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ClanaGirl
05-08-2009, 07:56 PM
Page1 now therewas never Lois as his destiny it was always Lana and when she came back she was all he saw. now on with the story. they have been married two years and live in a big house in Metropolis and are top reporters at the Daily Planet.
“Clark!” Lana called. “Come for breakfast! Clark Kent get down here right now,” Lana called sharply. “Fine, I didn’t want to do this Clark Kal-el Kent, Lana said but if you don’t come down here right now we won’t do anything special tonight.” Clark was down in 3 seconds flat. “Okay love, I'm here.” Lana smiled. She loved being called love by Clark. “Now tell me why you couldn’t come down the first time I called Mister,” Lana said as she slowly kissed him before stopping. “Well, Clark started, you see I was thinking about some special thing I could do for you and just thought of it!” Clark picked me up and cradled me to him. He kissed me. I kissed him back loving every bit of it. Too soon we pulled away! Then he spoke slowly. “Lana did you make breakfast?” “Of course love , its right here. He packed it in a picnic basket and got a blanket. “I have a big surprise.” Then Clark started playing with my hair, twisting it into a braid. “Clark, stop it right now! When you married me I thought I told you that you should stop playing with my hair all the time.” :Lana, I just can’t help it. Your hair is just so beautiful.” I sighed. We have been married two years and he still loves doing it. Clark picked me up and in a flash we were running at a crazy speed. “Lana, we’re here!” I gasped and started to cry. He took me to a meadow and it had my favorite flowers in it. “It’s so beautiful Clark,’ I managed to get out. Then he put a rose in my hair and said ‘these flowers are as beautiful as you.’ I threw my arms around him. “Thank you so much.” I led Clark to a spot in the shade and I laid out the blanket and opened the basket spreading out dishes of food I made. “Lana this looks delicous.” I tied a blind fold on Clark and got a piece of food on the fork and gave it to him. “What is it honey?” I asked. Blueberry pancakes drizzled in syrup. Good next what is this bacon, eggs yes great job Clark alright Lana. He tied the blindfold around my eyes now what does this taste like is it a bacon omlete yes what's this? Umm... strawberries?
Yes love perfect how did you know? Don’t you remember I always place fruit in your pancakes I know what strawberries taste like!
Fine now Clark love can you carry me? Want to go home! Sure Lana onto the S.S. Clark he then ran home as fast as he could which was in about 3 minutes. When we got inside he said Lana you should be
Famous chef we could call your food Al’a pancakes stuff like that!
hope you like it i am a beginner so please go easy i am trying my best and wantto be the top writer someday.
ClanaGirl
05-12-2009, 03:13 PM
hey anyone who is willign to read or view htis is my first story and to be honest i was very nervous so please could you replY????????
LetMeGo
05-12-2009, 04:20 PM
They're cute together, it's a nice start. It is a little tough to read when it all runs together though.
Don't let the lack of response discourage you, it's been really slow around here lately. Keep writing! :)
The Black Cat
05-14-2009, 03:19 AM
Interesting start. And I agree with LetMeGo, a little more separation between paragraphs would help.
ClanaGirl
05-14-2009, 02:39 PM
thnakyou The Black Cat and LetMeGo! i will have 3 more chapters done today posted right now!!!!
ClanaGirl
05-14-2009, 03:31 PM
Clark you missed a spot when youcleaned up where I pointed to my lips .here sorry Lana I will fix that he brought his lips to mine I kissed him fiercely this was perfect bliss I ran my hands through
his hair as we were on the comfy couch he kissed me passionately I responded back before I knew
it he was running his hands through my silky hair it was just the most perfect moment ever I threw my arms around his neck and whispered in his ear lelts go get changed then we can go to bed. Sure
Lana love. I changed into a pair of gray sweatpants anda black tanktop then I went into the bed and fluffed my pillow. I whispered I nclark’s ear when he came im and said Clark kiss me! Gladly he said and I moved my lips to his and wrapped my arms around him . he said this Is perfect! I took off
my jacket him his shirt and we continuedeven more thrilling as when me and clark jumped into the ocean and swam so fast . finally clarks parents were staying at our house cam in and Said Clark and Lana Kent do you know what time it is ? 11:00PM and you have to get up at 7:00 I expect not to
here you tonight so go to bed . yezs mom ,dad clark put his hsirt back on I put my robe back on snuggled into his arms and he held me there and we both fell asleep until at 1;00 he woke me upand told me about his dream I loved it but snuggled back into clark’s arms and we both drifted off to sleep.
I dreamed we were at the beach skinny dipping and it was the two of us we swam around ahving races me and clark both won 3 races . the new went up out of the water onto land. Spread a large
towel out and cuddled there until it was closed I loved the dream so much until the alarm woke me
up as it played a country song . the lyrics said your one the phone with your girlfriend she’s upset
she’s going on about something htst you said she never know your story like I do !
Then on clark’s alarm it played a song that said I always needed time
on my own never thought I would need you there when I cried. and the
days seem like years when Im alone and the bed where you lie is
madeup on your side when you walk away I count the steps that you
take. do you see how much I need you right now? Lovely songs for
both of us gently I shook clark and said love its time to get up!
More of the story just like i promised hope you like it!
LetMeGo
05-15-2009, 11:12 AM
That was a sweet update. :)
The paragraphs were an improvement. I'd suggest using a program like Microsoft Word, it'd catch some of the spelling and punctuation errors. Maybe consider getting a beta - someone to proof read your writing and make suggestions to you.
Looking forward to more!
ClanaGirl
05-15-2009, 01:41 PM
thank you LetMeGo i appreciate the fact that you read my work. and can you tell me how i get a beta? oh by the way i will update today!
ClanaGirl
05-16-2009, 10:52 AM
Clana page 3
Clark love I repeated it is time to get up ! Clark got up and opened his eyes they were filled with love I gazed into them they were always so dazzling it was hard to look away.
For him he always called me his angel because I looked like one and was his everyday!
I handed him a black leather jacket with a white shirt and black shorts with a pair of comfy shoes. He took a shower and quickly put them on.
Then I decided on an outfit I got on our honeymoon that I never wore. A white strapples silk top with a light black jacket and short black skirt with tights and a pair of Black high heeled boots.
Clark said Lana can I please just do you hair today? no Clark you can do it tommorow Clark pouted I gave I nfine here do my hair! He curled it gently it did look perfect I thanked him.
And added a little bit of makeup and a few accessories for my outfit . I said I almost forgot here is a pair of sunglasses I had bought two pairs of black sunglasses they made the outfit stunning
good now I put them on it was going to be very warm today. we found Clark’s parent’s in the kitchen and said Mrs.Kent I mean mom its my job to cook I was going to make muffins and coffe now sit down thank you Lana it is nothing mom its my job!
I made two plated of them with 4 different kinds of muffins 2 kinds for martha and 2 coffees for them. Than 2 coffee’s for us and our favorite kinds of muffins
!I grabbed a purse and me and clark were about to leave when they said don’t you need a car?
No remember mom and dad we said together we both can run faster than the speed of light! Oh yes have a good day I left our numbers anda cellphone in case you need to call us bye mom and dad we called.
The new raced at the speed of light when I said go I ran a little faster than Clark In the beginning of our race then when he was about to catch up I flipped. And then I won I stuck out my tongue at clark playfully.
Clark laughed and kissed me quickly you cheater he said while laughing.no Love actually flipping wasn’t against the rules fine you won but don’t get too cocky!
Then Clark surprised me and scooped me into his arms and held me close to him .
we went into the building ignoring the stares from people they looked at us like we shouldn’t be laughing and teasing eachother while gazing lovingly into eachother’s eyes
. We made it to the chief editor’s office and he looked at us like we were too crazy in love but said Lana and Clark Kent welcome to the Daily Planet.
ClanaGirl
05-16-2009, 10:55 AM
Hope you all like it ! there will be 3 more if you like it i have been writing all day!
LetMeGo
05-16-2009, 11:17 PM
Nice update.
There is a beta request thread in the fanfic discussion sub forum. If that doesn't work I guess you could ask a friend or someone on the board.
ClanaGirl
05-17-2009, 09:16 AM
Thank you LetMeGo your feedback really helps a lot and i truly appreciate it!!
I'm posting something totally new on the story and if you don't like it just say the word and i will change it
ClanaGirl
05-17-2009, 09:18 AM
your desks are over there take there and here are your id’s and press passes thank you we left and once we got to the desks he set me down gently.
and we sat at our desks and sipped our coffee eating a few muffins deciding on what story we should do . finally Clark came up with a brilliant Idea I would do my article on Lex Luthor’s death I smiled knowing that evil monster was dead because me and Clark killed him.
And Clark would do it on us who people called the super couple which was us though we had masks and capes. I was wearing red he was wearing red and blue .
we looked like the perfect team we saved a lot of people. We had the pictures already and started typing the story. We were the fastest typers because of our super abilites to go faster than the speed of light we decided to go give a few muffins to Chloe Sullivan since she already had coffee.
She said look the supercouple walked into the building ! thank you Clark And Lana your looking beautiful like always. Thank you Chloe you look good too .
well we have got to get our articles a reporter / superhero’s life is never done!we kept typing and finished than we edited it and it sounded great we gave it to the Editor.
He said Lana and Clark Kent you too may just be my star reporter’s thankyou sir we said. Then it was our lunch break. We just got out the lunches I made I got Clark’s favorite sandwhich,flavored water,An energy bar though we didn’t really need it it helps .
I got my salad and apple and water. We ate and chatted about when were our parent’s leaving how In the world will we have time to make way better outfits well I told Clark I actually am done with our costumes or superhero oufits you could call them that.
We decided we could take an hour or two off clark picked me up I squealed clark stop Kent let me go never he said I gently nudged him he still wouldn’t budge.
I sighed and gave up we told the editor we were taking an hour or two off and he said Kents take the rest of the day off you made two of the best articles I have ever seen you just come back tommorow .will do we said and with that we left the building.
Clark I said yes Lana ! well I just feel bad because we have a way higher job than Chloe and we haven’t been into being reporters at all really until after we were married and the first day we got that job it took Chloe two years just to land hers.
Lana don’t feel bad somehoew he just felt we should be higher for now but remember sooner or later Chloe will get tired of this and we will be there to support her am I right yes now can you smile you know that you have a perfect smile right. Yes Cark here!better he said.
ClanaGirl
05-17-2009, 09:19 AM
here is anohter as i promised i have to make sure the readers like it so be prepared
ClanaGirl
05-17-2009, 09:23 AM
That’s right Lois Oliver said! Lois smiled lovingly at Oliver gazing into his eyes. Me and Clark coughed saying Oliver,Lois.
Oh they said Did we? Yes we said slowly trying to emphathize that we were here! So Lois Clark said casually what is your job at the Daily Planet?
Well Lois started you,Clark have a higher job and better pay trust me on that smallville.I am currently working near Chloe your best friend and my cousin .
