End of Part 11

i know it is not that exciting but it will be. Just in case you were wondering, Kal-El will show his form again soon. please tell me if you like it or not so far.

laughalot16281
05-11-2005, 12:30 AM
I really like this story. I can't wait for more Kal-El!

mnjcrowder
05-11-2005, 03:50 AM
interesting story..I look forward to reading more.

smallvillewolf17
05-11-2005, 11:25 PM
i will either have some more tomorrow or over the weekend.

Kal-El & Me
05-21-2005, 10:47 AM
Yeah I really want to hear more it's awsome.

I hope Kal comes soon.

spacewalker_33.3
06-02-2005, 05:38 PM
really interesting story, keep posting!! its really awesome/great

kewl
06-03-2005, 12:09 PM
great story, plz post soon......... :)

ClanaLover
06-13-2005, 10:20 PM
Please post more soon. I love Lana knowing. :p

kewl
06-14-2005, 12:17 AM
still waiting for your next update, so plz make it veeeerrry soon :D thank u :)

smallvillewolf17
06-21-2005, 03:04 PM
Part 12

The Kents - Kent House - After School

Jonathan and Martha are at the dinner table paying bills

Martha - How are we going to make it through when Clark goes off to college?

Jonathan - Sweetheart, We will find a way. We made it through before we found and we will make it through when Clark goes to college.

Martha - I hope you are right, Jonathan.

Jonathan leans forward and passionately kisses his wife.

After they kiss, A tall, dark haired boy opens the front door.

Jonathan - Hey, Son. How was school?

Clark drops his bookbag on the kitchen counter.

Clark(with a sad voice) - It was ok.

Martha - Is something wrong, Sweetie?

Clark - No. I just really miss Alicia.

Martha - We know how special she was to you.

Clark - She was. I'm gonna go up to the loft.

Martha - Ok, Sweetie. I'll come get you when dinner is ready.

Clark - OK.

Clark picks up his bookbag and heads to the barn. As he enters the barn, he heads toward a red tool chest. He opens the top drawer and a metal box with a lock on it is inside. Clark takes out the metal box. He breaks the lock with his hand and opens the box. An octagonal key is inside. Clark takes the octagonal key and heads to the loft.

As Clark enters the loft, he sets his bookbag on the desk and moves to the sofa and sits down. After Clark sits down, he places the octagonal key onto the table in front of him.

Clark - Why did you have to bring me to Earth? What was so bad that you had to bring me to Earth?

At that moment, a dark haired woman walks up the stairs.

Lana - Talking to you father again?

Clark - Lana? (with a smile)......Yeah. I was hoping he could give me some answers.

Lana - Any Luck?

Clark - Nope.

Lana - Have any more incidents with Kal-El?

Clark - No, I haven't seen him lately.

Lana - Maybe he is really gone?

Clark - I don't think so. I can still feel him inside me.

Lana - I know how you feel.

Clark - Has Isobel shown her spirit lately.

Lana - Thankfully no.

Clark - Lana, I .....

Clark feels a throbbing pain in his head.

Lana - What's Wrong? Is it Kal-El?

Clark - He's Coming. Get the Kryptonite. Hurry.

Lana rushes to the desk, opens the bottom right drawer, and takes out a lead box. Lana runs back to Clark.

Clark(in pain) - Lana, Listen to me. If Kal-El gets really bad, I need you to stab me with the kryptonite.

Lana - No. I won't.

Clark - It might get rid of Kal-El for good.

Lana - Okay.

Clark - Ahhhhhh!

Clark rips opens his shirt and the 8 symbol starts to form.

Lana(scared) - Clark?

Clark - When Kal-El comes, I need you to stab me in the center of the symbol. Will you do it?

Lana - Yes.

Clark(in pain) - He's Coming . Get Ready.

The 8 symbol on Clark's starts to glow brightly and then stops;Clark's eyes begin to glow bright red and then go back to their normal color.

Lana - Clark?

Kl-El/Clark - Please. That puny boy can't match up to me.

Lana - Maybe I can.

Lana opens the lead box and exposes Kal-El to the Kryptonite.

Kal-El/Clark(in pain) - If you kill me, you kill Clark too.

Lana takes out the kryptonite from the lead box, moves towards Kal-El, and stabs him with the kryptonite.

Kal-El/Clark - Ahhhhhhhh! You *****! When I come back you will be the frist to die!

The 8 symbol on Clark's chest disappears.

Lana(crying) - Clark?

