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Bluedevilfire
12-28-2008, 09:41 PM
2008 © Jeremiah Paul Song

STAR WARS:
CLONE WARS

Episode 1.12
“Gungan General”

PG

Written by Jeremiah Paul Song

A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…

While in pursuit of the Sith Lord Count Dooku, Jedi Knights Anakin and Obi-wan captured Dooku but walked into an evil trap. The Jedi are ambushed and Dooku escapes! But when Dooku lands on a peaceful planet, he finds pirates waiting for him there. Now the pirates have a ransom for Dooku: one million creds or nothing…

JEDI COUNCIL ROOM:
The Jedi’s sit in the council room and wait for the pirates to contact them again when a hologram appears of the pirate Hondo Ohnaka…
“So, what will you pay?” Hondo questioned.
“Give us more time, I beg of you,” Mace Windu begged.
“Time’s up! I’ve tripled the stakes now! It seems your Jedi friends are here too…such a pity! Let’s say three million creds or I kill them too!!” Hondo explained.
Padme’ walked in.
“You must give us more time, I beg of you please!” Padme’ pleaded her cause to Hondo.
“She’s right! Three million creds aren’t that easy to get!” Mace replied.
“Well, then let me make this as simple as I can…get it or the Jedi and Sith die!!! Starting with the young Jedi!” Hondo explained with the hologram disappearing.
“I don’t like it,” Mace Windu said.
“What’s not to like Master Windu, we have to rescue the Jedi and Dooku! Think of Anakin and Obi-wan please!” Padme’ begged.
“Very well. We will send you and Senator Jar-Jar Binks,” Yoda replied smiling.

THE PIRATES MYSTERIOUS PALACE:
Anakin, Obi-wan and Dooku were all chained up in force chains on their arms and feet so they could not use the force. Anakin wakes up to find Dooku in chains…
“Dooku?” Anakin questioned.
“Jedi scum!” Dooku replied.
“Quiet you two!” Obi-wan gestured.
“Where are we?” Anakin questioned
“We’re in the Pirates Lair!” Dooku replied.
“I didn’t ask you!” Anakin told Dooku.
“Where’s Ahsoka?” Anakin questioned.
“I thought she was with you!” Obi-wan replied.

INSIDE A PALACE ROOM:
Ahsoka was wearing a low-cut metal black bikini and a low-cut brown skirt over it, standing as a slave dancer to the pirates…
“Dance!” Hondo told her.
“Fine! Come and get some, jerks!” Ahsoka replied.
“It’s okay Hondo. I am Turk Falso…let me explain…this is an electric sting rope! I beat you if you don’t dance! Got it?” Turk questioned Ahsoka.
“Got it!” Ahsoka gulped.

(Blackout)

PLANET VANQOR:
Out in the snowy grounds the Twilight lies with Jar-Jar hiding in it. Some of Hondo’s men go in the Twilight and investigate…
“Me messa!” Jar-Jar yells!
“Hold it right there!” a pirate warns him holding a blaster at Jar-Jar.
“Me am not messa! Bye-bye!” Jar-Jar kicks the gun out of the pirate’s hand and shoots him. Then he shoots the other pirates.
“Me sorry, but me have to borrow your clothes for awhile,” Jar-Jar said.

BACK AT THE PALACE:
Dooku and Anakin think of a plan…
“Now watch this Sith! I’m ‘gonna talk to the pirate Hondo!” Anakin explained.
“Hi, I’m Anakin Skywalker,” Anakin told Hondo.
“A-H! And I’m Hondo. I’m ‘gonna kill you Jedi!” Hondo explained opening the chains. Anakin broke free and was escorted out.
Jar-Jar enters the room disguised as a royal guard seeing Anakin being beaten.
“Excuse me, but the Master said keep the Jedi alive,” Jar-Jar told the guard.
“You’re right. Come on Jedi!” the guard told Anakin taking him back to his cell.

IN THE BOTTOM OF THE PALACE:
The pirate Hondo Ohnaka reports on a hologram to Darth Sideous…
“Did you find it?” Darth Sideous’ hologram questioned.
“Yes my lord, I did. And we have Dooku just as you ordered!” Hondo explained.
“Excellent!! Now, to phase two!” Darth Sideous replied smiling!