And I want to work my way to the top! Anyway Lana tell me how did you and Clark land such a high job.
if you have only been there a couple of months? Well we are very skilled reporters and we type really fast we get our pictures easily but it’s a secret Lana winked.
Thank you Lois now if I were you I would bring lots of coffee it will be hard day for people who aren’t reporter’s so get good sleep.
So guess what my beautiful Lana? What Lana said excitedly .
Mom left today back to Smallville? Lana squealed and jumped into Clark’s arms and threw her arms around him .
And kissed him not letting go and not planning to Clark kissed her back!
just deepening it . She just ran her hands through his hair and he stroked her hair and face slowly .
Finally they stopped and Lana never left Clark’s arms .
Dang Lois thought they must really be deeply in love .
I mean a perfect wedding,a fairytale honeymoon the engagement ring all paid by Oliver.
Lana gave us some tea for the road and Oliver handed them some kind of top secret files,tapes,computer scans.
Bye Lana kissed Oliver’s cheek Clark hugged Lois and they left. I pulled Clark to me remember how Today at the Daily Planet when I said our super hero outfits were done?
Yes Clark whispered well then come on Kal-El I have to show you something.
I ran my hand by the walls till I felt a metal piece I said Lana-El Clark said Kal-El it opened.
We walked in I pulled out a perfect red and blue costume suit for him and with a cape and everything .
I then pullet out mine a beautiful Dark red chiffon dress with a mask,a cape,my 5 inch stilleto heeled boots.
We put them on and Clark said ready to go Lana? Wouldn’t miss it for the world now lets go save the world.
Clark took m yahnd and we raced through the streets of metropolliss .
that’s when our superhearing kicked in someone said help we ran there. I got the first one and kicked him with my stilleto heel and that knocked him down.
Clark point of view now !!!! Lana stood there with here stilleto heel on his chest pressing bits of pressure on
LetMeGo
05-17-2009, 02:22 PM
They're both superheros! It's a great idea.
ClanaGirl
05-18-2009, 03:09 PM
Thanks LetMeGo now this is Where I'm not sure about? I'm going ot post one about Clark and Lana being Kal-El and Lana-El of Krypton now if you don't like it i will switch it out. with a better scene. just tell me i need to really know! here is the next post.
ClanaGirl
05-18-2009, 03:14 PM
him her cape blowing behind her in the wind making her look fierce yet beautiful at the same time .
Clark threw the last punch and the other guy fell over they surrenderd and said who are you guys?
Call us the super couple or the red and blue blurs. The police came and we raced out of there through the streets to our house. I
t was 2:00 am and we were tired we change into the usual type ofclothes we wore to bed and fell asleep and woke up to the lyrics of
I miss you miss you so bad don’t forget you oh its so sad . I put our super couple outfits in a stylish handbag!
We used our superspeed to change and did it within seconds then Clark went out to get the paper and sure enough when he came back.
Lana had cooked a huge stack of Blueberry Pancakes,2diffrent kinds of juices some coffee our favorite kindo f muffins and some fruit.
Ishook my head dazed again by how fast Lana can make perfect meals she even made 2 terrific Lunches already in bags.She said Clark love take breakfast he took it and I will get the bag and our other stuff.
We raced off and I thought I could win but what happened Clark sprinted and by an inch won .
Cheater I muttered hey it wasn’t against the rules .
Clark laughed and stroked my hair playing with it I was slightly annoyed but forgot it and just shook it off.
We went inside laughing and sat down at our desks Clark put all the food down balanced it on one tray and set it down.
Lois walked over to us and said hey smile just as me and Clark
kissed perfect she said then she put the camera away.
Explain now we said well you guys are gettign your pictures hanged up on some wall and I got one shot of each of you and a perfect kissing one.
Oh pancakes she took a plate pit one on grabbed a juice and siad my tip and left.
Clark mumbled breakfast stealer .
hey clark don’t be like that Lois can’t control herself when it coems to my food I make.
Here’s an idea I made and extra batch for you now lets give Chloe the first batch and some juice she has coffee.
So the stilleto,Superman walkedin I was beginning to feel lonely so what brings you here she asked? '
Well we noticed you usually only have a small muffin and coffee .
And Lana had made an Extra batch of pancakes and juice so we decided you could have the extra batch Clark said reluctantly.
And Lois is a breakfast theif .she took some of my favorite pancakes that unacceptable .
Well Lana said i have to go get Clark to our desks we didn’t eat last night and he is starving .
come on Clark I will drag you back if I have to.
We wento to our desks ate some food then we looked at our articles .they were the best the Daily planet has ever published.
ClanaGirl
05-18-2009, 03:15 PM
now Letmego be prepared for this again tell me if i should change to a diffrent paragraph or keep going.
ClanaGirl
05-18-2009, 03:18 PM
Me and Clark were just about to go back upstairs sam a guy who helps said Mr and Mrs. Kent .
call us Clark and Lana sure Clana just get on with it.
here are the jackets,a soft hat and a dark red scarf washed clean and fresh . thankyou Sam.
Here I led Clark to an empty office no one used and changed into my dark red dress added the scarf and hat and my cape and my 5 inch high heeled stilleto boots.
Clark changed into his red and blue suit added his jacket and then we were done.
Clark picked me up into his arms and ran to the Kawatchi Caves put in the special key and we were whisked into the fortress of solitude.
our special site we came to for help. Jor-El asked up to step inside we did the wind blowing my hair In the process.
we said together Father. Kal-El Lana-El welcome thankyou for coming now Kal-El put your wife down!
Clark set me down gently and gave me a quick kiss I stood up.Jor-El spoke Now Lana-El would you do anything for Kal-El ?
Yes Father I truly would do anything for my Kal-El . Good then Lana-El step forward.
Will you undergo a transformation for all the Kryptonian powers you need for your destiny? Father I will do anything.
Then here Lana was lifted up In the air in a sphere of some sort absorbing all the knowledge and power she would need.
then we couldn’t see her for a moment and she came down in a beautiful long gauzy white dress that flowed around her and was her perfect size .
and it wasn’t a dress that you could trip on or if you flipped people could see through it .
it was more of a suit that you put on it was indestructible and it was perfect. Her hair was done in a beautiful way a speical twist ofsome sort with flowers in it and she had on 4 inch heeled white boots she was glowing literally
and she was coming down towards me finally she was down and she kissed me.
Kal-El I love you so much! Lana I do too! Kal-El it is Lana-El silly.
Now Kal-El come will you undergo the full transformation?
Yes Jor-El I will the same thing happened to Clark although he was in a superhero outfit that had a big s in the middle with the kryptonian symbol of el family on it.
mine had it to although it was smalle and you couldn’t see it .
Clark came down and said Lana-El Kal-El she said and kissed him passisonately.
Now Jor-El said Lana-El this is for you it was Lara-El’s she would want you to have it it was beautiful.
Lana gasped It had a Kryptonan Crystal in the middle I loved it so much.Thankyou Jor-El she said.Wait Lana-El I haven’t told you
LetMeGo
05-19-2009, 12:52 AM
Calling them by their kryptonian names works well while they're at the fortress. I wonder what else Jor-El has in store for them.
I've noticed that in your first post you used quotation marks but haven't been doing that in your more recent updates. It would read smoother with the distinction between what they're saying and what they're doing.
ClanaGirl
05-19-2009, 02:58 PM
thank you could you help me find a beta????????? and thank you for the feed back i could cry with tears of joy. you really are helpign me boost my confidence in writing. and thanks i will worl on that but it might take a day so it will be either tongiht or tommorow . your amazing LetMeGo thanks again
LetMeGo
05-20-2009, 10:00 PM
I understand... when I posted my first fic I was so nervous I couldn't eat. I've never been a beta before but if you want you can PM me your updates and I'll look them over.
ClanaGirl
05-28-2009, 02:49 PM
what it protects you from. Blue,Silver ,Black Kryptonite,Magic the 4 most things that are deadly and terrible now that you both have All the
Gettingready for the now new Kal-El and Lana-El .
Kryptonian powers. It was Lara-El’s wish to give that to Kal-El’s wife and now I can.
Now Kal-El I wore this on Krypton it was a symbol that most Kryptonians would die for.
The ring Kal-El posses great power like Lana-El’s necklace when in need and like Lana’Els it will protect you from Black,Silver,Blue kryptonite but your’s will protect you from spells.
Now go my Son,Daughter fufill your destiny I will be here . We flew into the sky with our power of flight it was truly amazing.
We saw everything below we didn’t need to get on a plane we could fly but if needed we could always go to Oliver Queen for the jet.
We dove down and landed lightly on our feet.Kal-El lets go inside I will fix dinner alright Lana-El.
why do we have these weird tapes we downloaded it into the labtops .we had and Lana said Kal-El dinner will be ready in 10 minutes alright Lana-El.
Lana worked in the kitchen moving around at the speed of light making everything and finished in 10 minutes when it would take a human about 3 hours.
I took off my apron and said Come here Kal-El. He just continued to watch I dragged him to the dinnertable .
he said Lana-El I don’t understand it who are the weird people on tape with weapons and why do they have our data and information?
I don’t know Kal-El she thought about it but only remebered Krypton her knwoledge , powers,ablilites,Kale-El and our history.
She said I made steak ,potato’s with just some kind of water. Me and Kal-El ate asking random questions once we were done I washed the dishes and then put them away.
I checked my bag and saw a note from Jor-El saying our instructions and that we should blend in and wear the clothes we had
.But when fighting crime we should wear these outfits so we changed into out pajamas and then I took out our labtops.
And we started to look, who was Oliver Queen, Lois, Who was Chloe? Finally we packed our bags for tommorow .
"Apparently" we work at the Daily Planet suddenly we remebered how to be a reporter and fell asleep in eachother's arms our alarm woke us up.
By accident I smashed it and said oops it’s alright Lana-El he soothed me we took a shower.
And I looked through the closet and found something suitable to wear a red crimson eyelet dress with black calf length boots my black hair was in an elaborate crown on top of my head .
I applied my makeup and was done now for Kal-El I gave him a white dress shirt
With black pants and a leather jacket to match his hair was already done looking natural I added his shoes.
ClanaGirl
05-28-2009, 02:54 PM
Letmego I'm so sorry that i heaven't updated in a while i want your opinion on whether you like it or not. i can take the truth I just need an opinion and it would be great if you were my beta you'd be perfect for the job ! i promise to update 3 of 7 days if the week but check when you can
LetMeGo
05-28-2009, 07:58 PM
I like the idea of them being a super power couple. I'll send you some suggestions when I get a minute or two. I'm working on an update to my fic so it might be a day or two until I get it to you.
ClanaGirl
05-28-2009, 08:10 PM
Thank you Let me go i really appreciate it! any suggestions you have would be wonderful. its alright as long as you give it to me before 2010 ha ha ha. tell me what is your fic and what is it called and about?