Clark(gasping for air) - Lana. (Lana puts the kryptonite in the lead box and closes it) It didn't work.

Lana(shocked) - What? How come your wound hasn't healed?

Clark - I don't know. (stands up) I can still feel him inside me.

Clark feels dizzy and falls down on the table in fron of the couch.

At the moment, Martha Kent walks up the steps. She sees Lana next to the an unconsious Clark.

Martha(scared) - Clark? Lana, What happened?

Lana - Kal-El came back and Clark told me to stab him with kryptonite to get rid of Kal-El. But, It didn't work.

Martha - Oh my god. We need to get him inside.

Lana - We won't be able to get him inside by ourselves.

Martha- Lana, Go get Jonathan. He is in the house.

Lana runs out the barn and into the house. Jonathan is sitting down on the couch watching Met U playing football.

Lana(scared) - Mr. Kent!

Jonathan(worried) - Lana? What's Wrong?

Lana - Kal-El came back! Clark is in the barn. He is badly injured. Mrs. Kent and I need your help bringing him in the house.

Lana and Jonathan rush out of the house and into the barn.

End of Part 12

what do you think?

peaches4cream
06-21-2005, 03:23 PM
so is clark bleeding like when he got shoot by van adn they had to take the bullet out.????????jonathan is very slow mentally

spacewalker_33.3
06-21-2005, 05:26 PM
:D nice update, keep 'em coming

binkys711
06-22-2005, 11:02 AM
i just read this story!!!i like it!!!keep posting!!!ppms!!!

kewl
06-22-2005, 11:17 AM
clana lives!!! i love ur upd8 so plz keep posting and very soon :D

laughalot16281
06-22-2005, 11:45 PM
Yeah! an Update! Thanks! That was an awesome update, Please post more soon!

clana4ev3r
07-14-2005, 07:20 PM
PPMS! its been like a month since you last posted!

kewl
07-14-2005, 11:51 PM
yeah, where r u??? did u forgot about this story??? we need an update please????

SmallvilleMan
07-14-2005, 11:57 PM
he's right above you.

clana4ev3r
07-15-2005, 02:13 AM
when are you going to post?

Karen26
07-15-2005, 07:42 AM
yeah when this is good

smallvillewolf17
07-15-2005, 04:24 PM
well no one reply for almost a month. but I will post Monday.

EyeluvTom
07-15-2005, 04:32 PM
Monday? Well, okay, but make it a long post. You have a great story.

Karen26
07-15-2005, 04:52 PM
yeah i agree this story is good cant wait for the next one

kewl
07-16-2005, 12:29 AM
i guess we can wait till monday but u better make it a foot-long chapter :D

C.A.chick
07-16-2005, 03:15 PM
hurry!!im wating this is great

smallvillewolf17
07-18-2005, 05:21 PM
Part 13

Clark, The Kents, and Lana - Kent House - After Lana's Kal-El encounter

Jonathan, Martha, and Lana are carrying Clark into the house. Martha and Lana had Clark's arms and Jonathan had Clark's legs. When they got into the house, they moved Clark towards the couch. As Jonathan and Martha move Clark to the couch, Lana goes into the kitchen to get a wet towel. Lana brings it to Martha. As Martha wipes away th blood on Clark's chest, she sees a small green glow in Clark's wound.

Martha - Jonathan, Is that what I think it is?

Jonathan loves closer to Clark's wound and notices the green glow.

Jonathan - I think so. It's... Green Kryptonite.

Lana - Oh No. (backs away) It must have broken off when I stabbed him with the Kryptonite. It's all my fault.

Martha - Lana, don't do that to yourself.

Jonathan - Did Clark ask you to stab him with the kryptonite?

Lana - Yeah. He thought the kryptonite would get rid of Kal-El. But, .... It didn't work.

Jonathan - Martha, go get me some pliers. I might be able to get it out.

Martha moves to the ktichen, opens a drawers, get the pliers, and runs to her son.

Martha - Here.

Jonathan grabs the pliers from Martha and starts digging into Clark's wound. He digs around Clark's wound for about a minute until he has a firm grip on the piece of kryptonite. He yanks it out as fast as possible. Blood start gushing out of Clark's wound.

Jonathan - Lana, do you still have the lead box?

Lana - Yeah.

Lana takes the lead box out of her pocket and gives it to Jonathan. Jonathan opens the lead box and puts the piece of kryptonite inside the lead box and closes the box.

Jonathan - Hopefully that was the only piece left in his wound.