(Blackout)

BACK TO ANAKIN:
Anakin gets dragged into a cell and Dooku smiles…
“Where’s the map?” the pirate questioned Dooku.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about!” Dooku answered smiling.
The pirate went away.
“You…a map? Pirates? You were on you way here for a treasure?” Anakin questioned.
“Verry, verry good…Master Jedi!” Dooku said amused.
Dooku pulled out a map of the treasure from his belt.
“Let’s find the treasure!” Dooku grinned.
“If you pull any…and I mean any fast tricks, you’re dead!” Anakin explained.
“You have my word Master Jedi!” Dooku replied.

JEDI COUNCIL ROOM:
Hondo Ohnaka talks with Mace Windu on a hologram…
“So, what is your decision?” Hondo questioned.
“We will pay!” Mace Windu replied.
“Good! Very good! Then I will see you soon!” Hondo disappeared on the hologram.
“I don’t like dealing with pirate scums!” Mace Windu replied.
“Like it or not, but do what you must you do!” Yoda answered.

BACK AT THE MYSTERIOUS PALACE:
Hondo talks to Dooku, Anakin and Obi-wan…
“They will pay the ransom. But you must die!” Hondo replied.
“What?” Dooku questioned confused.
“Kill the Jedi and the Sith!” Hondo ordered.

The Jedi and Sith were escorted to a prison ship and almost flew off. Jar-Jar watched in disguise and made a transmission to the Jedi Council…
“Hello messa. This is Jar-Jar Binks!” he explained.
“Jar-Jar?” Mace questioned.
“Messa need help! They’re ‘gonna kill Jedi and Sith!” Jar-Jar explained.
“They lied!” Mace replied.
“Yes messa! Now I’m at Vanqor and at a small palace,” Jar-Jar stated.
“Senator Padme’ is there as we speak. We will send back up. Stay safe my friend,” Mace replied.

PRISON SHIP:
Padme’ walked in the room where Hondo was.
“Who are you?” Hondo questioned.
“I am Senator Padme’ Amidala.”
“Anakin?” Padme’ questioned seeing Anakin.
“Stay out of this!” Anakin told her.
“You are with the Jedi? Now we have five to kill!” Hondo replied.
“Me messa!” Jar-Jar replied watching from the side.

(Blackout)

Hondo’s pirate ship landed in the middle of the planet…
“At last I’ve found it!” Hondo explained.
“Found what?” Padme’ questioned while tied up with Anakin, Obi-wan and Dooku.
“The treasure! And now the map!” Hondo requested.
“As you wish!” Dooku replied giving the map to Hondo after being untied.
“Now here it is! Kill them!” Hondo yelled!

Hondo jumped down from the ship to a floor of ancient jewels and then saw the artifact…a Sith artifact! Jar-Jar Binks came to Hondo holding the other half of the map…
“Looking for this?” Jar-Jar questioned him.
“You fools! My master will arise now!” Hondo explained touching the artifact. A mysterious voice rose from the artifact…
“NO, NOT YOU! YOU’RE NOT WORTHY OF ME…NO!! NO!!”
“But I am Master! I am!” Hondo cried!
“Anakin, find Ahsoka!” Dooku explained.
“Since when do you call the shots?” Anakin questioned.
“Now!” Dooku yelled! He used his lightening to free Padme’, Obi-wan, Anakin and himself. Then Dooku jumped to Hondo.
“Now this ends!” Dooku said.
Jar-Jar held a ‘scepter’ in his hand and aimed and fired it at Hondo. Then Jar-Jar jumped to the ship.
“Me messa!” He cried to Anakin.
The ship began to move.
“How is that happening?” Anakin questioned.
Ahsoka walked in.
“Hi Master! Your lightsabers…and we’re out of here!” Ahsoka explained.
“No, not without Dooku! He saved out lives!” Anakin stated.
“Anakin’s right!” Ahsoka replied.
“There’s no time! Dooku, come on!” Obi-wan yelled.
“No, I’m staying here!” Dooku replied.
“It’s not too late,” Obi-wan stated.
“Yes it is old friend. Yes it is,” Dooku replied again.
Ahsoka went in the control room and flew the ship right to lightspeed to where a Jedi ship was waiting for them.

INSIDE THE SHIP:
Yoda greeted Anakin, Obi-wan, Ahsoka and Jar-Jar…
“Master Yoda,” Ahsoka said.
“Come now. A great battle was fought and in the end Dooku had a heart for good,” Yoda replied.
“I have a feeling we haven’t seen the last of Dooku!” Obi-wan stated.
“You’re right. You’re right,” Yoda replied.

Not far, the jewel ground blew up and Dooku was in his escape pod and flew away…

End for now!

Written by Jeremiah Paul Song

6-Super-Man -5
12-29-2008, 01:59 AM
Nice job!