LetMeGo
05-28-2009, 11:38 PM
I'll try to get it to you before then. LOL My current fic is Deciding Destiny, it takes place toward the end of season 4 after the episode Spirit. Clark gets struck by lightning and loses his powers.
ClanaGirl
05-29-2009, 05:59 AM
neat i like the idea
LetMeGo
05-30-2009, 12:47 PM
Thanks. :)
ClanaGirl
05-31-2009, 01:03 PM
your welcome and by tommorw i should have another update on this story sorry it took this long writers block for a bit you know!
#7superherofan
06-07-2009, 03:59 PM
he said Lana-El I don’t understand it who are the weird people on tape with weapons and why do they have our data and information?
I don’t know Kal-El she thought about it but only remebered Krypton her knwoledge , powers,ablilites,Kale-El and our history.
who was Oliver Queen, Lois, Who was Chloe? Finally we packed our bags for tommorow .
"Apparently" we work at the Daily Planet suddenly we remebered how to be a reporter and fell asleep in eachother's arms There have been a lot of stories about Clark compelting his training and Lana recieving superpowers to aid Clark in his destiny, but I don't think I've read one yet where Clark and Lana forget their former human lives. That is a really unique plot twist, ClanaGirl, good job.:) It was really brave of you to submit your story even when you weren't confident in your ability.:DI'm trying to piece together a Clark/Lana story myself and I'm realizing how nerveracking, painstaking, and time consuming it can be it can be.;)Please keep updating the story, and lots of luck with all your writing dreams.
ClanaGirl
06-09-2009, 12:05 PM
hey guys i have been on a trip to D.C. but I'm back now and ready to type away thank you for all your comments they are appreciated. so back to my story hope ya like it. I got breakfast at a restruant here not bad i thought. the ni rushed it ot the Daily Planet nad came back ot my Kal-El then i grabbed my handbag and then got ready forthe day. Then Kal-El grabbed me and put me in his arms and we started to fly and made it to work.
We raced in and blew papers past us then stopped at our desks. We looked at our directions and saw that we had to type the stories on our labtops as quick as possible and make peace. what? Kal-El asked confused why type and why nto jsut use Kryptons perfect technology?
Because Kal-El Lana-El said smiling we are on Earth I know you wish we're on Krypton but Earht is now our hoem for the time being,that means we are striclty to stay undercover and use their poor technology got it? Yes honey Kal-El said sighing.Thank you love Lana-El said kissing him softly.
Then I got out the breakfast trays form under the desk and gave on to Kal-El. he looked at the tray and saw ,
Yum a huge stack of blue berry pancakes drizzled in syrup, with a huge side of rispy bacon and fresh scrambled eggs. Then I tossed him an Extra Large cup of coffee mixed with cinnamon,a little vanilla with the usual.
He caught it I laughed at him and put whipped cream on his nose he did it to me andi took it off and tasted it oh that tastes great.
Then slowly I got out the same on a second tray and said dig in love. We started to eat we took a few bites of pancakes and then we drank a big sip of our coffee's,and then looked at someone standing near us.
“Hi,” the young women said.
We stared at her then said, “Who are you?”
“Clark, Lana it’s me Lois Lane, your friend!” Remeber you live at the Kent Farm and our the son and daughter of Martha and Jonathan Kent ring a bell? Come on Smallville you have to remeber something?
“Sorry Miss Lane but we don’t know you or the Kents.
we're Kal-El and Lana-El of Krypton, our parents are not the Kents they are Jor-El and Lara-El our loving mother and father.
Look I know you and you are either playing dumb or your just stupid. and you truly are my best firneds so i didn't want to have to do this but you leave me no choice.
Lois quickly spun around a nd used her spin kick but right in midair Lana-El grabbed her leg and twisted it backwards and sent her flying through the stairs out into Chloe's desk. Oww she cried out in pain limping slightly. Lois came bakc and took a strip of Clark's bacon and then ran back to her desk.
Lana-El why did she call us Clark and Lana?
don’t know my sweet Kal-El. However let’s finish eating after all we have to blend in, they all eat here not at home in the morning.”
We continued eating wondering who was that angry Lois Lane? Then I had the most brilliant idea. Somehow we had gotten some files, tapes from some guy named Oliver Queen who runs queen industries and Luthor Corp. Lois Lane was in the files we pulled up, it showed that she works in the basement of the Daily Planet. She is not a reporter but wants to be and she is very talkative not shy, has a big temper, and is the girlfriend of Oliver Queen!
“Okay so now we know that. Kal-El, I'm scared what if they try to get us?”
He held me close to him wrapping his arms around me saying, “Lana-El that will never happen so don’t worry Love. Besides Jor-El will help us along with each other and we have these now,” and took out the necklace Jor-El gave me “let’s put them on.
“We could be in danger at any second Kal-El,” he clasped the necklace around my neck it looked so beautiful on me.
We finished eating threw our trash away and started discussing stuff. We had a long time to live, 200 years or more at the least and we pretty much will never look old. This underlined part I think you could cut out.
So just then another girl came up to us and said, “Hey C.K. L.K.”
“Who are you?”
“Chloe Sullivan. We have been best friends since kindergarten, ring a bell dingdong?”
I stood up faster than the speed of light, getting in this Chloe person’s face. “Listen very closely Miss Sullivan nobody speaks that way to my Kal-El. I don’t want to ever hear you insult him in any way.
ClanaGirl
06-09-2009, 12:06 PM
hope you like it guys sorry for takign so long. hope you will still read it!
LetMeGo
06-11-2009, 08:25 PM
Nice update. I'm looking forward to seeing what you've got planned. I hope what I sent you helped out.
ClanaGirl
06-12-2009, 04:58 PM
Hey Letmego great editing love the feedback you gave me you too #7superherofan terrific there will be another update soon by tommorow at 12:00 pm lunch glad you like my story.
#7superherofan
06-12-2009, 10:44 PM
This is such an interesting story,ClanaGirl. Kal-El and Lana-El interacting with their former best friends was so funny, as was Lois stealing Kal-el's bacon. I laughed at that for almost a minute.PPMS:):)
ClanaGirl
06-13-2009, 02:27 PM
Operation Clark and Lana
“OK! OK! Lana you win, now what is up? I thought you two never wanted to embrace your destiny, nor were you willing,” Chloe added with a hint of sarcasm.
“Listen, Miss Sullivan, we don't know you we looked through the files it appears that you are smart and you founded watchtower and are our best friend and sidekick as well. Am I correct?” Lana and Clark asked.
“Yes you are,” Chloe said faking a smile. “Maybe you can show me all your powers?”
“We don't show anyone our powers Miss Sullivan, nor do we plan to unless we trust you. Now can you tell us about Oliver Queen?” Lana asked, speaking slowly, each of her words laced with ice.
What a b***h, Chloe thought then she said, “Of course Lana.” Lana-El glared at her icily. “I mean Lana-El. Ollie is your boss and trust worthy helper in time of need and aid. He founded the team. Remember, Stiletto, Superman, the emerald green blur, and the red and blue blur?
“Anyway here are photos with descriptions of powers and stuff you will need.
“I thought you guys were my friends but I must be wrong considering the way you are treating me. Goodbye Lana and Clark,” she said angrily and then what made it worse was that her two best friends called out after her.
“Its Kal-El and Lana-El of Krypton.”
She wanted to punch this Lana. She was snotty, rude, upfront, and upset, with stylish clothes Chloe didn’t know she owned. Since when did Lana and Clark ever shop in Europe, France, or Italy for designer clothing. Where is Lana's usual bronze or pink or white or black?
Now she prefers only the best colors and designer clothes. It was so unlike her, she had a gucci bag and was fully clothed in prada and then she had on brand new glossy designer pumps she usually wears regular clothes.
Clark, too, wears expensive designer clothes. No more farm worn boots or worn red jacket or faded jeans and plaid or red. Now it’s only a perfect appearance of a model for him. He and Lana both could make any magazine. Since when has any of Clarks clothing shown all his muscles?
There was only one person that could make them forget everyone and everything except Krypton and Kryptonian stuff and every new trend car, language and fashion possible. Jor-El. She needed the team its time I started to call the team for a Clana remix they need action they will get it.
Chloe pulled out her PDA and said “Watchtower online” and with that she said in to it, “Impulse.”
Bart came running and said, “What’s up gorgeous? Ready to travel the world with me?”
“No way Bart maybe when your mature and grown up. Now take me to Watchtower’s database and tell Ollie to call the team.” When Bart was about to argue she said, “Clark and Lana need our help now. I don’t care where anyone is, it doesn’t matter if they’re in France, we need them.
“And make sure Emily and AC don't go super speeding away into the ocean again. Last time they spent two weeks in Hawaii on a vacation, their excuse was that the water needed to be surfed.”
“You got it gorgeous,” Bart said with a smile and with that they took off.
#7superherofan
06-13-2009, 09:30 PM
[quote=ClanaGirl;4938510] He founded the team. Remember, Stiletto, Superman, the emerald green blur, and the red and blue blur?[/quote I wasn't quite sure who you were identifying here. Is Lana part of the team as Stiletto, or is it Lois like on the show? The EGB is probably Green Arrow, but is the Clark both the RBB and Superman? Just a question, 'cause obviously I'm braindead and can't comprehend what I'm reading.
So, what happened to Clark and Lana to turn them into permantent Kal-El and Lana-El wasn't voluntary, but more of Jor-El's endless manipulations. Chloe thinks so at least anyway, and boy is she not happy. Thanks for another fun update, ClanaGirl, and please post another exciting plot twisting update soo.:D
ClanaGirl
06-14-2009, 12:27 PM
sorry #7superherofan i meant Lana to be the Black blur I'm sorry and yes i think i will use Stilletto for Lanas name actually what i mean is that Chloe meant that they usually said the RBB and instead he wants to be Called Superman yes it is Another one of Jor-El's Endless tricks and manipualtions because of his stupid dream for them to forget human emotions and stuff and to do a full time job on beign superheros yes.
of course the choice to be brain washed was so not theirs when they went into the fortress for the rest of their powers Jor-El was sneaky and had mad sure they only rembered Krypton and kryptonian stuff. so yes youre comprehending perfectly i hope this helps you understand I'm glad you love my story.