Martha - Lana. Jonathan. Look. (points to Clark's wound.

The blood stopped gushing out of the wound, the green veins the surround Clark's wound were disappearing, and Clark's wound was closing up.

Martha - Well, There's your answer Jonathan.

~15 Minutes Later~

Jonathan and Martha are sitting at the kitchen table waiting for Clark to wake up. Lana is sitting on the table near the couch looking at Clark.

Lana - Clark, Please Wake up. There are people here who love that want to know you are alright. Please wake up.

~Clark's Mind~

Clark is laying on a white floor with white smoke around. He is wearing a white t-shirt, white jeans, and white shoes. Clark opens his eyes and stands up and all he sees his white. He hears a voice.

"I thought you would never get here."

Clark turns around and sees himself dressed in a black shirt, black jeans, and black boots.

Clark: Kal-El.

Kal-El: The one and soon to be the only Kal-El.

Clark: I will never let you take control over my body.

Kal-EL: But I will. And as soon as I take over your body I will kill everybody you love. Martha. Jonathan. And Lana.

Clark: I will never let you hurt them.

Kal-El: You don't have a choose. I am much stronger than you are. Even near kryptonite. So long Clark. Forever.



Kal-El supersped towards Clark with his fist but Clark superspeeds out of the way and kicks Kal-El feet from under him. Clark moves away from Kal-El. As Kal-El gets up, Clark charges towards Kal_El but Kal-EL sees it coming. Kal-El moves out of the was and grabs Clark by the back of his shirt.

Kal-El: You've got courage, kid. Okay. I'll give you one more chance to save the people you love. But If you fail, and I know you will, you will no longer exist.

Kal-El throws Clark on the ground. On the ground, Clark's body starts to disappear.

~Back in the real world~

Jonathan and Martha are still sitting at the kitchen table and Lana is still sitting with Clark.

Lana - Please wake up. (grabs Clark's hand)

As Lana wipes her tears with a tissue, she feels one of Clark's fingers start to move in her head.

Lana - Clark?

As Clark's eyes start to open, Jonathan and Martha make their way over to the couch.

Clark - Lana? Mom? Dad?

Martha - Sweetheart, We were so worried you weren't going to wake up.

Clark - I'm sorry I worried you guys.

Jonathan - It's okay. We are glad that you are alright.

Lana - We all are.

As Clark looks over to Lana, he notices that Lana is hold his hand.
Clark smiles at Lana and Lan smiles back at him.

End of Part 13

what do you think?

SVsleuth
07-18-2005, 09:26 PM
You got me wondering what Kal-El still has planned for Clark. Glad to have an update, here. Keep up the nice writing.

Superboy2
07-19-2005, 01:44 AM
How many parts are there gonna be, just wondering. Great story. Too bad u can't make this into real live TV. That would be awesome.

smallvillewolf17
07-19-2005, 01:28 PM
17 or 18

i haven't decided yet.

binkys711
07-19-2005, 02:45 PM
AWESOME!!!PPMS!!!

Karen26
07-19-2005, 05:14 PM
ppms

yojimbo
07-19-2005, 10:51 PM
UPdate soon.

NYC300Z
07-20-2005, 02:32 AM
wow I think I started reading this story a while back and for some reason thought it had already finished....sorry about that.... PPMS!

kewl
07-20-2005, 02:50 AM
great update!!!! PPMS!!!

C.A.chick
07-22-2005, 12:09 AM
come one......... update soon!!!!!!i love it!!!!!

smallvillewolf17
07-22-2005, 12:11 PM
update will be Monday

binkys711
07-22-2005, 12:21 PM
YAY!!!can't wait!!!!

kewl
07-23-2005, 04:03 AM
still waiting for ur update.... PPMS!

clana4ev3r
07-23-2005, 04:31 PM
18 chapters! the more the merrier

smallvillewolf17
07-26-2005, 03:25 PM
I will post tomorrow. My mom broke a bone in her hand yesterday. I was with her at the hospital yesterday and today. That's why I couldn't post yesterday.

binkys711
07-26-2005, 03:37 PM
ok!can't wait!!! hope your mom's hand get's better soon:\;)

spacewalker_33.3
07-26-2005, 09:13 PM
well hope ur mom hand's get better, and dont worry, we'll be waiting for ur next post!!

smallvillewolf17
07-27-2005, 03:03 PM
sorry for the wait. i just found out yesterday that my cousin was in a car accident, but he is okay. He just has a really bad cut on the back of the his head. And to top it off, my family and I lost our power for 3 hours. Enough about my problems. Here's an update.