LetMeGo
06-14-2009, 05:47 PM
Very interesting developments! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
#7superherofan
06-14-2009, 06:51 PM
sorry #7superherofan i meant Lana to be the Black blur I'm sorry and yes i think i will use Stilletto for Lanas name actually what i mean is that Chloe meant that they usually said the RBB and instead he wants to be Called Superman yes it is Another one of Jor-El's Endless tricks and manipualtions because of his stupid dream for them to forget human emotions and stuff and to do a full time job on beign superheros yes.
of course the choice to be brain washed was so not theirs when they went into the fortress for the rest of their powers Jor-El was sneaky and had mad sure they only rembered Krypton and kryptonian stuff. so yes youre comprehending perfectly i hope this helps you understand I'm glad you love my story.Thanks for the explanation,ClanaGirl. Totally use Stiletto for Lana's secret identity, nothing bugged me more about that episode on Smallvile than Stiletto being mistaken for the true love of the RBB when she was really Lois and not our Lana. I wish they'd show her just one more time at least so Lana's fans can see that she is using her awesome powers to help people, just like she learned from Clark. Jor_El has more tricks up his sleeve than the last thing that had a lot of tricks up his sleeve, I hope that Chloe and the JL team can outwit him and get their friends back. PPMS:)
ClanaGirl
06-14-2009, 09:30 PM
there will be an update by noon tommrow guys hope ya like it but its at noon on the dot.
ClanaGirl
06-15-2009, 03:57 PM
Bart set her down and she ran to open doors of Watchtower and she rushed into the room and picked her earpiece off the desk, placing it over her ear. She said “Watchtower Online.” The screen lit up with her picture she sat down in a comfy leather chair.
Then Bart pulled his PDA out and clipped it over his ear and said, “Impulse Online.”
Then Chloe and Bart pulled out their cell phones and typed in a quick message and the screen lit up and suddenly two voices they wanted to hear came on.
“Canary online.”
”Cyborg online, ”
They walked in and said, “We’re here what do you need?”
Bart told them to sit down and they plopped down on the couches.
Then they heard one of the voices they were dying to hear the most “Arrow Online,” Ollie walked in and said, “Guys I came as soon as I could, what’s up?”
“Clana’s up, that’s what. Take a seat Ollie, here are the profiles and photos and data from the database I found.”
“My God!” Ollie said shocked “are those two people Clark and Lana?”
“Actually, its now Kal-El and Lana-El, son and daughter of Jor-El and Lara-El.”
“No wonder you said it was urgent, guys!”
Then Chloe and Bart said, “Find AC and Emily, they aren’t answering and I think they went somewhere secluded to be alone and in private for one of the few things they love”
“Let me guess, ?”
“Yes, now pull up their pictures” Emily and AC’s pictures were on the screen.
Emily had insisted on a picture of her posing in her hero outfit looking perfect and AC agreed she looked perfect.
“We guessed Hawaii but they were wrong finally found their location they were in California, 10 miles off the coast in the ocean.”
Suddenly they heard Emily and ACs voices and they said “Hot Flash… and Aquaman online.”
They came in they were in swim wear Emily was in a red bikini and AC a speedo with his shirt off Emily’s hair was wet and fell down to her waist but it fell around and draped it looked great and AC’s hair was wet and tangled slightly but looked great.
“Hey guys we’re…” the couple smiled and he kissed her a little too intimately. She swatted his hand away but kissed him back with a big smile on her face.
“Hey Guys California was awesome I mean it the surfing was great we scared a shark away. We also ate some wonderful seafood I love their shrimp, so many delicious kinds.”
“I agree my love” AC said.
“Guys we have a problem now that you are out of your lovey dovey moment. Here are your files, you need to look over and some pictures tell us what you think of this.”
Emily looked it over and in seconds said “Wow! Big Clana Emergency. I love her Gucci purse, and look she is fully clothed in Prada did you see those glossy boots? I have the same ones though they are better and those are not exactly my type of choosing. Her style is different, glamorous but she doesn’t wear too much of it and that brings down her fashion taste. I guess we can never bring the country girl out of her but you can take her to the city.” Emily shook her head mournfully.
“Ollie you can’t be serious,” Emily and AC said in unison.
Ollie, Chloe, Bart all shook their heads, “AC I’m sorry but Jor-El did this and its not like we have another Kryptonian on our hands to go to the Fortress and save them from becoming superheroes who were brainwashed by their own father forever.”
“Actually,” AC said loudly, “Emily is a Kryptonian she just refused to tell anyone and made me swore on secrecy.”
“Really Em?” Ollie asked In shock and surprise.
“Yes,” Emily said “like Kara, I was in suspended animation but only for a few years yet I wont age since I’m immortal. Soon I’m going to find Kara I’ll need her help.
“So you could go to the Fortress and talk to Jor-El?” They all asked.
“Every El has a key and I have several pendants I got from Lara-El on Krypton before it was destroyed, as well as some other possessions I won’t mention.
"I can shoot out large beams of fire out of my eyes like Clark and Lana". I also have X-ray vision and as every Kryptonians weakness we can't see through lead. And I can see vast distances that humans cant see to. And I have perfected my ability to fly.
And like I said I am immortal and will live probably as Long as
Kal-El and Lana-El. Also the most amazing things are that I can teleport,go completely invisible with people more than one or two.
And then I have every other power Kal and Lana have,the last bit is that I can see into the future,and if Clark and Lana stay like this we may never have our friends back,” she said mournfully her eyes full of sadness and brimming with tears.
AC held her in a tight embrace, “Em it will be okay love” he said soothing her slightly.
hope you like it next will be a big shock and surprise for you guys
ClanaGirl
06-15-2009, 04:01 PM
hope this makes up for being about 4 hours late guys sorry
LetMeGo
06-15-2009, 05:07 PM
Nice update, can't wait for the surprise.
ClanaGirl
06-15-2009, 05:46 PM
thanks LetMeGo i will send you the surprise tommorow i need you to look at it please?
#7superherofan
06-15-2009, 10:58 PM
Then Chloe and Bart said, “Find AC and Emily, they aren’t answering and I think they went somewhere secluded to be alone and in private for one of the few things they love”
Suddenly they heard Emily and ACs voices and they said “Hot Flash… and Aquaman online.”
“Actually,” AC said loudly, “Emily is a Kryptonian she just refused to tell anyone and made me swore on secrecy.”
“Really Em?” Ollie asked In shock and surprise.
“Yes,” Emily said “like Kara, I was in suspended animation but only for a few years yet I wont age since I’m immortal. Soon I’m going to find Kara I’ll need her help.
And then I have every other power Kal and Lana have,the last bit is that I can see into the future,and if Clark and Lana stay like this we may never have our friends back,” she said mournfully her eyes full of sadness and brimming with tears.
AC held her in a tight embrace, “Em it will be okay love” he said soothing her slightly.
hope you like it next will be a big shock and surprise for you guys
Ohhh, updates with all the members of the JL present and accounted for are some of my favorites:D, and ClanaGirl you wrote them very well. You really captured the group's dynamic with the playful bantering and their deep concern for Clark and Lana. I wasn't quite sure who Emily, aka "Hot Flash"(boy that's a great name) was, but clearly as a member of the House of El, she'll play an important role in the team's plan. Is her character entirely a product of your own imagination? Can't wait for the next shocking and surprising update, ClanaGirl, especially if a certain Kara Zor-El will put in an apperence.:):)
LetMeGo
06-16-2009, 11:28 AM
thanks LetMeGo i will send you the surprise tommorow i need you to look at it please?
No problem. Send it and I'll look at it as soon as I can.
ClanaGirl
06-16-2009, 02:17 PM
guys for now i had to make a change my labtop made a glitch and now the story looks like this if you can fix it tell me
ClanaGirl
06-16-2009, 02:19 PM
I mean i wanted ot add a new line not ruin it its sad
#7superherofan
06-16-2009, 10:15 PM
Sorry about the laptop problems, it's so annoying when that happens. Hope you can get it fixed soon.
ClanaGirl
06-17-2009, 10:48 AM
thanks I still have the glitch but with LetMeGo's help i believe it is a pretty good all around update hope ya like it.
ClanaGirl
06-17-2009, 10:54 AM
guys this is just the beginning part 1 there will be a second part soon where the fortress talk will begin and soemthign with Kara enjoy the first part for now.
Emily, not soothed, shot back, “NO it won’t if Clark and Lana continue like this. Jor-El will never change them back and that is the truth, don’t you understand!?
“I have mourned Krypton’s destruction for a long time. I was just lucky to have some tips from Lara and Jor-El before they died on Krypton. I have some other things too, that is how I know a lot about Kal-El’s problem and Lana-El’s too.
“Here's something else you don't know about me! I have no problem with killing because I was once sent to the Phantom Zone and I had to kill to stay alive. I’m not proud of it but it is the real world’s truth. You have to stay with your instincts and be on look out for danger.
“I'm going to talk to my numskull of an Uncle Jor-El he somehow likes me but Kara is a whole 'nother story. I won't even start on it, however I will give you this ever since Zor-El tried to kill Jor-El to get Lara-El they have been enemies. If you do the math and it equals he doesn't like Kara Zor-El. So I'm the only one who can save them. Good bye, guys.
“AC, this is incase I don 't come back,” Emily put her lips on AC's and kissed him with all the passion she had built up and then after a few minutes she broke it and said, “I love you.”
Then she took the lift up to the lobby where she raced up to her room in Ollie's huge Pent House. She smiled her room was all pink.
sorry guys these parts are underlined a little detail my friend gave me on this part she insisted that all this info so here it is.Then Emily raced around the room looking for the thing in her closet and finally she found what she was looking for Emily put on a Navy Blue suit , a white gucci blouse and glossy dark blue pumps. She then added her El Crest pendant and put her glossy blonde hair up in a stylish bun and swept her side bangs up for a whispy look. Emily braced herself for Jor-El before using her El pendant and then signaled for Kara before flying up into the air and racing to the Fortress.
Emily made it to the Kawatche caves and put her pink key in and she was whisked away to the Fortress in a swirling bright golden light. She made her way into the ice castle and said loudly, “Jor-El?”
my surprise is up next
#7superherofan
06-17-2009, 01:11 PM
Emily's character is so good, I love that her room and Fortress Key are pink.;) Can't wait to find out how she and Kara will talk some sense into Jor-El. SOMEONE'S NEEDED TO FOR THE PAST SIX YEARS!!!:mad:
ClanaGirl
06-17-2009, 01:29 PM
#&SuperHerofan that has been one of the things i have always wanted ot do to Jor-El I am sick of all his crap about destiny i know Clark has to do his destiny but he should back off and just listen to his sons problems so you will have your fill on Jor-El being yelled at. and there will also be something revealed about Jor-El wanting them both to do their destiny and the teams worry
LetMeGo
06-17-2009, 02:43 PM
Nice update! Jor-El needs a talking to, that's for sure!
ClanaGirl
06-17-2009, 04:51 PM
Thanks when i send it to you i hope you will have your fill of Jor-El's yellign fest he has to hear.
#7superherofan
06-17-2009, 08:30 PM
I am sick of all his crap about destiny i know Clark has to do his destiny but he should back off and just listen to his sons problems so you will have your fill on Jor-El being yelled at. Exactly! Bring on the yelling fest!
ClanaGirl
06-18-2009, 09:29 AM
thank you #7superherofan and LetMeGo you rock this chapter is for both of you!
ClanaGirl
06-18-2009, 05:20 PM
“Yes Emily what can I do for you?” Jor-El asked.
Emily mimicked Jor-El and said, “Emily what can I do for you,” in a sour tone.
And then she said “Jor-El you know what you did now fix it now!
“Emily!” he said in a warning tone “You haven’t done your destiny either and AC can’t be apart of it.”
Emily said, “Oh so now its about that well what the hell do you know about love! Kal-El has tried but you always talk about this destiny crap well I DON’T GIVE A D***M. Do you hear me uncle I will do it louder.
“You used to be a fun loving uncle you let me play with Lara in the kitchen and help her bake cookies or yummy pastries for the family and we had fun you taught me so much.
“And now look at you Uncle take a close look around. Do you have your sweet Emily with you No hell you don’t. Where is the fun loving Uncle Jor-El I knew that is the one everyone loved not this sour cross bitter voice here in the Fortress who Only talks about destiny Junk well do you still have any bit of the uncle I once knew in you?” Emily yelled loudly and said, “Jor-El ANSWER NOW!
“Hold your tongue Emily and listen. Kal-El and Lana-El have a destiny and needed to fulfill that someday they will thank me. I did what I had to do every father on Krypton would have done the same thing.”
“WHAT,” Emily yelled! She was beyond furious now. “LISTEN TO ME UNCLE! IF YOU THINK THAT Kal and Lana will actually thank you than you wrong the world needs them the right way not zombies. Don’t you understand?” Emily pleaded.
She continued and said “Kal-El and Lana-El are zombies practically they just go to work eat lunch come home Lana-El cooks dinner. They go to sleep after making love and then it starts again and again. They threw Tess Mercer through an open window and if me and AC hadn’t caught her she would be dead right now. You’re just lucky that Tess thought it was a dream and we flew her to her office and sang her to sleep. WANT MORE CAUSE I HAVE TONS MORE TO SAY!”
Jor-El suddenly pulled out a crystal and it fell into her hands along with many others he said, “See these?”
Emily was just about to throw it up in the air and let it envelope her when suddenly Kara Zor-El shot up out of nowhere and took Emily in her arms and flew her over to one of the ice crystals where she tried to make her sit down but then saw Emily loved the outfit sighed and said, “The third crystal to the left in your hand, throw it up in the air and out will come comfy seats to sit on that won’t ruin your outfit.”
“Hey, one thanks Kara and two I bought this outfit today and have plenty you can use so don’t whine or give me that annoyed look with all your dramatic sighing.”
“Em talk about Dramatic you could win the academy awards for that ask the team I talked to them they agree and after seeing your room or should is say rooms I totally vote yes.“
Emily huffed and flipped her hair but obediently sat down on one of the chairs.
Then Kara said, “Jor-El listen to this its from Emily and since I won’t let her speak here it is I AM SICK OF ALL THIS DESTINY CRAP CUT IT OUT UNCLE TURN KAL AND LANA BACK TO NORMAL DO IT OR ELSE KARA AND I WILL DESROY THE FORTRESS FOREVER!”
Jor-El sighed he knew he had to compromise and said Emily, “Sit up, you win. Now all you have to do is get Kal-El and Lana-El to the fortress and into two of these three crystal chambers and they will be back to normal.”
“Hey what is a third one doing there?” Emily asked tapping her foot impatiently arms crossed.
“Em, you never will change will you? The third one is for you, Em, to look back into time on Krypton. I think you would like to try it out.”
Emily got up and super sped into the chamber and the door was forced shut.
“Jor-El what, in the name of all that’s holy, is that?” Kara asked, cocking her head to the side.
“Kara Zor-El don’t worry, I’m just reprogramming her memories so she knows of her Kryptonian ancestry, all of Krypton, and her powers but what about the rest of everything else like AC and Bart and Ollie she will remeber them AC will just be her number1 priority besides shopping and fashion and the teams fashion and them. AC will be her main thing.
can’t believe what I see in her mind at night its horrible. Like Rose and Emmet in that vampire book Twilight.I never want to see Emily at Night with AC ever again in her head.
“She is done lets get her out or she will only remember what Kal and Lana do” Kara said with worry and ran to her cousin’s side.
Of course Kara she will be a little out of it today here try some of these just pop a few in her mouth. What are they? Kara he said shocked they are Kryptonian candy rare treats I gave out on Krypton they will help her think straight. Kara scooped up the candy on the tray and put it in Emily’s bag then she took her cousin in her arms and flew her out of the Fortress and said thanks Jor-El! Then she heard Emily in her sleep mumble thanks Uncle and then say if you don’t let them change back we will destroy..
she fell silent that worried Kara a bit Emily was almost never quiet. Then she went into Watchtower and super sped Emily into the room Watchtower where AC and the guys were shocked.
AC ran over to Kara and took Emily in his arms and cradled her. He kissed her passionately with all the passion he had felt for her and more. And suddenly her eyes fluttered open and she looked into a pair of sea blue eyes and said AC?
Yes Em I am here how did I get here and wake up? Kara cut in and said Em its like Sleeping Beauty it was funny and nuts at the same time and you even have her beautiful hair color and hair.but your features are perfect and Kryptonian which is clearly better thna the characters one and a better body its incredible.
Here she handed Emily her purse and Emily popped a candy in her mouth and she remembered everything clearly all the events and said. Everyone I found a way to reverse Clark and Lana back to normal..
LetMeGo
06-18-2009, 05:38 PM
Nice update! Now it's just a matter of getting Clark and Lana to the Fortress, that may not be as easy as it sounds.
#7superherofan
06-18-2009, 11:12 PM
“You used to be a fun loving uncle you let me play with Lara in the kitchen and help her bake cookies or yummy pastries for the family and we had fun you taught me so much.
“And now look at you Uncle take a close look around. Do you have your sweet Emily with you No hell you don’t. Where is the fun loving Uncle Jor-El I knew that is the one everyone loved not this sour cross bitter voice here in the Fortress who Only talks about destiny Junk well do you still have any bit of the uncle I once knew in you?” Emily yelled loudly and said, “Jor-El ANSWER NOW!
Like Rose and Emmet in that vampire book Twilight.I never want to see Emily at Night with AC ever again in her head. Are you a fellow "Twilight-er" as well as a fellow Clark/Lana lover, ClanaGirl? That's awesome if you are, and so is this update.:D Emily did a fantastic job when she confronted Jor-El, I'm glad that she contrasted his Fortress attitude with his personality back on Krypton. The interaction between Kara and Emily was very well written, as well as funny. I loved how they went from talking about their clothes to screaming at Jor-El.:rotfl::D Really expected the chambers to be a trap for Emily, but thankfully she seems to be all right, and the JL'ers can rescue zombie Clark and Lana. Thanks for a great bedtime story. PPMS
ClanaGirl
06-19-2009, 05:13 PM
sorry this is late #7superherofan I am glad you liked what I did I tried ot use as much humor as possible and give Jor-El a big mouthful of a lecture and tlaking to.
ClanaGirl
06-28-2009, 12:28 PM
Now I am offically on and updating hope you like it and that it makes up for me being gown so long.
ClanaGirl
06-28-2009, 02:07 PM
Lana-El was in the kitchen making lunch when suddenly she spotted something red and something blue.
She quickly super sped over to the objects and picked up two tiny earpieces. One was blue and one was red she clipped it over her ear and said Stilletto online. Then she yelled Kal-El over here this is amazing put this on now.
Kal-El put the earpiece on and then said Lana-El we're going to WatchTower follow me. He ran out the door and Lana-El ran after him.
They stood in front of a remake of the Isis though its bigger. They ran inside and went straight up to the doors of watchtower and pulled them open. Lana-El walked straight in and said who runs watchtower and why are we here?
Ollie calmy walked over to the couple and said you guys happen to be part of our team the Justice League now we have a big surprise for you Lana if you will come sit down.
Lana-El said its Lana-El and this is Kal-El we're not your so called Clark and Lana. okay okay Ollie put his hands up and said please sit down. Fine Lana-El went straight up to the chair he indicated to and sat down.
Ollie said now go Hot Flash wrap it around her Aquaman get Clark now. Then Ollie pulled out his bow and arrow and shot the Kryptonite dart at Lana-El. She moved quickly and turned around flexibly and said you will never get Lana-El and Kal-El we're invincible.
Emily,AC,Diana,,Cyborg,Ollie all said are you sure about that Lana-El? Now Ollie do it. Ollie took his shot he aimed the Kryponite dart at her and shot her in the back.
Lana collasped down onto the floor where Emily motioned for AC to hold her down. He did and then Emily super sped around her and quickly wrapped the rope around her until she was bound tightly. Then They saw Kal-El and Bart said Hey C.K. for someone who is so strong you have a big head. Clark said Please you don't know my weakness.
Oh really go take a look at your wife C.K. then tell me if I don't know your weakness. Kal-El looked and then Ollie shot him in the back too with a kryptonite dart and he collapsed then Emily and AC held him down while Chloe,Bart and Ollie tied him up.
Then they said Kara are you in? Yes I am bring me Kal and Lana and I will take my cousins from there. thank you everyone for all you have done I know Kal and Lana have been not there usual amazing selves since they usually are always like a breath of fresh air.
Okay Kara we trust you Emily and AC said with big smiles. Ollie and Cyborg came in two along with Bart and Chloe. They still had the Kryptonite darts in their backs and they hada cut on their cheek and Lana had an icy glare on her face she was cursing in over 30 different languages.
Chloe said Lana I care about you so much you know that right? Lana-El only reached up and touched Chloe's face and said I do know that now get me out and we can go do something please she said through clenched teeth.
Sorry Lana but we have to get you back to normal you two Kal-El. its again Lana-El.
Bart just said Chloe calm down don't say something you'll regret. Chloe calmed down and said Clark and Lana we will make you better. Emily,AC,Ollie,Cyborg go bring then to Kara Zor-El she is waiting.
They broght the El couple to Kara and she took Clark in her arms and motioned for Emily to take Lana and they flew to the Fortress and Emily put in her key and the 4 of them were whisked away to the Fortress and They called out and said Jor-El we have them.
Good Job Emily and Kara now you Kara go get Kal-El into the blue crystal chamber first one ot the left. Kal-El struggled as Kara dragged him to the chamber and threw him in then she dusted off her hands and said Kal-El as your cousin I love you and we all want you to be okay so you are staying in there.
Then Jor-El said Emily take Lana-El to the red crystal chamber on the right. Emily dragged Lana and halfway through Lana said stop dragging me Em so she jsut picked her up and threw her head first into the red chamber and then she motioned for Kara top shut Kal-El's and that she will shut Lana's. They shut each chamber and ignored their cousins screaming.
Lana-El and Kal-El screamed in fury and agony as the pain was the worst they could ever feel as they were enveloped in a bright golden light.
and then finally the light stopped and then they were brought down and as Kara and Emily opened the chamber's doors and gasped.