Part 14

The Kents, Clark, and Lana - Kent House - Few hours after Clark woke up

Martha is in the kitchen fixing some coffee for Jonathan, Clark, and herself. Jonathan and Clark are sitting at the kitchen table and Lana has fallen asleep on the living room couch.

Martha walks over to the table holding three coffee mugs in one hand and a coffee pot full of coffee in the other. She places the three mugs on the table and starts pouring coffee in the mugs.

Clark - Thanks, Mom. (takes a sip of his coffee)

Jonathan - Thanks, Honey. ( takes a sip of his coffee)

Martha - Your Welcome. (takes a sip of her coffee)

Jonathan - How are you feeling, Clark?

Clark - Better. I just can't get what Kal-El said out of my head.

Martha - I'm sure we will find a way to defeat him again.

Clark - Maybe if we had some black kryptonite.

Jonathan - Where are we going to find black kryptonite?

As they talk, Lana starts to wake, but stays on the couch to hear what Clark and The Kents are talking about.

Clark - Maybe if we mix the green and red kryptonite together. .... Or maybe if I use my heat vision on green or red kryptonite that it might change color.

Martha - I think we should try to mix the green and red kryptonite together. I don't think using your heat vision on the kryptonite will make it change color. I think it will just melt the kryptonite.

Jonathan - Anyway, Where are we going to get red kryptonite. I mean, we don't actually keep some around here.

Clark - Chloe had told me one time that there is a whole bunch near Homb's Pond. I can ask Lana tomorrow if she wants to go with me to get some.

Lana - You don't have to ask me.

At that moment, Clark, Jonathan, and Martha all turned their heads and saw Lana leaning on the couch.

Clark - Lana, we didn't know you were awake. Did you hear all of that?

Lana - Yeah, I woke up when you guys starting talking.

Martha - We didn't wake you, did we?

Lana - No. No. I woke up on my own. It's hard to sleep with everything that has happened.

Clark - Join the club.

Lana made her way over to the kitchen table and sat next to Clark.

Lana - Do you think mixing the kryptonite together will really work?

Jonathan - We don't know for sure. We are going to give it a try. But for now, you two need to get some rest. You have school tomorrow. (glances at his watch) Oh Gosh, It's almost midnight.

Lana - I should get to my apartment and get some rest.

All four of them get up from their chairs. Lana and Clark head towards the door. Clark opens the door.

Lana - Bye, Clark.

Clark - Bye, Lana.

Clark closes the door amd moves near his parents.

Clark - I'm gonna go to bed. Night, Mom. Night, Dad.

Jonathan - Night, Clark.

Martha - Night, Sweetie.

Clark makes his way upstairs and goes into his room and closes the door.

Martha - I think we should go upstairs to.

Jonathan - After you.

Jonathan and Martha also head upstairs, go to their room, and go to sleep.

End of Part 14

is it good? it is bad? tell me

binkys711
07-27-2005, 03:06 PM
great!!!WHOOPY UPDATE!!!PPMS!!!I am liking it!!!:D

NYC300Z
07-27-2005, 08:08 PM
yay finally an update!! Hope u don't have any more bad luck! PPMS!!

spacewalker_33.3
07-27-2005, 08:28 PM
nice update, can't wait 4 more!!

clana4ev3r
07-28-2005, 02:05 AM
PPMS!

kewl
07-28-2005, 11:22 AM
finally an update. PPMS!!!

Kryptonite Spear
07-30-2005, 04:27 AM
Wow, i just started reading this, and it's pretty interesting!!! can't wait to hear more!!! :D

Kryptonite Spear
08-05-2005, 04:34 AM
When Are We Getting An Update?

Karen26
08-05-2005, 12:18 PM
nice update ppms

smallvillewolf17
08-05-2005, 10:27 PM
there will be an update tomorrow.

Preview:
Clark and Lana go to Hobbes Pond and gets the red kryptonite. Clark uses his heat vision to melt the green kryptonite but creates black kryptonite instead.

binkys711
08-06-2005, 01:20 AM
yay! thanxz for the sneak peek!can't wait 'till the update!!!:D

NYC300Z
08-06-2005, 01:23 AM
Yeah what Binkys said! PPMS!!