#7superherofan
06-28-2009, 04:40 PM
Yah, the team found a way to save Clark and Lana. At least I hope so, Kara and Emily seemed surprised when the chambers opened. Jor-El isn't up to more tricks, is he?:mad: Loved the action, Green K can be such a pest, but it does come in handy when a super couple needs to be subdude. Lana-El cursing in thirty languages was pretty funny.:DPPMS, ClanaGirl.
LetMeGo
06-28-2009, 06:17 PM
What a mean place to leave it! ;) I wonder why they gasped.
ClanaGirl
06-29-2009, 01:06 PM
Thanks and I am sorry I promise to post again today I hope the long update made up for me being so late.
ClanaGirl
06-29-2009, 01:53 PM
Lana came out again but she looked different now she was clothed in a bronze dress with matching heels her hair was wavy and her brown eyes were full of anger Clark was dressed in a black suit.
Lana? Clark? Emily asked. Yes Em its us. Yeah Emily ran to them and jumped into their arms and knocked them down hugging them tightly saying never be Kal-El and Lana-El for good ever again promise me that.
Emily we swear on our lives that we will not be Kal-El and Lana-El for good but we vaguely remeber throwing Tess out the window can you tell us about that Lana asked her eyes sparkling. Sure we're so glad you're back ot normal. Kara will you please get Emily off us? Sure Em get off them Emily pulled them up and then took the Kryptonite darts out.
Clark then yelled Jor-El did you do this to us? Kara said as much as I would still love to kick Jor-El's butt and hurt him he is my Uncle and Emily gave him a good talking or yelling you could say she said laughing.
But don't be mad and don't destroy the Fortress either Just make Jor-El apoligize.
Kal-El,Lana-El he hesistated I am sorry but I just wanted you to complete your destiny. Never do that again Lana said as hatred filled her eyes because they began to flash dangerously.
Lana calm down Kara warned he did it Jor-El made us brainwahsed and I am supposed ot calm down and forget it like the old Lana would. She isn't here anymore I grew up quite a bit when I was Lana-El and I learned that no one backstabs me.
Lana you're coming with us goodbye Jor-El. They firmly tried ot get her away btu they had to pick her up. So they held her up by her arms and then picked her up and carried her away out of the Fortress to WatchTower.
Let Me Go Lana yelled. No Lana we care about you Clark will you take her legs while we take her arms. Sure Emily. He gently picked Lana up and Then held her firmly while she tried to get away. We knew she wanted revenge and hell she was not getting it.
So then the team said Lana welcome back and then they said will you stop struggling we almost let you go you know. Fine Lana said now put me down Kal-El I mean it. Fine Lana-El. Now we're oging back to Clark and Lana.
However when we're in a fight or mad its back to Kal-El and Lana-El.
Everyone groaned and said Clark! Lana! you're not going back to being jerks Lana and Clark come with us. When they wouldn't budge Kara picked Clark up and took him to his room in the Pent house and then Emily opened the closet.
Clark gasped Lana! what happened to my plaid where is red and blue my shirts and my shorts and my socks even my boxers are gone and replaced by all this shiny clothing.
Hey Emily said your Plaid looked horrible anyway we were going ot throw it out anyway calm down.
Lana screamed when she saw her closet. Emily,Diana,Ollie,Cyborg,AC where is all my other Clothes these look like they are from one of Em's stores she shops at oh really Lana prove it.not my usual ones. Calm down Lana these clothes are better Emily and AC and Bart,Chloe,Ollie,Diana and Cyborg said to make an effort for calm Lana. Fine but I expect to see at least half of this gone she said gesturing to the pink.
No Emily said come on Pink is the best color please Lana she began to pout and whine. Fine half of the pink goes the other stays deal. Deal they removed half of it.
Happy they all said. Yes. Good because you look fatter than usual Lana Bart joked
Lana punched him in the shoulder that hure he complained. Maybe you should think of what you say next time and that won't happen Bart Lana said smiling. Fine but I am going ot go get a Pizza anyone want some?
No Bart we all said in your always hungry Bart you could win the award for eating them ost junk food and pizza. Hey that's mena its the truth now who wants Chinese food Lana asked? We all do the team said. Alright then lets go make Ollie call and lets go party!
who's with me I am ready AC said me too Emily called me three Cybrog said me too Clark agreed finally even diana agreed. Then we all went into a room and decorated it like a club and then left Ollie to the chinese food.
I will go get the chinese food Ollie said mumbling under his breath but next time Bart is getting it he said. No way Man Bart said I deserve a break. Bart you say that every time it works doesn't it. Ollie said thats it you're getting it. he called Clark out and he made bart go get it and then Left with Clark and said C.K. lets go party. I so agree with you Ollie then lets do it man.
ClanaGirl
06-29-2009, 01:57 PM
Hey guys I just posted since I thought about what LetMeGo said and then thought I should write more of it so here it is guys hope you like it.
#7superherofan
06-29-2009, 10:33 PM
Hey Emily said your Plaid looked horrible anyway we were going ot throw it out anyway calm down.
Lana screamed when she saw her closet. Emily,Diana,Ollie,Cyborg,AC where is all my other Clothes these look like they are from one of Em's stores she shops at oh really Lana prove it.not my usual ones. Calm down Lana these clothes are better Emily and AC and Bart,Chloe,Ollie,Diana and Cyborg said to make an effort for calm Lana. Fine but I expect to see at least half of this gone she said gesturing to the pink.
No Emily said come on Pink is the best color please Lana she began to pout and whine. Fine half of the pink goes the other stays deal. Deal they removed half of it.
WHAT'S SO WRONG WITH PINK, LANA?:D Seriously, I think she was her most cute back in her pastel days. Emily is such a terrific person, she's tough, she's passionate, and she's got sublime fashion sense, begging Lana to keep the pink, telling Clark to ditch the flannel. Such a relief to have Clark and Lana back to normal, but Lana was understandably not pleased with Jor-El.:mad: I'm so glad that they made him apologize. The JLA party sounds fun, yum, Chinese food. Question: was Bart's comment about a fatter Mrs. Kent just a joke, or is there a reason she could be putting on a few extra pounds?;):lol: Thanks for the updates, ClanaGirl. PPMS:)
ClanaGirl
06-30-2009, 09:34 AM
Bart's comment was a joke. Thanks for listening I have plenty more Clana in store I will not quit I promise you that. Actually I was thinking that the JLA could all have a big Karaoke night of laughing and fun how does that sound? but I promise there will be more. thanks for giving feeedback.
LetMeGo
06-30-2009, 01:23 PM
They're back to normal! Yea!
Justice League karaoke... that would be funny!
#7superherofan
06-30-2009, 11:13 PM
Barts' comment was a joke. Aww, too bad, I was hoping you were hinting at a Clana Baby.:( Oh well, a kareoke night sounds like a blast. Someone belting out "I Will Survive" would be really funny.:D
ClanaGirl
07-02-2009, 03:26 PM
No it wasn't what I mean by a joke is that the joke is Lana will have one but she isn't fatter right now but in the next couple of chapters she will find out she is pregnant. give me the name of who sings I will survive and I will do Karaoke night that will be halrious I will so do that.
ClanaGirl
07-02-2009, 03:29 PM
and of course there is a small reason I was thinking about having a Clana baby and naming her Lara rose Kent do you have anyother Ideas? it was smart to think that I will make more updates I promise.
#7superherofan
07-03-2009, 10:45 PM
Hey ClanaGirl. You've probably written the kareoke chapter, but just in case "I Will Survive" was sung by Gloria Gaynor. Just type in her name and the song on Google or something and you should find it. Oh, Lara Rose Kent sounds like a beautiful name.:)It's fun to discuss different story ideas, keep up the great work.:D
ClanaGirl
07-04-2009, 01:06 PM
“You’ll find out in a minute.” Diana climbs the stairs to the stage and picks up the microphone.
“Do you know what’s going on Clark?” Chloe asks him.
“Haven’t a clue,” responding back as she starts singing.
I'm a B****, I'm a lover, I'm a child, I'm a mother, I'm a sinner, I'm a saint, I do not feel ashamed, I'm your hell, I'm your dream, I'm nothing in between You know you wouldn't want it any other way…
Chloe isn’t surprised at Diana’s choice of song. “That describes Diana to a tee – doesn’t it Clark?”
He says I agree Lana just smiles and says it totally has her written all over it. I'm a B****, I'm a tease, I'm a goddess on my knees, When you hurt, when you suffer, I'm your angel undercover, I've been numb, I'm revived, Can't say I'm not alive, You know I wouldn't want it any other way
She finally finishes the song and comes back to the table; sitting next to Clark.
“Perfect song Diana ,” Oliver remarks. “You really are a *****.”
Diana looks at him in shock and he says its true Lana agrees and so does everyone else.
The spotlight hits the one person Clark loved “Lana Lang” she went up on the stage and said hey everybody this is dedicated to the love of my life Clark Kent. She took the microphone and the song they heard was 6months by Hey Monday
Lana began to sway as she revealed an inch of her dress and then winked at Clark and sang
You're the direction I follow to get home, When I feel like I can't go on, you tell me to go, And it's like I can't feel a thing, without you around, And don't mind me if I get weak in the knees, Cause you have that effect on me, you do.
Lana became bolder and she motioned for Clark to come up he came up and lifted her up off the floor and as she began to sing he spun he around
Everything you say, Everytime we kiss, I can't think straight, But I'm okay, And I can't think of anybody else Who I hate to miss as much as I hate missing you.
Lana then began to wrap her arms around Clark’s neck as he took off a lot more of the dress and she then showed off her beautiful long slender legs. And Clark held her and began to flip her in the air and she sang to such a high pitch that everone was in awe literally.
Months going strong now, And no goodbyes. Unconditional,Unoriginal, Always by my side. Meant to be together,
Meant for no one but each other,You love me, I love you harder
So...
Then she said everyone do you think we can get Clark to sing? Yeah they all shouted sing now! Clark took the microphone and set Lana down gently
Everything you say, Everytime we kiss, I can't think straight, But I'm okay, and I can't think of anybody else Who I hate to miss as much as I hate missing you.
So please, give me your hands So please, give me a lesson on how to steal, steal the heart As fast as you stole mine, as you stole mineThen the happy couple finished with the last to verses in harmony they went really highOh and everything you say Every time we kiss, I can't think straight But I'm okay And I can't think of anybody else Who I hate to miss as much as I hate missing you So please, give me your hands So please, just take my hand.Lana then took a bow and Clark spun her around and kissed her capturing her lips as they moved into passionate kissing they began to explore with their tongues and finally he set her down and they left the stage happily waiting for the last two songs and everyone else’s.
Then Came Ollie’s choice of song as he said this is to my one love Mercy it describes us and how sorry I am so Tess if you’re here please come up and sing with me.