Kryptonite Spear
08-06-2005, 01:28 AM
YES!!! :D

*Eagerly Awaits Update* :D

kewl
08-06-2005, 06:20 AM
Originally posted by binkys711
yay! thanxz for the sneak peek!can't wait 'till the update!!!:D

ditto!!! ;) :D

smallvillewolf17
08-06-2005, 09:13 PM
Part 15

Clark - Kent House - Morning

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!

Clark's eyes begin to open as he slowly moves his hand to turn off his alarm clock.

"Clark, It's almost time for school. Come down and get some breakfast"

"Okay. I'll be right down."

Clark gets out of bed and heads to his computer desk. He puts on a white t-shirt and blue jeans. He grabs his bookbag and and his blue jacket, then goes down stairs.

When Clark goes down stairs, Martha is in the kitchen cooking eggs and sausage.

Clark - Morning, mom. (drops his bookbag and jacket in the chair)

Martha - Morning, Sweetie. Here you go. (hands Clark a plate with eggs and sausage)

Clark - Thanks, mom. (eats a fork-full of eggs)

Martha - Do you want some syrup on your eggs?

Clark - No, I'm good. (eats a fork-full of eggs)

After eating the rest of the eggs, Clark glances at his watch.

Clark - Oh No, I'm going to be late.

Clark puts his blue jacket on and grabs his bookbag.

Clark - Bye,mom.

Martha - Bye, Sweetie.

After kissing his mother on the cheek, Clark superspeeds to school.

~Smallville High~

When Clark got to school, he went straight to his locker. As Clark was getting his books out of the locker, a girl with short blonde hair walks up to him.

Chloe - Hey, Clark.

Clark - Hey, Chloe. What's Up?

Chloe - Do you have plans this afternoon?

Clark - Yeah. Me and Lana are doing something this afternoon.

Chloe - Oh.:(

As Chloe finished her comment, Lana walked up to Clark.

Lana - Hey, Clark. Hey,Chloe.

Chloe - Hey, Lana.

Clark - Hey, Lana. Are we still on for the afternoon?

Lana - Yeah, I just need to have a chat we Jason then I will be over at your house.

Clark - OK.

Lana - I've got to get to class. See you this afternoon, Clark. Bye,Chloe.

Chloe - Bye, Lana. .... I've got to get to the torch. See ya, Clark.

Clark - See ya, Chloe.

After both Lana and Chloe, Clark closes his locker and heads to his class.

~Kent Farm~

Clark is his loft getting ready to go to Hobbes Pond. He has his swimming trunks on. His is putting two empty lead boxes in a red duffel bag. As Clark puts a towel is his bag, Lana walks up to the loft.

Lana - You ready?

Clark - Yep. (places the red duffel bag on his shoulder) Let's go.

Both Lana and Clark get in Lana's SUV and drive to Hobbes Pond.

~Hobbes Pond~

Clark and Lana get out of the SUV, grabs their bags and heads towards the dock on Hobbes Pond. As they get on the dock, Clark and Lana drops the bags and strip down to their bathing suits.

After Clark takes his shirt off, He uses his x-ray vision towards the pond.

Clark - I see some red kryptonite.

Lana - Where is it?

Clark - At the bottom. You ready?( grabs a lead box from his bag and hands it to Lana)

Lana - Yep. (takes to lead box from Clark)

Lana and Clark dive into the pond and swim towards to the bottom. After few times going back up for air, they finally reach the bottom. As they reach the bottom, Clark spots the red kryptonite. Lana hands Clark the lead box and Clark moves towards the kryptonite. He takes it and puts it the lead box. After Clark closed the lead box, him and Lana swim to the surface.

When Lana and Clark got the the surface, Clark put the lead box in his bag and took out his towel. He and Lana both wrapped their towels around each other.

Clark - Thanks for coming out here with me.

Lana - You don't need to thank me.

After a fews minutes of drying off, Clark and Lana headed back to the Kent Farm.

End of Part 15

I know it's short. but I promise that next one will be long. like it so far?

NYC300Z
08-06-2005, 10:37 PM
Yeah so far so good! Can't wait for the longer update!! PPMS!!

Kryptonite Spear
08-07-2005, 12:57 AM
Awesome!!! Can't Wait For The Update!!! :D

kewl
08-07-2005, 09:31 AM
thanks for the update!!!! PPMS!!!

binkys711
08-08-2005, 11:41 AM
great update!!!PPMS!!!:D

SVsleuth
08-08-2005, 02:08 PM
PPMS. Good story. Only, why didn't the Red K have an effect on Clark while he was collecting it, though?

Kryptonite Spear
08-11-2005, 04:12 PM
UPDATE!!!