Tess said what if you hurt me again and leave without a goodbye? I was stupid and foolish Tess but I love you more than anything if you will be mine Mercy he said. Ollie its what I have been waiting for ever since you left honey Tess said as she walked up and heard the song the best I ever had play.
Ollie sang
Now I know I messed up bad
You were the best I ever had
I let you down in the worst way
It hurts me every single day
I'm dying to let you know
Tess sang looking lovingly and apolgetically at Ollie
Now I'm here to say I'm sorry
And ask for a second chance
Cause when it all comes down to the end
I could sure use a friend
Ollie sang softly taking her hand gently
So many things I would take back
You were the best I ever had
I don't blame you for hating me
I didn't mean to make you leave
Tess and Ollie sang together
You and I were living like a love song
I feel so bad, I feel so bad that you're gone
Now I know you're the only one that I want
I want you back, I want you
they began to smile as they continued to sing
Now I'm here to say I'm sorry
And ask for a second chance
Cause when it all comes down to the end
I could sure use a friend
Now I'm here to say I'm sorry
And ask for a second chance
All I want to do is make it up to you
Cause when it all comes down to the end
You were the best I ever had
Tess sang
We fell in love for a reason
Now you're leaving
And I just want you back
So many things we believed in
Now you're leaving and words won't bring you back
I'll never let go of the heart I broke
Ollie sang
You and I were living like a love song
Now I know you're the only one that I want
I want you back, I want you
They sang together
Now I'm here to say I'm sorry
And ask for a second chance
All I want to do is make it up to you
Cause when it all comes down to the end
I could sure use a friend
Now I'm here to say I'm sorry
And ask for a second chance
All I want to do is make it up to you
Cause when it all comes down to the end
You were the best I ever had
Ollie sang
I can't believe that I threw away all our dreams
I can't believe now that you're gone how much you mean to me
Together they sang
I feel so bad, I feel so bad
You were the best I ever had
I can't believe that I threw away all our dreams
I can't believe now that you're gone how much you mean to me
I feel so bad, I feel so bad
You were,
You were the best I ever had
Then Ollie pulled Tess into a passionate kiss and then they broke apart and everyone cheered yelling go Ollie go Tess you guys are together Emily and AC yelled you still got it Ollie keep her close.
Next came Victor’s turn he refused so AC and Emily smiled evily as they picked him up and forced him up on stage with the song smooth criminal.
As Ollie heard the song and Emily and AC’s laughing Ollie said you two are so maniacal with all your schemes how did you even sneak that track up there to play. Easy Emily became a pink blur for two seconds before changing the music track and running to me. You guys are so evil and bad sometimes. Yes but you love us Emily said smirking as AC pulled her in for a quick passionate kiss as she obliged and explored finally they broke apart and said Ollie we’re recording every preformance and Victor’s is so going on every youtube on the web possible.
Victor sang unhappily
As He Came Into The Window
It Was The Sound Of A
Crescendo
He Came Into Her Apartment
He Left The Bloodstains On
The Carpet
She Ran Underneath The Table
He Could See She Was Unable
So She Ran Into The Bedroom
She Was Struck Down, It Was
Her Doom
Ac and Emily smirked at him and then snapped their fingers saying sing.
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok, Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok, Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok, Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok, Are You Ok, Annie
He sang again a little higher and everyone burst out giggling and laughing.
(Annie Are You Ok)
(Will You Tell Us That You're
Ok)
(There's A Sign In The
Window)
(That He Struck You-A
Crescendo Annie)
(He Came Into Your
Apartment)
(He Left The Bloodstains On
The Carpet)
(Then You Ran Into The
Bedroom)
(You Were Struck Down)
(It Was Your Doom)
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
You've Been Hit By
You've Been Hit By-
A Smooth Criminal
Victor glared at Emily and AC wrapped his arm around her and they continued to laugh with the crowd trying to control all their laughter.
They Came Into The
Outway
It Was Sunday-What A Black
Day
Mouth To Mouth Resus-
Citation
Sounding Heartbeats-
Intimidations
He sang
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
Annie Are You Ok
So, Annie Are You Ok
Are You Ok Annie
Victior mouthed help to Ollie as he sang the chorus again
(Annie Are You Ok)
(Will You Tell Us That You're
Ok)
(There's A Sign In The
Window)
(That He Struck You-A
Crescendo Annie)
(He Came Into Your
Apartment)
(He Left The Bloodstains On The Carpet)
(Then You Ran Into The
Bedroom)
(You Were Struck Down)
(It Was Your Doom)
Sorry Victor I made a promise to AC and Emily you’re on your own.
(Annie Are You Ok)
(So, Annie Are You Ok)
(Are You Ok Annie)
(You've Been Hit By)
(You've Been Struck By-
A Smooth Criminal)
Clark,Lana,Chloe all said AC! Emily how in gods name did you get that track to play and embarrass him? Simple the couple replied with an evil but dazzling smiles Emily used her powers and became a pink blur for two seconds and switched the tracks and then came to me. You’re so evil We are picking your song and you better like some manical ones because they are the songs for you.
Okay, I Want Everybody To
Clear The Area Right Now!
Aaow!
(Annie Are You Ok)
I Don't Know!
(Will You Tell Us, That
You're Ok)
I Don't Know!
(There's A Sign In The
Window)
I Don't Know!
(That He Struck You-A
Crescendo Annie)
I Don't Know!
(He Came Into Your
Apartment)
I Don't Know!
(Left Bloodstains On The
Carpet)
I Don't Know Why Baby!
(Then You Ran Into The
Bedroom)
I Don't Know!
(You Were Struck Down)
(It Was Your Doom-Annie!)
(Annie Are You Ok)
Dad Gone It-Baby!
(Will You Tell Us, That
You're Ok)
Dad Gone It-Baby!
(There's A Sign In The
Window)
Dad Gone It-Baby!
(That He Struck You-A
Crescendo Annie)
Hoo! Hoo!
(He Came Into Your
Apartment)
Dad Gone It!
(Left Bloodstains On The
Carpet)
Hoo! Hoo! Hoo!
(Then You Ran Into The
Bedroom)
Dad Gone It!
(You Were Struck Down)
(It Was Your Doom-Annie!)
Everyone clapped and laughed as Victor Glared at AC and Emily for what seemed the 5oth time before sitting down.
Chloe came up and said Everyone we all know one of our favorite couples who are very irrisponisble and loving and kind but they are evil sometimes but incredibly gorgeous and very smart please welcome up Emily and AC everyone. Its AC’s turn to sing and then Emily.
Emily came up on stage in a strapless hot pink dress that ended ended just above the knee with a matching pair of gloves that went up to her elbow and then she had on hot pink leather boots to end it her hair glossy and in loose curls. AC was in a sleeveless black shirt with khaki pants the rest of his usual outfit and came out next to Emily as the song played It was called addiction.
VERSE 1:]
You've got fashion and style
I'm lovin' your smile and
The way you get down
I can't see no one else
It's you by yourself, yea
In spite of the crowd
(Baby no one else matters)
AC smiled at Emily and then she began to dance around him as he sang to her.
[B-SECTION:]
It started off with a kiss (uh huh)
Never expectin' this (uh huh)
And now I'm here copin' with
My addiction (addiction)
It started off with a kiss (uh huh)
Never expectin' this (uh huh)
And now I'm here copin' with
My addiction
While all the girls say
That’s when they began to get all wild and crazy AC sang louder and then they began to do a wild dance while singing
[HOOK:]
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
They continued to smile and do their wild dance spinning flipping circling and jumping.
[BRIDGE:]
When I'm lookin' in the mirror
Honey, you are all I see
And it could not be no clearer
That I need you here with me
Ac smiled and Continued
[VERSE 2:]
I was hopin you'd notice
The way that I like to
Have you around
Listen and you will find that
Your heart beats for me
Girl, I hear the sound
Emily smiled back at him he was perfect and this was the perfect song
[B-SECTION:]
It started off with a kiss (uh huh)
Never expectin' this (uh huh)
And now I'm here copin' with
My addiction (addiction)
It started off with a kiss (uh huh)
Never expectin' this (uh huh)
And now I'm here copin' with
My addiction
While all the girls say
AC and Emily did their wild dance again
[HOOK:]
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
Then he winked at her and then began to slowly turn around and do a flip everyone yelled alright as he made it and began to circle her like a lion stalking its prey her eyes lit up with dazzling excitement as she was ready to pounce He continued singing
[BRIDGE:]
When I'm lookin' in the mirror
Honey, you are all I see
And it could not be no clearer
That I need you here with me
he took her in his arms and began to sway then they went through a perfect flip as he had done before she twisted and he turned as they went for only one thing perfection.
K:]
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
Then he began to draw closer and he took her in his arms and she flexibly lifted her leg as she twisted it and then he let her down ready for the last move his personal favorite. He sang louder
[B-SECTION:]
It started off with a kiss (uh huh)
Never expectin' this (uh huh)
And now I'm here copin' with
My addiction (addiction)
It started off with a kiss (uh huh)
Never expectin' this (uh huh)
And now I'm here copin' with
My addiction
He finished with
[HOOK:]
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to you
You're my addiction
Then he put his hand on the small of her back and kissed her capturing her lips as they did it with as much passion as they could do right here without making a big scene they continued as she began to smile at him and she pounced playfully knocking him down and kissing him there on the stage on the lips as passionately as possible they cheered and then AC came up from behind her and picked her up and said Hello Beautiful. She swatted his hand away and kissed him gently and said “I love you.”
Emily’s song came on and she got down then Chloe announced and said Emily ready this is a song you listened to that was fantastic like this one its something you will never forget and AC will love it.
The song was called say it again by Marie Digby
Emily began to sing
you think about love, is I never saw it coming
You kinda crept up into me by surprise
And now there's a voice inside my heart that's got me wondering
Is this true? I wanna hear it one more time
she then smiled widely at AC and began running her hands up and down his chest smiling seductively at him getting his full attention.
AC took her in his arms and spun her around again and again as she sang
Move in a little closer
Take it to a whisper
Get just a litter louder
Say It Again for me Cause I love the way it feels when you are telling me that i'm the only one who blows your mind
Say it again for me
It's like the whole world starts to listen when you tell me you're in love
Say it again
AC put her down and she smiled at everyone and then she flipped her hair and then began to smile lovingly at AC as she sang
The thing about you is you know just how to get me
You talk about us like there's no end in sight
The thing about me is that I really wanna let you open the door and walk into my life
Move in a little closer
Take it to a whisper
Get just a litter louder
Say it again for me
Cause I love the way it feels when you are telling me that i'm the only one who blows your mind
Say it again for me
It's like the whole world starts to listen when you tell me you're in love
Emily sang right to him showing him her love with just her eyes as they sparkled and shined with love for him
And it feels like it's the first time
That anybody's ever brought the sun without the rain
And never in my whole life
Have I heard words as beautiful as when you say my name
Then she jumped into his arms he put his hands on her waist and then he said Em are you ready? Yes I am AC.