Please? :lol:

smallvillewolf17
08-12-2005, 02:36 AM
Originally posted by SVsleuth
PPMS. Good story. Only, why didn't the Red K have an effect on Clark while he was collecting it, though?

he is only effected by the red k if he is wearing.
remember unsafe?

i will have an update today. i would have done it yesterday but, i had a really bad headache.

smallvillewolf17
08-13-2005, 01:32 AM
Part 16

Lana and Clark - Kent Farm - Afternoon

Lana is driving up the Kent's lane with Clark in the passenger seat. As Lana gets out of her SUV, Clark gets out and grabs his and Lana's bags and starts walking to the house. As they walk to the house, Lana suddenly stops. Clark looks back and sees that Lana has stop moving. Clark moves closer to Lana.

Clark - Lana, are you ok?

Lana - No. ....I just need to tell you something.

Clark - What is it?

Lana - I broke up with Jason.

Clark(shocked) - You did?

Lana - Yeah.

Clark - Can I ask why?

Lana - Yes you can. .... I felt that he was keeping secrets from me. When I confronted him about it, he said he didn't think that I should know all his secrets.

Clark - What did you say?

Lana - I said either he told me his secrets or he would have to find himself a new girlfriend.

Clark - From the looks of it, Jason didn't tell you his secrets.

Lana - Nope. .... Well at least I have one friend who trusts me enough with his secret.

Clark - Um...Lana, if you don't want to help me with the kryptonite I'll understand.

Lana - No. No. No. I said I would help you and I will.

Clark - Okay. ..Will you put these bags in the house?(hands Lana the bags and she takes them) I have to get something from the barn.

Lana - What are you gonna get?

Clark - The green k and some lead.

Lana - Oh Ok. Meet you in the house.

As Clark goes into the barn to get the green k and lead, Lana goes into the house, drops the bags by the staircase, takes the red k out and heads into the kitchen.

As Lana was getting everything ready for their little experiment, Clark entered the kitchen with a small lead box in one hand.

Clark - Are you ready?

Lana - Yep. ...(looks at the lead box) Is that the lead?

Clark - No. (lifts his shirt up, reavling a lead breastplate) This is.

Lana - Is that the same lead you wore when Van shot you infront of me?

Clark - Yep. ....Let's get started. (hands Lana the lead box)

Lana opens the lead box, takes out the green k, and place it on a flat strainer that is over a small pot.

Clark - Lana, I think you should stay behind me.

Lana moves behind Clark. Clark starts to use his heat vision on the green k but, the green k doesn't melt. It starts to change color.

Lana - Why isn't melting?

Clark - I don't know. .... I'll keeping.

As Clark uses his heat vision, the green k starts to get darker and darker until it turns black.

Lana - Wow.

Clark - Wow is right. .... I think we need to talk to my parents about this.

End of Part 16

NYC300Z
08-13-2005, 02:38 AM
so Clark is making black k i wonder if it will affect them?? PPMS!!

kewl
08-13-2005, 03:57 AM
so clark's going to use the black k on kal-el? PPMS!!!

Kryptonite Spear
08-14-2005, 02:06 AM
Wow... can't wait to see what the outcome is gonna be!!!

Update soon please!!! :D

Kryptonite Spear
08-22-2005, 03:34 AM
Is there an update in the near future?

kewl
08-22-2005, 02:08 PM
hope we get an update in here soon.....

Kryptonite Spear
08-27-2005, 06:54 PM
*Looks Around*

Am I To Assume That There is No Update In The Near Future?

smallvillewolf17
08-29-2005, 11:01 PM
got a case of writer's block

*leans head sideways and hits the side of her head but nothing is coming out*

binkys711
08-29-2005, 11:25 PM
I think you should keep hitting.....maybe an idea can come out:p

kewl
08-30-2005, 01:14 AM
umm, just a sick suggestion......why don't u hit ur head with a sledgehammer.... i bet lots of great ideas will come out!!!! j/k j/k j/k ;) :D

Kryptonite Spear
08-30-2005, 02:59 AM
Why Don't You Throw Some Music On Instead Of Hitting Your Head? You Can't Update If You're Brain-Dead... :lol: J/K

Throw Some Music On, And You Might Get Some Ideas Up In The Air...

NYC300Z
08-30-2005, 04:25 AM
When's the next update coming?

PPMS!!

*#~ ClAnAfAn99210~#*
08-17-2006, 05:31 PM
good

emsfan
08-18-2006, 06:37 AM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!