He gently slid his arms around her waist and they went into the air and flipped. Then she sang again while in mid air in his arms.
Say it again for me
Cause I love the way it feels when you are telling me that i'm the only one who blows your mind
Say it again for me
It's like the whole world starts to listen when you tell me you're in love
Lana smiled as she saw her friend sing and everyone continued to clap and sing along with her she sounded like an angel to AC to everyone else she was amazing she smiled and was glad as she finished with the high pitched notes of the song and sang them.
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
Say it again
When you tell me you're in love
Say it again
She then took a big bow and flipped one last time and then flung herself into AC’s arms again but this time she captured his lips and they were on the ground kissing so they got up and kissed even more passionately and then two minutes later they pulled back and everyone cheered and the team so Go AC alright Em perfect job you guys rocked.
They thanked everyone and Emily smiled at Lana and Clark and said Guys do we get a 10 of 10? Yes you guys get a 10 for your performance then he raised his glass and said to Emily and AC may they finally be more responsible and do their duty to mankind more seriously which means Em take AC to Jor-El.
Emily made a face at Clark and glared icily at him making no move to remove the glare and unsurprisingly Clark flinched and said Okay Okay Em you win. Emily smiled in triumph and said Ha then she hugged Lana and gave her a smile with an icy glare at Clark and then The beautiful couple went over to see Ollie.
Finally everyone did their turn in Karaoke and then they all said lets go do more partying lets go dance. Then they played loud music and AC and Emily smiled as they said Everyone this goes to Ollie and Tess may you guys become intimate and in love.
Emily AC they all groaned and said No! not again with your long speech give it up already they will do it eventually. Fine They huffed but said not another word however they did embarass Victor for a bit for fun.
Then finally Lana felt a sharp stab of pain in he stomach and she gasped.
Everyone turned toward them and said. "Guys I am pregnant".
LetMeGo
07-04-2009, 05:02 PM
That was fun! They were all having such a great time. What a way to end it though!! Lana is having a baby... I hope she's okay.
ClanaGirl
07-04-2009, 09:53 PM
End it!!!!!!! are you kidding me LetMeGo my friend this is just the beginning of the story it has much more it will have Clana forever in it and I have to portray it is us the beginning there will always be Clana with me. So many more Chapters
LetMeGo
07-04-2009, 09:59 PM
I meant the way you ended your update, I didn't think you were done with the story yet. ;)
#7superherofan
07-04-2009, 11:35 PM
End it!!!!!!! are you kidding me LetMeGo my friend this is just the beginning of the story it has much more it will have Clana forever in it and I have to portray it is us the beginning there will always be Clana with me. So many more Chapters
Good, I'm glad it's not the end, only the beginning. That kareoke party was a fun scene, very romantic. I just love Emily more and more with each update, her relationship with A.C. is very passionate, their shared love songs were so sweet. The song Oliver and Tess sang was so beautiful, but I was definately not expecting her to join the party.:eek: She's another character that I wish dadn't turned out to be so creepy on the show, so it was nice to see Tess getting along with the J.L.'ers. Lana knew she was pregnant really quickly, I hope she'll be okay. PPMS:D
ClanaGirl
07-05-2009, 10:20 PM
I'm sure she will Guys I am so sorry to say I have to go camping with my family till Friday its unbearable because I will be away from everyone but somehow I will live. I am glad you love the character Emily more and more I tried my best to make her an outstanding character there will be plenty more to come and 2 updates to make up for being gone on either friday or saturday thanks for the reviews here is a little excerpt just a small one though
ClanaGirl
07-05-2009, 10:24 PM
Emily stared at Lana in shock that is so cool she squealed and launched herself at Lana knocking her down. As she said a baby that is so cool I know I can be the godmother or helper ,or can I help you in anyway clothing style or accesories? please.
Em calm down I will let you help decorate and choose clothing is that good for you Lana asked? Yes Emily said excitedly its perfect AC honey come on lets go shopping now for little baby boy and girl clothes. Lana and Clark chuckled along with Ollie,Tess,Diana,Bart,Chloe,Victor as the happpy couple ran out the doors.
Ollie track them down and make sure they come back by next week I hope they won't max out their credit cards again this will be the second time Ollie said with a sigh.
Well we can only hope for the best Clark said as he laughed before helping Lana up and kissing her softly cooing to the little baby inside of his wife.
LetMeGo
07-07-2009, 02:17 AM
Short but sweet... have fun camping. :)
ClanaGirl
07-10-2009, 04:40 PM
Hey I am back and running completely ready to go and do what you people will like the best if you have any questions comments or suggestions just ask.
ClanaGirl
07-11-2009, 05:23 PM
Hey guys thanks for all the feedback I will have another chapter done tommorow or today thanks for everything this story will be fun and very long I promise.
#7superherofan
07-11-2009, 06:44 PM
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Ollie track them down and make sure they come back by next week I hope they won't max out their credit cards again this will be the second time Ollie said with a sigh.
Well we can only hope for the best Clark said as he laughed before helping Lana up and kissing her softly cooing to the little baby inside of his wife.[/quote] Forgot to leave feedback earlier, sorry.:( Hurray for a Clark/Lana baby. They'll make such good parents, give their little one so much Love and Care.:D You wrote Emily's excitement over the baby very well, I could just see her planning how to decorate an adorable nursery and maxing out her credit cards on all kinds of baby cuteness.(By the by, Emily is of the House of El, right, so how is she related to Kal-El?) This update came at the perfect time because I'm so in the mood for babies right now. My baby sister's first little one is due at the end of this week.:D;)
ClanaGirl
07-12-2009, 12:39 PM
Thanks #7superherofan it means a lot you like my story I am happy for your sister. Emily's relation to Kal-El is of cousins her family was a little distant because of them creating things. They knew of Krypton's destruction and wanted to help Jor-El and Lara so they too stayed and tried to save Krypton. However Emily saw Kal-El when he was a baby and the El family was very close so they are cousins hope it helps. And Emily was sent to Earth though she was not a baby she was simply just 8 and has a good memory of it so she misses it again hope it helps. thanks for all feedback its apprecaited
ClanaGirl
07-16-2009, 10:50 AM
hey guys I'm sorry to keep you waiting I have been trying to piece a good chapter for you to read I hope this helps thanks for all your feedbakc and thank you to #7superherofan and LetMeGo for all your support and comments plus the feedback it is appreciated thanks here it is guys the next chapter.
“Emily stared at Lana in shock that is so cool she squealed and launched herself at Lana knocking her down.” As she said a baby that is so cool I know I can be the godmother or helper ,or can I help you in anyway clothing style or accesories? please.”
“Em calm down I will let you help decorate and choose clothing is that good for you Lana asked? “Yes Emily said excitedly its perfect AC honey come on lets go shopping now for little baby boy and girl clothes.” Lana and Clark chuckled along with Ollie,Tess,Diana,Bart,Chloe,Victor as the happy couple ran out the doors.”
“Lana’s voice was sharp and commanding but warm and sweet as she said “Ollie track them down and make sure they come back by next week”. God I hope they won't max out their credit cards again this will be the second time Ollie said with a dramatic sigh.”
“Well we can only hope for the best Clark said as he laughed before helping Lana up and kissing her softly cooing to the little baby inside of his wife.”
“Lana’s heart did a million flips when he said that and she chocked out the words “Clark I love you”.
“I love you too Lana and our baby I hope that she is as beautiful as you” Clark said with his famous Kent smile.” “And what if it’s a boy Lana asked cocking her head to the side.”
“Well I hope it has your eyes and my smile and both of us mixed together either one will be beautiful whether it’s a boy or a girl, they will be our miracle baby” Clark said smiling at his wife.”
“Don’t forget you were a miracle baby too Kal-El Lana said smiling widely at him”.
“I was and you were my miracle Lana Clark said giving his wife a passionate kiss which earned him one very fiery one in turn.”
“Well then Mr.Kent It looks like you’re my everything so I suggest you pick me up and fly us back to our house I’m to tired to do it right now.” Then she added and if you don’t I may soon be giving into my desires and doing the same thing Emily and AC did through the party and on stage.”
“Well love that sounds tempting to do right now but at home sounds perfect let’s go home Clark then yelled across the room for everyone to hear.”
“We’re going home track Emily and AC down at all costs and have a wonderful night with the spectacular news goodbye everyone.”
“With that Clark and Lana flew back home to go to bed but Tess and Ollie began to get too overwhelmed and she jumped on him and began to tear off his shirt and they took a room and all the league heard was moans and groans and tons of lust and desire.”
Chloe,Bart,Diana and victor all groaned as they heard it and finally it got so bad they pressed the emergency button on the right and out came 5 sleek pink elevators they all gathered in and said see ya Tess and Ollie then they whispered we recorded all the events tonight.
“And with Emily and AC’s help tommorow will be the night of all nights for blackmail with that the elevators took off to all the appropriate floors and suites and they left for their much needed rest after “Bart cracked the final joke.” And all through the halls and floors only 2 things could be heard moans of pleasure,tons of sighing and lastly laughter as the JLA all accepted their roles."
The Black Cat
07-17-2009, 02:56 AM
Excellent chapters!!! PPMS!!!
#7superherofan
07-17-2009, 10:31 PM
“Well I hope it has your eyes and my smile and both of us mixed together either one will be beautiful whether it’s a boy or a girl, they will be our miracle baby” Clark said smiling at his wife.”
“Don’t forget you were a miracle baby too Kal-El Lana said smiling widely at him”.
“I was and you were my miracle Lana Clark said giving his wife a passionate kiss which earned him one very fiery one in turn.
Oh, a Clark/Lana baby would be absolutely beautiful indeed, especially a little girl who with eyes that are so wide and soulful like Lana's, yet in color have Clark's amazing blue/green blend. Of course baby boys are perfectly wonderful too, like my new little nephew.:D I love how Clark and Lana called each other there miracles, that was so romantic, ClanaGirl.;)
ClanaGirl
07-18-2009, 08:57 AM
Okay then the baby girl will be Lara Rose Kent I will add the part #7superherofan you said a little girl who with eyes that are so wide and soulful like Lana's, yet in color have Clark's amazing blue/green blend. I am so happy you have a little baby boy for a nephew that is so exciting!
Thanks for all the feedback I'm currently trying to write another chapter for it and hope it will be a great one for you guys.
#7superherofan
07-18-2009, 11:59 AM
Good luck with your writing this week, ClanaGirl.;)
ClanaGirl
07-18-2009, 12:53 PM
Thanks #7superherofan I have recently posted the first chapter of my new story Couple therapy its going to be a long Clois story
ClanaGirl
07-20-2009, 08:04 AM
here's a little banner I thought went perfect with this story check it out
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ClanaGirl
08-10-2009, 09:52 AM
Hey Guys I'm currently working on a huge update since you all have been so patient I'm half way done and hope its worth it
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